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Dewicking per TRS.
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** Michelle helps Donald because he ''wouldn't'' help her, to disprove NotSoDifferent.
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** Michelle helps Donald because he ''wouldn't'' help her, to disprove NotSoDifferent.his NotSoDifferentRemark.
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** [[WhiteAndGrayMorality ...Or people expect nothing in return.]]
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** [[WhiteAndGrayMorality ...[[WhiteAndGreyMorality ...Or people expect nothing in return.]]
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** Michelle doesn't help Donald because he ''would'' help her, ForTheEvulz[=/=]to teach him a lesson about trusting no one.
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** Michelle doesn't help Donald because he ''would'' help her, ForTheEvulz[=/=]to either ForTheEvulz ot to teach him a lesson about trusting no one.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Donald abuses Michelle's help.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
** [[LoveRedeems But Donald can't make himself do it for long.]]
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
** [[LoveRedeems But Donald can't make himself do it for long.]]
* '''Deconstructed''': Donald abuses Michelle's help.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
** [[LoveRedeems But Donald can't make himself do it for long.]]
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
** [[LoveRedeems But Donald can't make himself do it for long.]]
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* '''Justified''': Donald has proven his commitment to Michelle.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Donald has proven his commitment to Michelle.
** Donald has proven his commitment to Michelle.
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* '''Inverted''': Michelle helps Donald because he ''wouldn't'' help her, to disprove NotSoDifferent.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Michelle helps Donald because he ''wouldn't'' help her, to disprove NotSoDifferent.
** Michelle helps Donald because he ''wouldn't'' help her, to disprove NotSoDifferent.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except this was a BatmanGambit to help Donald. [[TrainingFromHell Just as he would do for her.]]
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...Except this was a BatmanGambit to help Donald. [[TrainingFromHell Just as he would do for her.]]
** ...Except this was a BatmanGambit to help Donald. [[TrainingFromHell Just as he would do for her.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
** Michelle gets away from Donald and finds a true friend in Dave, who genuinely ''would'' do the same for her.
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* '''Averted''': [[BlackAndGrayMorality People don't help each other...]]
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** [[BlackAndGrayMorality People don't help each other...]]
** [[BlackAndGrayMorality People don't help each other...]]
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* '''Played For Drama''': We cut to Donald's thoughts, and he wouldn't just leave her for the wolves; he'd push her in as a brief distraction. Then he does.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Drama''':
** We cut to Donald's thoughts, and he wouldn't just leave her for the wolves; he'd push her in as a brief distraction. Then he does.
** We cut to Donald's thoughts, and he wouldn't just leave her for the wolves; he'd push her in as a brief distraction. Then he does.
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Just Batman gambit will do.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except this was a [[BatmanGambit gam]][[XanatosGambit bit]] to help Donald. [[TrainingFromHell Just as he would do for her.]]
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except this was a [[BatmanGambit gam]][[XanatosGambit bit]] BatmanGambit to help Donald. [[TrainingFromHell Just as he would do for her.]]
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** Donald hadn't thought about his feelings for Michelle, and is forced to consider whether or not he's worthy of her trust and affection.
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* '''Played For Drama''': We cut to Donald's thoughts, and he wouldn't just leave her for the wolves; he'd push her in as a brief distraction.
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* '''Played For Drama''': We cut to Donald's thoughts, and he wouldn't just leave her for the wolves; he'd push her in as a brief distraction. Then he does.
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* '''Averted''': [[HumansAreBastards People don't help each other...]]
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* '''Averted''': [[HumansAreBastards [[BlackAndGrayMorality People don't help each other...]]
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Here we mean a lack of of social skills, not a human raised by animals.
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** But [[RaisedByWolves Michelle]] didn't understand that, and tries to put it right.
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** But [[RaisedByWolves [[NoSocialSkills Michelle]] didn't understand that, and tries to put it right.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Michelle wasn't really trying to help at all! Until we find out she was RaisedByWolves, and thought that was helping. Then she tries to put it right...what? That's terrible! But Donald emerges better from it, so that was her plan all along, except [[FlipFlopOfGod that last is never confirmed]].
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Michelle wasn't really trying to help at all! Until we find out she was RaisedByWolves, has NoSocialSkills, and thought that was helping. Then she tries to put it right...what? That's terrible! But Donald emerges better from it, so that was her plan all along, except [[FlipFlopOfGod that last is never confirmed]].
