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* ArtisticLicenseSpace: Sol isn't the kind of star that can go nova, and it certainly wouldn't be a [[ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale mere million years from now]]. Background material[=/=]WordOfGod states this was artificially induced by someone opening jump points inside the sun to siphon off its mass and deliberately causing it to become unstable, ostensibly to prevent the curious from trying to retrieve technology from Earth after humanity moves on from it.
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* ArtisticLicenseSpace: Sol isn't the kind of star that can go nova, and it certainly wouldn't be a [[ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale mere million years from now]]. Background material[=/=]WordOfGod states this was artificially induced by someone opening jump points inside the sun to siphon off its mass and deliberately causing cause it to become unstable, ostensibly to prevent the curious from trying to retrieve technology from Earth after humanity moves on from it.except that ''that's'' not how stars work either.
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** Background material [=/=]WordOfGod is that many Earth Colonies did survive the burn, but many were the IA loyal colonies Earth had just confessed to wanting to nuke flat. And so, feeling Earth had gotten exactly what it deserved, they washed their hands of what was left. Leaving it eventually to the Rangers to step in and slowly nudge Earth back to the stars.
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* HereWeGoAgain: Alwyn's reaction to Michael saying he's having a crisis of faith.
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* HereWeGoAgain: Alwyn's reaction to Michael saying he's having a crisis of faith. faith indicates this is not the first time (possibly not even the first time ''that day'')
-->'''Michael:''' I am having... a crisis of faith.\\
'''Alwyn:''' ''That'' again... So, what is afflicting your conscience ''tonight'', Brother Michael?
-->'''Michael:''' I am having... a crisis of faith.\\
'''Alwyn:''' ''That'' again... So, what is afflicting your conscience ''tonight'', Brother Michael?
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Daniel runs off in a panic and the hologram gives him a Garibaldi trademark canary-eating cat smirk. That's what happens when you give a hologram the personality ''and skills'' of Michael Garibaldi. Danny-boy never stood a chance. As the base is engulfed in fire, the recording ends.
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Daniel runs off in a panic and the hologram gives him a Garibaldi trademark canary-eating cat smirk. That's what happens when you give a hologram the personality ''and skills'' of Michael Garibaldi. Danny-boy never stood a chance. Holo-baldi, happy that he prevented a mass murder, says goodbye to the recreations of his friends and waits for the missiles to hit. As the base is engulfed in fire, the recording ends.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: The holographic Garibaldi, having been programmed with the personality of the original Garibaldi, quickly snoops around Politdivision's databases, learns of their plans to commit genocide against civilians and transmits their plans to the enemy.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: The holographic Garibaldi, having been programmed with the personality of the original Garibaldi, quickly snoops around Politdivision's databases, learns of their plans to commit genocide against civilians civilians, tricks Daniel into [[EngineeredPublicConfession revealing their plans openly]], and transmits their plans to the enemy.
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He then explains that since he is technically a computer program, and Garibaldi had a knack for breaking into systems, he went through Daniel's computer from one end to the other, [[EngineeredPublicConfession recorded their little conversation and sent it out to the opposition]], who are no doubt launching a preemptive strike of their own. Since they aren't mass murderers, they'll most likely just target military installations.
-->'''Holo-baldi''': This little lab of yours, this isn't by any chance located on military base, is it?
-->'''Holo-baldi''': This little lab of yours, this isn't by any chance located on military base, is it?
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He then explains that since he is technically a computer program, and Garibaldi had a knack for breaking into systems, he went through Daniel's computer from one end to the other, [[EngineeredPublicConfession recorded their little conversation and sent it out to the opposition]], who are no doubt launching a preemptive strike of their own. Since they aren't mass murderers, they'll most likely just target military installations.
installations, but that doesn't help Daniel:
-->'''Holo-baldi''': This little lab of yours, this isn't by any chance located on a military base, is it?
-->'''Holo-baldi''': This little lab of yours, this isn't by any chance located on a military base, is it?
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* KarmaHoudini: Henry Ellis, former speechwriter for the Clark dictatorship turned pundit and panelist.
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* KarmaHoudini: Henry Ellis, former speechwriter for the Clark dictatorship turned pundit and panelist. Although the disdain with which he is being treated suggests his career may not be a long one.
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* ButWhatAboutTheAstronauts: On quite a large scale; when "The Burn" kills millions and reduces Earth to around a Medieval tech level the humans off Earth are still going strong, secretly aiding those on Earth via the Rangers.
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* ButWhatAboutTheAstronauts: On quite a large scale; when "The Burn" kills millions and reduces Earth to around a Medieval tech level the humans off Earth (presumably on colonies like Proxima and maybe even Mars) are still going strong, secretly aiding those on Earth via the Rangers.
