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** Odin eventually becomes one to Rossweisse after he abandons her on Earth towards the end of this volume.
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** Odin eventually becomes one to Rossweisse after he abandons her on Earth towards after the end of this volume.battle with Loki.
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** Odin eventually becomes one to Rossweisse after he abandons her towards the end of this volume.
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** Odin eventually becomes one to Rossweisse after he abandons her on Earth towards the end of this volume.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Akeno is quick to call out Baraqiel for [[MyGreatestFailure his greatest failure to save Shuri]] after they meet again for the first time in several years.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Akeno is quick to call quickly calls out Baraqiel for [[MyGreatestFailure his greatest failure to save Shuri]] after they meet again for the first time in several years.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Baraqiel is seriously depressed for not being able to save Shuri Himejima. It's later revealed that Shuri Himejima was hunted down by her fellow clan members due to their resentment for Fallen Angels, of which Akeno is a HalfHumanHybrid. Although Baraqiel rescued Akeno, it was too late as the latter crossed the DespairEventHorizon.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Baraqiel is seriously depressed for not being able to save Shuri Himejima. It's later revealed that Shuri Himejima was hunted down by her fellow clan members due to their resentment for Fallen Angels, of which Akeno is a HalfHumanHybrid. Although Baraqiel rescued Akeno, it was too late as the latter crossed the DespairEventHorizon.
