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->''[[spoiler:"Are these my hands, stained black with blood and sin? What wickedness I've wrought. And all for what?"]]''
-->-- [[spoiler:'''Oersted/Odio''''s words after defeating Sin of Odio. What follows next depends on the chosen hero.]]
-->-- [[spoiler:'''Oersted/Odio''''s words after defeating Sin of Odio. What follows next depends on the chosen hero.]]
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->''[[spoiler:"Are these my hands, stained black with blood and sin? What wickedness I've wrought. And all for what?"]]''
-->-- [[spoiler:'''Oersted/Odio''''s words after defeating Sin of Odio. What follows next depends on the chosen hero.]]
-->-- [[spoiler:'''Oersted/Odio''''s words after defeating Sin of Odio. What follows next depends on the chosen hero.]]
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->'''Pogo''':"Aieee!"
->'''Earthen Heart Master''': "Shifu, Lei/Yung, Yung/Hong! This one's for you!"
->'''Oboromaru''': "Dawn may banish even the darkest night!"
->'''Sundown Kid''': "That's enough out of you. No more."
->'''Masaru''': "I never lose, and together... we're unstoppable!"
->'''Akira''': "Nothing's impossible when you're too stubborn to surrender!"
->'''Cube''': ''(beeps confidently)''
-->-- [[spoiler:The one liners each party member gives after the Sin of Odio incapacitates the initial party.]]
->'''Earthen Heart Master''': "Shifu, Lei/Yung, Yung/Hong! This one's for you!"
->'''Oboromaru''': "Dawn may banish even the darkest night!"
->'''Sundown Kid''': "That's enough out of you. No more."
->'''Masaru''': "I never lose, and together... we're unstoppable!"
->'''Akira''': "Nothing's impossible when you're too stubborn to surrender!"
->'''Cube''': ''(beeps confidently)''
-->-- [[spoiler:The one liners each party member gives after the Sin of Odio incapacitates the initial party.]]
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->'''Oersted''': "...Heh... <chuckle> So simple. Earnest. True. ... For them as well... They wronged me. Wounded me. Revenged in kind. Nay. Far worse. 'Twas in fear and ignorance they struck. But I, in bitterness and spite. <sniffle>"
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->'''Oersted''': "...Heh... <chuckle> So simple. Earnest. True. ...True... For them as well... They wronged me. Wounded me. Revenged in kind. Nay. Far worse. 'Twas in fear and ignorance they struck. But I, in bitterness and spite. <sniffle>"
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->'''Oersted''': "...The world... Belongs to one no man. Indeed... ... By love and trust... And faith... We will be saved. Wise, wise words. Spoken by another. Who...?"
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->'''Oersted''': "...The world... Belongs to no one no man. Indeed... ... By love and trust... And faith... We will be saved. Wise, wise words. Spoken by another. Who...?"
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->'''Oersted''': "...A sentiment I share. Such hate I've nursed... And solitude I've sought. And yet...and still... (sigh) For all their faults, I miss them so, so much."
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->'''Oersted''': "...A sentiment I share. Such hate I've nursed... And solitude I've sought. And yet... and still... (sigh) For all their faults, I miss them so, so much."
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->'''Oersted''': "Indeed... For power comes in many forms... ... Oh, how was I so blind? The fault was mine. [[FatalFlaw A weakness deep... Within my broken heart...]]"
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->'''Oersted''': "Indeed... For power comes in many forms... ... Oh, how was I so blind? The fault was mine. [[FatalFlaw A weakness deep... Within my broken heart...]]"
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->'''Oersted''': "...Perhaps... Perhaps you've struck upon a truth. When tested—sorely tested, I...I failed. I ran. Rejected trial and choice. And chose..."
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->'''Oersted''': "...Perhaps... Perhaps you've struck upon a truth. When tested—sorely tested -- sorely tested, I...I failed. I ran. Rejected trial and choice. And chose..."
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->''"Naught remains. Alone. Utterly alone. Cast out. Unloved. Outside the grace of gods. The Archon's Roost, they call this shrine of death. Yet nowhere do I spy our Lord of Dark. His throne sits empty, wanting for an heir... Did I not do all that was asked? Did I not serve and seek my fair and just reward? And for my deeds, they damn me. Name me demon. And who am I to deny it? Demon, then! Renouncing former ties and titles! And in their place, I claim... The Lord of Dark. Odio!"''
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->''"Naught remains. Alone. Utterly alone. Cast out. Unloved. Outside the grace of gods. The Archon's Roost, they call this shrine of death. [[ThenLetMeBeEvil Yet nowhere do I spy our Lord of Dark. His throne sits empty, wanting for an heir... Did I not do all that was asked? Did I not serve and seek my fair and just reward? And for my deeds, they damn me. Name me demon. And who am I to deny it? Demon, then! Renouncing former ties and titles! And in their place, I claim... The Lord of Dark. Odio!"''Odio]]!"''
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''("For love's facade he fights...")''\\
''("To elder's will life bound...")''\\
''("In shadow guides his kin...")''\\
''("From hero's fame he flees...")''\\
''("On power's throne he sits...")''\\
''("In anger finds his strength...")''\\
''("Whose heart bleeds more than flesh...")''\\
''"Whose faith in men endures despite their sins."''\\
''"O child, now come and see... Their true design."''
''("To elder's will life bound...")''\\
''("In shadow guides his kin...")''\\
''("From hero's fame he flees...")''\\
''("On power's throne he sits...")''\\
''("In anger finds his strength...")''\\
''("Whose heart bleeds more than flesh...")''\\
''"Whose faith in men endures despite their sins."''\\
''"O child, now come and see... Their true design."''
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''("For [[ThePowerOfLove love's facade he fights...fights]]...")''\\
''("To [[PassingTheTorch elder's will lifebound...bound]]...")''\\
''("In [[BeenThereShapedHistory shadow guides hiskin...kin]]...")''\\
''("From [[TheAloner hero's fame heflees...flees]]...")''\\
''("On [[ToBeAMaster power's throne hesits...sits]]...")''\\
''("In [[ScrewDestiny anger finds hisstrength...strength]]...")''\\
''("Whose [[BenevolentAI heart bleeds more thanflesh...flesh]]...")''\\
''"Whose [[HumansAreFlawed faith in men endures despite theirsins.sins]]."''\\
''"O child, now come and see... [[HumansAreBastards Their truedesign.design]]."''
''("To [[PassingTheTorch elder's will life
''("In [[BeenThereShapedHistory shadow guides his
''("From [[TheAloner hero's fame he
''("On [[ToBeAMaster power's throne he
''("In [[ScrewDestiny anger finds his
''("Whose [[BenevolentAI heart bleeds more than
''"Whose [[HumansAreFlawed faith in men endures despite their
''"O child, now come and see... [[HumansAreBastards Their true
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->''[[spoiler:"Not yet. Not yet! Your fight is not yet done! For even I should falter here and now... My hate! My boundless hate shall transcend time! Hark! Look you now on hatred's multitude -- on Odio and his many faces! You know them well. From ancient past, the beast! From distant future, maddened slave of men! In peace they plot and craft their prophet false... In war they worship lords ambitious, cruel! The windswept wastes yield monstrous men-at-arms! The highest peaks hide villains murderous! For violence shall ever be your wont! My hate is yours, and yours is mine. To share, a history, so long as men yet live! Now sing our name! Embrace us! Odio!"]]''
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->''[[spoiler:"Not yet. Not yet! Your fight is not yet done! For even I should falter here and now... My hate! My boundless hate shall transcend time! Hark! Look you now on hatred's multitude -- on Odio and his many faces! You know them well. From [[TerrifyingTyrannosaur ancient past, the beast! beast]]! From distant future, [[AIIsACrapshoot maddened slave of men! men]]! In peace they [[AssimilationPlot plot and craft their prophet false... false]]... In war they worship [[VisionaryVillain lords ambitious, cruel! cruel]]! The windswept wastes yield [[VengefulGhost monstrous men-at-arms! men-at-arms]]! The highest peaks hide [[ArrogantKungFuGuy villains murderous! murderous]]! For [[BloodKnight violence shall ever be your wont! wont]]! My hate is yours, and yours is mine. To share, a history, so long as men yet live! Now [[SayMyName sing our name! name]]! Embrace us! Odio!"]]''
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->''In a long-forgotten place--Babylonia''\\
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->''In a long-forgotten place--Babylonia''\\place -- Babylonia''\\
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''The king of kings, Steel Titan--we'll give him our all!''
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''The king of kings, Steel Titan--we'll Titan -- we'll give him our all!''
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->[[spoiler:''"O man... A slave to appetites. A beast. Nay, lesser still... For hunger drives a beast. To fight, to kill, to feed. Survive. Naught else. But man... He's more complex. More fool. More mad. His hunger knows no end. The world's his meal. I'll teach him manners, then. Restraint. Respect. He's drunk on vict'ry, spares no thought for them who suffered for his spoils - but soon he shall! I weep for you, my brothers. To the last... You stayed the course. Pursued your hearts' desires. With eyes unclouded. So close, but alas... Like me. Deprived - nay, robbed of just reward. Disgraced and dubbed the villain. Sland'rous lies. A winner's justice! Hist'ry bent to whim! The losers silenced, stripped of voice and claim... and stricken from the page! If that's the game... I'll play along. Cross time and space and stand... For we the damned. Rewrite the tale. Just so! Your statues seven are my ink and quill. With magic potent, singular... Pure hate! I'll take up arms. Assume the guise we share. For we are Odio... and we will win!"]]''
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->[[spoiler:''"O man... A slave to appetites. A beast. Nay, lesser still... For hunger drives a beast. To fight, to kill, to feed. Survive. Naught else. But man... He's more complex. More fool. More mad. His hunger knows no end. The world's his meal. I'll teach him manners, then. Restraint. Respect. He's drunk on vict'ry, spares no thought for them who suffered for his spoils - -- but soon he shall! I weep for you, my brothers. To the last... You stayed the course. Pursued your hearts' desires. With eyes unclouded. So close, but alas... Like me. Deprived - -- nay, robbed of just reward. Disgraced and dubbed the villain. Sland'rous lies. A winner's justice! Hist'ry bent to whim! The losers silenced, stripped of voice and claim... and stricken from the page! If that's the game... I'll play along. Cross time and space and stand... For we the damned. Rewrite the tale. Just so! Your statues seven are my ink and quill. With magic potent, singular... Pure hate! I'll take up arms. Assume the guise we share. For we are Odio... and we will win!"]]''
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->''[[spoiler:"Not yet. Not yet! Your fight is not yet done! For even I should falter here and now... My hate! My boundless hate shall transcend time! Hark! Look you now on hatred's multitude--on Odio and his many faces! You know them well. From ancient past, the beast! From distant future, maddened slave of men! In peace they plot and craft their prophet false... In war they worship lords ambitious, cruel! The windswept wastes yield monstrous men-at-arms! The highest peaks hide villains murderous! For violence shall ever be your wont! My hate is yours, and yours is mine. To share, a history, so long as men yet live! Now sing our name! Embrace us! Odio!"]]''
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->''[[spoiler:"Not yet. Not yet! Your fight is not yet done! For even I should falter here and now... My hate! My boundless hate shall transcend time! Hark! Look you now on hatred's multitude--on multitude -- on Odio and his many faces! You know them well. From ancient past, the beast! From distant future, maddened slave of men! In peace they plot and craft their prophet false... In war they worship lords ambitious, cruel! The windswept wastes yield monstrous men-at-arms! The highest peaks hide villains murderous! For violence shall ever be your wont! My hate is yours, and yours is mine. To share, a history, so long as men yet live! Now sing our name! Embrace us! Odio!"]]''
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->'''Masaru''': "Nothing wrong with wanting more. Wanting to be better. The best even. But that can't be everything. The struggle. The fight. The pursuit of power—you can't let it cost you your soul. When the dust settles—when you're old and weak—that strength of spirit's all you'll have!"
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->'''Masaru''': "Nothing wrong with wanting more. Wanting to be better. The best even. But that can't be everything. The struggle. The fight. The pursuit of power—you power -- you can't let it cost you your soul. When the dust settles—when settles -- when you're old and weak—that weak -- that strength of spirit's all you'll have!"
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->'''Akira''': ''(Grabs Oersted by the collar)'' "...Know what your problem is? You blamed everyone else. Said it was them or gods or fate that made you what you are. [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse But it was YOU! Just you!]] [[HumansAreFlawed Yeah, people can suck. We can be selfish—look out only for ourselves.]] But if you [[AccentuateTheNegative focus only on the bad—judge them at their worst]], well... You've already made up your mind, haven't you?" ''(Drops Oersted)'' "Everything else is just an excuse!"
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->'''Akira''': ''(Grabs Oersted by the collar)'' "...Know what your problem is? You blamed everyone else. Said it was them or gods or fate that made you what you are. [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse But it was YOU! Just you!]] [[HumansAreFlawed Yeah, people can suck. We can be selfish—look selfish -- look out only for ourselves.]] But if you [[AccentuateTheNegative focus only on the bad—judge bad -- judge them at their worst]], well... You've already made up your mind, haven't you?" ''(Drops Oersted)'' "Everything else is just an excuse!"
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->''"Naught remains. Alone. Utterly alone. Cast out. Unloved. Outside the grace of gods. The Archon's Roost, they call this shrine of death. Yet nowhere do I spy our Lord of Dark. His throne sits empty, wanting for an heir... Did I not do all that was asked? Did I not serve and seek my just reward? And for my deeds, they damn me. Name me demon. And who am I to deny it? Demon, then! Renouncing former ties and titles! And in their place, I claim... The Lord of Dark. Odio!"''
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->''"Naught remains. Alone. Utterly alone. Cast out. Unloved. Outside the grace of gods. The Archon's Roost, they call this shrine of death. Yet nowhere do I spy our Lord of Dark. His throne sits empty, wanting for an heir... Did I not do all that was asked? Did I not serve and seek my fair and just reward? And for my deeds, they damn me. Name me demon. And who am I to deny it? Demon, then! Renouncing former ties and titles! And in their place, I claim... The Lord of Dark. Odio!"''
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->''[[spoiler:"Not yet. Not yet! Your fight is not done yet! For even I should falter here and now... My hate! My boundless hate shall transcend time! Hark! Look you now on hatred's multitude--on Odio and his many faces! You know them well. From ancient past, the beast! From distant future, maddened slave of men! In peace they plot and craft their prophet false... In war they worship lords ambitious, cruel! The windswept wastes yield monstrous men-at-arms! The highest peak hide villains murderous! For violence shall ever be your wont! My hate is yours, and yours is mine. To share, a history, so long as men yet live! Now sing our name! Embrace us! Odio!"]]''
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->''[[spoiler:"Not yet. Not yet! Your fight is not done yet! yet done! For even I should falter here and now... My hate! My boundless hate shall transcend time! Hark! Look you now on hatred's multitude--on Odio and his many faces! You know them well. From ancient past, the beast! From distant future, maddened slave of men! In peace they plot and craft their prophet false... In war they worship lords ambitious, cruel! The windswept wastes yield monstrous men-at-arms! The highest peak peaks hide villains murderous! For violence shall ever be your wont! My hate is yours, and yours is mine. To share, a history, so long as men yet live! Now sing our name! Embrace us! Odio!"]]''
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->''"I am truly sorry... Neither of your deserved this fate. My time draws near, and I shall join you both before long... Until then, rest peacefully..."''
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->''"I am truly sorry... Neither of your you deserved this fate. My time draws near, and I shall join you both before long... Until then, rest peacefully..."''
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->'''Akira''': ''(Grabs Oersted by the collar)'' "...You know what the problem is? You blamed everyone else. Said it was them or gods or fate that made you what you are. [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse But it was YOU! Just you!]] [[HumansAreFlawed Yeah, people can suck. We can be selfish—look out only for ourselves.]] But if you [[AccentuateTheNegative focus only on the bad—judge them at their worst]], well... You've already made up your mind, haven't you?" ''(Drops Oersted)'' "Everything else is just an excuse!"
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->'''Akira''': ''(Grabs Oersted by the collar)'' "...You know Know what the your problem is? You blamed everyone else. Said it was them or gods or fate that made you what you are. [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse But it was YOU! Just you!]] [[HumansAreFlawed Yeah, people can suck. We can be selfish—look out only for ourselves.]] But if you [[AccentuateTheNegative focus only on the bad—judge them at their worst]], well... You've already made up your mind, haven't you?" ''(Drops Oersted)'' "Everything else is just an excuse!"
