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'''Basic Trope''': A male character has no compunctions about hitting women.
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'''Basic Trope''': A male character has no scoffs at the idea that he should have any compunctions about hitting women.
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** Eric is a ProudWarriorRaceGuy who considers NotWorthKilling to be the ultimate insult. His willingness to hit Ramona is his way of acknowledging and respecting Ramona's own strength.
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** Eric is a ProudWarriorRaceGuy who considers things like holding back or NotWorthKilling to be the ultimate insult.insult towards an opponent. His willingness to hit Ramona is his way of acknowledging and respecting Ramona's own strength.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': {{Slapstick}}.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': {{Slapstick}}.{{Slapstick}}
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* '''Straight''': Eric, an ActionHero, has to face the BigBad Ramona and her AmazonBrigade. He doesn't hold back against them.
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* '''Straight''': Eric, an ActionHero, has to face the BigBad Ramona [[TheBaroness Ramona]] and her AmazonBrigade. He doesn't hold back against them.
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** And on the top of that, Eric never fights men at all.
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** And on '''Exaggerated to the top of that, point where the trope is Played For Horror''': Eric never fights men at all.is a StrawMisogynist SerialKiller who [[HeManWomanHater hates women so much where he]] constantly goes on [[CruelAndUnusualDeath horrific]] [[SpreeKiller killing-sprees]] that are only applied to women.
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** Ramona's attack on [[TheStoic Eric's]] [[HeterosexualLifePartners best friend]] [[AllLovingHero Bob]] relied solely on [[ExploitedTrope exploiting his]] [[WouldntHitAGirl idealistic view of women]]. With his MoralityPet being hospitalized, [[NotSoStoic Eric's]] rage [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge knows no bounds]]. He catches her NumberTwo off-guard and serves brutal NoHoldsBarredBeatdown to the point of crippling her for life. [[MassOhCrap Ramona and her team only now realize seriousness of their situation...]]
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** Ramona's attack on [[TheStoic Eric's]] [[HeterosexualLifePartners best friend]] [[AllLovingHero Bob]] relied solely on [[ExploitedTrope exploiting his]] [[WouldntHitAGirl idealistic view of women]]. With his MoralityPet being hospitalized, [[NotSoStoic Eric's]] rage [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge knows no bounds]]. He catches her NumberTwo off-guard and serves a brutal NoHoldsBarredBeatdown to the point of crippling her for life. [[MassOhCrap Ramona and her team only now realize seriousness of their situation...]]
