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* PragmaticVillainy: When Emerald suggests simply killing Jaune, Cinder turns down her Emerald's suggestion since they don't know the full extent of Jaune's powers and to simply kill Jaune because she doesn't want to risk drawing Ozpin or Ironwood's attention by killing a student.student, especially when she is so close to her goal.
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* PragmaticVillainy: When Emerald suggests simply killing Jaune, Cinder turns down her suggestion since they don't know the full extent of Jaune's powers and she doesn't want to risk drawing Ozpin or Ironwood's attention by killing a student.
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Following the events of the Breach, Ozpin is shown in his office having a meeting on video call with General Ironwood and the Valean Council. The councilors inform Ozpin that in light of Ironwood's recent reports, they will be appointing the general as the head of security for the Vytal Festival. One of the councilors ends the video chat with the implication that Ozpin is going to lose his job due to his handling of the Breach, although Ozpin isn't intimidated.
After the meeting ends, Ozpin talks with a disheveled Glynda about the damage caused by the Grimm's incursion into Vale. The topic of discussion then shifts to Glynda's new apprentice Jaune, as the two watch security footage showing Jaune firing out lightning from his fingertips and draining the Grimm of their lifeforce. Glynda tells Ozpin that she's never seen Jaune use these abilities before and finds it similar to the magic wielded by the Maidens. Ozpin asks Glynda to try and find out where Jaune got his new powers from while he sends a message to Qrow, asking him to do a background check on the boy.
Meanwhile, Cinder, Emerald, and Mercury are seen standing atop one of Vale's abandoned buildings overlooking the town square where the Breach had occurred. Cinder is absolutely furious, ranting about how it should be impossible for Jaune to possess the type of power that he showed off during the Breach. She decides to keep an eye on Jaune as she moves forward with her plans for the Vytal Festival, confident that Jaune won't stand a chance against her once she has the rest of the Fall Maiden's powers.
The next day, Jaune visits his teammates, who had been recovering from their injuries sustained during the Breach at Vale General Hospital. Jaune blames himself for his friends nearly getting killed and assures them that he will make sure they never get hurt again. Having fallen completely under the Dark Side's thrall, Jaune talks about how he's come to the realization that trying to control his powers is foolish and the only way for him to get stronger is to embrace them. Remembering how the man from Jaune's dreams had turned into a monster from overusing his powers, Pyrrha attempts to talk some sense into Jaune. However, this enrages Jaune, who yells that they have no right to tell him how to use his powers. Jaune's eyes then turn yellow as he uses the Jedi mind trick to erase his team's memories of ever having this conversation. After that is done, Jaune bids them farewell as Pyrrha can't help but feel as though she has forgotten something.
Following the events of the Breach, Ozpin is shown in his office having a meeting on video call with General Ironwood and the Valean Council. The councilors inform Ozpin that in light of Ironwood's recent reports, they will be appointing the general as the head of security for the Vytal Festival. One of the councilors ends the video chat with the implication that Ozpin is going to lose his job due to his handling of the Breach, although Ozpin isn't intimidated.
After the meeting ends, Ozpin talks with a disheveled Glynda about the damage caused by the Grimm's incursion into Vale. The topic of discussion then shifts to Glynda's new apprentice Jaune, as the two watch security footage showing Jaune firing out lightning from his fingertips and draining the Grimm of their lifeforce. Glynda tells Ozpin that she's never seen Jaune use these abilities before and finds it similar to the magic wielded by the Maidens. Ozpin asks Glynda to try and find out where Jaune got his new powers from while he sends a message to Qrow, asking him to do a background check on the boy.
Meanwhile, Cinder, Emerald, and Mercury are seen standing atop one of Vale's abandoned buildings overlooking the town square where the Breach had occurred. Cinder is absolutely furious, ranting about how it should be impossible for Jaune to possess the type of power that he showed off during the Breach. She decides to keep an eye on Jaune as she moves forward with her plans for the Vytal Festival, confident that Jaune won't stand a chance against her once she has the rest of the Fall Maiden's powers.
The next day, Jaune visits his teammates, who had been recovering from their injuries sustained during the Breach at Vale General Hospital. Jaune blames himself for his friends nearly getting killed and assures them that he will make sure they never get hurt again. Having fallen completely under the Dark Side's thrall, Jaune talks about how he's come to the realization that trying to control his powers is foolish and the only way for him to get stronger is to embrace them. Remembering how the man from Jaune's dreams had turned into a monster from overusing his powers, Pyrrha attempts to talk some sense into Jaune. However, this enrages Jaune, who yells that they have no right to tell him how to use his powers. Jaune's eyes then turn yellow as he uses the Jedi mind trick to erase his team's memories of ever having this conversation. After that is done, Jaune bids them farewell as Pyrrha can't help but feel as though she has forgotten something.
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* SeasonFinale: This chapter marks the end of the second StoryArc right around the same time as the Volume 2 finale in canon.
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* BurningWithAnger: Cinder is so angered by Jaune interfering during the Breach that she causes a ring of fire to burst around her while she's having a VillainousBreakdown.
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->Link to chapter [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13466304/14/Jaune-Arc-Lord-of-Hunger here]] on [[Website/FanFictionDotNet FFN]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25833802/chapters/64000429 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]].
->Link to chapter [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13466304/14/Jaune-Arc-Lord-of-Hunger here]] on [[Website/FanFictionDotNet FFN]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25833802/chapters/64000429 here]] on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]].
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* CryIntoChest: PlayedForLaughs. Nora is bawling her eyes out while clinging to Jaune's chest because she's upset that the hospital's staff [[DoesNotLikeSpam fed her applesauce]].
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* ThisCannotBe: This is Cinder's reaction to witnessing Jaune's Force powers, she is in disbelief that a person who has power comparable to the Maidens exists.
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* ThisCannotBe: This Cinder is Cinder's reaction to in utter disbelief upon witnessing Jaune's Force powers, powers and she is in disbelief refuses to accept that a person who has power comparable to the Maidens exists.
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* EvilFeelsGood: Jaune has come to this realization during the Breach, deciding that he likes the power the Dark Side gives him and believes that it was a mistake for him to try and control it rather than embrace it.
-->'''Jaune:''' I...came to a realization during the Breach. Everything that we've been doing, the mediation, the training, it's been doing more harm than good. We've been suffocating my powers. All I needed to do was embrace them, let the power flow through me, and it gives me the power to do...anything.
-->'''Jaune:''' I...came to a realization during the Breach. Everything that we've been doing, the mediation, the training, it's been doing more harm than good. We've been suffocating my powers. All I needed to do was embrace them, let the power flow through me, and it gives me the power to do...anything.
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* TheGlomp: When Jaune visits his team in the hospital, Nora immediately leapts at him and latches onto his body despite being hooked up to an IV drip and a heart monitor.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Jaune uses his Force powers to make his team forget the conversation they just had when they attempt to pull an intervention with him concerning his powers.
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* ShoutOut: While recovering in the hospital, Pyrrha watches an episode of ''WebAnimation/XRayAndVav'' on the hospital's TV.
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* ExhaustedEyeBags: While talking to Ozpin, Glynda has heavy bags under her eyes due to overworking herself to exhaustion during the Breach.
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-->'''Cinder:''' Today... Today, should be called a success. But I can't do THAT!\\
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The aftermath of Jaune's use of the Dark Side during the Breach is explored.
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* SwitchingPOV: The chapter's perspective switches from Ozpin, to Cinder, to Pyrrha.
* VillainousBreakdown: Cinder experiences one as a result of witnessing Jaune's powers and seeing him take down most of the Grimm during the Breach.
