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* MoodWhiplash: It seems like Luz and Amity are content with looking forward to finding a balance between normal and exciting for their dates beforw sharing a kiss. Then things end with them holding each other on the Trauma Train with the Conductor LaughingMad.
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* MoodWhiplash: It seems like Luz and Amity are content with looking forward to finding a balance between normal and exciting for their dates beforw before sharing a kiss. Then things end with them holding each other on the Trauma Train with the Conductor LaughingMad.
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** Boris tells Boscha that her acar makes her look intimidating and he'll be around to talk when she needs it.
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** Boris tells Boscha that her acar scar makes her look intimidating and he'll be around to talk when she needs it.
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* WingedHumanoid: The humanoid bat goddess in the girls' vision (who represents Luz) initially has bat wings for arms but after recieving arms from the sculptor (who represents Amity), their wings are transfered to their back.
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* WingedHumanoid: The humanoid bat goddess in the girls' vision (who represents Luz) initially has bat wings for arms but after recieving arms from the sculptor (who represents Amity), their her wings are transfered to their her back.
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* AffectionateNickname: Raine call Luz "Lil' Clawthorne" while Luz used Eda's nickname for them.
** Those kidnappings that Larry warned Eda about back in "Unemployment Filing"? Yeah, Eileen was almost a victim and Jon de Plume becomes one (and he's been through a lot since his publisher cubed him in "Raising Human".)
** Raine's advice to Luz about figuring things out with a strong support group is similar to what Eda told Amity in "No Dancing Around".
** All the Coven Heads attend the orchestra since it's obligatory. Aside from Raine, Darius and Terra, they have no lines.
** Jon de Plume is shown to have become jobless since Piniet was killed and gets kidnapped by people working for the Boss.
* CommonalityConnection: Raine seems to be likening Luz's LossOfIdentity and drive to figure out what she is to (implied) when they came out.
-->'''Raine:''' I'm sure that you'll figure things out. Probably not in the same way I did, but I do think you will learn to be happy with yourself.
** Jon de Plume is shown to have become jobless since Piniet was killed and gets kidnapped by people working for the Boss.
* CommonalityConnection: Raine seems to be likening Luz's LossOfIdentity and drive to figure out what she is to (implied) when they came out.
-->'''Raine:''' I'm sure that you'll figure things out. Probably not in the same way I did, but I do think you will learn to be happy with yourself.
** Gus brings up Willow telling him about Camila's resurrection.
** Vanz Ator still has the Magic Mirror, which has been covered up for sometime now.
** Vanz Ator still has the Magic Mirror, which has been covered up for sometime now.
** Luz notes the head of the Titan being sacred ground, a fact she didn't learn until "Elsewhere and Elsewhen".
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The kidnappings and the Magic Mirror will be more focused on soon enough.
** Willow is only referenced when Gus remembers her telling him about Camila.
** The Boss, the alpha student and the principal of Glandus High, all of whom rule the school with an iron fist, with the school's top students answering to them.
** The Boss, the alpha student and the principal of Glandus High, all of whom rule the school with an iron fist, with the school's top students answering to them.
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** Luz's reaction upon realizing why Amber gave her and Amity very specific outfits.
** This is Luz's reaction upon realizing why Amber gave her and Amity very specific outfits.
* MoodWhiplash: It seems like Luz and Amity are content with looking forward to finding a balance between normal and exciting for their dates beforw sharing a kiss. Then things end with them holding each other on the Trauma Train with the Conductor LaughingMad.
-->'''Luz:''' THIS WAS A BIG MISTAKE!
-->'''Luz:''' THIS WAS A BIG MISTAKE!
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* TheNameless: Boris reveals to Luz and Amity that he renounced the Heiron name a long time ago.
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* TheNameless: Boris reveals to Luz and Amity that he renounced the Heiron name a long time ago. He calls it the best thing that ever happened to him.
* OutOfFocus: Willow and Barcus are only mentioned, while Skara, Viney and Jerbo are completely absent.
** Boris tells Boscha that her acar makes her look intimidating and he'll be around to talk when she needs it.
** After finding Katya's parents dead and her all alone, Vanz turns her into a vampire and adopts her as his own daughter.
** After finding Katya's parents dead and her all alone, Vanz turns her into a vampire and adopts her as his own daughter.
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*** At some point prour to their meeting, Philip found a way into the Human Realm, given his surprise when he saw Vanz.
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*** At some point prour prior to their meeting, Philip found a way into to the Human Realm, given his surprise when he saw Vanz.
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** Bo has two dads along with her mom, all in a [[{{Polyamory}} polyamorous]] relationship.
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** The Thians and their crew have been helping the Bards Against the Throne with their freeing wild witches, hence why they occasionally escort those they save out of the Boiling Isles.
** Gus has been looking into Baron Samedi, and Eda's heard of him being a deal maker.
** Bo has two dads along with her mom, all in a [[{{Polyamory}} polyamorous]] relationship. Her mother Suzy is in the Healing Coven.
** Gus has been looking into Baron Samedi, and Eda's heard of him being a deal maker.
** Bo has two dads along with her mom, all in a [[{{Polyamory}} polyamorous]] relationship. Her mother Suzy is in the Healing Coven.
* SoProudOfYou:
** Luz says this to Amity for standing up to Shawm and telling him to shove off, giving her a kiss and a hug as a reward.
** Boris assures Boscha that he'll never think less of her and he's proud of her for learning she's made mistakes.
** Luz says this to Amity for standing up to Shawm and telling him to shove off, giving her a kiss and a hug as a reward.
** Boris assures Boscha that he'll never think less of her and he's proud of her for learning she's made mistakes.
* TemptingFate: Luz outright says that she and Amity jinxed themselves by saying they prefer exciting, near-death, traumatic dates over normal ones; upon catching the Trauma Train, they get on questioning how bad it could be. AnswerCut: they get scared out of their minds.
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* TheUnReveal: How Philip got to the Human Realm isn't specified, nor how he and Vanz got back to the Demon Realm. It's also implied that Vanz Ator wasn't his real name, as he went by monikers relating to his business.
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* TheUnReveal: TheUnReveal:
** How Philip got to the Human Realm isn't specified, nor how he and Vanz got back to the Demon Realm. It's also implied that Vanz Ator wasn't his real name, as he went by monikers relating to hisbusiness.business.
** Who the heck saw Mattholomule enter the Row residence?
** How Philip got to the Human Realm isn't specified, nor how he and Vanz got back to the Demon Realm. It's also implied that Vanz Ator wasn't his real name, as he went by monikers relating to his
** Who the heck saw Mattholomule enter the Row residence?
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* WingedHumanoid: The humanoid bat goddess in the girls' vision (who represents Luz) initially has bat wings for arms but after recieving arms from the sculptor (who represents Amity), their wings are transfered to their back.
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* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Boris ruffles Amity's hair when he sees her again after so long.
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** King mentions that he told Camila not to mess with Eda and Lilith's elixirs, but he doesn't say that he told her about their curses.
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** King mentions that he told Camila not to mess with Eda and Lilith's elixirs, but he doesn't say that he hint if everyone told her about their curses.
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: While talking with Hunter, Lilith admits she misses Steve, calling him her only real friend in the Emperor's Coven.
* {{Beatnik}}: Katya describes Derwin as one, since his poetry wasn't good enough for the Bard Coven.
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* BigDamnReunion: It's implied that Boscha's meeting Boris here is the first time she's seen him in years. After she drops her act of being angry with him, he embraces her when she begins crying.
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* BigDamnReunion: It's implied that Boscha's meeting Boscha meets Boris here is for the first time she's seen him in years. After she drops her act of being angry with him, he embraces her when she begins crying.
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** Lilith suggests Luz take Amity for a walk on the beach. This was how one of her dates with Ford went, seen in "Understanding Lilith".
** Lilith tries to buy back the dimensional scissors she got from Vanz Ator, as seen in the previous book's epilogue.
** Lilith tries to buy back the dimensional scissors she got from Vanz Ator, as seen in the previous book's epilogue.
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** Lilith suggests Luz take Amity for a walk on the beach. This was how one of her dates with Ford went, seen in "Understanding Lilith".
Lilith". She met Hunter's predecessor seconds after Eda's first transformation into the Owl Beast and her induction into the EC.
** Lilith tries to buy back the dimensional scissors she got from Vanz Ator, as seen in the previous book's epilogue. Vanz even brings up that meeting.
** Hunter still only sees Lilith as a walking corpse after nearly killing her.
** Amber brings up Luz's BadassBoast against Belos at the petrification ceremony when the BAT's admit they were the ones who saved her and Eda.
** Lilith tries to buy back the dimensional scissors she got from Vanz Ator, as seen in the previous book's epilogue. Vanz even brings up that meeting.
** Hunter still only sees Lilith as a walking corpse after nearly killing her.
** Amber brings up Luz's BadassBoast against Belos at the petrification ceremony when the BAT's admit they were the ones who saved her and Eda.
* TheCameo:
** Eileen and her mom, the former getting a visit from Gus, Mattholomule and Bo.
** Katya's friend Summer, who covers for the former while she goes to meet the BAT's.
** The previous Golden Guard appears before Lilith in a flashback when she's accepted into the Emperor's Coven.
** Tom listens to Boscha about her brother and encourages her to reach out to him.
** Eileen and her mom, the former getting a visit from Gus, Mattholomule and Bo.
** Katya's friend Summer, who covers for the former while she goes to meet the BAT's.
** The previous Golden Guard appears before Lilith in a flashback when she's accepted into the Emperor's Coven.
** Tom listens to Boscha about her brother and encourages her to reach out to him.
** Lilith recalls her meeting Hunter and him being Luz's friend, which occured in "Recovering".
** Katya thanks Luz for breaking her out of the Conformatorium, which happened prior to the events of the first chapter.
** During the SongParody, Amity notes Belos' attempt to get on her good side using flattery when they met in "Regretful Decisions". Luz then add her two snails by noting the deal he made her in "The Reveal".
** Katya thanks Luz for breaking her out of the Conformatorium, which happened prior to the events of the first chapter.
** During the SongParody, Amity notes Belos' attempt to get on her good side using flattery when they met in "Regretful Decisions". Luz then add her two snails by noting the deal he made her in "The Reveal".
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* CurseCutShort: Shawn interupts the song just as everyone in the bar is about to call Belos a "jackass".
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* CurseCutShort: Shawn Shawm interupts the song just as everyone in the bar tavern is about to call Belos a "jackass".
** Boscha mentions her mothers when she tells Tom about Boris leaving home.
** While telling Luz how he joined the BAT's, Boris mentions that his aunt Delara, Simon's late mother, was his inspiration.
** While telling Luz how he joined the BAT's, Boris mentions that his aunt Delara, Simon's late mother, was his inspiration.
* HeroWorshipper: The BAT's admit they respect Luz for her declaration to kick the Emperor's ass, seeing her as a fellow rebel...
* HonoraryTrueCompanion: ...as such, the BAT's take in Luz as an honorary member since she fits their main criteria; she's a bard and she hates Belos as much as them.
* HonoraryTrueCompanion: ...as such, the BAT's take in Luz as an honorary member since she fits their main criteria; she's a bard and she hates Belos as much as them.
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** Luz and Amity learn that Raine's the leader of the Bards Against the Throne. Luz also meets Boris for the first time while Amity meets Katya.
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** Luz and Amity learn that Raine's the leader of the Bards Against the Throne. Luz also meets Boris and Goonla for the first time while Amity meets Katya.
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* LampshadeHanging: The Trauma Train pretty much seems to be an InUniverse BigLippedAlligatorMoment. What's really jarring is the conductor.
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* LampshadeHanging: The Trauma Train pretty much seems to be an InUniverse BigLippedAlligatorMoment. What's really jarring is the conductor.Conductor showing up out of nowhere.
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* MusicalisInterruptus
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* MusicalisInterruptusMusicalisInterruptus: As everyone really gets into insulting Belos, Shawm Eaglesnitch arrives causing Derwin and Levi to stop playing music.
* MyGreatestSecondChance: After everything she did under Belos' employ, Lilith is taking the time now to not only rediscover the person she wants to be, but to protect her family from her former boss.
* MyGreatestSecondChance: After everything she did under Belos' employ, Lilith is taking the time now to not only rediscover the person she wants to be, but to protect her family from her former boss.
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* PetTheDog: Upon seeing the girls are in attendance at the orchestra, Darius tells them he didn't see them and walks off.
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* PetTheDog: PetTheDog:
** Lilith is willing to answer all of Hunter's questions about the previous Golden Guard.
** Upon seeing the girls are in attendance at the orchestra, Darius tells them he didn't see them and walks off.
** Lilith is willing to answer all of Hunter's questions about the previous Golden Guard.
** Upon seeing the girls are in attendance at the orchestra, Darius tells them he didn't see them and walks off.
*** Vanz knows what happened when Lilith used the scissors all those years ago.
*** Nicole forbid Boscha from ever seeing Boris again.
*** During the song, Goonla's crew calls Belos a codfish, the famous insult used by WesternAnimation/PeterPan to Captain Hook.
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** Boris has multiple tattoos
** Derwin gets a tattoo
** Derwin gets a tattoo
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** Boris has multiple tattoos
tattoos on his arms part of his chest and his neck.
** Derwin gets a tattoo of a bat playing bongos on his arm.
** Derwin gets a tattoo of a bat playing bongos on his arm.
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* VillainRespect: Shawm admits he respects Goonla and his crew for sticking to their principles by not joining the Emperor's Coven fishing trade.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot]]Crosshot: ''[[Recap/TheOwlHouseS2E20CloudsOnTheHorizon No monsters, no mysteries, no deadly duels. It's going to be the most mundane, slice-of-life date ever and it'll be awesome.]]'']]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: All 6 remaining Coven Heads besides Raine, Darius and Eberwolf debut between "Througn the Looking Glass Ruins" and "Hunting Palismen" instead of the latter.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: AdaptationalEarlyAppearance:
** All 6 remaining Coven Heads besides Raine, Darius and Eberwolf debut between"Througn "Through the Looking Glass Ruins" and "Hunting Palismen" instead of the latter.latter.
** In the sense of a place, Gravesfield is seen in the 16th century during said gap instead of making its formal debut in "Yesterday's Lie".
** All 6 remaining Coven Heads besides Raine, Darius and Eberwolf debut between
** In the sense of a place, Gravesfield is seen in the 16th century during said gap instead of making its formal debut in "Yesterday's Lie".
* AmbiguousSituation:
** How Philip got to Earth and returned to the Boiling Isles with Vanz Ator is a mystery.
** King mentions that he told Camila not to mess with Eda and Lilith's elixirs, but he doesn't say that he told her about their curses.
** How Philip got to Earth and returned to the Boiling Isles with Vanz Ator is a mystery.
** King mentions that he told Camila not to mess with Eda and Lilith's elixirs, but he doesn't say that he told her about their curses.
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** Luz and Amity's dates in Gravity Falls, the carnival and Grom are all mentioned when Luz explains to Camila how they got together.
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** Luz and Amity's dates in Gravity Falls, the carnival and Grom are all mentioned when Luz explains to Camila how they got together. Luz also recalls her first meeting with Amity, how she became Luz's tutor, and her deal with Lilith (King adds in Eda punching Lilith when she found out).
** Lilith suggests Luz take Amity for a walk on the beach. This was how one of her dates with Ford went, seen in "Understanding Lilith".
** Lilith tries to buy back the dimensional scissors she got from Vanz Ator, as seen in the previous book's epilogue.
** Lilith suggests Luz take Amity for a walk on the beach. This was how one of her dates with Ford went, seen in "Understanding Lilith".
** Lilith tries to buy back the dimensional scissors she got from Vanz Ator, as seen in the previous book's epilogue.
* ContinuityNod:
** The Slitherbeast is mentioned to be living in the woods close to the Owl House since being driven out of its cave two chapters ago.
** King brings up all the elixirs stashed around the Owl House.
** The H.A.S. club meeting held in the last chapter is brought up, namely Eileen's inability to attend.
** The Slitherbeast is mentioned to be living in the woods close to the Owl House since being driven out of its cave two chapters ago.
** King brings up all the elixirs stashed around the Owl House.
** The H.A.S. club meeting held in the last chapter is brought up, namely Eileen's inability to attend.
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** Luz meets Amber and Derwin and learns Katya's a member of the BAT's before "Hunting Palismen" instead of in "O Titan, Where Art Thou?".
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** Luz meets Amber and Derwin and learns Katya's a member Raine and Katya are members of the BAT's before "Hunting Palismen" instead of in "Follies at the Coven Day Parade" and "O Titan, Where Art Thou?".
* TheGhost:
** Gus mentions Barcus who told him, Matt, and Bo that Eileen hadn't been to class for a few days.
* GivenNameReveal: Eileen's last name is revealed to be [[PunnyName Cornealius]].
** Gus mentions Barcus who told him, Matt, and Bo that Eileen hadn't been to class for a few days.
* GivenNameReveal: Eileen's last name is revealed to be [[PunnyName Cornealius]].
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** Luz and Amity learn that Raine's the leader of the Bards Against the Throne. Luz also meets Boris for the first time.
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** Luz and Amity learn that Raine's the leader of the Bards Against the Throne. Luz also meets Boris for the first time.time while Amity meets Katya.
* LampshadeHanging: The Trauma Train pretty much seems to be an InUniverse BigLippedAlligatorMoment. What's really jarring is the conductor.
* TheNameless: Boris reveals to Luz and Amity that he renounced the Heiron name a long time ago.
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** Vanz Ator was a human merchant who was brought to the Boiling Isles by Philip Clawthorne. After being turned into a vampire, he lived as a SnakeOilSalesman until he came across Katya's family; after the girl's parents were brutally murdered, he turned and adopted her.
** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using her family's [[MakeMeWannaShout scream ability]] and because she was so scared, she hasn't been to school for the last few days. Her last name is Cornealius.
** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using her family's [[MakeMeWannaShout scream ability]] and because she was so scared, she hasn't been to school for the last few days. Her last name is Cornealius.
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** Vanz Ator was a human merchant who was brought to the Boiling Isles by Philip Clawthorne.Clawthorne, who he taught how to play chess. After being turned into a vampire, he lived as a SnakeOilSalesman until he came across Katya's family; after the girl's parents were brutally murdered, he turned and adopted her.
*** At some point prour to their meeting, Philip found a way into the Human Realm, given his surprise when he saw Vanz.
** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using herfamily's [[MakeMeWannaShout scream ability]] and because she was so scared, she hasn't been to school for the last few days. Her last name is Cornealius.
*** At some point prour to their meeting, Philip found a way into the Human Realm, given his surprise when he saw Vanz.
** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using her
** The Slitherbeast has been relocated to the woods near the Owl House.
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** The SongParody, "Oh Belos", is based on "Gaston" from ''Beauty and the Beast'' and "Rattigan" from ''The Great Mouse Detective''.
** Shawm "Sham" Eaglesnitch is a parody of Muppet's Sam the Eagle, including his famous line "You are all weirdos."
** Shawm "Sham" Eaglesnitch is a parody of Muppet's Sam the Eagle, including his famous line "You are all weirdos."
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** The SongParody, "Oh Belos", is based on "Gaston" from ''Beauty and the Beast'' ''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast'' and "Rattigan" from ''The Great Mouse Detective''.
''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective''.
** Shawm "Sham" Eaglesnitch is a parody ofMuppet's ''Franchise/TheMuppets'''s Sam the Eagle, including his famous line "You are all weirdos."
** Shawm "Sham" Eaglesnitch is a parody of
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Vanz Ator was the one who taught Philip how to play chess, making him responsible for Belos being TheChessmaster he is now. In turn, Belos was the reason Vanz ended up on the Boiling Isles, so he's indirectly responsible for Vanz' overarching effect on Luz's life.
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* TattooAsCharacterType: Amity, after being offered by Boris, gets a tattoo on her right shoulder, showing a pink butterfly (referencing all the changes she's going through) and a dagger in the middle (a nod to Puck using one as his signature weapon).
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* TattooAsCharacterType: TattooAsCharacterType:
** Boris has multiple tattoos
** Derwin gets a tattoo
** Amity, after being offered by Boris, gets a tattoo on her right shoulder, showing a pink butterfly (referencing all the changes she's going through) and a dagger in the middle (a nod to Puck using one as his signatureweapon).weapon).
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Vanz finds himself surrounded by vampires in the woods, and they all proceed to attack him.
* TheUnReveal: How Philip got to the Human Realm isn't specified, nor how he and Vanz got back to the Demon Realm. It's also implied that Vanz Ator wasn't his real name, as he went by monikers relating to his business.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Once again, Vanz Ator acts as one [[note]]thankfully, it doesn't directly affect Luz this time since it takes place long before her birth[[/note]], giving Philip Clawthorne the game that would be the key to his future intellect.
** Boris has multiple tattoos
** Derwin gets a tattoo
** Amity, after being offered by Boris, gets a tattoo on her right shoulder, showing a pink butterfly (referencing all the changes she's going through) and a dagger in the middle (a nod to Puck using one as his signature
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Vanz finds himself surrounded by vampires in the woods, and they all proceed to attack him.
* TheUnReveal: How Philip got to the Human Realm isn't specified, nor how he and Vanz got back to the Demon Realm. It's also implied that Vanz Ator wasn't his real name, as he went by monikers relating to his business.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Once again, Vanz Ator acts as one [[note]]thankfully, it doesn't directly affect Luz this time since it takes place long before her birth[[/note]], giving Philip Clawthorne the game that would be the key to his future intellect.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: All 6 remaining Coven Heads besides Raine, Darius and Eberwolf debut between "Througn the Looking Glass Ruins" and "Hunting Palismen" instead of the latter.
* BigDamnReunion: It's implied that Boscha's meeting Boris here is the first time she's seen him in years. After she drops her act of being angry with him, he embraces her when she begins crying.
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* CrowdSong
* CurseCutShort
* CurseCutShort
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* CrowdSong
CrowdSong: All of Goonla's crew, along with Luz, Amity and the BAT's participate in singing "Oh, Belos".
*CurseCutShortCurseCutShort: Shawn interupts the song just as everyone in the bar is about to call Belos a "jackass".
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* DistantPrologue: This time, we're treated to one in the 17th century, when Vanz Ator was a human merchant who gave Philip Clawthorne a ride to Gravesfield, ended up in the Boiling Isles, and got turned into a vampire.
* ForWantOfANail:
** Luz meets Amber and Derwin and learns Katya's a member of the BAT's before "Hunting Palismen" instead of in "O Titan, Where Art Thou?".
** Unlike in canon, Scooter Crane physically appears before passing his title as Bard Coven Head to Raine.
** Terra begins to brainwash Raine by using tea much sooner now that Belos is already aware of their treachery.
** Luz meets Amber and Derwin and learns Katya's a member of the BAT's before "Hunting Palismen" instead of in "O Titan, Where Art Thou?".
** Unlike in canon, Scooter Crane physically appears before passing his title as Bard Coven Head to Raine.
** Terra begins to brainwash Raine by using tea much sooner now that Belos is already aware of their treachery.
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** Camila is told about how Luz came to eventually enter a relationship with Amity.
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** Camila is told about how Luz came to eventually enter a relationship with Amity.Amity, how they broke up and got back together.
** Boscha informs Boris of her recent heinous actions.
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* PetTheDog: Upon seeing the girls are in attendance at the orchestra, Darius tells them he didn't see them.
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* PetTheDog: Upon seeing the girls are in attendance at the orchestra, Darius tells them he didn't see them.them and walks off.
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** Boris left home after declaring himself nameless and opened a tattoo shop, but still followed Boscha's grudgby career. He turns out to be the keyboardist of the BATT's and Amity mentions he babysat her and her siblings, meaning he's older than the twins.
*** He joined the BATT's in honor of his aunt Delara, Simon's mom, who died rebelling against Belos.
*** He joined the BATT's in honor of his aunt Delara, Simon's mom, who died rebelling against Belos.
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** Boris left home after declaring himself nameless and opened a tattoo shop, but still followed Boscha's grudgby career. He turns out to be the keyboardist of the BATT's BAT's and Amity mentions he babysat her and her siblings, meaning he's older than the twins.
*** He joined theBATT's BAT's in honor of his aunt Delara, Simon's mom, who died rebelling against Belos.
*** He joined the
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* WhamEpisode: Eileen is revealed to have been almost kidnapped and Raine officially succeeds Scooter Crane as head of the Bard coven, with Terra beginning to brainwash them.
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* WhamEpisode: Eileen is revealed to have been almost kidnapped kidnapped, Boscha begins reconnecting with Boris, and Raine officially succeeds Scooter Crane as head of the Bard coven, with Terra beginning to brainwash them.
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* TattooAsCharacterType: Amity, after being offered by Boris, gets a tattoo on her right shoulder, showing a pink butterfly (referencing all the chamges she's going through) and a dagger in the middle (a nod to Puck using one as his signature weapon).
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* TattooAsCharacterType: Amity, after being offered by Boris, gets a tattoo on her right shoulder, showing a pink butterfly (referencing all the chamges changes she's going through) and a dagger in the middle (a nod to Puck using one as his signature weapon).
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** Luz's reaction upon realizing why Amber gave her and Amity very specificoutfits.outfits.
** Bo and Mattholomule unwillingly share one when Mark calls Matt Bo's boyfriend.
* MakeMeWannaShout: The Cornealius family has the ability to let out a powerful scream (despite not having mouths) that makes their enemies bleed from their eyes and ears.
** Luz's reaction upon realizing why Amber gave her and Amity very specific
** Bo and Mattholomule unwillingly share one when Mark calls Matt Bo's boyfriend.
* MakeMeWannaShout: The Cornealius family has the ability to let out a powerful scream (despite not having mouths) that makes their enemies bleed from their eyes and ears.
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* ShownTheirWork: Amity states she's basically [[EmancipatedChild emancipated]] due to being nameless. Seeing as she's 14, this would actually be true in real life not to mention she has a job that provides a consistent and reliable source of income.
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* The Boss, who is said to lead Glandus High with the principal and the alpha student, has a hand in the kidnappings.
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* WrittenInAbsence: Eileen not appearing at the last H.A.S. meeting is explained as being due to her not attending school for the past few days.
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* WrittenInAbsence: Eileen not appearing at the last H.A.S. meeting in the previous chapter is explained as being due to her not attending school for the past few days.
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* AuraVision: The orchestra's music tells a story based on the audience's perspective: it depends on the person and is created by that person's aura. For Luz and Amity, it's a retelling of their relationship.
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* AuraVision: The orchestra's music tells a story based on the audience's perspective: it depends on the person and is created by that person's aura. For As such Luz and Amity, it's a retelling of their relationship. Amity's blue and pink auras are seen again.
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* {{Symbolism}}: The story Luz and Amity see during the orchestra is about a bat woman and a sculptor who start out as enemies, only to grow close and eventually end up together. In orher words, it's a retelling of their relationship.
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* ConcertEpisode: Per the suggestion of the BATT's, Luz and Amity's normal date takes place at an orchestra Raine's performing in and serving as Scooter Crane's final performance.
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* AuraVision: The orchestra's music tells a story based on the audience's perspective: it depends on the person and is created by that person's aura. For Luz and Amity, it's a retelling of their relationship.
* LuminescentBlush: Luz's reaction upon realizing why Amber gave her and Amity very specific outfits.
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** Gus gets to meet Camila for the first time learning she was resurrected.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: The b-plot puts a good amount of focus on Boscha and Boris.
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* SecurityCling: In response to the Trauma Train, the girls hug each other in fear.
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* WrittenInAbsence: Eileen not appearing at the last H.A.S. meeting is explained as being due to her not attending school for the past few days.
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** Luz mentions it's been awhile since she saw Levi. Their only other interaction was in "Heart to Heart", 42 chapters ago.
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* PetTheDog: Upon seeing the girls are in attendance at the orchestra, Darius tells them he didn't see them.
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*** He joined the BATT's in honor of his aunt Delara, Simon's mom, who died rebelling against Belos.
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* CallBack:
** Remember when Emperor Belos mentioned a human merchant sold him his chess set in "Family Group Therapy"? Turns out he got it from a human Vanz Ator as Philip Clawthorne.
** Luz and Amity's dates in Gravity Falls, the carnival and Grom are all mentioned when Luz explains to Camila how they got together.
** Remember when Emperor Belos mentioned a human merchant sold him his chess set in "Family Group Therapy"? Turns out he got it from a human Vanz Ator as Philip Clawthorne.
** Luz and Amity's dates in Gravity Falls, the carnival and Grom are all mentioned when Luz explains to Camila how they got together.
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* NoodleIncident: Prior to their breakup, Luz and Amity had one other date (besides the trip to Gravity Falls, the carnival and Grom) that resulted in them [[LampshadeHanging running from a demotic cyclops that caused the sky to start raining blood]]. (''{{Beat}}'') ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext Yeah...]]''
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* AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: Upon seeing Bo invited Mattholomule over, her father Mark intentionally calls Matt her boyfriend to embarrass them, Bo taking it harder. When she apologizes, Matt mentions his mom's the same.
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* AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Upon seeing Bo invited Mattholomule over, her father Mark intentionally calls Matt her boyfriend to embarrass them, Bo taking it harder. When she apologizes, Matt mentions his mom's the same.
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* InternalReveal: AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: Upon seeing Bo invited Mattholomule over, her father Mark intentionally calls Matt her boyfriend to embarrass them, Bo taking it harder. When she apologizes, Matt mentions his mom's the same.
* BaitAndSwitch:
** When Darius sees the girls at the Socket attending the orchestra performance, he quickly says he didn't see them instead of questioning them.
** It really seems like Boscha's about to chastise Boris for leaving her to deal with Nicole alone. However, she can't bring herself to maintain the act and breaks down crying, to which he comforts her.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: After deciding to find a balance between excitement and normalcy for future dates, Luz and Amity decide to ride the Trauma Train that's been popping up throughout the chapter. It goes as well as you'd think.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Getting a good look at the formal outfits the girls were given for the Socket's dress code, Luz realizes [[{{Troll}} Amber]] chose a black suit for her and a white dress for Amity. Raine even points it out while Amity's out of earshot.
-->'''Raine''': You two look cute together. Like a married-
-->'''Luz''': (''[[ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject interrupting]]'') Hey, it was Amber's idea to give us these outfits!
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** Camila is told about how Luz came to eventually enter a relationship with Amity.
** Luz and Amity learn that Raine's the leader of the Bards Against the Throne. Luz also meets Boris for the first time.
** Gus gets to meet Camila for the first time since Willow tole him about her being resurrected.
* BaitAndSwitch:
** When Darius sees the girls at the Socket attending the orchestra performance, he quickly says he didn't see them instead of questioning them.
** It really seems like Boscha's about to chastise Boris for leaving her to deal with Nicole alone. However, she can't bring herself to maintain the act and breaks down crying, to which he comforts her.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: After deciding to find a balance between excitement and normalcy for future dates, Luz and Amity decide to ride the Trauma Train that's been popping up throughout the chapter. It goes as well as you'd think.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Getting a good look at the formal outfits the girls were given for the Socket's dress code, Luz realizes [[{{Troll}} Amber]] chose a black suit for her and a white dress for Amity. Raine even points it out while Amity's out of earshot.
-->'''Raine''': You two look cute together. Like a married-
-->'''Luz''': (''[[ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject interrupting]]'') Hey, it was Amber's idea to give us these outfits!
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** Camila is told about how Luz came to eventually enter a relationship with Amity.
** Luz and Amity learn that Raine's the leader of the Bards Against the Throne. Luz also meets Boris for the first time.
** Gus gets to meet Camila for the first time since Willow tole him about her being resurrected.
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** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using her family's [[MakeMeWannaShout scream ability]]. Her last name is Cornealius.
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* RuleOfThree: The Conductor of the Trauma Train pops up twice to get Luz to ride his train. The third time she sees it, she decides to ride it with Amity and immediately regrets it.
* ShoutOut:
** The SongParody, "Oh Belos", is based on "Gaston" from ''Beauty and the Beast'' and "Rattigan" from ''The Great Mouse Detective''.
** Shawm "Sham" Eaglesnitch is a parody of Muppet's Sam the Eagle, including his famous line "You are all weirdos."
** Jason's nickname for Bo is "Little Bo Peep".
* WhamEpisode: Eileen is revealed to have been almost kidnapped and Raine officially succeeds Scooter Crane as head of the Bard coven, with Terra beginning to brainwash them.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35043157/chapters/95156479 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13987127/16/Luz-Clawthorne-Two-Worlds-One-Family HERE]]-]
* RuleOfThree: The Conductor of the Trauma Train pops up twice to get Luz to ride his train. The third time she sees it, she decides to ride it with Amity and immediately regrets it.
* ShoutOut:
** The SongParody, "Oh Belos", is based on "Gaston" from ''Beauty and the Beast'' and "Rattigan" from ''The Great Mouse Detective''.
** Shawm "Sham" Eaglesnitch is a parody of Muppet's Sam the Eagle, including his famous line "You are all weirdos."
** Jason's nickname for Bo is "Little Bo Peep".
* WhamEpisode: Eileen is revealed to have been almost kidnapped and Raine officially succeeds Scooter Crane as head of the Bard coven, with Terra beginning to brainwash them.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35043157/chapters/95156479 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13987127/16/Luz-Clawthorne-Two-Worlds-One-Family HERE]]-]
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!!Chapter 54: Socket to Me
Luz decides to take Amity out for a normal, drama-free date at an orchestra Raine's performing at. Meanwhile, Boscha decides to meet with her brother, Boris.
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!!Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
* InternalReveal:
* TheReveal:
** Vanz Ator was a human merchant who was brought to the Boiling Isles by Philip Clawthorne. After being turned into a vampire, he lived as a SnakeOilSalesman until he came across Katya's family; after the girl's parents were brutally murdered, he turned and adopted her.
** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using her family's [[MakeMeWannaShout scream ability]]. Her last name is Cornealius.
** Lilith returned the dimensional scissors to Vanz after what happened with Camila. When she tries to buy them back, he reveals someone stole them 5 years ago. She also knew the previous Golden Guard.
** Boris left home after declaring himself nameless and opened a tattoo shop, but still followed Boscha's grudgby career. He turns out to be the keyboardist of the BATT's and Amity mentions he babysat her and her siblings, meaning he's older than the twins.
** Bo has two dads along with her mom, all in a [[{{Polyamory}} polyamorous]] relationship.
Luz decides to take Amity out for a normal, drama-free date at an orchestra Raine's performing at. Meanwhile, Boscha decides to meet with her brother, Boris.
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!!Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
* InternalReveal:
* TheReveal:
** Vanz Ator was a human merchant who was brought to the Boiling Isles by Philip Clawthorne. After being turned into a vampire, he lived as a SnakeOilSalesman until he came across Katya's family; after the girl's parents were brutally murdered, he turned and adopted her.
** Eileen was almost kidnapped but got away thanks to using her family's [[MakeMeWannaShout scream ability]]. Her last name is Cornealius.
** Lilith returned the dimensional scissors to Vanz after what happened with Camila. When she tries to buy them back, he reveals someone stole them 5 years ago. She also knew the previous Golden Guard.
** Boris left home after declaring himself nameless and opened a tattoo shop, but still followed Boscha's grudgby career. He turns out to be the keyboardist of the BATT's and Amity mentions he babysat her and her siblings, meaning he's older than the twins.
** Bo has two dads along with her mom, all in a [[{{Polyamory}} polyamorous]] relationship.
