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* BatterUp: The guy whose house the realtor attempts to sell Moxxie brings out a baseball bat to beat the with, using it on the realtor.
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* BatterUp: The guy whose house the realtor attempts to sell Moxxie brings out a baseball bat to beat the them with, using it on the realtor.
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* BatterUp: The guy whose house the realtor attempts to sell Moxxie brings out a baseball bat to beat the with, using it on the realtor.
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* EyeScream: Blitz takes out Captain Foxy's left eye with a knife.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: Foxy Loxy declares he will see Blitz again and next time, he won't get off so easy.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Unlike canon ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'', Loona's backstory before Blitzo adopted her starts getting touched upon with the reveal of her lost brother.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Unlike canon ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'', Loona's backstory before Blitzo adopted her starts getting touched upon AnOfferYouCantRefuse: Shere Khan pretty much forces Blitz into taking a job with the reveal his company or it could spell disaster for him and his daughter. Blitz reluctantly agrees to it, intent on holding out in this line of her lost brother.work for as long as possible.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Loona showed no signs of being anything other than straight in ''Helluva Boss''; here she seems to border on being AmbiguouslyBi due to her reaction to Kanya.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: AmbiguouslyBi: Loona previously showed no signs of being anything other than straight in ''Helluva Boss''; here she seems an attraction to border on being AmbiguouslyBi due Tex upon meeting him. Due to her reaction to Kanya.Kanya, she seems to be attracted to women as well.
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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: The second Loona lays eyes on Kanya, she has a nosebleed, blushes, and her tail wags due to her attractiveness.Kanya's attractiveness.
* TheGhost: Lord Gaap is brought up by Margaret, who only hired Loona at his request, as well as his daughter, Kanya.
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* OneSteveLimit: The head of the Triton Resort's poolside bar is a Goetia named Clara Labolas, who shares her name with the human Clara Gates.
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* ButtMonkey: Moxxie got stuck with an unreliable realtor for the entire day.
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* ChalkOutline: The first house the realtor shows Moxxie has one of these on a couch.
* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: The second Loona lays eyes on Kanya, she has a nosebleed, blushes, and her tail wags due to her attractiveness.
* LuminescentBlush: Loona's face turns red upon meeting the voluptuous beauty known as Kanya.
* LuminescentBlush: Loona's face turns red upon meeting the voluptuous beauty known as Kanya.
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* PreviouslyOn: Before the chapter officially begins, a recap describing how the LC version of ''Helluva Boss'' started out in the main continuity is listed describing how things would lead up to Loona starting work at the Triton Hotel.
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* RuleOfThree: Moxxie is shown three unacceptable homes while house hunting. The first is shabby and the living room is a crime scene, the second is under construction, and the third is someone else's place.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Unlike Canon!''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'', Loona's backstory before Blitzo adopted her starts getting touched upon with the reveal of her lost brother.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Unlike Canon!''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'', canon ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'', Loona's backstory before Blitzo adopted her starts getting touched upon with the reveal of her lost brother.
* CallBack: The events of "Helluva Dad" and "Friends in Lower Places" are brought up.
* DistantPrologue: The chapter begins 10 years ago when Loona and her brother were playing together before she wakes up.
* NoNameGiven: Loona's brother doesn't have his name revealed.
* {{Nosebleed}}: Loona has one after meeting Kanya due to [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer the effect the model has on her]].
* DistantPrologue: The chapter begins 10 years ago when Loona and her brother were playing together before she wakes up.
* NoNameGiven: Loona's brother doesn't have his name revealed.
* {{Nosebleed}}: Loona has one after meeting Kanya due to [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer the effect the model has on her]].
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* SpitTake: Blitzo performs one that doubles as an OhCrap moment when Sherw Khan calls him while he's driving.
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* ShoutOut: One of the Triton Resort rules that the employees [[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants can't deny a guest, even the most ridiculous request]].
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** Foxy Loxy's crew sing their own take on "[[WesternAnimation/PeterPan The Elegant Captain Hook]]".
** One of the Triton Resort rules that the employees [[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants can't deny a guest, even the most ridiculous
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* BatmanGambit: Shere Khan hired Blitzo just to use him as a decoy, while the real cargo was safely shipped, as well as to test his skills.
* ButtMonkey: Moxxie got stuck with an unreliable realtor for the entire day.
* TheReveal: Loona had a brother.
* ShoutOut: One of the Triton Resort rules that the employees [[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants can't deny a guest, even the most ridiculous request]].
* ButtMonkey: Moxxie got stuck with an unreliable realtor for the entire day.
* TheReveal: Loona had a brother.
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!Chapter One: First Day on the Job
It's Loona's first day at her new job at the Triton Resort! Meanwhile, her father gets a call from Shere Khan who wishes to discuss a business opportunity with him...
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!!Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47956195/chapters/120912586 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanfictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14245601/1/LC-Presents-Helluva-Dad HERE]]-]
It's Loona's first day at her new job at the Triton Resort! Meanwhile, her father gets a call from Shere Khan who wishes to discuss a business opportunity with him...
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!!Tropes that appear in this Chapter:
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47956195/chapters/120912586 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanfictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14245601/1/LC-Presents-Helluva-Dad HERE]]-]
