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* AllForNothing:
** The Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot are wiped by a rampaging Luz (sans Emilia), the one they were promised $15 billion if they killed. Even if Kennedy and his alliance ''did'' manage to defeat her, the governor was never gonna pay up, he'd just have them killed too. In fact, [[AllAccordingToPlan he wanted this outcome to happen.]]
** Subverted for Luz. Just as she hits her HeroicRROD and is mortally wounded in front the governor's armed men, its revealed they're the army sent to save her, her friends and have just arrested the ArcVillain.
--> ''Good… then all of what she did wasn’t for nothing…''
** The Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot are wiped by a rampaging Luz (sans Emilia), the one they were promised $15 billion if they killed. Even if Kennedy and his alliance ''did'' manage to defeat her, the governor was never gonna pay up, he'd just have them killed too. In fact, [[AllAccordingToPlan he wanted this outcome to happen.]]
** Subverted for Luz. Just as she hits her HeroicRROD and is mortally wounded in front the governor's armed men, its revealed they're the army sent to save her, her friends and have just arrested the ArcVillain.
--> ''Good… then all of what she did wasn’t for nothing…''
* FriendOrFoe: Luz would've attacked the three men, believing them to be working for the governor, if her body hadn't given out, due to "Quirk Overload". Fortunately, they're on Luz's side and are going to save her and the rest of the teens.
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* HeroicRROD: Fortunately for Luz, she has a strong enough HealingFactor to survive and the soldiers that arrived are there to rescue her.
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* HeroicRROD: Luz has at the climax has gained immense strength and power of 28 Quirks but this amount is more than her body is capable of handling. As she starts to fight some soldiers suddenly a gory stream of blood appears over her diagonally chest. Fortunately for Luz, she has a strong enough HealingFactor to survive and the soldiers that arrived are there to rescue her.
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* MythologyGag: Luz's final move is very similar to the attack All For One used on All Might in their FinalBattle in Kamino Ward, albeit not as powerful. Unlike Shigaraki, this proves successful in killing her target.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Luz's final move is very similar to the attack All For One used on All Might in their FinalBattle in Kamino Ward, albeit not as powerful. Unlike Shigaraki, this proves successful in killing hertarget.target.
** After pushing her body past its limits from "Quirk Overload", Luz's body starts to break down, leaving her with a huge gash across her chest much like Tomura in the anime did after due to him prematurely awakening from his medical procedure.
** Luz's final move is very similar to the attack All For One used on All Might in their FinalBattle in Kamino Ward, albeit not as powerful. Unlike Shigaraki, this proves successful in killing her
** After pushing her body past its limits from "Quirk Overload", Luz's body starts to break down, leaving her with a huge gash across her chest much like Tomura in the anime did after due to him prematurely awakening from his medical procedure.
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* AbilityMixing: Luz usses "Flame" and "Vines" to create flaming whips. And then there's her Finishing move.
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* AbilityMixing: Luz usses uses "Flame" and "Vines" to create flaming whips. And then there's her Finishing move.move.
* AdultsAreUseless: Luz seems to have gained this opinion that anyone who was over the age of 18 is untrustworthy to her. Luckily, its Subverted as the three adults she comes into contact with have come to save her and her friends.
* AgonyOfTheFeet: At the climax of the chapter, Luz proceeds to stab Kennedy in the ankles with "Spear Fingers" to [[YouWillNotEvadeMe prevent him from escaping her wrath.]]
* AdultsAreUseless: Luz seems to have gained this opinion that anyone who was over the age of 18 is untrustworthy to her. Luckily, its Subverted as the three adults she comes into contact with have come to save her and her friends.
* AgonyOfTheFeet: At the climax of the chapter, Luz proceeds to stab Kennedy in the ankles with "Spear Fingers" to [[YouWillNotEvadeMe prevent him from escaping her wrath.]]
--> '''Luz''': ''(QuizzicalTilt)'' '''Oh, Kennedy~! Where the''' '''''[[PrecisionFStrike fuck]]''''' '''do you think''' '''''you’re going!'''''
* BattleAmongstTheFlames: A forest fire breaks out due Luz's fire Quirk and doesn't die down even after the "[[CurbStompBattle battle]]" is over.
* BattleAmongstTheFlames: A forest fire breaks out due Luz's fire Quirk and doesn't die down even after the "[[CurbStompBattle battle]]" is over.
* DeathCryEcho: Kennedy does this before he is killed by Luz.
* FinishingMove: She does one against Kennedy, combining [[SpringCoil Springlike Limbs]], [[MegatonPunch Kinetic Force]], SuperStrength, [[MagicEnhancement Force Multiplier]], [[SuperToughness Shock Absorption]], [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Sword]] and [[CombatTentacles Vines]] into her right arm for a devastating blow to crush Kennedy.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Before she kills her last victim, Luz's body writhed in pain as blood leaks out of her head. Its a sign that the amount she has is more than her body is capable of handling.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Before she kills her last victim, Luz's body writhed in pain as blood leaks out of her head.head, spits out blood and starts coughing on her hands and knees in pain. Its a sign that the amount she has is more than her body is capable of handling.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Downplayed. Luz admits right know the only person she trusts now, besides herself, is Shigaraki, but not that much.
* MilitariesAreUseless: Averted. The soldiers that arrive have arrested the ArcVillain and come to rescue the surviving children of the Death Camp.
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* NearVillainVictory: With nearly all the superpowered teens dead and Luz suffering from a HeroicRODD, Governor Maxwell would've got exactly what he wanted had the military not pulled a BigDamnHeroes and arrest him, while saving the survivors.
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* MythologyGag: Luz's final move is very similar to the attack All For One used on All Might in their FinalBattle in Kamino Ward, albeit not as powerful. Unlike Shigaraki, this proves successful in killing her target.
* NearVillainVictory: With nearly all the superpowered teens dead and Luz suffering from aHeroicRODD, HeroicRROD, Governor Maxwell would've got exactly what he wanted had the military not pulled a BigDamnHeroes and arrest him, while saving the survivors.
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* VillainousRescue: The boy with "Springlike Limbs" sucker punches Luz to get her to release her hold on Darlene who was about to be burned alive. However, it ultimately proves to a SenselessSacrifice as they both die in the end.
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* VillainousRescue: The boy with "Springlike Limbs" sucker punches Luz to get her to release her hold on Darlene who was about to be burned alive. However, it ultimately proves to a SenselessSacrifice as they both die in the end.end to Luz's hands, literally.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Jacob's Quirk is useless for combative situations, but perfect for times when others refused to use their powers.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Jacob's "Forced Power Activation" Quirk is useless for combative situations, but perfect for times when others refused to use their powers.
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* AvengingTheVillain: Luz mocking asks the enmy teams if they want to avenge the two teammates she just killed.
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* AvengingTheVillain: Luz mocking asks the enmy enemy teams if they want to avenge the two teammates she just killed. Daniel and Darelene try. Try being the keyword.
* CastingAShadow: Luz's signature "All For One" Quirk manifests as black lightning when in use.
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* HiddenEyes: Luz has these right before goes on a killing spree.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Darlene does this to Luz but fails to kill her as it misses her vitals and she can HealThyself. After stealing her Quirk, Luz does this to one of her teammates.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Darlene does this to Luz but fails to kill her as it misses her vitals and she can HealThyself. After stealing her Quirk, Luz does this to one of her teammates.teammates, the one with "Forcefield Projection" through the brain.
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* NoSympathy: Luz teams tells the opposing team she has no pity for them after killing her friends.friends.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: Kennedy is the first to notice there was something… off about TheLeader of The Alpha Squadron GainingTheWillToKill. He didn’t know what, and he did '''not''' want to find out.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: Kennedy is the first to notice there was something… off about TheLeader of The Alpha Squadron GainingTheWillToKill. He didn’t know what, and he did '''not''' want to find out.
* PsychoticSmirk: Luz tends to give small, malice-filled grins, similar to Shigaraki.
* VillainousRescue: The boy with "Springlike Limbs" sucker punches Luz to get her to release her hold on Darlene who was about to be burned alive. However, it ultimately proves to a SenselessSacrifice as they both die in the end.
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* AvengingTheVillain: Luz mocking asks the enmy teams if they want to avenge the two teammates she just killed.
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* DeathGlare: Luz's default look through much of the chapter is a scathing glare.
* DeerInTheHeadlights: Kennedy mentally berates his colleagues for doing this.
* DeerInTheHeadlights: Kennedy mentally berates his colleagues for doing this.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Luz finally succeeds in avenging her friends' murders, but she suffers an HeroicRROD as a result of stealing most of their powers.
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* MassOhCrap: The Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot quickly become terrified of the now murderous Luz. They soon regret their previous actions.
* MirthlessLaughing: Luz's bitter laugh fills the air after she killed Thomas.
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* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: Kennedy admits to himself that killing off half of Alpha Squadron was overboard.
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* NearVillainVictory: With nearly all the superpowered teens dead and Luz suffering from a HeroicRODD, Governor Maxwell would've got exactly what he wanted had the military not pulled a BigDamnHeroes and arrest him, while saving the survivors.
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* PetTheDog: In a brief moment of lucid, Luz let's emilia live.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: Luz does this to the groups that murdered her new friends.
* PetTheDog: In a brief moment oflucid, lucidity, Luz let's emilia live.Emilia live.
* PrematurelyGreyHaired: Parts of Luz's hair starts to turn white.
* PetTheDog: In a brief moment of
* PrematurelyGreyHaired: Parts of Luz's hair starts to turn white.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: The entire chapter is Luz going on this.
* SanitySlippage: If it couldn't be any clearer, Luz is definitely going insane due to everything happening in this chapter alone.
* SlasherSmile: Luz does this a lot during her rampage when killing the others teams.
* SmugSnake: Kennedy acts cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way, with his team backing him up outnumbering Luz and barking orders at them. However, he gets easily angry and scared when things start to go south for him. When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to abandon his comrades [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off.
* SanitySlippage: If it couldn't be any clearer, Luz is definitely going insane due to everything happening in this chapter alone.
* SlasherSmile: Luz does this a lot during her rampage when killing the others teams.
* SmugSnake: Kennedy acts cocky and tough when things seem to be going his way, with his team backing him up outnumbering Luz and barking orders at them. However, he gets easily angry and scared when things start to go south for him. When Luz starts wiping out his 22 strong team one-by-one in her BloodLust fuelled RoaringRampageOfRevenge while stealing their Quirks for herself, he has a complete VillainousBreakdown and tries to abandon his comrades [[DirtyCoward to try and save himself]]. He spends his last moments [[VillainsWantMercy begging for his life]], as Luz finishes him off.
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* AbilityMixing: Luz usses "Flame" and "Vines" to create flaming whips. And then there's her Finishing move.
* AwesomeButImpractical: By the end of Chapter 12, Luz had 28 different Quirks she could use for Mass Quirk combinations similar to Shigaraki's 'ultimate combination of Quirks'. However, this far more than her body could handle and ends up suffering a bloody HeroicRROD.
* AxCrazy: Luz is very much this in this chapter.
* AxCrazy: Luz is very much this in this chapter.
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* ContentWarnings: The author gives one before the chapter starts.
--> '''Tropers/DeathlyJazzHands55''': ''A-hem, anywho, before I get too sappy, I want to give everyone a heads-up, plus maybe a content warning…? I mean, if you don’t like excessive violence then this chapter isn’t gonna be for you. ‘Cause, let me tell you… if you’ve ever heard of the term: “Black Air Force Activity”, then you may or may not know what is gonna happen in this chapter.''
* ContentWarnings: The author gives one before the chapter starts.
--> '''Tropers/DeathlyJazzHands55''': ''A-hem, anywho, before I get too sappy, I want to give everyone a heads-up, plus maybe a content warning…? I mean, if you don’t like excessive violence then this chapter isn’t gonna be for you. ‘Cause, let me tell you… if you’ve ever heard of the term: “Black Air Force Activity”, then you may or may not know what is gonna happen in this chapter.''
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* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The 2 teams at the Death Camp target Luz after being promises billions to kill her... she quickly turns the tables on them.
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* LovecraftianSuperpower: When killing Kennedy to avenge Julia's murder, Luz uses a mass combination of Quirks to transform her entire right arm into an elephant leg-sized grotesque sight of hypertrophied flesh, wrapped with thorny vines with blades sticking out, almost similar to what All For One uses to fight All Might in their FinalBattle in the anime.
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* NoNonsenseNemesis: An AntiHero example. Luz prefers to win fights as quickly as possible, going for the kill when seeing her chance to do so, as well as stealing their Quirk.
* NoSympathy: Luz teams the opposing team she has no pity for them after killing her friends.
* PetTheDog: In a brief moment of lucid, Luz let's emilia live.
* NoSympathy: Luz teams the opposing team she has no pity for them after killing her friends.
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* TalkingToThemself: Luz does during her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''Look at what you’re doing!? You’re killing people! T-This isn’t right! N-None of this is right!''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''Who cares if it’s wrong! I know''''' '''exactly''' '''''what I am doing, and that’s giving these''''' '''monsters''' '''''a taste of their own medicine!'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''B-But… their families, w-what about-''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''They should’ve thought about that when they killed our friends. When they killed Julia. When they butchered everyone else.'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''That still doesn’t make it right!''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''It makes it right to us, they were willing to kill us. And besides, we said that this would happen if they did something similar. We’re keeping to the rules we made for our group. Why the sudden change of heart?'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''Two wrongs don’t make a right! Didn’t our mother tell us that!?''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''I don’t give a shit what that bitch taught us. She spat in our faces, betrayed us, kicked us to the curb and left for us to fend for ourselves in this hell hole! NOW BE QUIET!'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''Look at what you’re doing!? You’re killing people! T-This isn’t right! N-None of this is right!''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''Who cares if it’s wrong! I know''''' '''exactly''' '''''what I am doing, and that’s giving these''''' '''monsters''' '''''a taste of their own medicine!'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''B-But… their families, w-what about-''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''They should’ve thought about that when they killed our friends. When they killed Julia. When they butchered everyone else.'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''That still doesn’t make it right!''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''It makes it right to us, they were willing to kill us. And besides, we said that this would happen if they did something similar. We’re keeping to the rules we made for our group. Why the sudden change of heart?'''''
--> '''Rational!Luz''': ''Two wrongs don’t make a right! Didn’t our mother tell us that!?''
--> '''Angry!Luz''': '''''I don’t give a shit what that bitch taught us. She spat in our faces, betrayed us, kicked us to the curb and left for us to fend for ourselves in this hell hole! NOW BE QUIET!'''''
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Luz spews blood as she experiences "Quirk Overload".
* TheCavalryArrivesLate: Had only the army arrived 2 days earlier, perhaps all 33 lives of the Death Camp could've been spared a grisly fate
* CynicismCatalyst: As Luz is about to kill Kennedy, the last victim of her carnage, she tells the boy that because him she's lost her faith in other people and would've preferred it if they all worked together to take down the ArcVillain instead.
--> '''Luz''': '''''And here I thought diplomacy would’ve worked… My faith in humanity plummeted when I got here, but maybe, just maybe you and the other team would’ve been more humane than the bastard running this cruel joke. Guess I was wrong.'''''
--> '''Luz''': '''''And here I thought diplomacy would’ve worked… My faith in humanity plummeted when I got here, but maybe, just maybe you and the other team would’ve been more humane than the bastard running this cruel joke. Guess I was wrong.'''''
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Before she kills her last victim, Luz's body writhed in pain as blood leaks out of her head. Its a sign that the amount she has is more than her body is capable of handling.
* HeroicRROD: Fortunately for Luz, she has a strong enough HealingFactor to survive and the soldiers that arrived are there to rescue her.
--> ''As she went to use the power, however, for a split second, her body writhed in pain.''
--> ''As she went to use the power, however, for a split second, her body writhed in pain.''
* ItGetsEasier: It becomes more jarring as Luz finds it to be easy when it comes to killing, to the point with a SlasherSmile she ''enjoys'' the act of taking their lives.
* MookHorrorShow: Luz puts the Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot alliance through this.
---> '''Narrator:''' ''Catch, kill, steal, repeat. Ignore their pain, ignore their suffering. It was not worth her time to hear it. They brought this unto themselves. She knew it, they knew it, so why bother trying to change it? This was their fate, to die by'' her ''hand, and she was damn well gonna follow through with it. No more begging, no more pleading, none of it. This was'' her ''playground, and everyone else was fodder.''
---> '''Narrator:''' ''Catch, kill, steal, repeat. Ignore their pain, ignore their suffering. It was not worth her time to hear it. They brought this unto themselves. She knew it, they knew it, so why bother trying to change it? This was their fate, to die by'' her ''hand, and she was damn well gonna follow through with it. No more begging, no more pleading, none of it. This was'' her ''playground, and everyone else was fodder.''
* RevengeBeforeReason: Part of herself realises she could stop her rampage and try escape the Death Camp with all her new Quirks. Instead Luz carries on with her MookHorrorShow until all but one is dead and she suffers a HeroicRROD, nearly killing her.
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* VillainsWantMercy: Kennedy, the ringleader of the massacre, does this when he's when Luz is about to kill him in chapter 12. He gets no mercy.
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* VillainousFaceHold: A rare AntiHero version, done by Luz to Emilia enquiring on why she should let her live.
* VillainsWantMercy: Kennedy, the ringleader of the Alpha Squadron massacre, does this when he's when Luz is about to kill him in chapter 12. He gets nomercy.mercy what so ever.
* VillainsWantMercy: Kennedy, the ringleader of the Alpha Squadron massacre, does this when he's when Luz is about to kill him in chapter 12. He gets no
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* AintTooProudToBeg: Emilia does this to Luz during her RoaringRampageOfRevenge claiming she didn't personally kill anyone and was never on board with the slaughter of Luz's team in the first place. Fortunately for the former leader, Luz believes her and lets her escape with her life.
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* AuthorityInNameOnly: Emilia admits she became this after a coup happened in her own team as they wanted to go along with Kennedy's plan to wipe out The Alpha Squadron.
* TheCavalry: The three soldiers that Luz encounters at the end of the chapter are part of the military that came here to rescue her and her surviving friends, as well as have Governor Rodger Maxwell in their custody to answer for his crimes.
* CurbStompBattle: Throughout the chapter , the "fight" between Luz and the 20 other Quirk users of the enemy teams is very one-sided in the former's favor with only one escaping with her life because Luz let her. No wonder it would be called "The Massacre Of Fools"
* TheCavalry: The three soldiers that Luz encounters at the end of the chapter are part of the military that came here to rescue her and her surviving friends, as well as have Governor Rodger Maxwell in their custody to answer for his crimes.
* CurbStompBattle: Throughout the chapter , the "fight" between Luz and the 20 other Quirk users of the enemy teams is very one-sided in the former's favor with only one escaping with her life because Luz let her. No wonder it would be called "The Massacre Of Fools"
* DarkActionGirl: Luz... You really are an otter with a darkside...
* DissonantSerenity: Luz is only mildly grossed out after ripping out Daniels's heart and crushing it, before taunting his comrades like a GigglingVillain.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Emilia claims to be the only one out the 2 enemy teams that wanted nothing to do with billions offered by the AntagonisticGovernor.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Emilia claims to be the only one out the 2 enemy teams that wanted nothing to do with billions offered by the AntagonisticGovernor.
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* HeadCrushing: Nearly all of Luz's kills involve doing this with her SuperStrength, they're quick but brutal ends.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Kennedy believes that having half of Luz's team killed on his orders was just playing the rules of the DeadlyGame that they were in, even if he admits it was overboard. Yet, he AintTooProudToBeg in he's at Luz's mercy. He also mentally berates his comrades for being too scared to fight Luz, despite the fact he doesn't either.
* {{Hypocrite}}: Kennedy believes that having half of Luz's team killed on his orders was just playing the rules of the DeadlyGame that they were in, even if he admits it was overboard. Yet, he AintTooProudToBeg in he's at Luz's mercy. He also mentally berates his comrades for being too scared to fight Luz, despite the fact he doesn't either.
* MadnessMantra: Emilia keeps saying "I'm sorry" over and over, while cowering to Luz to get her to spare her life. The All For One user let's her live to successfully pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere.
* NoBodyLeftBehind: Luz uses her [[PlayingWithFire Flame Quirk]] to reduce Thomas's corpse to ashes.
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* ThisCannotBe: The nemy alliance has this reaction when Luz starts killing off their teams one-by-one.
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--> '''[[TranquilFury Luz]]''': ''(RedEyesTakeWarning)'' '''I have no sympathy for cruel, heartless monsters such as yourselves.''' ''(PowerEchoes)'' '''The moment you came here and needlessly slaughtered my friends… Your powers…. ''Your lives… they became forfeit''.'''
* SoleSurvivor: Emilia's the only one to survive Luz's RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* ThisCannotBe: Thenemy enemy alliance has this reaction when Luz starts killing off their teams one-by-one.one-by-one.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Emilia was never on board with killing anyone in the first place unlike her teammates.
* SoleSurvivor: Emilia's the only one to survive Luz's RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* ThisCannotBe: The
* TokenGoodTeammate: Emilia was never on board with killing anyone in the first place unlike her teammates.
--> '''[[DirtyCoward Kennedy]]''': [[VillainsWantMercy N-No! P-Please!]] [[PleaseIWillDoAnything I-I-I’ll do anything! Anything at all!]] [[AintTooProudToBeg J-Just please, please don’t kill me]]!
--> '''Luz''': '''Funny… I bet that’s what Julia said, too. [[ThisIsUnforgivable Then you killed her and desecrated her corpse with that power of yours]]. [[ThePoorlyChosenOne A power you don’t deserve…]] And while I’d normally take it like I did everyone else's, yours revolts me. [[PreMortemOneLiner So, keep your power… it’s not like you’ll be using it for much longer, anyway]].'''
--> '''Luz''': '''Funny… I bet that’s what Julia said, too. [[ThisIsUnforgivable Then you killed her and desecrated her corpse with that power of yours]]. [[ThePoorlyChosenOne A power you don’t deserve…]] And while I’d normally take it like I did everyone else's, yours revolts me. [[PreMortemOneLiner So, keep your power… it’s not like you’ll be using it for much longer, anyway]].'''
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* YouWillBeSpared: After hearing her apologise over and over, as well as seeing no falsehood in her words, Luz decides to leave Emilia as the SoleSurvivor of her carnage.
* YourHeadAsplode: The ultimate fate of many foes at Luz's literalhands.hands.
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!S1 - Ep 12: The Hunt Begins - Part 2
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Luz goes on a rampage on her friends killers.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* AndShowItToYou: Luz kills Daniel by ripping out his still beating heart and crushes it with her bare hands, then she steals his Quirk.
* CurbStompBattle: Throughout the chapter , the "fight" between Luz and the 20 other Quirk users of the enemy teams is very one-sided in the former's favor with only one escaping with her life because Luz let her.
--> ''To call what happened next a “battle” would be like calling the initial beginnings of D-Day to be a siege.''
* DirtyCoward: When the Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot realize Luz, their target, is more powerful than expected, most try to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere. They don't get far.
* FreudianExcuse: Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and killing Luz for the governor was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all.]]
* {{Hypocrite}}: Kennedy believes that having half of Luz's team killed on his orders was just playing the rules of the DeadlyGame that they were in, even if he admits it was overboard. Yet, he AintTooProudToBeg in he's at Luz's mercy.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Darlene does this to Luz but fails to kill her as it misses her vitals and she can HealThyself. After stealing her Quirk, Luz does this to one of her teammates.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Darlene gets her wrists broken by Luz when using [[GreenThumb Vines]], which was originally Julia's Quirk, who she killed.
* LeeroyJenkins: Daniel tries to do this on Luz after witnessing her kill Thomas... Unfortunately for him, the leader of The Alpha Squadron is able to NoSell it with her SuperToughness.
* MagicEnhancement: Daniel's power "Force Multiplier" triples the impact of whatever it was he touched or ran into.
* MuggingTheMonster: Kennedy believed with 20 other powered kids backing him up that Luz would be easy pickings. They're all proven to be ''very'' wrong.
* PreMortemOneLiner: Luz gives a chilling one before she goes on her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* ThisCannotBe: The nemy alliance has this reaction when Luz starts killing off their teams one-by-one.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: Kennedy honestly thought he and his entire team could still take down Luz when she revealed herself to be a PowerParasite that has been GainingTheWillToKill. The CurbStompBattle ends in a near TotalPartyKill with him not being the SoleSurvivor.
* VillainsWantMercy: Kennedy, the ringleader of the massacre, does this when he's when Luz is about to kill him in chapter 12. He gets no mercy.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Jacob's Quirk is useless for combative situations, but perfect for times when others refused to use their powers.
* YourHeadAsplode: The ultimate fate of many foes at Luz's literal hands.
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Luz goes on a rampage on her friends killers.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* AndShowItToYou: Luz kills Daniel by ripping out his still beating heart and crushes it with her bare hands, then she steals his Quirk.
* CurbStompBattle: Throughout the chapter , the "fight" between Luz and the 20 other Quirk users of the enemy teams is very one-sided in the former's favor with only one escaping with her life because Luz let her.
--> ''To call what happened next a “battle” would be like calling the initial beginnings of D-Day to be a siege.''
* DirtyCoward: When the Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot realize Luz, their target, is more powerful than expected, most try to pull a ScrewThisImOuttaHere. They don't get far.
* FreudianExcuse: Kennedy claims his family is dirt-poor, barely surviving off of scraps, and killing Luz for the governor was the perfect opportunity for a GetRichQuickScheme. [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse This doesn't justify his actions at all.]]
* {{Hypocrite}}: Kennedy believes that having half of Luz's team killed on his orders was just playing the rules of the DeadlyGame that they were in, even if he admits it was overboard. Yet, he AintTooProudToBeg in he's at Luz's mercy.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Darlene does this to Luz but fails to kill her as it misses her vitals and she can HealThyself. After stealing her Quirk, Luz does this to one of her teammates.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Darlene gets her wrists broken by Luz when using [[GreenThumb Vines]], which was originally Julia's Quirk, who she killed.
* LeeroyJenkins: Daniel tries to do this on Luz after witnessing her kill Thomas... Unfortunately for him, the leader of The Alpha Squadron is able to NoSell it with her SuperToughness.
* MagicEnhancement: Daniel's power "Force Multiplier" triples the impact of whatever it was he touched or ran into.
* MuggingTheMonster: Kennedy believed with 20 other powered kids backing him up that Luz would be easy pickings. They're all proven to be ''very'' wrong.
* PreMortemOneLiner: Luz gives a chilling one before she goes on her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* ThisCannotBe: The nemy alliance has this reaction when Luz starts killing off their teams one-by-one.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: Kennedy honestly thought he and his entire team could still take down Luz when she revealed herself to be a PowerParasite that has been GainingTheWillToKill. The CurbStompBattle ends in a near TotalPartyKill with him not being the SoleSurvivor.
* VillainsWantMercy: Kennedy, the ringleader of the massacre, does this when he's when Luz is about to kill him in chapter 12. He gets no mercy.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Jacob's Quirk is useless for combative situations, but perfect for times when others refused to use their powers.
* YourHeadAsplode: The ultimate fate of many foes at Luz's literal hands.
