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* InsecureLoveInterest: It becomes clear that despite having a mutual attraction, both Cross and Lindsay fear the other not feeling the same way; Cross had thought Lindsay was taken and Lindsay has feelings for both him and Emily, being unsure of how to figure things out.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: It becomes clear that despite having a mutual attraction, both Cross and Lindsay fear the other not feeling the same way; Cross had thought Lindsay was taken and Lindsay has feelings for both him and Emily, being but is unsure of how to figure things out.
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* LittleBlackDress: When going through Eda's dresses for formalwear, Donna spots a black dress and picks it with Eda saying it'd definitely catch Cross' eyes. Little does Eda know Donna also intends to catch Nina's with it.
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* PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: Eda brings up Creator/JohnHughes when giving dating advice to Donna, who naturally doesn't know who she's talking about.
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* LongingLook: Lindsay gives one to Cross and Emily while seeing them talk after Zee offers her advice.
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* AffectionateNickname: Downplayed. Ever since she started checking up on Emily with Cross, Zee's taken to calling her "Mily".
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* AffectionateNickname: Downplayed. Ever since she started checking up on Emily with Cross, Zee's taken to calling her "Mily".
* CoveredInGunge: Part of Lupe's tactics to break Slasher was to continuously dump mud and crap on him while he was trapped in a pit.
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*** Dell is mentioned to have a brother named Brolin, who's the richest member of the Clawthorne clan.
*** Beocrow's grandfather is the owner of his own griffin ranch in Palm Stings.
*** Beocrow's grandfather is the owner of his own griffin ranch in Palm Stings.
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*** Beocrow's grandfather is
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: During the Coven Head meeting, Terra is dismissive about the Forest of Fear's mist spreading.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** During the Coven Head meeting, Terra is dismissive about the Forest of Fear's mistspreading.spreading.
** Todd's one night stand with Felicity is a clue for a later reveal.
** During the Coven Head meeting, Terra is dismissive about the Forest of Fear's mist
** Todd's one night stand with Felicity is a clue for a later reveal.
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* OperationJealousy: Donna enacts her plan to make Nina jealous using Cross. Felicia gets her reservations at the same restaurant Nina and Lambi are going to, Donna gets a dress from Eda that'll draw the eye, and she plays up her appeal even further by adjusting her dress all night. Her plan ultimately fails since she goes too far and brings up the wrong subject, driving Nina away.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: During the Coven Head meeting, Terra is dismissive about the Forest of Fear's mist spreading.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: It becomes clear that despite having a mutual attraction, both Cross and Lindsay fear the other not feeling the same way; Cross had thought Lindsay was taken and Lindsay has feelings for both him and Emily, being unsure of how to figure things out.
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* KarmaHoudini: Terra's plan to get Calypso out of the way and delay the Day of Unity goes off without a hitch, and she faces no punishment for injuring Calypso or getting Slasher outed as a werewolf.
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** The Drakescale siblings both bring up the insanity at the IFWOT.
* FriendshipMoment: Emily asks Cross for permission to date Lindsay, clarifying she isn't taking advantage of his going out with Donna by saying she respects him. Touched by her honesty and knowing she won't harm Lindsay, Cross gives her the go-ahead.
** The only reason Cross didn't ask Lindsay out before is because he wasn't sure if she was already seeing someone else.
*** Dell is mentioned to have a brother named Brolin, who's the richest member of the Clawthorne clan.
*** Beocrow's grandfather is the owner of his own griffin ranch in Palm Stings.
*** Beocrow's grandfather is the owner of his own griffin ranch in Palm Stings.
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* TrueCompanions: Emily asks Cross for permission to date Lindsay, clarifying she isn't taking advantage of his going out with Donna by saying she respects him. Touched by her honesty and knowing she won't harm Lindsay, Cross gives her the go-ahead.
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* TrueCompanions: Emily seems to have fallen into this with Cross, as she asks Cross for permission to date Lindsay, clarifying she isn't taking advantage of his going out if he's cool with Donna by saying her making a move on Lindsay before she respects him. Touched by her honesty and knowing she won't harm Lindsay, Cross gives her the go-ahead.does so.
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** All of the original nine coven heads take inspiration from
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** All of the original nine coven heads take inspiration from several people and characters.
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Gladys warns Cross that if Donna comes home from their date so much as missing a shoe, she'll seal him up in a toy box, ''mint condition''. He takes her warning seriously.
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: After what happened with Jackson, Diana, Gladys, and Auggie take no chances with Cross and give him one of these with one warning in mind: don't hurt Donna. Gladys warns even tells Cross that if Donna comes home from their date so much as missing a shoe, she'll shrink him and seal him up in a toy box, ''mint condition''. He which he takes her warning seriously.seriously. Ironically, Donna ended up hurting him which makes this a mute point.
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* ShovelTalk: After what happened with Jackson, Diana, Gladys, and Auggie take no chances with Cross and give him one of these with one warning in mind: don't hurt Donna. Ironically, she may have ended up hurting him which makes this a mute point.
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** Mosquita, Napoli's girlfriend and [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Leshawna]] parody, officially appears for the first time.
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** Mosquita, Napoli's girlfriend wife and [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Leshawna]] parody, officially appears for the first time.
* FullNameUltimatum: King calls Gus "Augustus" as a warning to the second time he teases him about his date with Laura.
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* TheGhost: Alador doesn't attend the Coven Head meeting, resulting in Arthur showing up in his place.
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** Luz doesn't show up since she's spending the day on Earth, but Eda brings her up when giving Donna dating advice and Rocky does the same when voicing her appreciation of music.
** Alador doesn't attend the Coven Head meeting, resulting in Arthur showing up in hisplace.place.
** King brings up Amity when explaining to Laura how she took Kay in, and he and Brucy bring up Levi and Goonla being imprisoned.
** Luz doesn't show up since she's spending the day on Earth, but Eda brings her up when giving Donna dating advice and Rocky does the same when voicing her appreciation of music.
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** Laura visits the Boiling Isles for the first time, meets Hooty, Kay, Brucy, Rocky, Morton, Tiny Nose, Donna, Nina, Cross and Lambi while officially meeting Willow, Gus, Skara, and Haley, and is given a rundown about Kay's family being imprisoned and the Coven system.
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** Laura visits the Boiling Isles for the first time, meets Skara, Haley, Hooty, Kay, Brucy, Rocky, Morton, Tiny Nose, Donna, Nina, Cross and Lambi while officially meeting Willow, Willow and Gus, Skara, and Haley, and is given a rundown about Kay's family being imprisoned and the Coven system.
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* OutOfFocus: Because of this chapter taking place at the same time as "A Long Overdue Reunion", Luz is currently in the Human Realm and doesn't appear at all.
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* QueerEstablishingMoment: Zee admits to Lindsay she's pansexual and would be happy dating anyone regardless of their gender.
