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** A-Plot; Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potential movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from Luz.
** B-Plot; Eda tries to convince Lilith to let her have the Bloom of Eternal Youth, Steve (who joins Lilith on the journey) picks it instead, Eda single-handedly beats up the con artist and Lilith's talk with Eda about her curse switches to her suggesting Eda send Luz away for her own protection.
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** B-Plot; Eda tries to convince Lilith to let her have the Bloom of Eternal Youth, Steve (who joins Lilith on the journey) picks it instead, Eda single-handedly beats up the con artist and Lilith's talk with Eda about her curse switches to her suggesting Eda send Luz away for her own protection.
** A-Plot; Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potential movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from Luz.
** B-Plot; Eda tries to convince Lilith to let her have the Bloom of Eternal Youth, Steve (who joins Lilith on the journey) picks it instead, Eda single-handedly beats up the con artist and Lilith's talk with Eda about her curse switches to her suggesting Eda send Luz away for her own protection.
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** According to a laid up Piniet, Luz's eyes [[EyeColorChange turned blue]] during the beating.
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-->'''Luz:''' "Nah, I'm not the writer type. I'm just helping King with his dream of being an author so he can develop a cult or something."
-->'''Amity:''' "You mean a fandom?"
-->'''Luz:''' "What's the difference?" (''Amity almost snorted, which didn't go unnoticed by Luz.'')
-->'''Luz:''' "Nah, I'm not the writer type. I'm just helping King with his dream of being an author so he can develop a cult or something."
-->'''Amity:''' "You mean a fandom?"
-->'''Luz:''' "What's the difference?" (''Amity almost snorted, which didn't go unnoticed by Luz.'')
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** B-Plot; Eda tries to convince Lilith to let her have the Bloom of Eternal Youth, Steve (who joins Lilith on the journey) picks it instead, Eda single-handedly beats up the con artist and Lilith suggests Lilith's talk with Eda about her curse switches to her suggesting Eda send Luz away for her own protection.
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* {{Crossover}}: [[WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}} Anne Boonchuy]] and [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse Steven Universe]] appear during the chapter's opening statement with Luz, Luz's canon self, making a TakeThat at how communities will leak spoilers.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: According to a laid up Piniet, Luz's eyes [[GlowingEyes [[EyeColorChange turned blue]] during the beating.
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** A-Plot; Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potantial movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from Luz.
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** A-Plot; Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potantial potential movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from Luz.
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* ForWantOfANail: To "Senses and Insensitivity": Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potantial movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from Luz.
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* ForWantOfANail: To "Senses and Insensitivity": Insensitivity":
** A-Plot; Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potantial movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown fromLuz.Luz.
** B-Plot; Eda tries to convince Lilith to let her have the Bloom of Eternal Youth, Steve picks it instead, Eda single-handedly beats up the con artist and Lilith suggests Eda send Luz away for her own protection.
** A-Plot; Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potantial movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from
** B-Plot; Eda tries to convince Lilith to let her have the Bloom of Eternal Youth, Steve picks it instead, Eda single-handedly beats up the con artist and Lilith suggests Eda send Luz away for her own protection.
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ActuallyPrettyFunny: There's this moment:
-->'''Amity:''' "Luz, have you thought of submitting a story of your own?"
-->'''Luz:''' "Nah, I'm not the writer type. I'm just helping King with his dream of being an author so he can develop a cult or something."
-->'''Amity:''' "You mean a fandom?"
-->'''Luz:''' "What's the difference?" (''Amity almost snorted, which didn't go unnoticed by Luz.'')
*AesopAmnesia
AesopAmnesia: Puck lampshades that King didn't learn his lesson about hubris from the last time he saw him.
*BerserkButton
BerserkButton: Luz savagely attacks Piniet when he indirectly insults Amity.
*CurbStompBattle
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*DisappointedInYou
CurbStompBattle: Luz against Piniet, Eda against the scam artist.
*EveryoneHasStandards
DisappointedInYou: [[EveryoneHasStandards Luz]] disapproves of King plagiarizing stating that coming from ''her'' of all people, it's pretty bad.
*EyeScream
EyeScream: Luz is implied to have scratched Piniet's third eye out.
*FlashbackBPlot
FlashbackBPlot: The flashbacks focus on Eda trying to rebuild Luz's confidence three years after the slayground incident.
*ForWantOfANail
{{Foreshadowing}}: According to a laid up Piniet, Luz's eyes [[GlowingEyes turned blue]] during the beating.
*HumiliationConga
ForWantOfANail: To "Senses and Insensitivity": Since Luz doesn't have any interest in writing, King writes his own story for the writing contest. Amity (once again making an appearance unlike canon) tells him it's no good, so he submits a story someone else wrote and threw out instead. It gets popular enough to garner potantial movie rights, forcing him to confess and an angered Piniet threatens to harm him for endangering his business earning a beatdown from Luz.
*IgnoredAesop
HeroicBSOD: Luz goes into one after she sees the unconscious Piniet.
*InSpiteOfANail
HumiliationConga: Piniet is savagely beaten by Luz, then attacked and burned by all his writers after they're freed by Puck, and is eventually killed by Kikimora to make sure he doesn't reveal anything about Luz.
*InternalReveal
IgnoredAesop: When Puck finds Luz and King, he reprimands King for letting his ego get out of hand again.
*KilledOffscreen
InSpiteOfANail: Eda's plot involving the Bloom of Eternal Youth is mostly unchanged.
*LeaningOnTheFourthWall
InternalReveal:
** Lilith informs Eda of Emperor Belos taking a specific interest in Luz.
** King learns that Luz met Puck already and they both discover he's the friend Hooty's been talking about.
*MythologyGag
KilledOffscreen: Kikimora injects Piniet with a potion without the reader seeing it, and it isn't confirmed until later that he perished.
*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown
LeaningOnTheFourthWall: King says his becoming a writer would make excellent a-plot material, and Luz agrees by saying they would be the main focus.
*TheResenterMythologyGag: The ad for the Mystery Shack is the same one from Recap/GravityFallsTVShorts.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Again, Luz and Eda to Piniet and the con artist, respectively.
* TheResenter: Puck admits he's a little jealous of Luz's life.
* TheReveal:
** Eda was acquainted with a coven guard named Larry in the past, as well as Stan Pines.
** Both Clawthorne sisters have had relationships that ended poorly: Eda with a human and Lilith with a man who left.
* Puck was banished from his own kind and was only passing through the Boiling Isles when he started observing Luz after the library incident.
* ShoutOut: During her quest, Eda passes by a camp and asks a guy wearing a hockey mask for directions, a nod to ''Franchise/FridayThe13th''.
* WhamEpisode: Luz officially befriends Puck, Eda decides to take Luz and King to the human realm for a vacation and she's also revealed to have history with Stan Pines.
-->'''Amity:''' "Luz, have you thought of submitting a story of your own?"
-->'''Luz:''' "Nah, I'm not the writer type. I'm just helping King with his dream of being an author so he can develop a cult or something."
-->'''Amity:''' "You mean a fandom?"
-->'''Luz:''' "What's the difference?" (''Amity almost snorted, which didn't go unnoticed by Luz.'')
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* TheResenter: Puck admits he's a little jealous of Luz's life.
* TheReveal:
** Eda was acquainted with a coven guard named Larry in the past, as well as Stan Pines.
** Both Clawthorne sisters have had relationships that ended poorly: Eda with a human and Lilith with a man who left.
* Puck was banished from his own kind and was only passing through the Boiling Isles when he started observing Luz after the library incident.
* ShoutOut: During her quest, Eda passes by a camp and asks a guy wearing a hockey mask for directions, a nod to ''Franchise/FridayThe13th''.
* WhamEpisode: Luz officially befriends Puck, Eda decides to take Luz and King to the human realm for a vacation and she's also revealed to have history with Stan Pines.
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* WhamLine: "Hi, I'm Mr. Mystery. Do you like to be befuddled? Bewild-wi-wuddle- Bewildered? Then behold! The Mystery Shack! Your one stop shop for mysteriously cheap oddities!"
* WhamShot: During her first trip to the human world, Luz watches a TV commercial for the first time. What's the commercial for? The Mystery Shack!
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Eda's struggles with being a parent are revealed; Luz helps King as he rises to fame.
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