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* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace of Isstvan III and thr loyalist Astartes who didn't get to cover in time.
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* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace of Isstvan III and thr the loyalist Astartes who didn't get to cover in time.
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** Saul Tarvitz manages to get word of the incoming virus bombs to the loyalists groundside, allowing many of them to take shelter.
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** Saul Tarvitz manages to get word of the incoming virus bombs to the loyalists groundside, allowing many of them to take shelter. He also manages to convince Nathaniel Garro to side with him, which as the next book shows is what reveals the Heresy to the rest of the Imperium.
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The Heresy officially unfolds, as a fully corrupted Horus unleashes Hell upon the planet of Istvaan III. On the ground, a desperate loyalist force tries to survive, while those above try and get word to Terra.
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The Heresy officially unfolds, begins as a fully corrupted Horus unleashes Hell upon the planet of Istvaan Isstvan III. On the ground, a trapped and desperate loyalist force tries to survive, while those above try and get word to Terra.
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* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace of Istvaan, and many Astartes.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Nathaniel Garro loses a leg during the fighting on Isstvan Extremis.
* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace ofIstvaan, Isstvan III and many Astartes.thr loyalist Astartes who didn't get to cover in time.
* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace of
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** Saul Tarvitz is killed during the second firebombing.
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** Saul Tarvitz is and Nero Vipus are killed during the second firebombing.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remaining Loyalist Astartes face it down with dignity. Knowing even though they are dying, they still ''won''.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Horus officially goes off it here, as summed up in one quote as he virus bombs Istvaan III.
-->'''Horus''': Let the galaxy burn!
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Horus officially goes off it here, as summed up in one quote as he virus bombs Istvaan III.
-->'''Horus''': Let the galaxy burn!
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Iacton Qruze formally renounces the Sons of Horus after witnessing the virus bombing.
--> '''Qruze:''' I am no longer part of the Legion. I can no longer be party to what the Warmaster is doing.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Lucius gets increasingly upset by Tarvitz's assumption of command; this is part of what pushes him into turning on the loyalists.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remainingLoyalist loyalist Astartes face it down with dignity. Knowing dignity, content in the knowledge that even though they are dying, they still ''won''.
''won'' by bleeding the traitors and delaying their plans.
* FaceHeelTurn: This is where the Sons of Horus, Emperor's Children, World Eaters, and Death Guard officially turn on the Imperium.
* GeneralFailure: Eidolon makes a complete hash of the ground assault on the Precentor's Palace, despite having superior numbers and support from Legio Mortis.
* ItsPersonal: Loken and Torgaddon turn down all offers of help when they go off to face Abaddon and Aximand, telling the other loyalists that this fight is Mournival business.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Horus was already teetering on the edge thanks to his actions in ''False Gods'', but he officiallygoes hops off it here, as summed up in one quote as he virus bombs Istvaan Isstvan III.
-->'''Horus''': Order the guns to fire! Let the galaxy burn!
--> '''Qruze:''' I am no longer part of the Legion. I can no longer be party to what the Warmaster is doing.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Lucius gets increasingly upset by Tarvitz's assumption of command; this is part of what pushes him into turning on the loyalists.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remaining
* FaceHeelTurn: This is where the Sons of Horus, Emperor's Children, World Eaters, and Death Guard officially turn on the Imperium.
* GeneralFailure: Eidolon makes a complete hash of the ground assault on the Precentor's Palace, despite having superior numbers and support from Legio Mortis.
* ItsPersonal: Loken and Torgaddon turn down all offers of help when they go off to face Abaddon and Aximand, telling the other loyalists that this fight is Mournival business.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Horus was already teetering on the edge thanks to his actions in ''False Gods'', but he officially
-->'''Horus''': Order the guns to fire! Let the galaxy burn!
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* NoKillLikeOverkill: The Loyalist forces prove so stubborn and so slow down his plans, that Horus eventually just firebombs the planet ''again'' to finish them off.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Iacton Qruze, the ignored "Half-Heard", throws a huge wrench into Horus' plans by sneaking Keeler and company off to a Loyalist Death Guard ship, and getting word out of the betrayal.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Iacton Qruze, the ignored "Half-Heard", throws a huge wrench into Horus' plans by sneaking Keeler and company off to a Loyalist Death Guard ship, and getting word out of the betrayal.
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* NoKillLikeOverkill: The Loyalist loyalist forces prove so stubborn and so slow down his plans, plans so much that Horus eventually just firebombs the planet ''again'' to finish them off.
* OhCrap: Tarvitz is horrified when he realizes that the fleet is about to destroy Isstvan III with virus bombs. He then runs for his life when he sees Angron make planetfall.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Tarvitz first realizes something is wrong when he finds out that Eidolon isn't leading the Emperor's Children deployment to Isstvan III, a highly uncharacteristic move for him.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Three big wrenches get chucked into Horus' plans in rapid succession:
** Saul Tarvitz manages to get word of the incoming virus bombs to the loyalists groundside, allowing many of them to take shelter.
** Angron then blows Horus' plan to wipe out the survivors via a second orbital bombardment by taking his Legion down to Isstvan to kill the remaining loyalist World Eaters personally.
** Iacton Qruze, the ignored "Half-Heard",throws a huge wrench into Horus' plans by sneaking sneaks Keeler and company off the ''Vengeful Spirit'' to a Loyalist loyalist Death Guard ship, which then successfully flees the system and getting gets out word of the betrayal.
* SpottingTheThread: Invoked and subverted. Most of the loyalist characters notice that something is off when they find out that the Isstvan speartip is being assembled apparently at random, with squads and companies plucked out of their usual spots and deployed willy-nilly, but they just shrug it off as being thebetrayal.Warmaster's prerogative. Saul Tarvitz is the only one who realizes that something is very wrong because he also notices that GloryHound Eidolon isn't leading the Emperor's Children contingent.
* SuperScream: Eidolon uses his newly enhanced vocal cords to stun a Warsinger on Isstvan Extremis long enough to kill her.
* OhCrap: Tarvitz is horrified when he realizes that the fleet is about to destroy Isstvan III with virus bombs. He then runs for his life when he sees Angron make planetfall.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Tarvitz first realizes something is wrong when he finds out that Eidolon isn't leading the Emperor's Children deployment to Isstvan III, a highly uncharacteristic move for him.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Three big wrenches get chucked into Horus' plans in rapid succession:
** Saul Tarvitz manages to get word of the incoming virus bombs to the loyalists groundside, allowing many of them to take shelter.
** Angron then blows Horus' plan to wipe out the survivors via a second orbital bombardment by taking his Legion down to Isstvan to kill the remaining loyalist World Eaters personally.
** Iacton Qruze, the ignored "Half-Heard",
* SpottingTheThread: Invoked and subverted. Most of the loyalist characters notice that something is off when they find out that the Isstvan speartip is being assembled apparently at random, with squads and companies plucked out of their usual spots and deployed willy-nilly, but they just shrug it off as being the
* SuperScream: Eidolon uses his newly enhanced vocal cords to stun a Warsinger on Isstvan Extremis long enough to kill her.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remaining Loyalist Astartes face it down with dignity. Knowing even though they are dying, they still ''won''.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remaining Loyalist Astartes face it down with dignity. Knowing even though they are dying, they still ''won''.
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The Heresy officially unfolds, as a fully corrupted Horus unleashes Hell upon the planet of Istvaan III. On the ground, a desperate loyalist force tries to survive, while those above try and get word to Terra.
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* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace of Istvaan, and many Astartes.
* CharacterDeath:
** Saul Tarvitz is killed during the second firebombing.
** Tarik Torgaddon dies in battle with Horus Aximand.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Horus officially goes off it here, as summed up in one quote as he virus bombs Istvaan III.
-->'''Horus''': Let the galaxy burn!
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remaining Loyalist Astartes face it down with dignity. Knowing even though they are dying, they still ''won''.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Little Horus is completely shattered after slaying Torgaddon.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: The Loyalist forces prove so stubborn and so slow down his plans, that Horus eventually just firebombs the planet ''again'' to finish them off.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Iacton Qruze, the ignored "Half-Heard", throws a huge wrench into Horus' plans by sneaking Keeler and company off to a Loyalist Death Guard ship, and getting word out of the betrayal.
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* BodyHorror: The reader is given vivid descriptions of the Life-Eater virus doing its thing to the populace of Istvaan, and many Astartes.
* CharacterDeath:
** Saul Tarvitz is killed during the second firebombing.
** Tarik Torgaddon dies in battle with Horus Aximand.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Horus officially goes off it here, as summed up in one quote as he virus bombs Istvaan III.
-->'''Horus''': Let the galaxy burn!
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Knowing there is no hiding from the second firebombing, Tarvitz and the remaining Loyalist Astartes face it down with dignity. Knowing even though they are dying, they still ''won''.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Little Horus is completely shattered after slaying Torgaddon.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: The Loyalist forces prove so stubborn and so slow down his plans, that Horus eventually just firebombs the planet ''again'' to finish them off.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Iacton Qruze, the ignored "Half-Heard", throws a huge wrench into Horus' plans by sneaking Keeler and company off to a Loyalist Death Guard ship, and getting word out of the betrayal.
