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* HonorBeforeReason: Stolas offers Blitz a job working for him so he doesn't have to keep working for Shere Khan. Blitz refuses due to a combination of his pride, insecurities, and not wanting to rely on the Goetia demon too much.
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* AffectionateNickname: Besides 'Via', Octavia is called "Tavi" by Loona.
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* DecompositeCharacter: Cordelia's hellhound Bailey is essentially based around canon Loona, being completely uninvested in anything but [[PhoneaholicTeenager her phone.]]
* {{Expy}}: Hazel the shark demon is one to Witch Lezah from ''WesternAnimation/TheLooneyTunesShow''.
* {{Expy}}: Hazel the shark demon is one to Witch Lezah from ''WesternAnimation/TheLooneyTunesShow''.
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* ParentalSexualitySquick: After returning home from the playdate with Octavia and Linda, Loona walks in on her father and Stolas having sex and walks out to wait for Stolas to discuss learning magic from him.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: Loona walking in on Blitz and Stolas cwas seen in the trailer from "Friends in Lower Places".
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Mammon, the Sin of Greed and Fizz's employer, debuts before Fizz.
* AdaptationalExplanation: The reason Blitz was working as a clown at the time when Octavia was brought to Loo Loo Land was because he needed the money.
* AdaptationalExplanation: The reason Blitz was working as a clown at the time when Octavia was brought to Loo Loo Land was because he needed the money.
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* CommonalityConnection: Octavia comes around to bonding with fellow Goetian royal Cray once he says that he's come to hate Robo-Fizz, which leads to Octavia afmitting the same.
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* CommonalityConnection: Octavia comes around to bonding with fellow Goetian royal Cray once he says that he's come to hate Robo-Fizz, which leads to Octavia afmitting admitting she feels the same.same about it.
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** As the hellhound in the black hoodie watches VoxTube videos, he sees "Lunatic Loona" is a recommended viseo.
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* HallOfMirrors: As she searches for Cordelia in a fun house, Loona comes across one of these, filled with magic mirrors showing strange reflections. One shows her as [[AlternateSpeciesCounterpart a cat]], [[TheCameo Emira]], herself as a hellpup, and her mother before she finds Cordelia.
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* ShoutOut: Robo-Fizz sings [[Theatre/{{Beetlejuice}} The Whole Being Dead Thing]].
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** Seth being chased around by a demon goat is a reference to [[Series/MalcolmInTheMiddle Reese being chased around by a goat]].
** Robo-Fizz sings [[Theatre/{{Beetlejuice}} The Whole Being Dead Thing]].
** Seth being chased around by a demon goat is a reference to [[Series/MalcolmInTheMiddle Reese being chased around by a goat]].
** Robo-Fizz sings [[Theatre/{{Beetlejuice}} The Whole Being Dead Thing]].
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* RunningGag: Seth the duck being harrassed by a demon goat.
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* YourMom: Irked by Cordelia telling her that Loona is spending more time with her new friends, Octavia insults her and the following argument turns into a "your mom" insult-off. It comes to an end once Octavia insults Cordelia for not having a mom.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Octavia is granted a chance to shine as Loona spends her day off accompanying her on a playdate with other royal kids at Loo Loo Land.
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* {{Hypocrite}} {{Hypocrite}}: Loona points out that Octavia's refusal to bond with any of the other Goetia kids like Cray because she thinks they could be spoiled brats would make her a hypocrite since she herself is a Goetian princess.
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** Loona and Cyrus's mother died giving birth to their baby sister when they were only two years old.
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* WhamShot: Loona goes through a fun house and sees different versions of herself in mirrors (including Emira) and comes across one showing a white hellhound; her mother.
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** Moxxie is still looking for anapartment.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: While Loona and Fizzarolli have had no contact whatsoever in ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'' despite their bonds with Blitz, here Loona mentions having met the clown in the past.
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* TheCameo: At the beginning of the flashback, Mammon appears in an ad advertising Loo Loo Land and a Robo-Fizz.
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** At the beginning of the flashback, Mammon appears in an ad advertising Loo Loo Land and aRobo-Fizz.Robo-Fizz.
** Emira appears in one of the reflections Loona sees in a fun house mirror.
** At the beginning of the flashback, Mammon appears in an ad advertising Loo Loo Land and a
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!Chapter 4: Adventures in Goetia-Sitting
On her day off, Loona is made to watch over her old friend during a playdate... in Loo Loo Land
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!! Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
* TheBusCameBack: Stolas makes his first physical appearance since "Friends in Lower Places".
* TheCameo: At the beginning of the flashback, Mammon appears in an ad advertising Loo Loo Land and a Robo-Fizz.
* ContinuityNod: Moxxie is still looking for an apartment.
* TheReveal: Loona knows the real Fizzarolli.
* SequelHook:
** Loona considers learning spells from Stolas.
** A hooded Hellhound sets sights on Loona.
** Amaroq is starting to become suspicious of Sonya.
* ShoutOut: Robo-Fizz sings [[Theatre/{{Beetlejuice}} The Whole Being Dead Thing]].
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!! Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
* TheBusCameBack: Stolas makes his first physical appearance since "Friends in Lower Places".
* TheCameo: At the beginning of the flashback, Mammon appears in an ad advertising Loo Loo Land and a Robo-Fizz.
* ContinuityNod: Moxxie is still looking for an apartment.
* TheReveal: Loona knows the real Fizzarolli.
* SequelHook:
** Loona considers learning spells from Stolas.
** A hooded Hellhound sets sights on Loona.
** Amaroq is starting to become suspicious of Sonya.
* ShoutOut: Robo-Fizz sings [[Theatre/{{Beetlejuice}} The Whole Being Dead Thing]].
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