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* WhamEpisode: Fox is killed, or rather, Fox was already dead and Invictus was using him as a means of making Ash fall into despair and disillusion with Gary and the crew.
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* WhamEpisode: Fox is killed, or rather, Fox was already dead and Invictus was using him as a means of making Ash fall into despair and disillusion with Gary and the crew.crew.
* WhatTheHellHero: Ash is positively beside herself with tearful rage at Gary for letting Fox die, [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu and even Bolo]] for trying [[NotHelpingYourCase and failing]] to alleviate the situation (and implicitly for letting himself become an avenue for the events of the episode to happen to begin with).
-->'''Ash:''' GARY! '''[[VoiceOfTheLegion WHAT DID YOU DO?!]]'''
-->'''Gary:''' [[HeroicBSoD I...I didn't...]]
-->'''Ash:''' '''YOU KILLED MY''' '''''BROTHER!!!'''''
* WhatTheHellHero: Ash is positively beside herself with tearful rage at Gary for letting Fox die, [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu and even Bolo]] for trying [[NotHelpingYourCase and failing]] to alleviate the situation (and implicitly for letting himself become an avenue for the events of the episode to happen to begin with).
-->'''Ash:''' GARY! '''[[VoiceOfTheLegion WHAT DID YOU DO?!]]'''
-->'''Gary:''' [[HeroicBSoD I...I didn't...]]
-->'''Ash:''' '''YOU KILLED MY''' '''''BROTHER!!!'''''
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** Bolo, in his madness, rips his arm off.
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** Bolo, in his madness, rips his an arm off.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Ash starts out the episode still dead set on finding Fox. And oh, she finds him alright...possessed by Invictus and used to play her and Gary like a fiddle.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Invictus is in top form in this episode. He manipulates Ash into thinking Fox is still alive, then briefly possesses Gary's arm in order to "kill" Fox right in front of Ash.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Invictus is in top form in this episode. He It manipulates Ash into thinking Fox is still alive, then briefly possesses Gary's arm in order to "kill" Fox right in front of Ash.
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* TemptingFate: Ash starts out the episode still dead set on finding Fox. And oh, they find him alright...possessed by Invictus and used as a pawn alongside Gary to coax Ash onto its side.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Invictus may be the real culprit, but Gary's reaction to Fox's blood on ''his'' arm-sword says it all, punctuated by Ash crying out that ''he'' killed her beloved brother.
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* TemptingFate: Ash starts out the episode still dead set on finding Fox. And oh, they find him alright...possessed by Invictus and used as a pawn alongside Gary to coax Ash onto its side.
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* MeatPuppet : Invictus puppeteers Fox's body to have him interact with Ash.
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* MeatPuppet : MeatPuppet: Invictus puppeteers Fox's body to have him interact with Ash.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Gary has always had a fondness for cookies. So it really shows how angry and saddened he is when he begins smashing up cookies instead of eating them.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: In the wake of Fox's death, Gary has always had a fondness for cookies. So it really shows how angry and saddened he is when he begins responds to HUE's cookie offering by smashing up cookies instead the dispenser in a fit of eating them.rage and defeat.
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* WhamEpisode: Fox is killed, or rather, Fox was already dead and Invictus was using him as a means of making Ash fall into despair.
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* WhamEpisode: Fox is killed, or rather, Fox was already dead and Invictus was using him as a means of making Ash fall into despair.despair and disillusion with Gary and the crew.
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* FrameUp: Invictus frames Gary for Fox’s murder in this episode by killing Fox beforehand after possessing him then making the corpse appear alive in front of Ash to deceive her, and finally using Gary’s mechanical arm to stab the corpse.
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* FrameUp: Invictus frames Gary for Fox’s Fox's murder in this episode by killing Fox beforehand after possessing him then making the corpse appear alive in front of Ash to deceive her, and finally using Gary’s Gary's mechanical arm to stab the corpse.corpse.
* GoryDiscretionShot: In Fox's flashback, just before the buzz saw reaches Fox's hand, the scene cuts to his musical instrument falling to the floor and breaking.
* GoryDiscretionShot: In Fox's flashback, just before the buzz saw reaches Fox's hand, the scene cuts to his musical instrument falling to the floor and breaking.
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Nevermind, not really a taunt, more like a small rant.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Bolo is taken aback at Ash demanding to see Fox's remains and angrily pointing out how he didn't make it out of Invictus' grip alive while Gary, Avocato and Bolo did.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Bolo is taken aback at Ash demanding to see Fox's remains and angrily pointing out how he didn't make it out of Invictus' grip alive while Gary, Avocato and Bolo did.
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* StartOfDarkness: Ash's begins when Fox is killed by Gary (even though Invictus killed him first) and she blames him for it, thus developing a hatred towards him, which is what Invictus wanted.
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** Avocato (and seemingly Ventrexians as whole) has a "danger gland" that warns him of possible threat, located on his neck.
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** Avocato (and seemingly Ventrexians as whole) has have a "danger gland" that warns him of possible threat, located on his neck.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Gary has always had a fondness for cookies. So it really shows how angry and saddened he is when he begins smashing up cookies instead of eating them.
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** Gary has always had a fondness for cookies. So it really shows how angry and saddened he is when he begins smashing up cookies instead of eating them.
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* ShooOutTheClowns: Fox, one of the goofier members of Team Squad, dies.
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* ShooOutTheClowns: Fox, one of the goofier members of Team Squad, dies.dies, to emphasize how dark the show is getting.
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* ShooOutTheClowns: Fox, one of the goofier members of Team Squad, dies.
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** Gary has always had a fondness for cookies. So it really shows how angry and saddened he is when he begins smashing up cookies instead of eating them.
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* DownerEnding: Fox is truly gone and Ash blames Gary for it, unaware that Invictus manipulated her and possessed Gary's arm to stab Fox's empty shell of a body. Last scene of the episode is Ash cradling Fox' body in the void of space.
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* DownerEnding: Fox is truly gone and Ash blames Gary for it, unaware that Invictus manipulated her and possessed Gary's arm to stab Fox's empty shell of a body. Last The last scene of the episode is Ash cradling Fox' Fox's body in the void of space.
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* MentalWorld: Team Squad once again enters Bolo's mindscape but compared to the bizarre and colourful world seen in Chapter 8, this time it's dark and desolate, inhabited by fragments of his different personalities due to the infection Oreskis inflicted upon Bolo during their confrontation.
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* MentalWorld: Team Squad once again enters Bolo's mindscape but compared to the bizarre and colourful colorful world seen in Chapter 8, this time it's dark and desolate, inhabited by fragments of his different personalities due to the infection Oreskis inflicted upon Bolo during their confrontation.
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* OriginsEpisode: We learn more about Fox past...unfortunately it's also the episode where it's revealed he's been DeadAllAlong after Invictus possessed him few episodes ago.
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* OriginsEpisode: We learn more about Fox Fox's past...unfortunately it's also the episode where it's revealed he's been DeadAllAlong after Invictus possessed him a few episodes ago.ago.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: Fox is surprisingly calm upon reuniting with Ash instead of his usual cheerfulness. This is a sign that he is still possessed by Invictus.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: Fox is surprisingly calm upon reuniting with Ash instead of his usual cheerfulness. This is a sign that he is still possessed by Invictus.
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* FrameUp: Invictus frames Gary for Fox’s murder in this episode by killing Dix beforehand after possessing him then making the corpse appear alive in front of Ash to deceive her, and finally using Gary’s mechanical arm to stab the corpse.
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* FrameUp: Invictus frames Gary for Fox’s murder in this episode by killing Dix Fox beforehand after possessing him then making the corpse appear alive in front of Ash to deceive her, and finally using Gary’s mechanical arm to stab the corpse.
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* FrameUp: Invictus frames Gary for Fox’s murder in this episode by killing Dix beforehand after possessing him then making the corpse appear alive in front of Ash to deceive her, and finally using Gary’s mechanical arm to stab the corpse.
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* OriginsEpisode: We learns more about Fox past...unfortunately it's also the episode where it's revealed he's been DeadAllAlong after Invictus possessed him few episodes ago.
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* OriginsEpisode: We learns learn more about Fox past...unfortunately it's also the episode where it's revealed he's been DeadAllAlong after Invictus possessed him few episodes ago.
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* MentalWorld: Team Squad once again enters Bolo's mindscape but compared to the bizarre and colourful world seen in Chapter 8, this time it's dark and desolate, inhabited by fragments of his different personalities due to the infection Oreskis inflicted upon Bolo during their confrontation.
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** Avocato (and seemingly Ventrexians as whole) has a "danger gland" that warns him of possible threat, located on his neck.
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* TheBusCameBack: Bolo's mindscape guardian returns after being absent since Chapter 8 and is just as short-tempered as ever, although this time it's very much justified...
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* TheBusCameBack: Bolo's mindscape guardian returns after being absent since Chapter 8 and is just as short-tempered as ever, although this time it's very much justified since Bolo is in danger.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Upon Ash's return to ''Galaxy Two'', Avocato notes how his "danger gland" is acting up. It comes off as a metaphor for instinct or gut feeling, but as he reveals to Gary (much to Gary's disgust), he actually ''does'' have an organ on his neck that warns him of iminent danger.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Upon Ash's return to ''Galaxy Two'', Avocato notes how his "danger gland" is acting up. It comes off as a metaphor for instinct or gut feeling, but as he reveals to Gary (much to Gary's disgust), he actually ''does'' have an organ on his neck that warns him of iminent imminent danger.
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* TheBusCameBack: Bolo's mindscape guardian returns after being absent since Chapter 8 and is just as short-tempered as ever, although this time it's very much justified...
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* BadassInDistress: The guardian of Bolo's mindscape requests help from Team Squad to save Bolo's mind from being fully corrupted by the infection Oreskis gave him after stabbing his arm.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Invictus is in top form this episode. He manipulates Ash into thinking Fox is still alive, then briefly possesses Gary's arm in order to "kill" Fox right in front of Ash.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Invictus is in top form in this episode. He manipulates Ash into thinking Fox is still alive, then briefly possesses Gary's arm in order to "kill" Fox right in front of Ash.
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* OriginsEpisode: We learns more about Fox past, it unfortunate it's also the ep that he bites the dust...
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* OriginsEpisode: We learns more about Fox past, it unfortunate past...unfortunately it's also the ep that he bites the dust... episode where it's revealed he's been DeadAllAlong after Invictus possessed him few episodes ago.
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** Avocato (and seemingly Ventrexians as whole) has a "danger gland" that warns him of possible threat, located on his neck.
* DownerEnding: Fox is truly gone and Ash blames Gary for it, unaware that Invictus manipulated her and possessed Gary's arm to stab Fox's empty shell of a body. Last scene of the episode is Ash cradling Fox' body in the void of space.
* DownerEnding: Fox is truly gone and Ash blames Gary for it, unaware that Invictus manipulated her and possessed Gary's arm to stab Fox's empty shell of a body. Last scene of the episode is Ash cradling Fox' body in the void of space.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Invictus is in top form this episode. He manipulates Ash into thinking Fox is still alive, then briefly possesses Gary's arm in order to "kill" Fox right in front of Ash.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Upon Ash's return to ''Galaxy Two'', Avocato notes how his "danger gland" is acting up. It comes off as a metaphor for instinct or gut feeling, but as he reveals to Gary (much to Gary's disgust), he actually ''does'' have an organ on his neck that warns him of iminent danger.
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* OriginsEpisode: We learns more about Fox past, it unfortunate it's also the ep that he bites the dust...
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* MeatPuppet : Invictus puppeteers Fox's body to have him interact with Ash.
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* MistakenIdentity: Ash confuses Quinn for Nightfall due to seeing the chip in her head.
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Gary and the crew go into Bolo's mind to cure his bout of madness.
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* AnArmAndALeg:
** Bolo, in his madness, rips his arm off.
** In his backstory, Fox got his hand removed.
* BizarreAlienBiology: Inside of his mind, Bolo has different fragments of himself representing different parts of his personality.
* KilledOffForReal: Fox; by the time that the crew went into Bolo's mind, he was already dead and Invictus was maneuvering him like a puppet.
* SlasherSmile: Invictus spouts several as Fox.
* WhamEpisode: Fox is killed, or rather, Fox was already dead and Invictus was using him as a means of making Ash fall into despair.
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* AnArmAndALeg:
** Bolo, in his madness, rips his arm off.
** In his backstory, Fox got his hand removed.
* BizarreAlienBiology: Inside of his mind, Bolo has different fragments of himself representing different parts of his personality.
* KilledOffForReal: Fox; by the time that the crew went into Bolo's mind, he was already dead and Invictus was maneuvering him like a puppet.
* SlasherSmile: Invictus spouts several as Fox.
* WhamEpisode: Fox is killed, or rather, Fox was already dead and Invictus was using him as a means of making Ash fall into despair.
