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Spelling/grammar fix(es), Crosswicking
* InterruptedIntimacy: Mild case. During one of their rare quiet moments together, Mac and Christine are sitting in the park, his arm around her, when his phone rings in the middle of a kiss. Still a type of intimacy, just not actual sex.
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* TeamDad: Once again, Mac takes Adam under his wing, this time encouraging him about his feelings towards his dad, and givomg him fatherly advice to forgive the man for his own sake.
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* TeamDad: Once again, Mac takes Adam under his wing, this time encouraging him about his feelings towards his dad, and givomg giving him fatherly advice to forgive the man for his own sake.
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* CareerEndingInjury: Mr. Ross reveals to Adam that his father had broken his arm as punishment when he was a teenager, thus ending his chances of pursuing his dream career to "play ball."
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* YouCanLeaveYourHatOn: During the opening of the waitress at the titular burlesque club performs a striptease routine atop the bar while attempting to flirt with her boyfriend, the bartender/co-owner of the club, by taking his hat and using it in her act. She goes so far as to get topless, but covers herself strategically with some large feathers that were part of her costume.
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* YouCanLeaveYourHatOn: During the opening of the waitress at the titular burlesque club performs a striptease routine atop the bar while attempting to flirt with her boyfriend, the bartender/co-owner of the club, by taking his hat and using it in her act. She goes so far as to get topless, but covers herself strategically with some large feathers that were part of her costume.costume before tossing his hat back to him and exiting.
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* {{Burlesque}}: The episode title is the name of a bar which has a burlesque dancer. Jo mentions to Mac that she worked for a burlesque club during college and lets him think for a while that she danced, before confessing that she kept their books.
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* {{Burlesque}}: {{Burlesque}}:
** The episode title is the name of a bar which has a burlesquedancer. dancer who is also the girlfriend of one of the two owners. A decision of hers has consequences that effect both men.
** Jo mentions to Mac that she worked for a burlesque club during college and lets him think for a while that she danced, before confessing that she kept their books.
** The episode title is the name of a bar which has a burlesque
** Jo mentions to Mac that she worked for a burlesque club during college and lets him think for a while that she danced, before confessing that she kept their books.
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* CoolestClubEver: The speakeasy is one of several popular night spots depicted in the series.
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* CoolestClubEver: The eponymous speakeasy is one of several popular night spots depicted in the series.series. Lindsay gushes about it being nostalgic.
