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* IDontWantToRuinOurFriendship: Implied. Emily goes against dating Lindsay because of how things between her and Glinda ended, as it gives off the impression that she doesn't just fear hurting Lindsay but that they stop being friends altogether.
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Emily knows she has a lot of blood on her hands and keeps her farming gloves on at all times. This is brought forward to her mind as she is initially against holding Kay because this could corrupt her, but she dismisses this as an issue so long as she leeps the gloves on.
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* HowDadMetMom: As a way to get Emily to relax during her break on her first day working for them, Bloom and Colt regale her with the story of how they met, got together, and had their kids.
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** After Tabrella became pregnant with Katie, her parents sent her away to their private home and covered it up by pretending her mother was the one having a baby, with her friends coming to check on her. When [[SecretChaser Felicia]] came across the truth, Jackie forced her to keep the secret as well.
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** After Tabrella became pregnant with Katie, her parents sent her away to their a private home location and covered it up by pretending her mother was the one having a baby, with her friends coming to check on her. When [[SecretChaser Felicia]] came across the truth, Jackie forced her to keep the secret as well.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Ms. Traveler can't ask Emily to see her for a therapy session because Emily doesn't know her, and nobody would bear their soul to a complete stranger.
** Emily sees that Gavin does raise some insensitive but valid concerns about her past actions and she uses that as reasoning for why she and Lindsay can't be a couple. Specifically, Emily mentions that she had been a toxic influence and abusive towards Glinda, who dumped her as a result.
** As Emily tells Lindsay, Cross may be an aloof kind of guy, but he's still a teenage boy. Odds are the reason he hasn't asked the cyclops out is because he's nervous about going through with it.
** Ms. Traveler can't ask Emily to see her for a therapy session because Emily doesn't know her, and nobody would bear their soul to a complete stranger.
** Emily sees that Gavin does raise some insensitive but valid concerns about her past actions and she uses that as reasoning for why she and Lindsay can't be a couple. Specifically, Emily mentions that she had been a toxic influence and abusive towards Glinda, who dumped her as a result.
** As Emily tells Lindsay, Cross may be an aloof kind of guy, but he's still a teenage boy. Odds are the reason he hasn't asked the cyclops out is because he's nervous about going through with it.
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* AffectionateNickname: All of Tabrella's friends call her "Tabby", and Jackie usually calls Apple "Apps".
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* InSeriesNickname: All of Tabrella's friends call her "Tabby", and Jackie usually calls Apple "Apps".
* InSeriesNickname: All of Tabrella's friends call her "Tabby", and Jackie usually calls Apple "Apps".
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* LoveCannotOvercome: Though having a strong, caring attraction towards Lindsay, in the end Emily is unwilling to become a couple with her if there's a chance she'll hurt her like she has everyone else once close to her.
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* DeathGlare: DeathGlare:
** Lindsay gives a super effective one to Jojo after Emily blows up at Hendrick and she goes to check on the illusionist. She later gives one to Gavin because of what he says toEmily.Emily.
** Luz gives one to Emily upon seeing her hold Kay, which leads to Emily excusing herself.
** Lindsay gives a super effective one to Jojo after Emily blows up at Hendrick and she goes to check on the illusionist. She later gives one to Gavin because of what he says to
** Luz gives one to Emily upon seeing her hold Kay, which leads to Emily excusing herself.
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* DramaticIrony: As Emily panics over going on a date with Lindsay, she says that Nina probably isn't having any dating problems. This is likely happening before or during the triple date, where Nina would be dealing with Donna crashing her date with Lambi.
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* DeathGlare: Lindsay gives a super effective ont one to Jojo after Emily blows up at Hendrick and she goes to check on the illusionist. She later gives one to Gavin because of what he says to Emily.
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* AllLovingHeroAllLovingHero: Hendrick notes that Lindsay befriends jerks and bullies very easily, having gotten his old bully Jerky Turley to turn over a new leaf, helped Danny become a bit nicer during his class presidency campaign, and even came across a pitbull demon that she ended up having a tea party with.
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* BigWhat: Out of curiosity, Lindsay asks Hendrick what coven he's in when Emily questions it; he says none and following a DoubleTake, Lindsay lets one of these out.
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** Out of curiosity, Lindsay asks Hendrick what coven he's in when Emily questions it; he says none and following a DoubleTake, Lindsay lets one of theseout.out.
** Andrea draws one of these out as long as she can after meeting Emily.
* BridalCarry: Tracy and Andrea arrive at the Cortland home with the former carrying the latter in her arms.
** Out of curiosity, Lindsay asks Hendrick what coven he's in when Emily questions it; he says none and following a DoubleTake, Lindsay lets one of these
** Andrea draws one of these out as long as she can after meeting Emily.
* BridalCarry: Tracy and Andrea arrive at the Cortland home with the former carrying the latter in her arms.
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* CharacterDevelopment: When her stay at the Shystream home started out, Emily worked her fingers to the bone doing chores around the farm to prove herself useful. Lindsay and her family would encourage her to take breaks and interact with other people, which allow her to find people who know the kind of indecisiveness she's experiencing with her future. She comes to learn of the ramifications her acts of revenge led to and due to Gavin's intervention, she concludes that she's not ready to develop any romantic relationships until she sorts her issues out.
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* CharacterDevelopment: When her stay at the Shystream home started out, first began, Emily worked her fingers to the bone doing chores around the farm to prove herself useful. Lindsay and her family would encourage her to take breaks and interact with other people, which allow her to find people who know the kind of indecisiveness she's experiencing with her future. She comes to learn of the ramifications her acts of revenge led to and due to Gavin's intervention, she concludes that she's not ready to develop any romantic relationships until she sorts her issues out.
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** Mrs. Crissy and Egburt Jr are based off of Miss Prissy and Egghead Jr from the Foghorn Leghorn ''WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes'' shorts, and Lucky is based off of the Barnyard Dog, being a victim of Cluckington's bullying as kids like the dog was a victim of Foghorn's pranks.
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** Mrs. Crissy and Egburt Jr are based off of Miss Prissy and Egghead Jr Jr. from the Foghorn Leghorn ''WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes'' shorts, and Lucky is based off of the Barnyard Dog, being a victim of Cluckington's bullying as kids like the dog was a victim of Foghorn's pranks.
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* {{Forgiveness}}: Subverted. Emily cannot bring herself to forgive Eda for cursing her as a child, but that doesn't stop Emily for apologizing to Eda for attacking Luz.
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* {{Forgiveness}}: Subverted. Emily cannot bring herself to forgive Eda for cursing her as a child, but that doesn't stop Emily for apologizing to Eda for attacking Luz. On top of that, Luz (though wanting to be better than Emily) refuses to even humor the idea of trusting her and believes she's going to turn on Lindsay eventually.
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* TheGhost: Boris is indirectly mentioned by Hendrick, who got some fake coven sigil stickers from him.
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** Boris is indirectly mentioned by Hendrick, who got some fake coven sigil stickers fromhim.him.
** Discord is brought up for the first time since "Mischief Gathering", this time being namedropped.
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** Discord is brought up for the first time since "Mischief Gathering", this time being namedropped.
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* MySuitIsAlsoSuper: Veronica and Sarah design Lindsay's new super suit to fit both her and Madstream so it stretches out when she transforms.
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* MySuitIsAlsoSuper: Veronica and Sarah design Lindsay's new super suit to fit both her and Madstream so that it stretches out when she transforms.
transforms into Madstream, thus fitting both forms of her body.
* NoodleIncident: Lindsay's friends mention dealing withsomeone named "Discord" before.[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicDiscord Discord]] in the past once.
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** Colt came from a rich, modest family and is an alumni of St. Epiderm.
** Apple now works for theCourtlands.Cortlands.
** Apple now works for the
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** Andrea says she has a [[SpiderSense Pinkjoy Sense]] that allows her to tell when things are off. This brings to mind the "Pinkie Sense" first seen in :[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPinkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]".
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** As Emily tells Lindsay, Cross may be an aloof kind of guy, but he's still a teenage boy. Odds are the reason he hasn't asked the cyclops out is because he's nervous about the idea of asking a beautiful girl to go out with him.
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** As Emily tells Lindsay, Cross may be an aloof kind of guy, but he's still a teenage boy. Odds are the reason he hasn't asked the cyclops out is because he's nervous about the idea of asking a beautiful girl to go out going through with him.it.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Lindsay says that Sarah mentioned something about unstable molecules concerning her transformations into Madstream. This implies that like Nina, Lindsay's DNA could be unstable from her body shapeshifting into another form.
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* AmbiguousSituation: AmbiguousSituation:
** Lindsay says that Sarah mentioned something about unstable molecules concerning her transformations into Madstream. This implies that like Nina, Lindsay's DNA could be unstable from her body shapeshifting into anotherform.form.
** A flashback shows Emily flying on a broomstick only to be reprimanded for it by Margo, and she pulls it off again in the present but wonders how she did it.
** Lindsay says that Sarah mentioned something about unstable molecules concerning her transformations into Madstream. This implies that like Nina, Lindsay's DNA could be unstable from her body shapeshifting into another
** A flashback shows Emily flying on a broomstick only to be reprimanded for it by Margo, and she pulls it off again in the present but wonders how she did it.
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* BigDamnKiss: Downplayed. As thanks for Cross' heroics at both Tibilias Bay and in saving Emily, Lindsay kisses him on the cheek. It gives him enough confidence to attempt asking her out, but [[MomentKiller Hendrick hadn't interrupted them]].
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* BigDamnKiss: Downplayed. As thanks for Cross' heroics at both Tibilias Bay and in saving Emily, Lindsay kisses him on the cheek. It gives him enough confidence to attempt asking her out, but [[MomentKiller Hendrick hadn't interrupted interrupts them]].
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* AffectionateNickname: All of Tabrella's friends call her "Tabby", and Jackie usually calls Apple "Apps".
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* BigShutUp: Lindsay gives Gavin one after he ticks her off with his "Emily doesn't deserve her" statement.
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* DudeWheresMyReward: After seeing Lindsay hug Cross goodbye, Zee asks for one as well which Lindsay provides.
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* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: Zee invokes this by leaving Cross alone with Lindsay as the latter gets soda brew, talking with Emily in the meantime.
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* OcularGushers: Andrea sheds these after hearing that Emily isn't hopeful of the possibility that she can make amends with Nina, Tito, and Glinda after what she did to them.
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** A lot of the expies from ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP: FIM]]'' have moments like their basises:
*** Lindsay's friends bemoan dealing with someone named "Discord" once, which Lindsay doesn't complain about.
*** Jackie and Tracy show that they have a competitive rivalry not unlike that of Applejack and Rainbow Dash's that's been prominent since mid-Season 1 in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E13FallWeatherFriends Fair Weather Friends]]".
*** Andrea says that she and Jackie are distant cousins, a connection that was hinted between Pinkie Pie and AJ in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E9PinkieApplePie Pinkie Apple Pie]]".
*** Lindsay's friends bemoan dealing with someone named "Discord" once, which Lindsay doesn't complain about.
*** Jackie and Tracy show that they have a competitive rivalry not unlike that of Applejack and Rainbow Dash's that's been prominent since mid-Season 1 in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E13FallWeatherFriends Fair Weather Friends]]".
*** Andrea says that she and Jackie are distant cousins, a connection that was hinted between Pinkie Pie and AJ in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E9PinkieApplePie Pinkie Apple Pie]]".
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* BigDamnKiss: Downplayed. As thanks for Cross' heroics at both Tibilias Bay and in saving Emily, Lindsay kisses him on the cheek. It gives him enough confidence to attempt asking her out, if only [[MomentKiller Hendrick hadn't interrupted them]].
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* BigDamnKiss: Downplayed. As thanks for Cross' heroics at both Tibilias Bay and in saving Emily, Lindsay kisses him on the cheek. It gives him enough confidence to attempt asking her out, if only but [[MomentKiller Hendrick hadn't interrupted them]].
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* CharacterDevelopmentCharacterDevelopment: When her stay at the Shystream home started out, Emily worked her fingers to the bone doing chores around the farm to prove herself useful. Lindsay and her family would encourage her to take breaks and interact with other people, which allow her to find people who know the kind of indecisiveness she's experiencing with her future. She comes to learn of the ramifications her acts of revenge led to and due to Gavin's intervention, she concludes that she's not ready to develop any romantic relationships until she sorts her issues out.
* {{Gasp}}: Lindsay reacts this way when she hears that the tail she saw on Emily in her personal hell ended up being used for food to feed herself.
* HateSink: Duke Eadbeaton, a pompous royal who made Tabrella pregnant and abandoned her and their child by joining the Emperor's Coven, where the scouts came to see him as a conceited asshole.
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** Emily panics after seeing Luz's DeathGlare due to her holding Kay when Luz and Eda came to pick up Kay from the Diamanto residence after the IFWOT.
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** Tabrella, Tracy, Andrea, and Jackie sre are stunned that Emily has returned and is now working for the Shystreams as their farmhand.
** Emily panics after seeing Luz's DeathGlare due to her holding Kay when Luz and Eda came to pick up Kayfrom the Diamanto residence after the IFWOT.IFWOT, retreating into a bathroom.
** Emily panics after seeing Luz's DeathGlare due to her holding Kay when Luz and Eda came to pick up Kay
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The scene of Emily and Zee laughing together from the previous chapter's teaser is shown here.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Duke Edbeaton gets killed by Emily in his debut chapter. Given how big a douchebag he is, he will not be missed.