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* {{Bookends}}: The chapter begins and ends with the quote "every hero has an origin story. This is one of them".
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* {{Bookends}}: {{Bookends}}:
** The chapter begins and ends with the quote "every hero has an origin story. This is one ofthem".them".
** "Deserve Nothing" ended with the Bat Queen's trust in Luz lost after Maya was destroyed and Luz giving up her palistrom wood to her with both of them believing she shouldn't have a palismen. Now, the Bat Queen has forgiven Luz for what happened after seeing the results of her and Maya's efforts to co-exist and gives Luz back the palistrom wood.
** The chapter begins and ends with the quote "every hero has an origin story. This is one of
** "Deserve Nothing" ended with the Bat Queen's trust in Luz lost after Maya was destroyed and Luz giving up her palistrom wood to her with both of them believing she shouldn't have a palismen. Now, the Bat Queen has forgiven Luz for what happened after seeing the results of her and Maya's efforts to co-exist and gives Luz back the palistrom wood.
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* CallBack: While dueling Luz as the Golden Guard, Emily uses the ice glyph to turn Luz into a HumanPopsicle just as Luz did to her in "A Coven Day Disaster", which hints at her bearing the mantle now.
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** On another note, the Bat Queen returns after a 36 chapter absence following the events of "Deserve Nothing", not counting her flashback appearance in "Going Through Changes".
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** The chapter ends up paralleling "Deserve Nothing", ultimately culminating in Luz regaining the Bat Queen's trust and her palistrom wood after accidentally destroying Maya and absorbing her essence.
** While dueling Luz as the Golden Guard, Emily uses the ice glyph to turn Luz into a HumanPopsicle just as Luz did to her in "A Coven Day Disaster", which hints at her bearing the mantle now.
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** The chapter ends up paralleling "Deserve Nothing", ultimately culminating in Luz regaining the Bat Queen's trust and her palistrom wood after accidentally destroying Maya and absorbing her essence.
** While dueling Luz as the Golden Guard, Emily uses the ice glyph to turn Luz into a HumanPopsicle just as Luz did to her in "A Coven Day Disaster", which hints at her bearing the mantle now.
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** Grimhilde also appears in Latissa while in disguise, Dr. Facilier also being shown.
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* DamnYouMuscleMemory: A disguised Grimhilde tries to give Sunny an apple, but Steve leads her away. Grimhilde honestly doesn't know why she did that when Dr. Facilier questions it.
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** Willow, Gus, Bo, Eileen, Elliot, Skara, Amelia, Cat, Viney, Jerbo, Barcus, Morty, Summer, Simon, Oskar, Beth and Jerry all appear at Matt's birthday party. Everyone says "happy birthday", but only Gus and Bo have additional lines afterward.
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* GivenNameReveal: Matt's full name isn't "Mattholomule Storms": it's "Mattholomule ''Tholomule'' Storms".
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* GivenNameReveal: GivenNameReveal:
** Matt's full name isn't "Mattholomule Storms": it's "Mattholomule ''Tholomule''Storms".Storms".
** Matt and Oskar's father is named Murray Tholomule and Steve's mother, who Murray had an affair with, is named Carol.
** Matt's full name isn't "Mattholomule Storms": it's "Mattholomule ''Tholomule''
** Matt and Oskar's father is named Murray Tholomule and Steve's mother, who Murray had an affair with, is named Carol.
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** Hiraki is based off of Dawn, being a pale-skinned blonde girl who dresses in green, [[TeensAreShort is rather short for her age]], and has AuraVision.
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** Hiraki Hikari is based off of Dawn, being a pale-skinned blonde girl who dresses in green, [[TeensAreShort is rather short for her age]], and has AuraVision.AuraVision. Her name is also based off of the Japanese name of the ''VideoGame/PokemonDiamondAndPearl'' character of the same name.
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** Hiraki is based off of Dawn, being a pale-skinned blonde girl who dresses in green and has AuraVision.
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** Hiraki is based off of Dawn, being a pale-skinned blonde girl who dresses in green green, [[TeensAreShort is rather short for her age]], and has AuraVision.
* ShipTease: Sunny asks Steve to escort her to Latissa to retrive Calypso's package, he saves her from muggers, and she asks him out after the mission.
* TeensAreShort: Hiraki is seventeen, but Steve notes that she's about Amity's height.
* TheUnReveal: What was in the package Calypso asked to be delivered to Nazgul and vice versa are never revealed.
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* WhamEpisode: Steve defects from the Emperor's Coven to protect Hiraki, Baum becomes Matt's palisman, Matt and Bo become an OfficialCouple, Maya and the Bat Queen forgive Luz and she is given back her palostrom wood, and Ghost officially becomes Amity's palisman.
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* WhamEpisode: Steve defects from the Emperor's Coven to protect Hiraki, Baum becomes Matt's palisman, Matt and Bo become an OfficialCouple, Maya and the Bat Queen forgive Luz for Maya's destruction and she is given back her palostrom palistrom wood, and Ghost officially becomes Amity's palisman.
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* WhamEpisodeWhamEpisode: Steve defects from the Emperor's Coven to protect Hiraki, Baum becomes Matt's palisman, Matt and Bo become an OfficialCouple, Maya and the Bat Queen forgive Luz and she is given back her palostrom wood, and Ghost officially becomes Amity's palisman.
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* WeHardlyKnewYeWeHardlyKnewYe: Barie debuts in this chapter, and is one of-- no, the first, of the many scouts who were killed by the traps in the Bat Queen's forest.
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** Nazgul the Marauder, the bounty hunter Calypso was friendly rivals with, shows up in present day after being seen in the past in the sidetrack, "How Calypso Saved Krampmus".
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* {{EMP}}: The Boiling Isles equivalent, the "Abomagnetic pulse", is the only way to shut down all the abomatons Emily sicced on the Clawthornes. Lucky for everybody that Amity knew how to re-wire the batteries of an abomaton in order to set one off.
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** As Hunter watches the unusual abomination leave, he notices it left behind orange fur.
* {{Forgiveness}}: After what Ghost told her about Maya's situation, seeing Luz and Maya working in tandem to save the palismen, and knowing neither of them wanted to be stuck together, the Bat Queen forgives Luz for what happened to Maya, even giving her back her palistrom wood and tellign her she's earned having a palisman. Right before this, Maya confesses that she's already forgiven Luz for the accident.
* {{Forgiveness}}: After what Ghost told her about Maya's situation, seeing Luz and Maya working in tandem to save the palismen, and knowing neither of them wanted to be stuck together, the Bat Queen forgives Luz for what happened to Maya, even giving her back her palistrom wood and tellign her she's earned having a palisman. Right before this, Maya confesses that she's already forgiven Luz for the accident.
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** As Hunter watches looks at the unusual abomination leave, abomination, he senses something odd about it and when it leaves, he notices it left behind orange fur.
* {{Forgiveness}}: After what Ghost told her about Maya's situation, seeing Luz and Maya working in tandem to save the palismen, and knowing neither of them wanted to be stuck together, the Bat Queen forgives Luz for what happened to Maya, even giving her back her palistrom wood andtellign telling her she's earned having a palisman. Right before this, Maya confesses that she's already forgiven Luz for the accident.
* {{Forgiveness}}: After what Ghost told her about Maya's situation, seeing Luz and Maya working in tandem to save the palismen, and knowing neither of them wanted to be stuck together, the Bat Queen forgives Luz for what happened to Maya, even giving her back her palistrom wood and
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* NextTierPowerUp: To symbolize her ice powers emerging, Luz's irises turn white and her cambion scales ice blue.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe
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* ForWantOfANail: Steve leaves the Emperor's Coven five episodes earlier than he did in canon.
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* ForWantOfANail: Steve leaves the Emperor's Coven five episodes earlier than he did in canon. He also spends the day exploring the Isles using his motorcycle with Mattholomule instead of King.
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* VisualPun: Luz takes aim at an Abomaton and uses her new ice powers to freeze it. It signifies that she literally ''iced it''.
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* ItsAllMyFaultItsAllMyFault: Steve feels some responsibility towards not being able to protect Amity, even though he knows quite well there's nothing he could've done.
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* OutOfFocusOutOfFocus: The Clawthornes show up midway through the chapter, and while all of Luz's friends appear at Matt's party, only Gus and Bo have speaking parts.
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Every hero has an origin, and what you're about to see is the true origin story... of Steve!
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* ShoutOutShoutOut: Steve battling Leonte to protect a girl which ends with the mentor yelling at his apprentice for straying away from the path he was groomed for has some undertones to Darth Vader and Obi-Wan's duel in ''Film/RevengeOfTheSith''.
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* FlashbackBPlot: How Steve became interested in joining the Emperor's Coven is shown through flashbacks.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Venoma's decision to not capture Ghost when she escapes leads to her bringing in the Clawthornes as reinforcements.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Venoma's decision to not capture Ghost when she escapes leads to her bringing in the Clawthornes as reinforcements.reinforcements to help free the palismen.
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** Maya has come to forgive Luz for accidentally destroying her and testifies in her defense to the Bat Queen, having made peace with it.
** It turns out Maya has come to forgive Luz for accidentally destroying her and testifies in her defense to the Bat Queen, having made peace with it.
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** Clé is based off of DJ and named after his voice actor, Creator/CleBennett.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Venoma's decision to not capture Ghost when she escapes capture leads to her bringing in the Clawthornes as reinforcements.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Venoma's decision to not capture Ghost when she escapes capture leads to her bringing in the Clawthornes as reinforcements.
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* TakeThat: Barie being KilledOffForReal [[WeHardlyKnewYe in the chapter she debuted in]] reflects the authors' hatred of Sugar and how she ultimately ended up being the main antagonist of ''Pahkitew Island'' who nearly reached the end by sheer dumb luck.
* TapOnTheHead: Sam knocks both Osran and Captain Wolffe out with a tree branch and they show no signs of significant pain later on.
* TapOnTheHead: Sam knocks both Osran and Captain Wolffe out with a tree branch and they show no signs of significant pain later on.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Hiraki may almost be 18, but she's still too young to join a coven and Leonte has no qualms over [[ForcedSleep putting her to sleep]] and arresting her. This is what leads to Steve fighting him to help her escape and officially defecting.
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* {{Expy}}{{Expy}}: All of the coven scouts who debut in this chapter along with Hiraki are based off of ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' characters;
** Clé is based off of DJ and named after his voice actor, Creator/CleBennett.
** Bowen is Owen if he was a bear.
** Carter is based on Noah and named after his voice actor, Creator/CarterHayden.
** Thunder and Joana are based on Lightning and Jo, their rivalry being a mirror to that of both jocks.
** Skrap is based on Scott, with his phobia of Fang being referenced by Skrap getting attacked by shark demons.
** Scarmeron is based off Cameron, with his fear of spiders being alluded to through his immunity to spider venom.
** Hugh is Cody if he was part beaver.
** Barie is a stand-in for Sugar if she was a cow demon, and her hatred towards Sunny is a nod to Sugar's one-sided rivalry with Ella, who Sunny is based off of.
** Hiraki is based off of Dawn, being a pale-skinned blonde girl who dresses in green and has AuraVision.
** Clé is based off of DJ and named after his voice actor, Creator/CleBennett.
** Bowen is Owen if he was a bear.
** Carter is based on Noah and named after his voice actor, Creator/CarterHayden.
** Thunder and Joana are based on Lightning and Jo, their rivalry being a mirror to that of both jocks.
** Skrap is based on Scott, with his phobia of Fang being referenced by Skrap getting attacked by shark demons.
** Scarmeron is based off Cameron, with his fear of spiders being alluded to through his immunity to spider venom.
** Hugh is Cody if he was part beaver.
** Barie is a stand-in for Sugar if she was a cow demon, and her hatred towards Sunny is a nod to Sugar's one-sided rivalry with Ella, who Sunny is based off of.
** Hiraki is based off of Dawn, being a pale-skinned blonde girl who dresses in green and has AuraVision.
* ForWantOfANail: Steve leaves the Emperor's Coven five episodes earlier than he did in canon.
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* NeverBeHurtAgainNeverBeHurtAgain: Ghost's reason for trying to leave Amity is because she fears [[HistoryRepeats going through what happened with Adam all over again]]. While Amity can't guarantee she isn't at risk of being lost that way or change Ghost's opinion about Luz reminding her of Philip, she alleviates Ghost's fear by asking to trust her so she can see Amity choose her path in life, which leads to Ghost officially becoming her palisman.
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* RuleOfSymbmolism: Steve burns his coven scout uniform and mask in a campfire, the physical embodiment of the life he left behind.
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* RuleOfSybmolism: Steve burns his coven scout uniform and mask in a campfire, the physical embodiment of the life he left behind.
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* GirlsLoveChocolate: While watching grudgby at home, Luz offers Amity a box of "choco-crickets", which she accepts.
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** Amity admitting her GoalInLife and bonding with Ghost, which had only been mentioned in "For the Future", is properly shown on display here.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Mattholomule already had a downplayed case with his last name being "Storms", but his official given name completely qualifies for this.
* AdaptationNameChange: Mattholomule already had a downplayed case with his last name being "Storms", but his official given name completely qualifies for this.
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** Baum, Emily's former palisman who was last seen in "What is it Good For?", is the first palisman captured by the EC.
* TheCameo: Dr. Bride and Glinda appear hauling a wheelbarrow of body parts while Steve and Sunny are traveling in Latissa.
* TheCameo: Dr. Bride and Glinda appear hauling a wheelbarrow of body parts while Steve and Sunny are traveling in Latissa.
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** Baum, Emily's former palisman who was last seen in "What is it Good For?", is the first palisman captured by the EC.
EC. He's later freed and selects Steve as his new witch before being given to Matt.
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** Dr. Bride and Glinda appear hauling a wheelbarrow of body parts while Steve and Sunny are traveling inLatissa.Latissa.
** Though unintentional, the illusion Amity creates to scare the coven scouts resembles the Horned King.
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** Though unintentional, the illusion Amity creates to scare the coven scouts resembles the Horned King.
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** Over the course of the day's events, Steve to no longer see the Emperor's Coven as the job he believed he wanted since Belos has never really cared about his people's well-being, quitting when Leonte expects him to arrest Hikari despite her being a child.
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** Over the course of the day's events, Steve comes to no longer see the Emperor's Coven as the job he believed he wanted since Belos has never really cared about his people's well-being, quitting when Leonte expects him to arrest Hikari despite her being a child.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Osran apparently didn't predict the possibility of the Clawthornes intervention or the illusion they cast to scare the scouts away from the Bat Queen's forest.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Osran apparently didn't predict the possibility of the Clawthornes intervention intervening with the Emperor's Coven kidnapping the Bat Queen's palismen or the illusion they cast to scare the scouts away from the Bat Queen's forest.
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* MythologyGagMythologyGag: For the first time since "Shaping Up or Nothing", ''Creator/{{Moringmark}}'' comics are referenced: the Bat Queen instructing her babies to hide during an Emperor's Coven raid (which was crafted from teaching them how to play hide and seek) comes from [[https://reddit.com/r/TheOwlHouse/comments/sl7o5l/moringmark_a_new_beginningas_well_as_an_end/ A New Beginning... as well as an end]]" if it had a happy ending.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Venoma's decision to not capture Ghost when she escapes capture leads to her bringing in the Clawthornes as reinforcements.
*RedHerringRedHerring: Cross turns out to be one for the SecretIdentity of the new Golden Guard.
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* RelationshipUpgrade: Bo drags Matt away from the party to give him her present: a peck on the cheek. This leads to them admitting they like each other and hooking up.
-->'''Matt:''' Best birthday ever.
-->'''Matt:''' Best birthday ever.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The Bat Queen being attacked by the Emperor's Coven was shown in the third quarter teaser in "The Book of Marcy Wu".
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* TookALevelInBadass: Emily was already a tough opponent before, but now that she's had training with the Golden Guard's mechanical staff, she's able to use spells in different types of magic despite being in the Illusion Coven. On top of that, she learned how to use the ice glyph thanks to her last encounter with Luz.
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The Bat Queen being attacked by the Emperor's Covenwas and Luz and Hunter dueling the new Golden Guard were both scenes shown in the third quarter teaser in "The Book of Marcy Wu".
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The Bat Queen being attacked by the Emperor's Coven
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* AdaptationalExplanation:
** Steve never really gave any explanation for how he became disillusioned enough to leave the Emperor's Coven. Here, it's because of the multiple instances the EC didn't really help people unless things were dire enough, witnessing several scouts being butchered before his eyes, and being ordered to capture a teenage girl who had been branded a wild witch.
** Steve never really gave any explanation for how he became disillusioned enough to leave the Emperor's Coven. Here, it's because of the multiple instances the EC didn't really help people unless things were dire enough, witnessing several scouts being butchered before his eyes, and being ordered to capture a teenage girl who had been branded a wild witch.
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* AdaptationalExplanation:
**AdaptationalExplanation: Steve never really gave any explanation for how he became disillusioned enough to leave the Emperor's Coven. Here, it's because of the multiple instances the EC didn't really help people unless things were dire enough, witnessing several scouts being butchered before his eyes, and being ordered to capture a teenage girl who had been branded a wild witch.witch.
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** Mattholomule's birthday, which had only been referenced in "Labyrinth Runners", is shown here.
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** Mattholomule's birthday, which had only been referenced in "Labyrinth Runners", is shown here.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Seeing that she's all alone and facing the Clawthornes, Amity, Hunter and the Bat Queen, Emily summons all the remaining Abomatons to kill them in order to escape.
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** Steve never really gave any explanation for how he became disillusioned enough to leave the Emperor's Coven. Here, it's because of the multiple instances the EC didn't really help people unless things were dire enough, witnessing several scouts being butchered before his eyes, and being ordered to capture a teenage girl who had been branded a wild witch.
** Amity admitting her GoalInLife and bonding with Ghost, which had only been mentioned in "For the Future", is properly shown on display here.
*AdaptationExpansionAdaptationExpansion: Mattholomule's birthday, which had only been referenced in "Labyrinth Runners", is shown here.
** Steve never really gave any explanation for how he became disillusioned enough to leave the Emperor's Coven. Here, it's because of the multiple instances the EC didn't really help people unless things were dire enough, witnessing several scouts being butchered before his eyes, and being ordered to capture a teenage girl who had been branded a wild witch.
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** Maya has come to forgive Luz for accidentally destroying her and testifies in her defense to the Bat Queen, having made peace with it.
** Over the course of the day's events, Steve to no longer see the Emperor's Coven as the job he believed he wanted since Belos has never really cared about his people's well-being, quitting when Leonte expects him to arrest Hikari despite her being a child.
** Maya has come to forgive Luz for accidentally destroying her and testifies in her defense to the Bat Queen, having made peace with it.
** Over the course of the day's events, Steve to no longer see the Emperor's Coven as the job he believed he wanted since Belos has never really cared about his people's well-being, quitting when Leonte expects him to arrest Hikari despite her being a child.
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* BrokenPedestal: Leonte admits to Steve that he's disappointed in Lilith for giving up her career and everything with it
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* DidntSeeThatComingDidntSeeThatComing: Osran apparently didn't predict the possibility of the Clawthornes intervention or the illusion they cast to scare the scouts away from the Bat Queen's forest.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillainNiceJobFixingItVillain: Venoma's decision to not capture Ghost when she escapes leads to her bringing in the Clawthornes as reinforcements.
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* RetCanon: Oskar, Matt's teenage brother who was mentioned back in "No Dancing Around" and retxonned into Steve after the confirmation that he's Matt's canonical older brother, becomes the middle child and biological full brother Sandra had with Murray.
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* RetCanon: Oskar, Matt's teenage brother who was mentioned back in "No Dancing Around" and retxonned retconned into Steve after the confirmation that he's Matt's canonical older brother, becomes the middle child and biological full brother Sandra had with Murray.
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* RetCanonRefusalOfTheCall: Baum asks Steve to accept him as his palisman, but Steve refuses because he'd be forced to give him to Belos. As a compromise, Steve gifts Baum to Matt.
* RetCanon: Oskar, Matt's teenage brother who was mentioned back in "No Dancing Around" and retxonned into Steve after the confirmation that he's Matt's canonical older brother, becomes the middle child and biological full brother Sandra had with Murray.
* RetCanon: Oskar, Matt's teenage brother who was mentioned back in "No Dancing Around" and retxonned into Steve after the confirmation that he's Matt's canonical older brother, becomes the middle child and biological full brother Sandra had with Murray.
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* Sunny is an orphan, her parents having died when she was young. She was raised by her stepmother and stepsisters.
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* BerserkButton: Steve doesn't take too kindly to Barie implying that Sunny is a harlot who went to town on Eberwolf and Calypso, calling her cannon fodder.
* BirthdayEpisode: The chapter is set on Mattholomule's birthday, and follows Steve working before attending the party.
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* BerserkButton: Steve doesn't take too kindly to Barie implying that Sunny is a harlot who went to town on Eberwolf and Calypso, calling her cannon fodder.
* BirthdayEpisode: The chapter is set on Mattholomule's birthday, and follows Steve working before attending the party.
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* TheBusCameBack: Leonte, the captain who spoke at Scooter Crane's funeral, returns to have a major role in this chapter.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Like it says in the title, Steve is the main character.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: For bad mouthing Sunny, Steve calls Barie "cannon fodder". Later, Barie gets killed by a trap.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Like it says in the title, Steve is the main character.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: For bad mouthing Sunny, Steve calls Barie "cannon fodder". Later, Barie gets killed by a trap.
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* TheBusCameBack: BrokenPedestal: Leonte admits to Steve that he's disappointed in Lilith for giving up her career and everything with it
* TheBusCameBack:
** Leonte, the captain who spoke at Scooter Crane'sfuneral, funeral in Chapter 78, returns to have a major role in this chapter.
** Baum, Emily's former palisman who was last seen in "What is it Good For?", is the first palisman captured by the EC.
* TheCameo: Dr. Bride and Glinda appear hauling a wheelbarrow of body parts while Steve and Sunny are traveling in Latissa.
* CharacterDevelopment
* ADayInTheLimelight:Like it says in If the title, chapter didn't spell it out, Steve is the main character.
focus as he returns to coven duty now that Amity and her friends have returned.
*{{Foreshadowing}}: DidntSeeThatComing
* EyeColorChange: Luz's eyes turn white right before she learns she has ice powers.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: During their fight, the new Golden Guard creates an ice glyph on the ground and Luz steps on it, being frozen up to her head. The Guard turns out to be Emily, meaning she used Luz's own trick against her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** For bad mouthing Sunny, Steve calls Barie "cannon fodder". Later, Barie gets killed by atrap.trap.
** The new Golden Guard mentions they've saw through Amity's illusion when confronting Luz and conjured illusions of themselves during their fight. And then there's the FiveSecondForeshadowing...
** As Hunter watches the unusual abomination leave, he notices it left behind orange fur.
* {{Forgiveness}}: After what Ghost told her about Maya's situation, seeing Luz and Maya working in tandem to save the palismen, and knowing neither of them wanted to be stuck together, the Bat Queen forgives Luz for what happened to Maya, even giving her back her palistrom wood and tellign her she's earned having a palisman. Right before this, Maya confesses that she's already forgiven Luz for the accident.
* AnIcePerson: Luz gains access to innate ice magic, but she
* ItsAllMyFault
* MasterOfIllusion
* NeverBeHurtAgain
* NiceJobFixingItVillain
* RedHerring
* RetCanon
* TheBusCameBack:
** Leonte, the captain who spoke at Scooter Crane's
** Baum, Emily's former palisman who was last seen in "What is it Good For?", is the first palisman captured by the EC.
* TheCameo: Dr. Bride and Glinda appear hauling a wheelbarrow of body parts while Steve and Sunny are traveling in Latissa.
* CharacterDevelopment
* ADayInTheLimelight:
*
* EyeColorChange: Luz's eyes turn white right before she learns she has ice powers.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: During their fight, the new Golden Guard creates an ice glyph on the ground and Luz steps on it, being frozen up to her head. The Guard turns out to be Emily, meaning she used Luz's own trick against her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** For bad mouthing Sunny, Steve calls Barie "cannon fodder". Later, Barie gets killed by a
** The new Golden Guard mentions they've saw through Amity's illusion when confronting Luz and conjured illusions of themselves during their fight. And then there's the FiveSecondForeshadowing...
** As Hunter watches the unusual abomination leave, he notices it left behind orange fur.
* {{Forgiveness}}: After what Ghost told her about Maya's situation, seeing Luz and Maya working in tandem to save the palismen, and knowing neither of them wanted to be stuck together, the Bat Queen forgives Luz for what happened to Maya, even giving her back her palistrom wood and tellign her she's earned having a palisman. Right before this, Maya confesses that she's already forgiven Luz for the accident.
* AnIcePerson: Luz gains access to innate ice magic, but she
* ItsAllMyFault
* MasterOfIllusion
* NeverBeHurtAgain
* NiceJobFixingItVillain
* RedHerring
* RetCanon
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** Captain Leonte was Steve's mentor in the Emperor's Coven. Since Steve struggled with his magic, Leonte trained him near the Forest of Fear so he could fight under pressure.
** Steve graduated from Hexside and was in the Construction track.
* Sunny is an orphan, her parents having died when she was young. She was raised by her stepmother and stepsisters.
** Emily is the new GoldenGuard.Guard, which means Cross was a RedHerring.
** Ghost left the Owl House to avoid [[NeverBeHurtAgain experiencing what happened with Adam and Philip through Amity and Luz]].
** Matt's brother Oskar works in tunnels, which is why he isn't home often.
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The Bat Queen being attacked by the Emperor's Coven was shown in the third quarter teaser in "The Book of Marcy Wu".
** Steve graduated from Hexside and was in the Construction track.
* Sunny is an orphan, her parents having died when she was young. She was raised by her stepmother and stepsisters.
** Emily is the new Golden
** Ghost left the Owl House to avoid [[NeverBeHurtAgain experiencing what happened with Adam and Philip through Amity and Luz]].
** Matt's brother Oskar works in tunnels, which is why he isn't home often.
* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The Bat Queen being attacked by the Emperor's Coven was shown in the third quarter teaser in "The Book of Marcy Wu".
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** The new Golden Guard uses the same trick Luz used on Emily the day of the Coven Day parade: once Luz is frozen, the Guard unmasks herself, revealing it's Emily.
** Luz's eyes turn white when she starts feeling cold, and when faced with an Abomaton, her scales turn ice-blue before she casts a spell circle and encases the Abomaton in a block of ice.
** The new Golden Guard uses the same trick Luz used on Emily the day of the Coven Day parade: once Luz is frozen, the Guard unmasks herself, revealing it's Emily.
** Luz's eyes turn white when she starts feeling cold, and when faced with an Abomaton, her scales turn ice-blue before she casts a spell circle and encases the Abomaton in a block of ice.
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* TheBusCameBack: Leonte, the captain who spoke at Scooter Crane's funeral, returns to have a major role in this chapter.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Like it says in the title, Steve is the main character.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Like it says in the title, Steve is the main character.
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* {{Bookends}}: The chapter begins and ends with the quote "every hero has an origin story. This is one of them".
* {{Foreshadowing}}: For bad mouthing Sunny, Steve calls Barie "cannon fodder". Later, Barie gets killed by a trap.
* TheReveal: Emily is the new Golden Guard.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: For bad mouthing Sunny, Steve calls Barie "cannon fodder". Later, Barie gets killed by a trap.
* TheReveal: Emily is the new Golden Guard.
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Every hero has an origin, and what you're about to see is the true origin story... of Steve!
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Every hero has an origin, and what you're about to see is the true origin story... of Steve!
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