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* CloningBlues: Of the soul.
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* BookEnds: The story starts out and ends with Mary Shelly writing in her journal, but where she has some discomfort about the Doctor at first, towards the end she has sussed him out and she writes more positively.
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* BookEnds: The story starts out and ends with Mary Shelly Shelley writing in her journal, but where she has some discomfort about the Doctor at first, towards the end she has sussed him out and she writes more positively.
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* BookEnds: The story starts out and ends with Mary Shelly writing in her journal, but where she distrusts him at first, towards the end she has sussed him out and she writes more positively.
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* BookEnds: The story starts out and ends with Mary Shelly writing in her journal, but where she distrusts him has some discomfort about the Doctor at first, towards the end she has sussed him out and she writes more positively.
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* Determinator: TheUndead will keep going even in form of limbs, or lobbed off skulls towards their goal.
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* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: TheUndead will keep going even in form of limbs, or lobbed off skulls towards their goal.
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* LastVillainStand: The original Karnex and his second in command stand their ground against DemBones, which are returning to them. They courteously let the Doctor and companions escape because they weren't ''the real villains''.
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* LastVillainStand: The original Karnex and his second in command stand their ground against DemBones, which are returning to them. They courteously let the Doctor and companions escape because [[spoiler:because they weren't ''the real villains''.villains'']].
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** The Doctor mentions the [[Recap/DoctorWhoS15E4TheSunMakers Plutonian Tax collectors]] are among the worst he knows.
** Mary refers to [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho153TheSilverTurk the Cybermen]] and [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho154TheWitchfromtheWell witches]].
** Mary refers to [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho153TheSilverTurk the Cybermen]] and [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho154TheWitchfromtheWell witches]].
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* BookEnds: The story starts out and ends with Mary Shelly writing in her journal, but where she distrusts him at first, towards the end she has sussed him out and she writes more positively.
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Karnex and Nia in the end.
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* CallForward: The Doctor plans to implement his brain into a machine, and [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E9ForestOfTheDead someone else takes his place in lieu of him risking his death in the upload]]. The Doctor even says "There is another way!"
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* AdmiringTheAbomination: Mary is curious as to how the Doctor could ''not'' be reviled to seeing all this death and carnage and the creatures that spawn forth from it.
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* TheCavalry: The Hover Sentries, nee, the ''Flybots'' come and save the Doctor, Mary and Nia. [[SubvertedTrope Only to get a retreat command 30 seconds later, leaving them]].
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* TheCavalry: The Hover Sentries, nee, the ''Flybots'' come and save the Doctor, Mary and Nia. [[SubvertedTrope Only to get a retreat command 30 seconds later, leaving them]]. [[PlayedWithTrope They later return in Stronghaven to actually save the Doctor again]].
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* CloningBlues: Of the soul.
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* LastVillainStand: Garrak and his second in command stand their ground against DemBones, which are returning to them. They courteously let the Doctor and companions escape because they weren't ''the real villains''.
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* LastVillainStand: Garrak The original Karnex and his second in command stand their ground against DemBones, which are returning to them. They courteously let the Doctor and companions escape because they weren't ''the real villains''.villains''.
* MindControl: Beyond death.
* MindControl: Beyond death.
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* FusionDance: Karnex manages to reform himself using the bodies of many who perished, and asserts his will over the creature.
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* BlatantLies: "This is not an attack, it's a military training exercise."
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* CameBackWrong: Karnak.
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* CameBackWrong: Karnak.Karnex.
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** The Doctor mentions he once had [[Recap/DoctorWhoS11E5PlanetofTheSpiders a hover car]] with [[MythologyGag a great license plate]].
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* TheCavalry: The Hover Sentries, nee, the ''Flybots'' come and save the Doctor, Mary and Nia. [[SubvertedTrope Only to get a retreat command 30 seconds later, leaving them]].
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* LastVillainStand: Garrak and his second in command stand their ground against DemBones, which are returning to them. They courteously let the Doctor and companions escape because they weren't ''the real villains''.
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** The Doctor gets a couple of [[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E2TheDaleks Radiation Drugs]]. (They're also actual drugs this time, [[MythologyGag gloves]])
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* SoiledCityOnAHill: Garrak.
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* SoiledCityOnAHill: Garrak.Garrak.
* SuicideAttack: DemBones have a resonating frequency inside them, and if they lose it, they blow up.
* SuicideAttack: DemBones have a resonating frequency inside them, and if they lose it, they blow up.
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* CameBackWrong: Garrak.
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* CameBackWrong: Garrak.Karnak.
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* DeadpanSnarker: The Doctor is on a roll in this story.
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* DeadpanSnarker: The Doctor is on a roll Determinator: TheUndead will keep going even in this story.form of limbs, or lobbed off skulls towards their goal.
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* CallBack: When Vallan mentions Sherla assassinated former President Garrak and it was broadcast on TV, the Doctor mentioned [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E3TheDeadlyAssassin he once did the very same thing, and was innocent]].
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* ImmuneToBullets: Literally namedropped.
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Husband]]: Mary, [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho154TheWitchfromtheWell again]], gets mistaken for the Doctor's wife.
* ImmuneToBullets: Literallynamedropped.namedropped.
* InfraredXrayCamera: The soldiers are equipped with these, but they obviously can't detect the skeletal warriors because they emit no heat signature.
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* DeadpanSnarker: The Doctor is on a roll in this story.
* DistressedDude: The Doctor tries to fast talk his way out of getting kidnapped by a hover sentry, but is the only one out of four to get taken prisoner.
* DistressedDude: The Doctor tries to fast talk his way out of getting kidnapped by a hover sentry, but is the only one out of four to get taken prisoner.
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* PresidentEvil: President Vallan became President through ... less than savoury means.
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* CameBackWrong: Vallan.
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* CameBackWrong: Vallan.Garrak.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: The Doctor laments how people never get creative with names for devices, like the InUniverse "Hover sentries".
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* ImmuneToBullets: Literally namedropped.
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[[Creator/PaulMcGann The Doctor]] and [[Creator/MaryShelley Mary Shelley]] visit the frontier world of Draxine, where the tenth generation of human settlers have flourished for centuries. Though two great cities were once standing, the city of Garrak fell victim to an insidious cult and was promptly obliterated from the map.
Now, years later when they were all but forgotten, they rear their heads again, and brings along an Army of Death.
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!!Army of Death contains examples of the following tropes:
* BaitAndSwitchComparison: Mary writes of an other worldly man she loves, someone who just ''appeared'' in her life. Percy Shelley.
* DemBones:
-- Bones... Moving bones!?
* NonIndicativeName: The Doctor claimed this of [[NoodleIncident planet Mayhem]]. [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin He wasn't right]].
* SoiledCityOnAHill: Garrak.
Now, years later when they were all but forgotten, they rear their heads again, and brings along an Army of Death.
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!!Army of Death contains examples of the following tropes:
* BaitAndSwitchComparison: Mary writes of an other worldly man she loves, someone who just ''appeared'' in her life. Percy Shelley.
* DemBones:
-- Bones... Moving bones!?
* NonIndicativeName: The Doctor claimed this of [[NoodleIncident planet Mayhem]]. [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin He wasn't right]].
* SoiledCityOnAHill: Garrak.
