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** Bob is a NiceGuy who, [[KafkaKomedy through no fault or conscious action of his own]], has a list of [[SitcomArchNemesis enemies who would benefit from his untimely demise]] a couple miles (not typical American miles, ''nautical'' miles) long.
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** Bob is a NiceGuy who, [[KafkaKomedy through no fault or conscious action of his own]], has a list of [[SitcomArchNemesis enemies who would benefit from his untimely demise]] a couple miles (not typical American miles, ''nautical'' miles) long. Cut to ''an entire prison wing'' being filled with ''all'' the suspects, as everyone actually did it.
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** Bob's suicide plan worked as well as it did (by which we mean almost ''[[GoneHorriblyRight too]]'' well) because the man who supplied Bob with the method to commit suicide hated Bob and thus, instead of the method Bob asked of him that was supposed to be quick, painless and leave a beautiful corpse, he gave Bob a method that made Bob's final moments tortuous and [[{{Gorn}} you can just forget]] about the "leave a beautiful corpse" part (if [[NotEnoughToBury it left a corpse at all]]).
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** Bob is a NiceGuy who, [[KafkaKomedy through no fault or conscious action of his own]], has a list of [[SitcomArchNemesis enemies who would benefit from his untimely demise]] a mile long.
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** Bob is a NiceGuy who, [[KafkaKomedy through no fault or conscious action of his own]], has a list of [[SitcomArchNemesis enemies who would benefit from his untimely demise]] a mile couple miles (not typical American miles, ''nautical'' miles) long.
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** Bob is a NiceGuy who, through no fault or conscious action of his own, has a list of enemies who would benefit from his untimely demise a mile long.
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** Bob is a NiceGuy who, [[KafkaKomedy through no fault or conscious action of his own, own]], has a list of [[SitcomArchNemesis enemies who would benefit from his untimely demise demise]] a mile long.
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** Alice, Chris, Evelyn and Dave are only the initial suspects. The longer the investigation goes, the more suspects appear, every single one with a significant motive and plenty of opportunity (and a few who come out of the woodworks to confess because of trying to protect someone else or because they believe the infamy would do them some good), to the point that the investigator needs to figure out how to remove ''the whole damn town'' (all ''several thousand people in it'') from the list by the story's climax. Bob really was '''that much''' of an asshole.
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** Alice, Chris, Evelyn and Dave are only the initial suspects. The longer the investigation goes, the more suspects appear, every single one with a significant motive and plenty of opportunity (and a few who come out of the woodworks to confess because of trying to protect someone else or because they believe the infamy would do them some good), to the point that the investigator needs to figure out how to remove ''the whole damn town'' (all ''several thousand people in it'') from the list by the story's climax. Bob really was '''that much''' of an asshole. By the end of it all, it cuts to the jail with ''every last person in the town who hated Bob'' being revealed to have been on his murder.
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** It turns out to be a final ''[[SuicideNotMurder Make It Look Like Murder]]'' [[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning Screw You]] to his victims.
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** It turns out to be a final ''[[SuicideNotMurder Make It Look Like Murder]]'' [[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning [[ThanatosGambit Screw You]] to his victims.
