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* IdiotBall: Sabine doesn't consider asking the bus driver or any passengers who saw her get on the bus with Marinette to back up her story.
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* NoSympathy: No one on the bus comes to Sabine's aid when she's clearly targeted by a gleefully abusive authority figure who's jumping at any excuse to get her in trouble; not the bus driver she gave snacks, not the wheelchair-bound man she helped, and not even Roger who knows her and her daughter.
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* NoSympathy: No one on the bus comes to Sabine's aid when she's clearly targeted by a gleefully abusive authority figure who's jumping at any excuse to get her in trouble; not the bus driver she gave snacks, not the wheelchair-bound wheelchair-using man she helped, and not even Roger who knows her and her daughter.
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* OneWomanArmy: Qilin has [[BlowYouAway wind-manipulating]] powers so powerful they border on {{telekinesis}}. She takes on the Parisian police, SWAT, and several army helicopters, all [[WithMyHandsTied with her hands tied]] ([[ChainedByFashion albeit involuntarily]]). She wins --''easily'', and without moving an inch.
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* OneWomanArmy: Qilin has [[BlowYouAway wind-manipulating]] powers so powerful they border on {{telekinesis}}. She takes on the Parisian police, SWAT, and several army helicopters, all [[WithMyHandsTied with her hands tied]] ([[ChainedByFashion albeit involuntarily]]). She wins --''easily'', -- ''easily'', and without moving an inch.
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* SlipperySkid: Sabine causes a jerk who refuses to move out of a handicapped spot on the bus to fall out of that spot by placing one of her paintbrushes on the ground so it ends up under his foot when the bus comes to a stop at the light.
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* SlipperySkid: Sabine causes a jerk who refuses to move out of a handicapped an accessible spot on the bus to fall out of that spot by placing one of her paintbrushes on the ground so it ends up under his foot when the bus comes to a stop at the light.
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* BystanderSyndrome: No one on the bus intervenes when the ticket inspector arrests Sabine, even though they all saw Marinette with her when Sabine drew attention to herself by scolding the man occupying the disabled seat.
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* BystanderSyndrome: No one on the bus intervenes when the ticket inspector arrests Sabine, even though they all saw Marinette with her when Sabine drew attention to herself by scolding the man occupying the disabled accessible seat.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Sabine's POV shows her examining the layout of the bus and noting that it's approaching a red light, which means that the driver will brake soon. She then takes out one of her paintbrushes and places it on the ground. Sure enough, the driver hits the brakes, making the jackass occupying the disabled seat and the man in the wheelchair switch positions: the former loses his balance because he's holding his phone instead of the handrail and stumbles forward when he steps on the paintbrush, and the latter rolls backwards because he can't secure his wheelchair.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Sabine's POV shows her examining the layout of the bus and noting that it's approaching a red light, which means that the driver will brake soon. She then takes out one of her paintbrushes and places it on the ground. Sure enough, the driver hits the brakes, making the jackass occupying the disabled accessible seat and the man in the wheelchair switch positions: the former loses his balance because he's holding his phone instead of the handrail and stumbles forward when he steps on the paintbrush, and the latter rolls backwards because he can't secure his wheelchair.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Sabine's POV shows her examining the layout of the bus and noting that it's approaching a red light, which means that the driver will brake soon. She then takes out one of her ink pens and places it on the ground. Sure enough, the driver hits the brakes, making the jackass occupying the disabled seat and the man in the wheelchair switch positions: the former loses his balance because he's holding his phone instead of the handrail and stumbles forward when he steps on the pen, and the latter rolls backwards because he can't secure his wheelchair.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Sabine's POV shows her examining the layout of the bus and noting that it's approaching a red light, which means that the driver will brake soon. She then takes out one of her ink pens paintbrushes and places it on the ground. Sure enough, the driver hits the brakes, making the jackass occupying the disabled seat and the man in the wheelchair switch positions: the former loses his balance because he's holding his phone instead of the handrail and stumbles forward when he steps on the pen, paintbrush, and the latter rolls backwards because he can't secure his wheelchair.
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* JerkassBall: Roger is extremely unreasonable, supports the ticket inspector's questionable and even illegal actions, treats Sabine like a criminal until she gets akumatized, and even attempts to arrest the heroes who try to save the city.
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* JerkassBall: Roger is extremely unreasonable, supports the ticket inspector's questionable and even illegal actions, treats Sabine like a criminal until she gets akumatized, and even attempts to arrest keeps getting in the way of the heroes who try to save the city.
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* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist: Roger starts off as simply trying to do his job while remaining personally sympathetic to his daughter's classmate's mother. Subverted when he lets the situation escalate more and more until Sabine gets arrested and handcuffed like a dangerous criminal. Then he even outdoes himself when he tries to arrest Ladybug and Cat Noir who are trying to stop Qilin's rampage and solve the situation peacefully.
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* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist: Roger starts off as simply trying to do his job while remaining personally sympathetic to his daughter's classmate's mother. Subverted when he lets the situation escalate more and more until Sabine gets arrested and handcuffed like a dangerous criminal. Then he even outdoes himself when he tries to arrest Ladybug keeps getting into Ladybug's and Cat Noir who Noir's way when they are trying to stop Qilin's rampage and solve the situation peacefully.
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* JerkassBall: Roger is extremely unreasonable, supports the ticket inspector's questionable and even illegal actions, treats Sabine like a criminal until she gets akumatized, and keeps getting in the way of the heroes who try to save the city.
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* JerkassBall: Roger is extremely unreasonable, supports the ticket inspector's questionable and even illegal actions, treats Sabine like a criminal until she gets akumatized, and keeps getting in the way of even attempts to arrest the heroes who try to save the city.
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* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist: Roger starts off as simply trying to do his job while remaining personally sympathetic to his daughter's classmate's mother. Subverted when he lets the situation escalate more and more until Sabine gets arrested.
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* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist: Roger starts off as simply trying to do his job while remaining personally sympathetic to his daughter's classmate's mother. Subverted when he lets the situation escalate more and more until Sabine gets arrested.arrested and handcuffed like a dangerous criminal. Then he even outdoes himself when he tries to arrest Ladybug and Cat Noir who are trying to stop Qilin's rampage and solve the situation peacefully.
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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Ladybug convinces Qilin to deakumatize herself by bringing her the keys and promises to free her.
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* NoEndorHolocaust: After Qilin knocks the nets fired out by helicopters toward her back at them, the nets engulf the helicopters and causes them to all fall into a river they were flying over, leaving their operators a bit dazed when they get on top of their choppers in the water...in spite of how their helicopters were engulfed by a heavy net meant to trap a target that prevented them from flying, and so the nets would more logically have kept them trapped inside their copters while the copters sunk. Apparently the helicopter rotors somehow cuts the nets enough for their operators to get out while also being preventing helicopters from keeping in flight.
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* NoEndorHolocaust: After Qilin knocks the nets fired out by helicopters toward her back at them, the nets engulf the helicopters and causes them to all fall into a river they were flying over, only leaving their operators a bit dazed when they get on top of their choppers in the water...in spite of how their helicopters were engulfed by a heavy net meant to trap a target that prevented them from flying, and so the nets would more logically have kept them trapped inside their copters while the copters sunk. Apparently the helicopter rotors somehow cuts the nets enough for their operators to get out while also being preventing helicopters from keeping in flight.water.
