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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Film/BackToTheFuture Biff Tannen]] can relate, Taro.]]
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Haruka attempts to come up with a new story for her manga work, however Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of all this, doubles of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the future.
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Haruka attempts to come up with develop a new story for her manga work, however but Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of all this, Amidst Haruka's work, doubles of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the future.
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He learns from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with the secretive mangaka. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one person who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He learns from costume and Haruka that said person is none other than reveals them to be... her arch-nemesis ''Naoki Shiina'', and Shiina''. With that information in mind, Tsubasa meets up with the secretive mangaka. Just mangaka, but who is exactly Naoki Shiina...!?
Shiina is may catch him, Haruka and their friends by surprise...
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with the mysterious mangaka. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears learns from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with the mysterious secretive mangaka. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Shinichi loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[DrillSergeantNasty implied to have been a considerably-worse editor to his world's Haruka]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - -- Future!Shinichi loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[DrillSergeantNasty implied to have been a considerably-worse editor to his world's Haruka]].
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** Shinichi initially assumes this of his counterpart: he’s rich and writes tanka as a hobby.
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** Shinichi initially assumes this of his counterpart: he’s rich rich, can actually touch money without getting burned, and writes tanka as a hobby.
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* BrickJoke: After Haruka explains the reason her manga has two of the same character being that they’re the same person from two different points in time, Kijino chimes in that he thought they were twins. Later, when the parallel world future versions of Haruka and Shinichi appear, Kijino comes to the same assumption.
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* BrickJoke: After Haruka explains the reason her manga has two of the same character being that they’re the same person from two different points in time, Kijino Tsuyoshi chimes in that he thought they were twins. Later, when the parallel world future versions of Haruka and Shinichi appear, Kijino Tsuyoshi comes to the same assumption.
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* DramaticUnmask: During the fight between the two Murasames, Naoki's mask comes off... and it's another Haruka.
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* DramaticUnmask: During the fight between the two Murasames, Naoki's mask comes gets knocked off... and it's revealing it to be another Haruka.Haruka beneath.
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** Also applies to the past and future Murasame. The latter lack a “mother” and is a lot more stoic and implacable, whereas the current one uses his Mother’s advice to fight.
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** Also applies to the past and future Murasame. The latter lack apparently lacks a “mother” and is a lot more stoic and implacable, whereas the current one uses his Mother’s advice to fight.
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* FutureBadass: Beyond being a far superior Manga writer to the present Haruka, future Haruka also both is capable of using Omikoshi Phoenix and actually landing a hit on Taro.
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* FutureBadass: Beyond being a far superior Manga manga writer to the present Haruka, future Haruka also both is capable of using Omikoshi Phoenix and actually landing a hit on Taro.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Downplayed given it isn't meant to de-motivate, but Future!Saruhara succinctly sums up Taro's emotional immaturity and why it's the reason he's unhappy. Taro is so taken aback that he asks Sonoi about it during their later fight and [[IgnoredEpiphany shunts the topic away behind bravado]].
--> '''Future!Saruhara''': [[StaticCharacter It seems that if nothing else is a universal constant, you are]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never had the misfortune that leads people to dream, which also means you don't understand happiness]].
--> '''Future!Saruhara''': [[StaticCharacter It seems that if nothing else is a universal constant, you are]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never had the misfortune that leads people to dream, which also means you don't understand happiness]].
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Downplayed given it isn't meant to de-motivate, but Future!Saruhara Future!Shinichi succinctly sums up Taro's emotional immaturity and why it's the reason he's unhappy. Taro is so taken aback shaken by it that he asks Sonoi about it during their later fight and [[IgnoredEpiphany shunts the topic away behind bravado]].
-->'''Future!Saruhara''': '''Future!Shinichi''': [[StaticCharacter It seems that if nothing else is a universal constant, you are]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never had the misfortune that leads people to dream, which also means you don't understand happiness]].
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** Future!Saru Brother fights Sonoza for being a terrible editor-mentor for his Haruka, with Present!Saru Brother joining in after failing to mediate their conflict.
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** Future!Saru Brother fights goes after Sonoza for being a terrible editor-mentor for his Haruka, with Present!Saru Brother joining in after failing to mediate their conflict.
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[DrillSergeantNasty implied to have been a considerably-worse editor to his world's Haruka]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara Future!Shinichi loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[DrillSergeantNasty implied to have been a considerably-worse editor to his world's Haruka]].
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Haruka attempts to come up with a new story for her manga work, however Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of this, copies of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the future.
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Haruka attempts to come up with a new story for her manga work, however Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of all this, copies doubles of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the future.
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis mangaka ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with them. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis mangaka ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with them.the mysterious mangaka. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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* FutureBadass: Beyond being a far superior Manga writer to the present Haruka, future Haruka also both is capable of using Omikoshi Phoenix and actually getting a hit on Taro.
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* FutureBadass: Beyond being a far superior Manga writer to the present Haruka, future Haruka also both is capable of using Omikoshi Phoenix and actually getting landing a hit on Taro.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Future!Haruka (as Naoki Shiina) saving Tsubasa from the Forest Of Slumber is how he was able to destroy his Juto duplicate.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Future!Haruka (as Naoki Shiina) saving Tsubasa from the Forest Of Slumber is how he was able to destroy his Juto duplicate.
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* IgnoredEpiphany: Taro finds himself unable to process Future!Saruhara pointing out his emotional shortcomings. When he duels Sonoi later and [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike finds out he has the same confusion]], the two decide to ignore the topic completely and bottle such a "feeble" idea away.
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* IgnoredEpiphany: Taro finds himself unable to process Future!Saruhara pointing out his emotional shortcomings. When he duels Sonoi later and [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike finds out he has the same confusion]], confusion about why dreams matter]], the two decide to ignore the topic completely and bottle such a "feeble" idea away.
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident implied to have been a terrible editor to Haruka]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident [[DrillSergeantNasty implied to have been a terrible considerably-worse editor to his world's Haruka]].
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** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this - not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention, their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him and their Sonoza was a horrible editor to Haruka that the mere sight of him reduces Saruhara to unrestrained rage.
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** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this - not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention, their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him and their Sonoza was such a horrible editor to Haruka that the mere sight of him reduces Saruhara to unrestrained a ball of frothing rage.
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* FutureMeScaresMe: PlayedForLaughs. Shinichi is aghast upon learning that his future self isn't just a rich man that can handle money but has seemingly abandoned his search for wabi-sabi by pursuing tanka instead of haiku. They make up quickly enough however - Shinichi giving his future self a parting Haiku as a gift at the end of the episode.
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** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this - not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him and Sonoza is implied to have done something so terrible to Haruka that Saruhara treats him like an ArchNemesis on sight.
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** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this - not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention mention, their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him and their Sonoza is implied to have done something so terrible was a horrible editor to Haruka that the mere sight of him reduces Saruhara treats him like an ArchNemesis on sight.to unrestrained rage.
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident implied to have done something terrible to Haruka]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident implied to have done something been a terrible editor to Haruka]].
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Future!Haruka (as Naoki Shiina) saving Tsubasa from the Forest Of Slumber is how he was able to destroy his Juto duplicate.
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* WhamEpisode: Naoki Shiina this whole time is Haruka from the future of a parallel universe, who used her Kibi-Points to take a temporary leave from the Donbrothers to further her manga career while also having hitched herself to a future version of Shinichi. A glitch in fulfilling her request ended up sending them back to the present time, with a future Don Murasame on her tail for being an anomaly.
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* WhamEpisode: Naoki Shiina this whole time is Haruka from the future of a parallel universe, who used her Kibi-Points to take a temporary leave from the Donbrothers to further her manga career while also having hitched herself to a future version of Shinichi. A glitch in fulfilling her request ended up sending them back to the present time, with a future Don Murasame on her tail for being an anomaly. She's also the reason Tsubasa was able to leave the Forest of Slumber, having saved him shortly after his capture.
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--> '''Future!Saruhara''': [[StaticCharacter No matter where or when we are, you're still the same]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never been so unhappy you've had a dream, which is why you do not know true happiness]].
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--> '''Future!Saruhara''': [[StaticCharacter No matter where or when we are, you're still the same]]. It seems that if nothing else is a universal constant, you are]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never been so unhappy you've had a the misfortune that leads people to dream, which is why also means you do not know true don't understand happiness]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident implied to have something terrible to Haruka]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured (if it even exists in their timeline) - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident implied to have done something terrible to Haruka]].
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* WeirdnessCensor: Taro doesn't react much to the Future Donbrothers. In fact, when Haruka explains how fractured the team is in the future, he's response is to find it interesting.
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* WeirdnessCensor: Taro doesn't react much to the Future Donbrothers. In fact, when Haruka explains how fractured the team is in the future, he's his response is to find it interesting.
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* IgnoredEpiphany: Taro finds himself unable to process Future!Saruhara pointing out his emotional shortcomings. When he duels Sonoi later and [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike finds out he has the same confusion]], the two decide to ignore the topic completely and bottle such a "feeble concept" away.
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* IgnoredEpiphany: Taro finds himself unable to process Future!Saruhara pointing out his emotional shortcomings. When he duels Sonoi later and [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike finds out he has the same confusion]], the two decide to ignore the topic completely and bottle such a "feeble concept" "feeble" idea away.
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* IgnoredEpiphany: Taro finds himself unable to process Future!Saruhara pointing out his emotional shortcomings. When he duels Sonoi later and [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike finds out he has the same confusion]], the two decide to ignore the topic completely and bottle such a "feeble concept" away.
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** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this -- not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him.
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** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this -- - not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him.him and Sonoza is implied to have done something so terrible to Haruka that Saruhara treats him like an ArchNemesis on sight.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Downplayed given it isn't meant to de-motivate, but Future!Saruhara succinctly sums up Taro's emotional immaturity and why it's the reason he's unhappy. Taro is so taken aback that he asks Sonoi about it during their later fight and [[IgnoredEpiphany shunts the topic away behind bravado]].
--> '''Future!Saruhara''': [[StaticCharacter No matter where or when we are, you're still the same]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never been so unhappy you've had a dream, which is why you do not know true happiness]].
--> '''Future!Saruhara''': [[StaticCharacter No matter where or when we are, you're still the same]]. [[MiseryBuildsCharacter You've never been so unhappy you've had a dream, which is why you do not know true happiness]].
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: Future!Haruka says that the Donbrothers in her future are immensely fractured, which has gotten so bad that she almost pummels Taro ''on-sight''. Their FriendlyEnemy relationship with the Noto has also soured - Future!Saruhara loses it upon spotting Sonoza, who's [[NoodleIncident implied to have something terrible to Haruka]].
* WeirdnessCensor: Taro doesn't react much to the Future Donbrothers. In fact, when Haruka explains how fractured the team is in the future, he's response is to find it interesting.
* WeirdnessCensor: Taro doesn't react much to the Future Donbrothers. In fact, when Haruka explains how fractured the team is in the future, he's response is to find it interesting.
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* BadFuture: Shinichi initially assumes this of his counterpart: he’s rich and writes tanka as a hobby.
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* BadFuture: BadFuture:
** Shinichi initially assumes this of his counterpart: he’s rich and writes tanka as ahobby.hobby.
** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this -- not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him.
** Shinichi initially assumes this of his counterpart: he’s rich and writes tanka as a
** It's implied the AlternateTimeline the future selves came from is this -- not only have the Donbrothers been fighting a ForeverWar for so long that Haruka had to use her Kibi-Points just to take a temporary vacation to pursue her manga career, outside from Haruka and Shinichi being a couple the rest of their Donbrothers do not get along well. Not to mention their Don Murasame is more ruthless and reckless due to lacking a "Mother" figure to guide him.
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* LetHanging: PlayedForLaughs when Haruka realises that with “Naoki Shiina” having vanished, there is now no way for her to resolve her plagiarism accusation.
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* LetHanging: LeftHanging: PlayedForLaughs when Haruka realises that with “Naoki Shiina” having vanished, there is now no way for her to resolve her plagiarism accusation.
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* BadFuture: Shinichi initially assumes this of his counterpart: he’s rich and writes tanka as a hobby.
* BrickJoke: After Haruka explains the reason her manga has two of the same character being that they’re the same person from two different points in time, Kijino chimes in that he thought they were twins. Later, when the parallel world future versions of Haruka and Shinichi appear, Kijino comes to the same assumption.
* BrickJoke: After Haruka explains the reason her manga has two of the same character being that they’re the same person from two different points in time, Kijino chimes in that he thought they were twins. Later, when the parallel world future versions of Haruka and Shinichi appear, Kijino comes to the same assumption.
** Also applies to the past and future Murasame. The latter lack a “mother” and is a lot more stoic and implacable, whereas the current one uses his Mother’s advice to fight.
* LetHanging: PlayedForLaughs when Haruka realises that with “Naoki Shiina” having vanished, there is now no way for her to resolve her plagiarism accusation.
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* WhamEpisode: Naoki Shiina this whole time is Haruka from the future, who used her Kibi-Points to take a temporary leave from the Donbrothers to further her manga career while also having hitched herself to a future version of Shinichi. A glitch in fulfilling her request ended up sending them back to the present time, with a future Don Murasame on her tail for being an anomaly.
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* WhamEpisode: Naoki Shiina this whole time is Haruka from the future, future of a parallel universe, who used her Kibi-Points to take a temporary leave from the Donbrothers to further her manga career while also having hitched herself to a future version of Shinichi. A glitch in fulfilling her request ended up sending them back to the present time, with a future Don Murasame on her tail for being an anomaly.
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* AwfulTruth: Tsuyoshi attempts to ask Future!Shinichi how him and Miho are in the future. [[DramaticIrony Given what we already know of Miho]], Future!Shinichi deems it best that he does not tell Tsuyoshi anything.
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->'''Shinichi:''' Naoki Shiina: the mysterious mangaka who turned my career upside-down.\\
At some point, it became my goal to surpass him...
Haruka attempts to come up with a new story for her manga work, however Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of this, copies of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the future. Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis mangaka ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with them. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
At some point, it became my goal to surpass him...
Haruka attempts to come up with a new story for her manga work, however Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of this, copies of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the future. Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis mangaka ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with them. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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At some point, it became my goal to surpass
Haruka attempts to come up with a new story for her manga work, however Shinichi and the others are unimpressed by it. In the midst of this, copies of the former two appear in front of them, claiming to be from the
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Meanwhile, Tsubasa remembers the one who saved him from the Forest of Slumber was in a rabbit costume. He hears from Haruka that said person is none other than her arch-nemesis mangaka ''Naoki Shiina'', and meets up with them. Just who is Naoki Shiina...!?
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* EmotionsVsStoicism: Taro reveals he doesn't see the point in pursuing dreams and believes it's much more important to deal with the present reality. Future!Shinichi points out this sort of thinking is a large part of why Taro couldn't understand true happiness, which he refuses to accept. He later asks Sonoi about this, and is satiafied when Sonoi admits [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike he feels the same way]] regarding the matter.
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* EmotionsVsStoicism: Taro reveals he doesn't see the point in pursuing dreams and believes it's much more important to deal with the present reality. Future!Shinichi points out this sort of thinking is a large part of why Taro couldn't understand true happiness, which he refuses to accept. He later asks Sonoi about this, and is satiafied satisfied when Sonoi admits [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike he feels the same way]] regarding the matter.
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* FutureBadass: Beyond being a far superior Manga writer to the present Haruka, future Haruka also both is capable of using Omikoshi Pheonix and actually getting a hit on Taro.
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* FutureBadass: Beyond being a far superior Manga writer to the present Haruka, future Haruka also both is capable of using Omikoshi Pheonix Phoenix and actually getting a hit on Taro.