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* LastSecondWordSwap: As Luz is talking about one of the Choco-keets mascot's victims, she has to alter what their fate was since [[NotInFrontOfTheKids Kay was close by]].
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* LastSecondWordSwap: As Luz is talking about one of the Choco-keets mascot's victims, she has to alter what their fate was since [[NotInFrontOfTheKids [[NotInFrontOfTheKid Kay was close by]].
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* AffectionateNickname: Abigail called Camila "Camil" and requested that she be called "Gail".
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Eda calls out Clarice for being part of the Violet Dragons street gang, who would later show up as minor villains.
* HowDadMetMom: In the flashback of when Camila met Abigail, Camila told her neighbor that she met Manny in high school and they went steady during community college.
* LastSecondWordSwap: As Luz is talking about one of the Choco-keets mascot's victims, she has to alter what their fate was since [[NotInFrontOfTheKids Kay was close by]].
* NailsOnAChalkboard: Eda resorts to this to get all the parents' attention at the PCA meeting since they won't stop complaining about Nina.
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* NoodleIncident: King once pirated a movie and seems to have gotten in trouble for it.
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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** The mascot of Choco-keets cereal was sent to rehab, escaped, and offed fellow mascots to eliminate the competition.
** King once pirated a movie and seems to have gotten in trouble for it.
** The mascot of Choco-keets cereal was sent to rehab, escaped, and offed fellow mascots to eliminate the competition.
** King once pirated a movie and seems to have gotten in trouble for it.
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* ForWantOfANail: Philip's diary (now a journal) wasn't damaged by echo mice. Rather, its pages was deliberately damaged as if someone didn't want the information in it to be discovered.
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* PointOfDivergence: Philip's diary (now a journal) wasn't damaged by echo mice. Rather, its pages were deliberately damaged as if someone didn't want the information in it to be discovered.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** A parent-teacher meeting is held regarding Nina's attendance at Hexside, and unsurprisingly almost all of the parents are opposed to it both because of Nina's actions during the war and the fact that [[FantasticRacism she's a lycan]]. They're only placated and agree to let it happen because A) Eda supports Slasher by bringing up how she and Luz changed for the better; B) Eda reminds them that all of them were much worse when they were students; and C) The Regals trust Calypso's judgement in spite of Nina's attacking Amelia, so they won't hold it against her. That doesn't mean the students automatically accept Nina, either.
** Naturally, Amity's skeptical about the letter Odalia sent her and believes she's trying to get something out of talking to her, not even wanting to be in the same room as her. A talk from Ms. Traveler brings up how she doesn't owe Odalia anything and has the option to work up to that talk or ignore her.
** It was previously stated that Luz has been exhibiting signs of PTSD due to Emily stabbing her and Asi cutting her. As Eda reveals, she freaked out after getting a small cut on her hand and stopped using, even being around, knives. Amity on the other hand has been on the verge of a panic attack due to everything going on in her life. At Ms. Traveler's recommendation, Eda agrees to get medication for both of them and help them relax by engaging in family activities.
** A parent-teacher meeting is held regarding Nina's attendance at Hexside, and unsurprisingly almost all of the parents are opposed to it both because of Nina's actions during the war and the fact that [[FantasticRacism she's a lycan]]. They're only placated and agree to let it happen because A) Eda supports Slasher by bringing up how she and Luz changed for the better; B) Eda reminds them that all of them were much worse when they were students; and C) The Regals trust Calypso's judgement in spite of Nina's attacking Amelia, so they won't hold it against her. That doesn't mean the students automatically accept Nina, either.
** Naturally, Amity's skeptical about the letter Odalia sent her and believes she's trying to get something out of talking to her, not even wanting to be in the same room as her. A talk from Ms. Traveler brings up how she doesn't owe Odalia anything and has the option to work up to that talk or ignore her.
** It was previously stated that Luz has been exhibiting signs of PTSD due to Emily stabbing her and Asi cutting her. As Eda reveals, she freaked out after getting a small cut on her hand and stopped using, even being around, knives. Amity on the other hand has been on the verge of a panic attack due to everything going on in her life. At Ms. Traveler's recommendation, Eda agrees to get medication for both of them and help them relax by engaging in family activities.
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* ContinuityNod: The movie the Clawthornes, Amity and Camila watch is ''Film/TheThing'', which Eda became a fan of when she first visited the Human Realm.
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* ContinuityNod: The movie the Clawthornes, Amity and Camila watch is ''Film/TheThing'', ''Film/TheThing1982'', which Eda became a fan of when she first visited the Human Realm.
