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On the morning she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, Luz finds little holes in the palms of her hands While Luz is fascinated by it, when she shows them to her mother, Camila is alarmed and immediately takes her to a hospital. There, Luz witnesses people around her age beginning to develop superpowers like herself. Luz Noceda's is seemingly useless, giving her holes in her hands and the ability to see black strings above other superhumans that are invisible to others.
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In one world, a villain is put down by a hero. On the morning another, when she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, Luz finds little holes in the palms of her hands While Luz is fascinated by it, when she shows them to her mother, Camila is alarmed and immediately takes her to a hospital. There, Luz witnesses people around her age beginning to develop superpowers like herself. Luz Noceda's is seemingly useless, giving her holes in her hands and the ability to see black strings above other superhumans that are invisible to others.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Unlike his canon counterpart, this version of All Might was able to put down All For One in their fight where he was severely injured.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: All For One coughs blood before he dies to All Might.
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* DefiantToTheEnd: All For One laughs at All Might telling him he'll be back to destroy everything he loves, before the Symbol of Peace kills him.
--> '''Rikitasu''': Did... I... really? Ehehe... no... I did not lose... I will live on... In a different place... In a different time... I have supporters in places you could ''never'' reach... You... have not won this day... You will ''never'' win...
* DieLaughing: All For One does this before being killed by All Might.
* EvilSoundsDeep: All For One's voice is described by All Might as deep and baritone like a true demon.
--> '''Rikitasu''': Did... I... really? Ehehe... no... I did not lose... I will live on... In a different place... In a different time... I have supporters in places you could ''never'' reach... You... have not won this day... You will ''never'' win...
* DieLaughing: All For One does this before being killed by All Might.
* EvilSoundsDeep: All For One's voice is described by All Might as deep and baritone like a true demon.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: All Might proved this when he killed All For One.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: All Might's injury was caused by All For One's Spearlike Bone in their Final Battle.
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* KilledMidSentence: This happens to him before All Might puts him down.
--> '''Rikitasu''': Oh... you'll see soon enough.... I '''will''' return. And when I do... it will not be in a form you recognize. And when I find you.... '''''I will kill everyone you ever loved. I will paint this world red with your blood! I will make sure that everything you ever cared about will be destroyed. I. WILL. COME. BAC-'''''
--> '''Rikitasu''': Oh... you'll see soon enough.... I '''will''' return. And when I do... it will not be in a form you recognize. And when I find you.... '''''I will kill everyone you ever loved. I will paint this world red with your blood! I will make sure that everything you ever cared about will be destroyed. I. WILL. COME. BAC-'''''
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: All Might's fight with All For One destroyed an entire city with many casualties caught in the crossfire.
* PyrrhicVictory: While All Might managed to kill All For One, not only does he receive is canon CareerEndingInjury but a whole city was destroyed in the process with numerous deaths caused in the process.
* ShutUpHannibal: All Might's response to All For One's WeWillMeetAgain speech and EvilLaugh is to completely crush his skull completely, killing him.
* PyrrhicVictory: While All Might managed to kill All For One, not only does he receive is canon CareerEndingInjury but a whole city was destroyed in the process with numerous deaths caused in the process.
* ShutUpHannibal: All Might's response to All For One's WeWillMeetAgain speech and EvilLaugh is to completely crush his skull completely, killing him.
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* TalkToTheFist: All For One is KilledMidSentence by All Might's punch while monologing.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: While All Might knows he had to kill All For One, he couldn't help but feel had been played, like villain planned for his demise.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: While All Might knows he had to kill All For One, he couldn't help but feel had been played, like villain planned for his demise.
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* YourHeadAsplode: How All For One dies courtesy of All Might.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 HERE]]-]
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-->[-Platform/FanfictionNet: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14146275/1/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia HERE]]-]
-->[-Platform/{{Wattpad}}: [[https://www.wattpad.com/1275848735-all-for-luz-the-owl-house-x-mha-s1-ep-1-luz-noceda HERE]]-]
-->[-Quotev: [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15248168/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia/1 HERE]]-]
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* MythologyGag: The Quirk that Camila's friend's son has been described as [[PlayingWithFire Fire]] [[SuperBreath Breath]], the same power as Izuku's father.
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-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 HERE]]-]
-->[-Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn: [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 HERE]]-]
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** Mamá! Por favor ''(Mother! Please)''
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** Mamá! Por favor favor! ''(Mother! Please)''Please!)''
** ¡Espera, mamá! ''(Wait Mom!)''
** ¿De donde viene esto? ''(Where does this come from?)''
** Te quiero, Luz. ''(I love you, Luz.)''
** ¿De donde viene esto? ''(Where does this come from?)''
** Te quiero, Luz. ''(I love you, Luz.)''
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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of children, mostly aged 12-5, across the globe developing powers, including Luz herself.
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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of children, mostly aged 12-5, 12-15, across the globe developing powers, including Luz herself.
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* ParentsAsPeople: Luz's mother is trying to keep her daughter from being expelled. She thinks the best solution is to dissuade Luz from burying herself in fantasy and sending her to Reality Check Summer Camp to mellow her and make some friends there.
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* BilingualBonus: Luz and Camila often speak Spanish. Translations below.
** Ahora tienes catorce años, Luz. Empieza a actuar según tu edad! ''(You are fourteen years old now, Luz. Start acting your age!)''
** Mamá! Por favor ''(Mother! Please)''
** ¡Oh Dios mío! ''(Oh my God!)''
* BreathWeapon: Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son can [[PlayingWithFire breathe fire]].
** Ahora tienes catorce años, Luz. Empieza a actuar según tu edad! ''(You are fourteen years old now, Luz. Start acting your age!)''
** Mamá! Por favor ''(Mother! Please)''
** ¡Oh Dios mío! ''(Oh my God!)''
* BreathWeapon: Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son can [[PlayingWithFire breathe fire]].
* GratuitousSpanish: Luz and Camila often slip into this from time-to-time.
* ImmigrantParents: Camila is mentioned to be an immigrant from The Dominican Republic of Spain.
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* TakeThat: Tucker Carlson on Fox News was freaking out, saying the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent is some sort of secret conspiracy.
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* TakeThat: Tucker Carlson on Fox News was freaking out, saying the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent is some sort of [[ConspiracyTheorist secret conspiracy.conspiracy]].
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* AuraVision: Luz's power includes the ability to see black strings above the heads of other superhumans that are invisible to others.
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* AuraVision: Luz's power includes the ability to see black strings above the heads of other superhumans that are invisible to others. Touching them causes small sparks.
* FishPeople: Downplayed. Some of the kids at the hospital have gills on their necks.
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* {{Irony}}: The day that Luz was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp is the day of a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent. After being told all her life separate fantasy from reality, the two have now blended together. [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight She feels more than a bit smug about the situation]].
* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of children across the globe developing powers, including Luz.
* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of children across the globe developing powers, including Luz.
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* {{Irony}}: The day that Luz was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp is the day of a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent. After being told all her life separate fantasy from reality, the two have now blended together. together [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight She feels more than a bit smug about the situation]].
--> '''Luz''': ''Suck it, crappy teachers! 1 point for Luz, 0 points for restrictive school!''
* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands ofchildren children, mostly aged 12-5, across the globe developing powers, including Luz.Luz herself.
--> '''Luz''': ''Suck it, crappy teachers! 1 point for Luz, 0 points for restrictive school!''
* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of
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* TakeThat: Tucker Carlson on Fox News was freaking out, saying the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent is some sort of secret conspiracy.
* YankTheDogsChain: Because of the strange anomalies caused by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, Luz entertains the idea that the summer camp going from being delayed to being cancelled, due to what was going on. Camila tells her its just being delayed untiltomorrow.tomorrow and she already paid the $250 for her admission.
-->'''Luz''': ''1 point for dull and crappy camp. 0 points to Luz Noceda…. Crap.''
* YankTheDogsChain: Because of the strange anomalies caused by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, Luz entertains the idea that the summer camp going from being delayed to being cancelled, due to what was going on. Camila tells her its just being delayed until
-->'''Luz''': ''1 point for dull and crappy camp. 0 points to Luz Noceda…. Crap.''
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* AdaptationDeviation: Because she gained holes in her palms from the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent on the day she was supposed to go to Reality Check Camp, Luz's mother takes her to the hospital to get looked at. Meaning Owlbert doesn't steal her Azura book and she ends up in the Demon Realm as in canon.
* AuraVision: Luz's power includes the ability to see black strings above the heads of other superhumans that are invisible to others.
* CassandraTruth: When Luz tries to tell her mother she's got holes in her hands, Camila initially believes she just drew them on and tells her to clean them off. Its only after being clean with a cloth and could feel the holes does realise her daughter is telling the truth.
* AnIcePerson: A few kids at the hospital could form ice on their hands.
* AuraVision: Luz's power includes the ability to see black strings above the heads of other superhumans that are invisible to others.
* CassandraTruth: When Luz tries to tell her mother she's got holes in her hands, Camila initially believes she just drew them on and tells her to clean them off. Its only after being clean with a cloth and could feel the holes does realise her daughter is telling the truth.
* AnIcePerson: A few kids at the hospital could form ice on their hands.
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* NotAHyperbole: When Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son is breathing fire over the phone she thinks she’s just being hysterical, Turns out a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent just happened.
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* NotAHyperbole: MindOverMatter: There are a few children at the hospital that can make things float with their minds. This makes them excited and and their parents worried.
* NotHyperbole: When Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son is breathing fire over the phone she thinks she’s just beinghysterical, hysterical. Turns out a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent just happened.happened.
* YankTheDogsChain: Because of the strange anomalies caused by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, Luz entertains the idea that the summer camp going from being delayed to being cancelled, due to what was going on. Camila tells her its just being delayed until tomorrow.
* NotHyperbole: When Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son is breathing fire over the phone she thinks she’s just being
* YankTheDogsChain: Because of the strange anomalies caused by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, Luz entertains the idea that the summer camp going from being delayed to being cancelled, due to what was going on. Camila tells her its just being delayed until tomorrow.
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On the morning she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, Luz finds little holes in the palms of her hands While Luz is fascinated by it, when she shows them to her mother, Camila is alarmed and immediately takes her to a hospital. There, Luz witnesses people around her age beginning to develop superpowers like herself. Luz Noceda's is seemingly useless, giving her holes in her hands and the ability to see black strings above other superhumans that are invisible to others.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* {{Irony}}: The day that Luz was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp is the day of a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent. After being told all her life separate fantasy from reality, the two have now blended together. [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight She feels more than a bit smug about the situation]].
* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of children across the globe developing powers, including Luz.
* NotAHyperbole: When Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son is breathing fire over the phone she thinks she’s just being hysterical, Turns out a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent just happened.
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On the morning she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, Luz finds little holes in the palms of her hands While Luz is fascinated by it, when she shows them to her mother, Camila is alarmed and immediately takes her to a hospital. There, Luz witnesses people around her age beginning to develop superpowers like herself. Luz Noceda's is seemingly useless, giving her holes in her hands and the ability to see black strings above other superhumans that are invisible to others.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* {{Irony}}: The day that Luz was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp is the day of a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent. After being told all her life separate fantasy from reality, the two have now blended together. [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight She feels more than a bit smug about the situation]].
* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The story starts with Luz's world going through a "Quirk Awakening", with thousands of children across the globe developing powers, including Luz.
* NotAHyperbole: When Camila's friend, Racheal, tells her that her son is breathing fire over the phone she thinks she’s just being hysterical, Turns out a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent just happened.
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