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* WouldHitAGirl: Fong, Zuko, and Iroh all qualify, to different degrees. Fong doesn't actually ''hit'' Katara, but certainly makes it seem like he's prepared to kill her. Zuko ''tries'' to hit Azula but can't manage it, and Iroh ''does'' hit her and knock her into the ocean after redirecting her attempt to blast Zuko with lightning.
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* ImpliedDeathThreat: Azula gives a not-too-suble threat to the ship captain that claims that the tides won't "allow" them to make it to the port town by nightfall. She tells him to worry less about the tides [a natural occurance] that won't hesitate on killing him if he is thrown overboard, and more on the princess [a living person with greater power and authority] who can ''make'' that choice to do so.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Azula's unnerving conversation with her ship's captain about the tides, along with her practicing throwing lightning, establishes her perfectionist streak. Just ''one'' hair out of place is enough to piss her off.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Azula's unnerving conversation with her ship's captain about the tides, tides not being in their favor, along with her practicing throwing lightning, establishes her perfectionist streak. Just ''one'' hair out of place is enough to piss her off.
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* DieOrFly: General Fong tries to force the Avatar State out of Aang by putting Katara into danger.
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--> '''Captain:''' Raise the anchors! We're taking the prisoners home! ''[realizes what he just said in front of Zuko and Iroh, and Azula gives the captain a DeathGlare]'' [[OhCrap Your Highness, I-]]\\
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--> '''Captain:''' Raise the anchors! We're taking the prisoners home! ''[realizes what ''[Realizes he just said called Zuko and Iroh "prisoners" right in front of Zuko and Iroh, them, and Azula gives the captain a DeathGlare]'' [[OhCrap Your Highness, I-]]\\
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--> '''Captain:''' Raise the anchors! We're taking the prisoners home! ''[realizes what he just said in front of Zuko and Iroh, and Azula gives the captain a DeathGlare]'' [[OhCrap Your Highness, I-]]//
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--> '''Captain:''' Raise the anchors! We're taking the prisoners home! ''[realizes what he just said in front of Zuko and Iroh, and Azula gives the captain a DeathGlare]'' [[OhCrap Your Highness, I-]]//I-]]\\
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* FreudianSlip:
--> '''Captain:''' Raise the anchors! We're taking the prisoners home! ''[realizes what he just said in front of Zuko and Iroh, and Azula gives the captain a DeathGlare]'' [[OhCrap Your Highness, I-]]//
''[Cue to Iroh and Zuko fighting back]''
--> '''Captain:''' Raise the anchors! We're taking the prisoners home! ''[realizes what he just said in front of Zuko and Iroh, and Azula gives the captain a DeathGlare]'' [[OhCrap Your Highness, I-]]//
''[Cue to Iroh and Zuko fighting back]''
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''[[caption-width-right:333:"It's time you learned."]]''
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* ParallelConflictSequence: Aang's conflict with General Fong plays out at the same time as Zuko and Iroh’s fight with Azula and her troops.
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* ParallelConflictSequence: Aang's conflict with General Fong plays out at the same time as Zuko and Iroh’s Iroh's fight with Azula and her troops.
