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* KnifeNut: Puck pulls one out of thin air and threatens to use it to cut out Eyepatch's eye unless he confesses who gave him the order to capture the slitherbeast.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Blight siblings' parents, Odalia (not counting her EarlyBirdCameo in "Emotional Guilt") and Alador, make their first appearance during the events of "Adventures in the Elements", not "Understanding Willow".
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* TheBeastmaster: Puck manages to calm down the slitherbeast by listening to its thoughts and figuring out what it wants.
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* TheBeastmaster: Puck manages to calm down the slitherbeast Slitherbeast by listening to its thoughts and figuring out what it wants.
* BirdsOfAFeather: The whole reason Eda and Stan didn't stay together; they were too alike, both being con artists and agents of chaos who're too stubborn to give up on anything. As Eda puts it, they were "a match made in hell."
* CommonalityConnection: Along with their con artist lifestyles and rebelling against law, Eda and Stan also share a hatred towards Florida.
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* EyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's remaining eye if he doesn't spill who sent the demon hunters after the slitherbeast.
* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced her crush on Amity to everyone when she told Gus.
* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced her crush on Amity to everyone when she told Gus.
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* EyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's remaining eye if he doesn't spill who sent the demon hunters after the slitherbeast.
Slitherbeast.
* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced her crush on Amity to everyone (besides Mabel herself, Wendy, Soos, Candy and Grenda) when she told Gus.
* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced her crush on Amity to everyone (besides Mabel herself, Wendy, Soos, Candy and Grenda) when she told Gus.
* TheGhost: As previously stated Hooty is only mentioned, no physical appearance to his name.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Edric and Emira still get captured by the slitherbeast, and Amity rescues them via the fire spell she manages to learn. Amity also ''finally'' develops a crush on Luz.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Edric and Emira still get captured by the slitherbeast, Slitherbeast, and Amity rescues them via the fire spell she manages to learn. And Amity also ''finally'' develops a crush on Luz.Luz!
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* MultiPartEpisode: This is the third and final part of the "''Reunion Falls'' vacation" arc.
* MustMakeAmends: The previously mentioned MisplacedRetribution leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
* MustMakeAmends: The previously mentioned MisplacedRetribution leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* MultiPartEpisode: This is the third and final part of the "''Reunion Falls'' vacation" "Gravity Falls Vacation" arc.
* MustMakeAmends: The previously mentioned MisplacedRetribution leads Mabel to apologize to Luz by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book she wanted (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
* MustMakeAmends: The previously mentioned MisplacedRetribution leads Mabel to apologize to Luz by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book she wanted (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* TheUnreveal: The scene changes just before Puck learns who sent the Demon Hunters to capture the Slitherbeast.
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* TheUnreveal: TheUnReveal: The scene changes just before Puck learns who sent the Demon Hunters to capture the Slitherbeast.Slitherbeast.
* UnseenNoMore: After an EarlyBirdCameo 14 chapters ago, Odalia makes her physical presence known.
* UnseenNoMore: After an EarlyBirdCameo 14 chapters ago, Odalia makes her physical presence known.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Luz isn't happy when Mabel drags her to a salon to have her hair stylized.
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* NotImportantToThisEpisodeCamp: Since Gus returned to the Boiling Isles last chapter, this is the only part in the three-parter where he doesn't appear. Same goes for Soos and Wendy, who don't appear at all.
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* TheReveal: Eda does know about the dimensional portal and Stanley's attempts to use it to find his brother.
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** Eda does know about the dimensional portal and Stanley's attempts to use it to find hisbrother.brother.
** Luz has never gotten a haircut in her life. And like Mabel, Jeff tried to capture and marry her when she was 11.
** Eda does know about the dimensional portal and Stanley's attempts to use it to find his
** Luz has never gotten a haircut in her life. And like Mabel, Jeff tried to capture and marry her when she was 11.
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* TheBeastmaster: Puck manages to calm down the slitherbeast by listening to its thoughts and figuring out what it wants.
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* KnifeNut: Puck pulls one out of thin air and threatens to use it to cut out Eyepatch's eye unless he confesses who gave him the order to capture the slitherbeast.
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* MultiPartEpisode: This is the third and final part of the "''Reunion Falls vacation" arc.
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* MisplacedRetribution: Luz gets banned from Books-A-Jillion because her attempts to get away from Mabel led to her knocking over some books...
* MustMakeAmends: ...which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
* MustMakeAmends: ...which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* MisplacedRetribution: Luz gets banned from Books-A-Jillion because her attempts to get away from Mabel led to her knocking over some books...
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*MustMakeAmends: ...which MultiPartEpisode: This is the third and final part of the "''Reunion Falls vacation" arc.
* MustMakeAmends: The previously mentioned MisplacedRetribution leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* MustMakeAmends: The previously mentioned MisplacedRetribution leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* PrecisionFStrike: After one of her failed attempts NotImportantToThisEpisodeCamp: Since Gus returned to use the fire spell, Amity shouts "Dammit". The twins happily point Boiling Isles last chapter, this out.is the only part in the three-parter where he doesn't appear. Same goes for Soos and Wendy, who don't appear at all.
* PrecisionFStrike: After one of her failed attempts to use the fire spell, Amity shouts "Dammit". The twins happily point this out.
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* WhamEpisode: Eda is shown to know the truth about Stan, Amity meets Puck for the first time and realizes she has feelings for Luz.
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* WhamEpisode: Eda is shown to know the truth about Stan, Stan and his brother, Amity meets Puck for the first time and realizes she has feelings for Luz.
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* AbsenteeActor: Since Gus returned to the Boiling Isles last chapter, this is the only part in the three-parter where he doesn't appear. Same goes for Soos and Wendy, who don't appear at all.
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* ForWantOfANail: To "Adventures in the Elements": with the Clawthornes still on Earth, Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor without King's subplot of making an army.
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* ForWantOfANail: To "Adventures in the Elements": with the Clawthornes still on Earth, Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor is absent without King's subplot of making an army.
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* ShoutOut: Before leaving the Blights, Puck calls Amity "Pixie Dust", which leaves her confused. It's a reference to Tinker Bell, as both characters are voiced by Creator/MaeWhitman.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Before leaving the Blights, Puck calls Amity "Pixie Dust", which leaves her confused. It's a reference to Tinker Bell, as both characters are voiced byCreator/MaeWhitman.Creator/MaeWhitman.
** WordOfGod confirms the Wade Dipper mentions is the same Wade from ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible''.
** Before leaving the Blights, Puck calls Amity "Pixie Dust", which leaves her confused. It's a reference to Tinker Bell, as both characters are voiced by
** WordOfGod confirms the Wade Dipper mentions is the same Wade from ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible''.
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-->'''Amity:''' Oh Titan, I have a crush on Luz…"
Luz…
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* HeroicBSOD: Amity starts to have a panic attack after tEdric and Emira are captured. Luckily, Puck arrives before she can spiral further.
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* HeroicBSOD: Amity starts to have a panic attack after tEdric Edric and Emira are captured. Luckily, Puck arrives before she can spiral further.
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* BaitAndSwitch: It seems like Blubs is going to do the responsible thing and use the mall's P.A. to ask the patrons to bring Luz to the food court. Instead, he warns everyone that Luz may be about to go on a rampage and tells everyone to get out while they can.
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* BaitAndSwitch: It seems like Blubs is going to do the responsible thing and use the mall's P.A. to ask the patrons to bring Luz to the food court. Instead, he warns everyone that Luz may be about to go on a rampage and tells everyone to get out of the mall while they can.
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* CallBack: Amity and Levi's muggings are bruoght up once more, and it's revealed that Levi's has forced him to make a difficult choice.
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* CallBack: Amity and Levi's muggings are bruoght brought up once more, and it's revealed that Levi's has forced him to make a difficult choice.
* HeroicBSOD: Amity starts to have a panic attack after tEdric and Emira are captured. Luckily, Puck arrives before she can spiral further.
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* TheReveal: Eda does know about the portal and Stanley's attempts to use it to find his brother.
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* TheReveal: Eda does know about the dimensional portal and Stanley's attempts to use it to find his brother.
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* SelfDeprecation
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* SelfDeprecationSelfDeprecation: Throughout the chapter, Amity continuously puts herself down for not reprtting her mugging just to preserve her family's image. It gets to the point that she takes the blame for Levi dropping out and panics at being unable to save the twins from the slitherbeast. It's only when Puck shows up that she saves her siblings and gets over it.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot]]Crosshot: She's been keeping that drawing with her at all times for no good reason.[[note]][[LoveEpiphany At least until she realizes why...]][[/note]]]]
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* LoveEpiphany: Amity, after much inner debating, realizes she's crushing on Luz when she realizes how much the idea of not being friends with her anymore hurts.
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* GlowingEyes: Amity's go from gold to glowing purple during her rant over her feeling weak.
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* GlowingEyes: Amity's go from gold to glowing purple purple/pink during her rant over her feeling weak.
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* InconvienientAttraction: It's implied that Amity sees her newfound crush on Luz as becoming this.
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* InconvienientAttraction: InconvenientAttraction: It's implied that Amity sees her newfound crush on Luz as becoming this.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Edric and Emira still get captured by the slitherbeast, and Amity rescues them via the fire spell she manages to learn.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Edric and Emira still get captured by the slitherbeast, and Amity rescues them via the fire spell she manages to learn. Amity also ''finally'' develops a crush on Luz.
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* GlowingEyes: Amity's go from gold to glowing purple durnt her rant over her being weak.
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* BaitAndSwitch
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* BaitAndSwitchBaitAndSwitch: It seems like Blubs is going to do the responsible thing and use the mall's P.A. to ask the patrons to bring Luz to the food court. Instead, he warns everyone that Luz may be about to go on a rampage and tells everyone to get out while they can.
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* EyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's remaining eye if he doesn't spill who sent them after the slitherbeast.
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* EyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's remaining eye if he doesn't spill who sent them the demon hunters after the slitherbeast.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Amity's power boost.
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* GlowingEyesGlowingEyes: Amity's go from gold to glowing purple durnt her rant over her being weak.
* ItsAllMyFault: After learning Levi's going to drop out of school, Amity can't stop blaming herself saying she should've reported her mugging so maybe his wouldn't have happened.
* SadisticChoice: Rather a ''demand''. Odalia tells Amity that since she'll no longer have to tutor Luz, once the semester exams are over, Odalia expects her to end their friendship so Amity can focus on her studies again.
* SelfDeprecation
* SequelHook: Whether Amity goes through with her mother's order to end her friendship with Luz or not.
* SequelHook: Whether Amity goes through with her mother's order to end her friendship with Luz or not.
* {{Touche}}: Luz questions why Candy and Grenda would joins her and Mabel for a girl's day out if they're forbidden from hanging out with her; she concedes when Mabel asks if she really expects kids to listen to their parents.
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* WhamLine: The last line is enough to please the readers and gives Amity quite a shock.
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* WhamLine: WhamLine:
** Levi declares he's dropping out of Hexside so he can help his dad with his fishing business full time.
** The last line is enough to please the readers and gives Amity quite a shock.
** Levi declares he's dropping out of Hexside so he can help his dad with his fishing business full time.
** The last line is enough to please the readers and gives Amity quite a shock.
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* CallBackCallBack: Amity and Levi's muggings are bruoght up once more, and it's revealed that Levi's has forced him to make a difficult choice.
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* EyeColorChange: Amity's eyes glow pinkish-purple when she's voicing her hatred for feeling like a coward because of her upbringing and expectations.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Edric points out that nobody can stand being friends with Boscha because of her attitude.
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* StealthHiBye: Mabel sneaks up on Luz while she's on the Shack's roof. Luz says she's worse than Gus when popping up out of nowhere, but she takes it as a compliment.
* SureLetsGoWithThat: When Luz finds Stan soon after he exits the secret door behind the vending machine, she links his nervousness to the snacks in the machine not being FDA approved. He rolls with it.
* SureLetsGoWithThat: When Luz finds Stan soon after he exits the secret door behind the vending machine, she links his nervousness to the snacks in the machine not being FDA approved. He rolls with it.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Mabel accepts she can't force the bonds she wants with Dipper and Luz and decides to let them develop naturally. She also foregoes her goal of having a summer romance.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Mabel accepts that she can't force the bonds she wants with Dipper and Luz and decides to let them develop naturally. She also foregoes her goal of having a summer romance.
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* EyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's eye if he doesn't spill who sent them after the slitherbeast.
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* EyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's remaining eye if he doesn't spill who sent them after the slitherbeast.
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* ForWantOfANail: To "Adventures in the Elements": with the Clawthornes are still on Earth, Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor without King's subplot of making an army.
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* ForWantOfANail: To "Adventures in the Elements": with the Clawthornes are still on Earth, Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor without King's subplot of making an army.
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* GroinAttack: Mabel whacks Jeff below the belt for trying to come on to her..
* HiddenDepths: Edric and Emira started pulling pranks as an act of rebellion towards Odalia's attempts to control their lives. They pranked all the kids she wanted them to interact with, which is why they're not friends with any of their classmates.
* HiddenDepths: Edric and Emira started pulling pranks as an act of rebellion towards Odalia's attempts to control their lives. They pranked all the kids she wanted them to interact with, which is why they're not friends with any of their classmates.
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* GroinAttack: Mabel whacks Jeff below the belt for trying to come on to her..
her.
* HiddenDepths: Edric and Emira started pulling pranks as an act of rebellion towards Odalia's attempts to control their lives. They pranked all the kids she wanted them tointeract be friends with, which is why they're not friends with any of their classmates.
* HiddenDepths: Edric and Emira started pulling pranks as an act of rebellion towards Odalia's attempts to control their lives. They pranked all the kids she wanted them to
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* GroinAttack: Mabel whacks Jeff where the sun don't shine.
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* GroinAttack: Mabel whacks Jeff where below the sun don't shine.belt for trying to come on to her..
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* ShoutOut: Before leaving the Blights, Puck calls Amity "Pixie Dust", which leaves her confused. It's a reference to Tinkerbell, as both characters are voiced by Creator/MaeWhitman.
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* ShoutOut: Before leaving the Blights, Puck calls Amity "Pixie Dust", which leaves her confused. It's a reference to Tinkerbell, Tinker Bell, as both characters are voiced by Creator/MaeWhitman.
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* CharacterDevelopmentCharacterDevelopment: Mabel accepts she can't force the bonds she wants with Dipper and Luz and decides to let them develop naturally. She also foregoes her goal of having a summer romance.
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* EyeScreamEyeScream: Puck threatens to yank out Eyepatch's eye if he doesn't spill who sent them after the slitherbeast.
* GroinAttack: Mabel whacks Jeff where the sun don't shine.
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* OldFlameOldFlame: It's implied that Eda and Stan still carry torches for each other.
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* TheRevealTheReveal: Eda does know about the portal and Stanley's attempts to use it to find his brother.
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* ShoutOutShoutOut: Before leaving the Blights, Puck calls Amity "Pixie Dust", which leaves her confused. It's a reference to Tinkerbell, as both characters are voiced by Creator/MaeWhitman.
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* WhamEpisodeWhamEpisode: Eda is shown to know the truth about Stan, Amity meets Puck for the first time and realizes she has feelings for Luz.
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* ForWantOfANail: The Clawthornes are still on Earth, so Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor without King's subplot of making an army.
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* ForWantOfANail: The To "Adventures in the Elements": with the Clawthornes are still on Earth, so Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor without King's subplot of making an army. army.
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* MustMakeAmends: which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* MustMakeAmends: MustMakeAmends: ...which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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** According to Eda, Hooty eats everyone's beds if they're gone too long.
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** After learning Mabel nearly got forced into marrying the gnomes, Luz reveals they tried that with her when she was 11.
** According to Eda, Hootyeats ate everyone's beds if they're the last time they were gone too long.
** According to Eda, Hooty
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* MustMakeAmends: which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them by the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* MustMakeAmends: which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them by buy the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
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* SoProudOfYou: Once they hear Amity's aforementioned PrecisionFStrike, Edric and Emira happily take it as her first step to becoming a bad girl.
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* SoProudOfYou: Once they hear Amity's aforementioned PrecisionFStrike, Edric and Emira Emira happily take it as her first step to becoming a bad girl.
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* BeYourself: Luz tells Mabel the reason Amity likes her is because Luz does this, and it means a lot to her.
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* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced to everyone her crush on Amity when she told Gus last chapter.
* ForWantOfANail
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* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced to everyone her crush on Amity to everyone when she told Gus last chapter.
Gus.
*ForWantOfANail
FelonyMisdemeanor: For accidentally knocking over a pile of books, Luz is banned from Books-A-Jillion preventing her from buying the fourth Good Witch Azura book. Since the manager knows of her reputation, he thought she was causing trouble.
*GirlsNightOutEpisodeForWantOfANail: The Clawthornes are still on Earth, so Hooty becomes an AbsenteeActor without King's subplot of making an army.
* GirlsNightOutEpisode: The B-plot has Mabel invite Luz on a girls' day trip with her, Candy and Grenda before returning to the Boiling Isles that evening.
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* GirlsNightOutEpisode: The B-plot has Mabel invite Luz on a girls' day trip with her, Candy and Grenda before returning to the Boiling Isles that evening.
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* InelegantBlubbering: Unseen, but still Skara is not taking what happened between her and Bo well.
* InelegantBlubbering: Unseen, but still Skara is not taking what happened between her and Bo well.
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* HiddenDepths
HiddenDepths: Edric and Emira started pulling pranks as an act of rebellion towards Odalia's attempts to control their lives. They pranked all the kids she wanted them to interact with, which is why they're not friends with any of their classmates.
* InelegantBlubbering: Unseen, butstill Skara is not taking what happened between her and Bo well.
* InelegantBlubbering: Unseen, but
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* InSpiteOfANailInSpiteOfANail: Edric and Emira still get captured by the slitherbeast, and Amity rescues them via the fire spell she manages to learn.
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* MisplacedRetribution
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* MisplacedRetributionMisplacedRetribution: Luz gets banned from Books-A-Jillion because her attempts to get away from Mabel led to her knocking over some books...
* MustMakeAmends: which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them by the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
* MustMakeAmends: which leads Mabel to apologize by giving Candy and Grenda her allowance and having them by the book (although they end up forgetting which book Luz wanted and buy the whole series.)
* PrecisionFStrike: After one of her failed attempts to use the fire spell, Amity shouts "Dammit". The twins happily point this out.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Luz gives one to Mabel for trying to make the former more like herself.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Luz gives one to Mabel for trying to make force a bond between them and making the former more like herself.
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* TakeThat: WordOfGod confirms the ReasonYouSuckSpeech is meant to be one to Mabel's canon personality.
* StalkerShrine
* TakeThat: WordOfGod confirms the ReasonYouSuckSpeech is meant to be one to Mabel's canon personality.
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* SoProudOfYou
SoProudOfYou: Once they hear Amity's aforementioned PrecisionFStrike, Edric and Emira happily take it as her first step to becoming a bad girl.
*StalkerShrine
StalkerShrine: Edric reveals that Emira has a shrine to Viney hidden in her room.
* TakeThat: WordOfGod confirms the ReasonYouSuckSpeech is meant to be one to Mabel's canonpersonality.personality, namely her habit of projecting herself onto others.
* TragicDropout: Levi becomes one when he decides to leave school to help with his dad's fishing business.
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* TakeThat: WordOfGod confirms the ReasonYouSuckSpeech is meant to be one to Mabel's canon
* TragicDropout: Levi becomes one when he decides to leave school to help with his dad's fishing business.
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* WhamLine: The last line is enough to give a shock.
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* WhamEpisode
* WhamLine: The last line is enough togive please the readers and gives Amity quite a shock.
* WhamLine: The last line is enough to
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* CuteLittleFangs: Luz is revealed to wear a fake one just like Eda.
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** Thanks to Dipper, Luz learns her real name and her mother's appearance from a newspaper article detailing the crash.
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** Thanks to Dipper, Luz learns her real name human surname and her mother's appearance from a newspaper article detailing the crash.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Luz gives one to Mabel for trying to make the former more like herself.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Luz gives one to Mabel for trying to make the former more like herself.
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* TakeThat: WordOfGod confirms the ReasonYouSuckSpeech is meant to be one to Mabel's canon personality.
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* ShipperOnDeckShipperOnDeck: Despite her current stance with them, Luz supports what Blubs and Durland have with each other.
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* ContinuityNod:
* CallBack
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* ContinuityNod:
** Edric using lemons to see Puck and the statement about sugar keeping Fae away were previously mentioned in "I Ain't Troubled Yet!"
* EyeScream
* GlowingEyes
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* InternalReveal: InternalReveal:
** Edric and Emira learn it was Puck who previously scared them after the library incident.
** Thanks to Dipper, Luz learns her real name and her mother's appearance from a newspaper article detailing the crash.
* InSpiteOfANail
** Edric and Emira learn it was Puck who previously scared them after the library incident.
** Thanks to Dipper, Luz learns her real name and her mother's appearance from a newspaper article detailing the crash.
* InSpiteOfANail
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* NoodleIncident: According to Eda, Hooty eats everyone's beds if they're gone too long.
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* NoodleIncident: MythologyGag: Mabel forces Luz to wear the same cat-eared hoodie she wears in canon while trying on clothes.
* NoodleIncident:
** Luz has been banned from 10 stores in the Gravity Malls for causing trouble. She later gets banned from the salon for attacking a stylist.
** When Amity was four, she rode a sled into a tree and was buried in snow, resulting in her getting the flu.
** After Luz is banned from Books-A-Jillion, it's shown that Stan, Old Man [=McGucket=], Jean-Luc the Waiter, and Mr. Poolcheck have also been banned.
** According to Eda, Hooty eats everyone's beds if they're gone too long.
* NoodleIncident:
** Luz has been banned from 10 stores in the Gravity Malls for causing trouble. She later gets banned from the salon for attacking a stylist.
** When Amity was four, she rode a sled into a tree and was buried in snow, resulting in her getting the flu.
** After Luz is banned from Books-A-Jillion, it's shown that Stan, Old Man [=McGucket=], Jean-Luc the Waiter, and Mr. Poolcheck have also been banned.
** According to Eda, Hooty eats everyone's beds if they're gone too long.
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* StalkerShrine
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* ContinuityNod:
** Amity is shown to have kept the "Purple Rain" t-shirt Luz gave her for pajamas in "The Conjuring Conflict".
* ADayInTheLimelight: Amity is the main focus of the A-plot, while Mabel is the star of the B-plot (which she shares with Luz.)
* FailedASpotCheck: As Mabel points out, Luz pretty much announced to everyone her crush on Amity when she told Gus last chapter.
* ForWantOfANail
* GirlsNightOutEpisode
* HiddenDepths
* InelegantBlubbering: Unseen, but still Skara is not taking what happened between her and Bo well.
* InternalReveal: Thanks to Dipper, Luz learns her real name and her mother's
* ITasteDelicious: Stan namedrops this while eating the waffles shaped like his face.
* MisplacedRetribution
* NoodleIncident: According to Eda, Hooty eats everyone's beds if they're gone too long.
* OldFlame
* OutOfFocus: Eda, King, Dipper, and Stan play minor roles in the B-plot with the focus being on Mabel and Luz.
* SecretKeeper: Eda is aware she married Stan''ley'', not Stan''ford'' Pines, and that he's trying to get the dimensional portal working to bring his brother back.
* ShoutOut
* SoProudOfYou
* TheUnreveal: The scene changes just before Puck learns who sent the Demon Hunters to capture the Slitherbeast.
* WhamLine: The last line is enough to give a shock.
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!Chapter 20: Blighted by the Light
As Amity questions what she wants for herself, Mabel ropes Luz into what she thinks is sister bonding time.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27338818/chapters/80750830 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13719511/21/Luz-Clawthorne-Hexside-s-Number-One-Delinquent-Witch HERE]]-]
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As Amity questions what she wants for herself, Mabel ropes Luz into what she thinks is sister bonding time.
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-->[-Website/FanFictionDotNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13719511/21/Luz-Clawthorne-Hexside-s-Number-One-Delinquent-Witch HERE]]-]
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