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->'''Kim:''' I was created by the Death Priests of M'argle'Tstrxlt as one of their Avatars of the Icy Beyond. For the first twenty years of my life, I mastered all of the deadly arts. [...]\\
'''Astro's son:''' I thought M'argle'Tstrxlt was the moon that does those amazing toffee apples.\\
'''Kim:''' [[DefiedTrope A planet can have multiple things.]] [--Also, they don't really advertise the death cult.--]
-->-- ''[[https://waitingforthet.tumblr.com/post/711757306755432448/the-further-adventures-of-astro-astrolovich-space The Further Adventures of Astro Astrolovich, Space Guy]]''
'''Astro's son:''' I thought M'argle'Tstrxlt was the moon that does those amazing toffee apples.\\
'''Kim:''' [[DefiedTrope A planet can have multiple things.]] [--Also, they don't really advertise the death cult.--]
-->-- ''[[https://waitingforthet.tumblr.com/post/711757306755432448/the-further-adventures-of-astro-astrolovich-space The Further Adventures of Astro Astrolovich, Space Guy]]''
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->''"Most of Israel’s critics, especially abroad, see the country as a one-dimensional monolith. As they see it, all its (Jewish) citizens are marching in lockstep behind their rightist government, consumed by a dark ideology, supporting occupation and settlements and committing war crimes. This, by the way, is a mirror image of the admirers of Israel in the world, who also see Israel as a one-dimensional monolith, with all citizens marching proudly behind their brave and determined leaders -– Binyamin Netanyahu, Ehud Barak and Avigdor Lieberman. The truth is far removed from both these caricatures."''
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->''"Most of Israel’s critics, especially abroad, see the country as a one-dimensional monolith. As they see it, all its (Jewish) citizens are marching in lockstep behind their rightist government, consumed by a dark ideology, supporting occupation and settlements and committing war crimes. This, by the way, is a mirror image of the admirers of Israel in the world, who also see Israel as a one-dimensional monolith, with all citizens marching proudly behind their brave and determined leaders -– -- Binyamin Netanyahu, Ehud Barak and Avigdor Lieberman. The truth is far removed from both these caricatures."''
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That, I think, is, from the author's point of view, part of the appeal of what I call Chinese menu fantasy, where the Tolkienesque band of protagonists has [[FiveRaces one archetypal elf, one archetypal dwarf, etc.]] It's much easier to make the characterization work. And I'm not denigrating this approach. I wouldn't dare, now that I've done the diverse band of heroes myself in my dragon thingie.\\
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That, I think, is, from the author's point of view, part of the appeal of what I call Chinese menu fantasy, where the Tolkienesque band of protagonists has [[FiveRaces [[StandardFantasyRaces one archetypal elf, one archetypal dwarf, etc.]] It's much easier to make the characterization work. And I'm not denigrating this approach. I wouldn't dare, now that I've done the diverse band of heroes myself in my dragon thingie.\\
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'em, ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''.
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-->-- ''Series/ThatMitchellAndWebbLook'', ''[[Series/ThatMitchellAndWebbLook That Mitchell and Webb Sound]]'', "Space Trek And Wars"
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->''It's attacked by Klingons and luckily crashes down on a cornfield planet (planets are only allowed to be one thing in the Star Trek universe).''
-->--a Cracked.com [[https://www.cracked.com/article_27767_completely-moronic-plot-twists-tv-movies-needs-to-retire.html article]]
-->--a Cracked.com [[https://www.cracked.com/article_27767_completely-moronic-plot-twists-tv-movies-needs-to-retire.html article]]
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->Kin lay in her bunk, thinking. She thought about how attitudes to aliens got stereotyped. [[MultiArmedAndDangerous Kung]] were [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy paranoid, blood-thirsty and superstitious]]. [[BearsAreBadNews Shandi]] were [[DissonantSerenity calm, blood-thirsty]] and [[MonstrousCannibalism sometimes ate people]]. Shandi and kung thought that [[HumansAreInsane humans were blood-thirsty, foolhardy and proud]]. Everyone thought [[HufflepuffHouse the Ehfts]] were funny and nobody knew what the Ehfts thought about anyone.
->It ''was'' true that, once, four kung had boarded a grounded human ship during the bad old days and killed thirty-five crew before the last kung went down under the weight of Clipe needles. It ''was'' true that on certain diplomatically-forgotten occasions, shandi had, with great ceremony, eaten people. So what? How could you evaluate this unless you could think [[BizarreAlienPsychology like an alien]]?
->We dismiss each other with a few cliches, she thought. It's the only way we can live with one another.
-->--''Literature/{{Strata}}''
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->''"Oh my God... get in the ship, sweetie. GET IN THE GODDAMN SHIP! '''EVERYTHING IS ON A COBB! THE WHOLE PLANET IS ON A COBB! GO, GO, GO!"'''''
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->''"Oh my God... get in the ship, sweetie. GET IN THE GODDAMN SHIP! '''EVERYTHING IS ON A COBB! COB! THE WHOLE PLANET IS ON A COBB! COB! GO, GO, GO!"'''''
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->''"Hand the sticks to the Elder [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhuz Horde]] and [[ProudMerchantRace let them tend our herds]], hand the pens to the Middle Horde and [[ProudScholarRace send them to the debates]], hand the spears to the Junior Horde and [[ProudWarriorRace show them our enemies]]."''
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->''"Hand the sticks to the Elder Senior [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhuz Horde]] and [[ProudMerchantRace let them tend our herds]], hand the pens to the Middle Horde and [[ProudScholarRace send them to the debates]], hand the spears to the Junior Horde and [[ProudWarriorRace show them our enemies]]."''
