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'''Mark:''' ''[weakly, shedding a {{single tear}}]'' You, Dad... I'd still have you...
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'''Mark:''' ''[weakly, ''(weakly, shedding a {{single tear}}]'' tear}})'' You, Dad... I'd Dad...I'll still have you...you.
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-->'''Nolan:''' You're fighting so you can watch everyone around you '''die!''' Think, Mark! You'll outlast every fragile, insignificant being on this planet! You'll live to see this world crumble to dust and blow away! '''Everyone''' and '''everything''' you know will be '''gone!''' ''What will you have after 500 years!?''\\
'''Mark:''' ''[weakly, shedding a {{single tear}}]'' You, dad... I'd still have you...
'''Mark:''' ''[weakly, shedding a {{single tear}}]'' You, dad... I'd still have you...
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-->'''Nolan:''' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou Why did you make me do this!]] You're fighting so you can watch everyone around you '''die!''' Think, ''Think'', Mark! You'll outlast every fragile, insignificant being on this planet! You'll live to see this world crumble to dust and blow away! ''blow away''! '''Everyone''' and '''everything''' you know will be '''gone!''' ''gone!'' ''What will you have after 500 years!?''\\
'''Mark:''' ''[weakly, shedding a {{single tear}}]'' You,dad...Dad... I'd still have you...
'''Mark:''' ''[weakly, shedding a {{single tear}}]'' You,
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-->'''Omni-Man:''' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou Why did you make me do this?!]] You're fighting so you can watch everyone around you die! ''Think'', Mark! You'll outlast every fragile, insignificant being on this planet. You'll live to see this world ''crumble'' to dust and ''blow away''! ''Everything'' and ''everyone'' you know will be gone. What will you have after ''five hundred years''?
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-->'''Omni-Man:''' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou Why did you make me do this?!]] You're fighting so you can watch everyone around you die! ''Think'', Mark! You'll outlast every fragile, insignificant being on this planet. planet! You'll live to see this world ''crumble'' crumble to dust and ''blow away''! ''Everything'' '''Everyone''' and ''everyone'' ''everything''' you know will be gone. gone! What will you have after ''five hundred years''?years''?!
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->''"You, dad...I'll still have you."''
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* NotHyperbole: Allen says that he can't even imagine what Mark went through regarding his dad. He immediately clarifies that he isn't just being poetic, he literally has no frame of reference to imagine how bad it was because he doesn't have a normal father relationship to contextualize Mark's terrible one -- he was born in a breeding camp and never knew his own father.
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* SayingTooMuch: Downplayed; when William talks with Samantha about Mark, William says he hasn't heard from Mark since the incident with him and his dad on the news, before realizing what he just said. Luckily though, Samantha already knows Mark is Invincible and all William did was confirm he knows too. William is relived he didn't actually blow Mark's SecretIdentity.
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** Mark is unable to see his father in the same light again. Even if he still cares for him, he rethinks his previous claim that he wants to be just like Omni-Man./,
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** Mark is unable to see his father in the same light again. Even if he still cares for him, he rethinks his previous claim that he wants to be just like Omni-Man./,
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-->'''Nolan:''' You're fighting so you can watch everyone around you '''die!''' Think, Mark! You'll outlast every fragile, insignificant being on this planet! You'll live to see this world crumble to dust and blow away! '''Everyone''' and '''everything''' you know will be '''gone!''' ''What would you have after 500 years!?''\\
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-->'''Nolan:''' You're fighting so you can watch everyone around you '''die!''' Think, Mark! You'll outlast every fragile, insignificant being on this planet! You'll live to see this world crumble to dust and blow away! '''Everyone''' and '''everything''' you know will be '''gone!''' ''What would will you have after 500 years!?''\\
