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-->''“I gasped, sucking in air as I did."''
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-->''“I gasped, sucking in air as I did."''"''
-->''"If you're [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld as old as you say]]... shouldn't you already be in college ?"''
-->''"If you're [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld as old as you say]]... shouldn't you already be in college ?"''
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-->''“How can this be real?” I whispered. “I mean you... you... where you come from. Your world. It is so beyond everything I've ever known. And you would... you would take me to the Pumpkin Ball?” “Try and stop me.”''
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-->''“How can this be real?” I whispered. “I mean you... you... where you come from. Your world. It is so beyond everything I've ever known. And you would... you would take me to the Pumpkin Ball?” “Try and stop me.”''”''
-->''“I gasped, sucking in air as I did."''
-->''“I gasped, sucking in air as I did."''
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-->''“Just kill me. My life is nothing without you. Drive me mad. Let me be your sustenance. Eat my soul. You’re… you’re tearing me apart!”''
-->''“Riley Bay wasn’t human. But if he wasn’t human, then what was he? An alien, sent to Earth to learn about humanity in preparation for an invasion? Riley was certainly weird enough to be an alien, but I didn’t see why the mother ship would send him to Portsmouth, Rhode Island, in the guise of a high schooler.”''
-->''“There was something very fishy about Riley Bay.”''
-->''“He looked at me the way you’d look at a poodle that suddenly started reciting Hamlet.”''
-->''“How can this be real?” I whispered. “I mean you... you... where you come from. Your world. It is so beyond everything I've ever known. And you would... you would take me to the Pumpkin Ball?” “Try and stop me.”''
-->''“Riley Bay wasn’t human. But if he wasn’t human, then what was he? An alien, sent to Earth to learn about humanity in preparation for an invasion? Riley was certainly weird enough to be an alien, but I didn’t see why the mother ship would send him to Portsmouth, Rhode Island, in the guise of a high schooler.”''
-->''“There was something very fishy about Riley Bay.”''
-->''“He looked at me the way you’d look at a poodle that suddenly started reciting Hamlet.”''
-->''“How can this be real?” I whispered. “I mean you... you... where you come from. Your world. It is so beyond everything I've ever known. And you would... you would take me to the Pumpkin Ball?” “Try and stop me.”''
