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** As the old saying goes "Love is blind", not even Alice herself knows why she loves him, just that she does.
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** Alice falls for Bob, even though she knows he's got bad habits of cheating on, [[DomesticAbuse abusing]], and even [[IfICantHaveYou killing his]] [[LoveInterest Love Interests]], and her family and friends have her committed as insane.
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** Alice falls for Bob, even though she knows he's got bad habits of cheating on, [[DomesticAbuse abusing]], and even [[IfICantHaveYou killing his]] [[LoveInterest Love Interests]], Interests]] and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking having]] [[ThePigPen terrible hygiene]], and her family and friends have her committed as insane.
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** Carol thinks Alice could do a bit better than Bob, who doesn't always say "excuse me" after burping.
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** Carol thinks Alice could do a bit better than Bob, who doesn't always say "excuse me" after burping.burping and is [[ThePigPen generally unkempt]].
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* Alice appreciates that he may not be wealthy, popular, or classically good-looking but is smart and funny.
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'''Basic Trope''': A woman falls for a guy, and someone else doesn't understand his appeal to her.
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'''Basic Trope''': A woman falls for a guy, guy and someone else doesn't understand his appeal to her.
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** Alice falls for Bob, and Carl, jealous, overlooks that Bob's better looking and more reliable than him to fall to get it.
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** Alice falls for Bob, and Carl, jealous, overlooks that Bob's better looking better-looking and more reliable than him to fall to get it.
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** Alice and Bob are both good looking, well-off, charming, and good, and furthermore have many interests in common. Nevertheless Carol and David each grouse that Bob and Alice (respectively) have no taste.
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** Alice and Bob are both good looking, good-looking, well-off, charming, and good, and furthermore have many interests in common. Nevertheless Carol and David each grouse that Bob and Alice (respectively) have no taste.
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* Alice appreciates that he may not be wealthy, popular or classically good looking but is smart and funny.
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* Alice appreciates that he may not be wealthy, popular popular, or classically good looking good-looking but is smart and funny.
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** Bob is a sadist murderer who lives under a bridge. Alice is the head of the biggest company of the city, has written six books about theorethical physics, plays tennis with the Queen of England every Friday and owns the New York Yankees. Everybody treats Bob like he's the desirable part and Alice like a very bad choice he's making.
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** Bob is a sadist murderer who lives under a bridge. Alice is the head of the biggest company of in the city, has written six books about theorethical theoretical physics, plays tennis with the Queen of England every Friday and owns the New York Yankees. Everybody treats Bob like he's the desirable part and Alice like a very bad choice he's making.
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* Alice appreciates that he may not be wealthy, popular or classically good looking but is smart and funny.
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** Alice is [[ChristmasCake desperate]].
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** Alice is [[ChristmasCake desperate]].desperate.
