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'''Mob:''' ''No.''[[note]]''[='Iyaa da yo'=]'' in the original Japanese; the added particles and the lengthened 'ah' sound lend vehemence to that 'No' without him needing to raise his voice.[[/note]]
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'''Mob:''' ''No.''[[note]]''[='Iyaa '' [[note]]''[='Iyaa da yo'=]'' in the original Japanese; the added particles and the lengthened 'ah' sound lend vehemence to that 'No' without him needing to raise his voice.[[/note]]
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** Said fights rarely present ''refusing to fight''--Mob's response here--as an option, nor do they tend to call much negative attention to property damage. Mob's recalcitrance is not shown in a negative light, and the camera in this battle lingers on the tangible effects of Teru's ego gone haywire: shattered windows, holes blasted through walls, spewing faucets. Moments of levity during the battle--like [[LemonyNarrator the narrator commenting on a clash of ideals]] between the boys after Teru strangles Mob, or Teru's embarrassing [[TraumaticHaircut ochimusha]] haircut after Mob deflects his flung knives--serve to skewer the concept even further.
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** Said fights rarely present ''refusing to fight''--Mob's response here--as an option, nor do they tend to call much negative attention to property damage. Mob's recalcitrance is not shown in a negative light, and the camera in this battle lingers on the tangible effects of Teru's ego gone haywire: shattered windows, holes blasted through walls, spewing faucets. Moments of levity during the battle--like [[LemonyNarrator the narrator commenting on a clash of ideals]] between the boys after Teru strangles Mob, or Teru's embarrassing [[TraumaticHaircut ochimusha]] [[note]]A name for a disgraced samurai or deserter. 落ち武者 literally means 'fallen soldier'; such warriors were shorn of their topknots before being dispossessed, adding insult to injury.[[/note]] haircut after Mob deflects his flung knives--serve to skewer knives--skewer the concept even further.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: After the ochimusha[[note]]name for a disgraced samurai or deserter. 落ち武者 literally means 'fallen soldier'[[/note]] [[GagHaircut haircut]], Mob offers an [[HeroicSelfDeprecation incredibly sad one]] to Teru that [[BrutalHonesty shatters]] what remains of his sanity.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: After the ochimusha[[note]]name for a disgraced samurai or deserter. 落ち武者 literally means 'fallen soldier'[[/note]] ochimusha [[GagHaircut haircut]], Mob offers an [[HeroicSelfDeprecation incredibly sad one]] to Teru that [[BrutalHonesty shatters]] what remains of his sanity.
