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->'''Izzy ''(with a wink)'':''' Now '''l'''ook, you '''l'''ame '''l'''ittle loser, I’'''ll''' a'''ll'''ow that I '''l'''ike to '''l'''et '''l'''oose a '''l'''ong a'''ll'''iterative '''l'''ine as we'''ll''' as anyone, but just because this is supposed to be a kid’s show doesn’t mean we need to turn it into a Creator/DrSeuss routine. But if '''L'''ady '''L'''uck '''l'''ikes you, and you '''l'''ive through the ‘'''l'''ife in the ba'''l'''ance’ '''l'''eap and '''L'''eech '''L'''ake’s '''l'''egendary '''l'''ampreys don’t '''l'''unch a'''ll''' your scar'''l'''et '''l'''ife '''l'''iquid and '''l'''ap up the '''l'''ast of your '''l'''ymph, you’'''ll''' '''l'''augh '''l'''ast, ‘cause I’'''ll''' '''l'''et you a'''ll'''iterate as '''l'''ong as you '''l'''ike.”
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->'''Izzy ''(with a wink)'':''' ''[winking]'':''' Now '''l'''ook, you '''l'''ame '''l'''ittle loser, I’'''ll''' a'''ll'''ow that I '''l'''ike to '''l'''et '''l'''oose a '''l'''ong a'''ll'''iterative '''l'''ine as we'''ll''' as anyone, but just because this is supposed to be a kid’s show doesn’t mean we need to turn it into a Creator/DrSeuss routine. But if '''L'''ady '''L'''uck '''l'''ikes you, and you '''l'''ive through the ‘'''l'''ife in the ba'''l'''ance’ '''l'''eap and '''L'''eech '''L'''ake’s '''l'''egendary '''l'''ampreys don’t '''l'''unch a'''ll''' your scar'''l'''et '''l'''ife '''l'''iquid and '''l'''ap up the '''l'''ast of your '''l'''ymph, you’'''ll''' '''l'''augh '''l'''ast, ‘cause I’'''ll''' '''l'''et you a'''ll'''iterate as '''l'''ong as you '''l'''ike.”
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-->[-Return to the main page [[FanFic/TheLegendOfTotalDramaIsland HERE]]-]HERE]]-]
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-->'''''--alliteration "duel"''' from "The Tale of the First Challenge"''
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-->'''''--alliteration "duel"''' from "The Tale of the First Challenge"''
Challenge"'' (boldface added)
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-->'''''Noah's RousingSpeech, based on the [[Theatre/HenryV St. Crispin's Day]] speech''', from "The Tale of the Dodgeball Match"''
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->'''Izzy ''(with a wink)'':''' Now '''l'''ook, you '''l'''ame '''l'''ittle loser, I’'''ll''' a'''ll'''ow that I '''l'''ike to '''l'''et '''l'''oose a '''l'''ong a'''ll'''iterative '''l'''ine as we'''ll''' as anyone, but just because this is supposed to be a kid’s show doesn’t mean we need to turn it into a Dr. Seuss routine. But if '''L'''ady '''L'''uck '''l'''ikes you, and you '''l'''ive through the ‘'''l'''ife in the ba'''l'''ance’ '''l'''eap and '''L'''eech '''L'''ake’s '''l'''egendary '''l'''ampreys don’t '''l'''unch a'''ll''' your scar'''l'''et '''l'''ife '''l'''iquid and '''l'''ap up the '''l'''ast of your '''l'''ymph, you’'''ll''' '''l'''augh '''l'''ast, ‘cause I’'''ll''' '''l'''et you a'''ll'''iterate as '''l'''ong as you '''l'''ike.”
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->'''Izzy ''(with a wink)'':''' Now '''l'''ook, you '''l'''ame '''l'''ittle loser, I’'''ll''' a'''ll'''ow that I '''l'''ike to '''l'''et '''l'''oose a '''l'''ong a'''ll'''iterative '''l'''ine as we'''ll''' as anyone, but just because this is supposed to be a kid’s show doesn’t mean we need to turn it into a Dr. Seuss Creator/DrSeuss routine. But if '''L'''ady '''L'''uck '''l'''ikes you, and you '''l'''ive through the ‘'''l'''ife in the ba'''l'''ance’ '''l'''eap and '''L'''eech '''L'''ake’s '''l'''egendary '''l'''ampreys don’t '''l'''unch a'''ll''' your scar'''l'''et '''l'''ife '''l'''iquid and '''l'''ap up the '''l'''ast of your '''l'''ymph, you’'''ll''' '''l'''augh '''l'''ast, ‘cause I’'''ll''' '''l'''et you a'''ll'''iterate as '''l'''ong as you '''l'''ike.”
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--->'''''--alliteration "duel"''' from "The Tale of the First Challenge"''
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->'''Noah:''' But why bother stocking the lake with sharks? Wouldn’t it have been a '''l'''ot '''l'''ess '''l'''abor to just '''l'''et a '''l'''uck'''l'''ess '''l'''eaper '''l'''ive with the '''l'''ike'''l'''ihood of '''l'''eaving the '''l'''and of the '''l'''iving as a '''l'''ight '''l'''unch for those a'''ll'''eged'''l'''y '''l'''egendari'''l'''y '''l'''arge '''L'''eech '''L'''ake '''l'''ampreys? Oh, si'''ll'''y me, it’s not '''l'''ike they’re actua'''ll'''y rea'''l''', '''L'''O'''L'''.
->'''Izzy ''(with a wink)'':''' Now '''l'''ook, you '''l'''ame '''l'''ittle loser, I’'''ll''' a'''ll'''ow that I '''l'''ike to '''l'''et '''l'''oose a '''l'''ong a'''ll'''iterative '''l'''ine as we'''ll''' as anyone, but just because this is supposed to be a kid’s show doesn’t mean we need to turn it into a Dr. Seuss routine. But if '''L'''ady '''L'''uck '''l'''ikes you, and you '''l'''ive through the ‘'''l'''ife in the ba'''l'''ance’ '''l'''eap and '''L'''eech '''L'''ake’s '''l'''egendary '''l'''ampreys don’t '''l'''unch a'''ll''' your scar'''l'''et '''l'''ife '''l'''iquid and '''l'''ap up the '''l'''ast of your '''l'''ymph, you’'''ll''' '''l'''augh '''l'''ast, ‘cause I’'''ll''' '''l'''et you a'''ll'''iterate as '''l'''ong as you '''l'''ike.”
->'''Chris:''' Okay, bro and bra, it’s not '''l'''ike I wouldn’t '''l'''ove to '''l'''isten to your '''l'''itt'''l'''e a'''ll'''iter-off, but we’re on a schedu'''l'''e.
--->'''''--alliteration "duel"''' from "The Tale of the First Challenge"''
->That may not be if we’re to win this fight.
->To seize the day against their greater power,
->We cannot let out talents be misspent.
->If you would lead this team, then lead us not
->From the rear, nor hold aloof from battle;
->But rather, lead us boldly at the fore.
->Your strength of arm says that your place is there.
->And you are fresh—and that could turn the tide.
->My flesh is weak. My brain—now that’s my strength.
->You said yourself, the coach’s place is not
->Upon the field, so let me serve us here
->As he who thinks for us but cannot act.
->And with our purpose thus as one, then let
->The nation gape in awe and wonderment
->As it beholds the marvels we have wrought
->And yet shall do before this day is done.
->In times to come, when people talk about
->This day and how we earned our fame and honor,
->Whether as gloried victors or as valiant
->Vanquished, we shall recall our deeds of yore.
->Then we will bare our arm or breast and say,
->‘These wounds I got that fateful day as we,
->Upon the court on Wawanakwa’s isle,
->We band of brothers faced our foe who thought
->It not too prideful to deem us not their match.
->Nor did the world think it wrong to judge us so.
->And yet the way we fought and persevered
->Poured us the cup of fame we now enjoy.’
->Then will the Eagles names come gladly for
->Our lips to savor: Heather the Queen, Justin
->The brave; Katie, Sadie, the yin and yang;
->The wily Cody, the bold [=LeShawna=],
->And Trent and Gwen and Lindsay and Noah.
->Then men will say our fame was fairly earned,
->And women tell their children on their knees
->The tale of how we fought on Dodgeball Day.
--->'''''Noah's RousingSpeech, based on the [[Theatre/HenryV St. Crispin's Day]] speech''', from "The Tale of the Dodgeball Match"''
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-->[-Return to the main page [[FanFic/TheLegendOfTotalDramaIsland HERE]]-]
->'''Izzy ''(with a wink)'':''' Now '''l'''ook, you '''l'''ame '''l'''ittle loser, I’'''ll''' a'''ll'''ow that I '''l'''ike to '''l'''et '''l'''oose a '''l'''ong a'''ll'''iterative '''l'''ine as we'''ll''' as anyone, but just because this is supposed to be a kid’s show doesn’t mean we need to turn it into a Dr. Seuss routine. But if '''L'''ady '''L'''uck '''l'''ikes you, and you '''l'''ive through the ‘'''l'''ife in the ba'''l'''ance’ '''l'''eap and '''L'''eech '''L'''ake’s '''l'''egendary '''l'''ampreys don’t '''l'''unch a'''ll''' your scar'''l'''et '''l'''ife '''l'''iquid and '''l'''ap up the '''l'''ast of your '''l'''ymph, you’'''ll''' '''l'''augh '''l'''ast, ‘cause I’'''ll''' '''l'''et you a'''ll'''iterate as '''l'''ong as you '''l'''ike.”
->'''Chris:''' Okay, bro and bra, it’s not '''l'''ike I wouldn’t '''l'''ove to '''l'''isten to your '''l'''itt'''l'''e a'''ll'''iter-off, but we’re on a schedu'''l'''e.
--->'''''--alliteration "duel"''' from "The Tale of the First Challenge"''
->That may not be if we’re to win this fight.
->To seize the day against their greater power,
->We cannot let out talents be misspent.
->If you would lead this team, then lead us not
->From the rear, nor hold aloof from battle;
->But rather, lead us boldly at the fore.
->Your strength of arm says that your place is there.
->And you are fresh—and that could turn the tide.
->My flesh is weak. My brain—now that’s my strength.
->You said yourself, the coach’s place is not
->Upon the field, so let me serve us here
->As he who thinks for us but cannot act.
->And with our purpose thus as one, then let
->The nation gape in awe and wonderment
->As it beholds the marvels we have wrought
->And yet shall do before this day is done.
->In times to come, when people talk about
->This day and how we earned our fame and honor,
->Whether as gloried victors or as valiant
->Vanquished, we shall recall our deeds of yore.
->Then we will bare our arm or breast and say,
->‘These wounds I got that fateful day as we,
->Upon the court on Wawanakwa’s isle,
->We band of brothers faced our foe who thought
->It not too prideful to deem us not their match.
->Nor did the world think it wrong to judge us so.
->And yet the way we fought and persevered
->Poured us the cup of fame we now enjoy.’
->Then will the Eagles names come gladly for
->Our lips to savor: Heather the Queen, Justin
->The brave; Katie, Sadie, the yin and yang;
->The wily Cody, the bold [=LeShawna=],
->And Trent and Gwen and Lindsay and Noah.
->Then men will say our fame was fairly earned,
->And women tell their children on their knees
->The tale of how we fought on Dodgeball Day.
--->'''''Noah's RousingSpeech, based on the [[Theatre/HenryV St. Crispin's Day]] speech''', from "The Tale of the Dodgeball Match"''
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