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** Boscha refuses to listen to Ms. Traveler after recieving the memory photo from Dolly.
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** Boscha refuses to listen to Ms. Traveler after recieving receiving the memory photo from Dolly.
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* ForWantOfANail: Luz is informed of Eda's old dream to join the Emperor's Coven exactly 9 episodes later than she did in the show.
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* PointOfDivergence: Luz is informed of Eda's old dream to join the Emperor's Coven exactly 9 episodes later than she did in the show.
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* SongParody: To "Epiphany" from ''Franchise/SweeneyTodd''.
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* SongParody: To "Epiphany" from ''Franchise/SweeneyTodd''.''Theatre/SweeneyTodd''.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: ''[[Film/{{Click}} Everytime they have a conflict between their work and their personal lives, work wins.]]'']]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: Crash X Fusion: ''[[Film/{{Click}} Everytime they have a conflict between their work and their personal lives, work wins.]]'']]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Even though they don't talk much, Simon still cares about Boscha and thanks her for making him a team member. She also takes his offer to play together again under consideration.
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Even though they don't talk much, Simon still cares about Boscha and thanks her for making him a team member. She also takes his offer to play grudgby together again under consideration.
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** Emperor Belos is Philip Wittebane, he and his brother William were adopted by witches and they were raised in the Boiling Isles. He learned he would be emperor after meeting the Weird Sisters as a teenager and they told him of an upcoming catastrophe which he reveals to the Golden Guard. Belos later tells Lilith that he's known about her goals for some time.
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** Emperor Belos is Philip Wittebane, he and his brother William were adopted by witches and they were raised in the Boiling Isles. He learned he would be emperor after meeting the Weird Sisters as a teenager and they told him of an upcoming catastrophe which he reveals to the Golden Guard.Guard and mentions that he visits the sisters every year and receives the same vision every time. Belos later tells Lilith that he's known about her goals for some time.
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* PersonaNonGrata: Puck messed up big time attacking Boscha during the grudgby game, as it cost him Luz and Amity's friendship. After Anu Bist tries to capture him to bring him to Oberon, Ms. Traveler arrives while they're fighting, scolds Puck as his actions will have grave consequences, and [[ImpliedDeathThreat threatens to end him]] if he ever comes near anybody from Hexaide, especially the girls, again. Puck takes the warning and teleports away.
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* PersonaNonGrata: Puck messed up big time attacking Boscha during the grudgby game, as it cost him Luz and Amity's friendship. After Anu Bist tries to capture him to bring him to Oberon, Ms. Traveler arrives while they're fighting, scolds Puck as his actions will have grave consequences, and [[ImpliedDeathThreat threatens to end him]] if he ever comes near anybody any students from Hexaide, Hexside, especially the girls, again. Puck takes the warning and teleports away.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Apparently, the Weird Sisters had a colossal influence in the rise of Emperor Belos: centuries ago, they told him (back when he was known as Philip Clawthorne) that he was meant to save the Boiling Isles from an impending threat and continued to maintain annual contact.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Apparently, the Weird Sisters had a colossal influence in the rise of Emperor Belos: centuries ago, they told him (back when he was known as Philip Clawthorne) Philip) that he was meant to save the Boiling Isles from an impending threat and continued to maintain annual contact.
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* CallBack: Amity tries to be affectionate with an embarrased Luz in front of Eda, saying she won't mind; it refers to Luz doing the same thing to her in front of Amelia and Cat earlier that day.
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* CallBack: Amity tries to be affectionate with an embarrased Luz in front of Eda, saying she won't mind; it refers to Luz doing the same thing to her in front of Amelia and Cat earlier that day.day in the previous chapter.
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* DeusExitMachina:
** Willow doesn't appear in this chapter because she went home with Skara after the game in the last chapter.
** Jerbo's lack of an appearance is due to going camping with his family while Barcus is hanging out with the Cerberus sisters.
** Edric doesn't appear at all with Emira for the first time. He is, however, mentioned by Emperor Belos.
* DopeSlap: Ms. Traveler bops Anu Bist on the head with her umbrella.
* ExactEavesdropping:
** King ends up overhearing Amity talking to Lilith and when she leaves, he follows her and sees her talking to Lilith, learning of her spying.
** Willow doesn't appear in this chapter because she went home with Skara after the game in the last chapter.
** Jerbo's lack of an appearance is due to going camping with his family while Barcus is hanging out with the Cerberus sisters.
** Edric doesn't appear at all with Emira for the first time. He is, however, mentioned by Emperor Belos.
* DopeSlap: Ms. Traveler bops Anu Bist on the head with her umbrella.
* ExactEavesdropping:
** King ends up overhearing Amity talking to Lilith and when she leaves, he follows her and sees her talking to Lilith, learning of her spying.
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** Willow doesn't appear in this chapter because she went home with Skara after the game in the last chapter.
** Jerbo's lack of an appearance is due to going camping with his family while Barcus is hanging out with the Cerberus sisters.
** Edric doesn't appear at all with Emira for the first time. He is, however, mentioned by Emperor Belos.
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* ExactEavesdropping: King ends up overhearing Amity talking to Lilith and when she leaves, he follows her and sees her talking to Lilith, learning of her spying.
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* FightingForAHomeland: This is Emperor Belos' overall goal in the series: the Weird Sisters' visions say he will save the Boiling Isles from an otherworldly being so witchkind won't be killed off. He won't stop until he prevents this outcome from happening, and asks Hunter to accomplish it if he dies before then.
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* FightingForAHomeland: This is Emperor Belos' overall goal in the series: goal: the Weird Sisters' visions say he will save the Boiling Isles from an otherworldly being so witchkind won't be killed off. He won't stop until he prevents this outcome from happening, and asks Hunter to accomplish it [[CrazyPrepared if he dies before then.then]].
* ForWantOfANail: Luz is informed of Eda's old dream to join the Emperor's Coven exactly 9 episodes later than she did in the show.
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** Upon seeing Boscha, Katya recognizes her because she's friends with Boris.
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** Upon Boris is brought up as upon seeing Boscha, Katya recognizes her because she's friends with Boris.
** Luz mentions Dipper as one of the people who have faith in her becoming a witch to Lilith.
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** Belos doubted the first vision the Weird sisters gave him, but has since learned to trust them.
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** Originally played straight when Belos doubted the first vision the Weird sisters gave him, but averted since he has since learned to trust them.
* InSpiteOfANail: At last, Luz is told of her mother wanting to be part of the Emperor's Coven when she and Lilith were her age.
* OutOfFocus:
** Willow doesn't appear in this chapter because she went home with Skara after the game in the last chapter.
** Jerbo's lack of an appearance is due to going camping with his family while Barcus is hanging out with the Cerberus sisters.
** Edric doesn't appear at all with Emira for the first time. He is, however, mentioned by Emperor Belos.
** Willow doesn't appear in this chapter because she went home with Skara after the game in the last chapter.
** Jerbo's lack of an appearance is due to going camping with his family while Barcus is hanging out with the Cerberus sisters.
** Edric doesn't appear at all with Emira for the first time. He is, however, mentioned by Emperor Belos.
* PersonaNonGrata: Puck messed up big time attacking Boscha during the grudgby game, as it cost him Luz and Amity's friendship. After Anu Bist tries to capture him to bring him to Oberon, Ms. Traveler arrives while they're fighting, scolds Puck as his actions will have grave consequences, and [[ImpliedDeathThreat threatens to end him]] if he ever comes near anybody from Hexaide, especially the girls, again. Puck takes the warning and teleports away.
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** Emperor Belos is Philip Wittebane, he and his brother William were adopted by witches and they were raised in the Boiling Isles. He learned he would be emperor after meeting the Weird Sisters as a teenager and they told him of an upcoming catastrophe which he reveals to the Golden Guard.
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** Emperor Belos is Philip Wittebane, he and his brother William were adopted by witches and they were raised in the Boiling Isles. He learned he would be emperor after meeting the Weird Sisters as a teenager and they told him of an upcoming catastrophe which he reveals to the Golden Guard. Belos later tells Lilith that he's known about her goals for some time.
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* CassandraTruth: Lilith genuinely wants to protect Luz, but her belief that Eda doesn't know what's best for Luz pushes her away.
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* CassandraTruth: Lilith genuinely wants to protect Luz, but her belief that Eda doesn't know what's best for Luz and that Luz just can't be a witch pushes her away.
* FightingForAHomeland: This is Emperor Belos' overall goal in the series: the Weird Sisters' visions say he will save the Boiling Isles from an otherworldly being so witchkind won't be killed off. He won't stop until he prevents this outcome from happening, and asks Hunter to accomplish it if he dies before then.
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* HiddenDepths: Luz is shown to be skilled in oragami, and was obsessed with it for six months.
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* HiddenDepths: Luz is shown to be skilled in oragami, oragami like Lilith is, and was obsessed with it for six months.