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* '''Averted''': Alice is thankful for Bob saving her.
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* '''Averted''': Alice is thankful to Bob for Bob saving her.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob saves Alice from falling into the spikes. In return, [[TheFarmerAndTheViper Alice pushes Bob down to those spikes!]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob saves Alice from falling into the spikes. In return, [[TheFarmerAndTheViper Alice pushes Bob down to those spikes!]]spikes]]!
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** Bob was a well-known troublemaker, so Alice assumed the spikes were part of his prank, and he saved her when the prank goes wrong.
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** Bob was is a well-known troublemaker, so Alice assumed assumes the spikes were part of his prank, prank and that he saved her when the prank goes went wrong.
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** Alternatively, Alice is very thankful of Bob for saving her. Bob, however, [[WhatTheHellHero rejects it]].
** [[{{Jerkass}} Bob]] shoves Alice into a pit of spikes, but for some reason she ''thanks'' him for that!
** [[{{Jerkass}} Bob]] shoves Alice into a pit of spikes, but for some reason she ''thanks'' him for that!
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** Alternatively, Alice is very thankful of to Bob for saving her. Bob, however, [[WhatTheHellHero rejects it]].
** [[{{Jerkass}} Bob]] shoves Alice into a pit of spikes, but for somereason reason, she ''thanks'' him for that!
** [[{{Jerkass}} Bob]] shoves Alice into a pit of spikes, but for some
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** Alice was a well-known AlphaBitch. But when Bob saved Alice from falling into the spikes, she thanked him.
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** Alice was is a well-known AlphaBitch. But when Bob saved Alice saves her from falling into the spikes, she thanked thanks him.
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** Bob was the one to force Alice into the perilous journey in the first place, saving her is the least he could do.
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** Bob was the one to force Alice into the perilous journey in the first place, saving place. Saving her is the least he could do.
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** However once Alice becomes one herself she still is never grateful without so much as a reason for her to be upset about becoming one.
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** However However, once Alice becomes one herself herself, she still is never grateful without so much as a reason for her to be upset about becoming one.
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** Alice's best friend Carly knew what had really happened and rewarded Bob, albeit in secret. She also helped reverse the wrongdoings Alice did to Bob, if possible.
** Carly gave Alice a good WhatTheHellHero Speech and [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calls her out and says that people like her don't deserve to be saved]], Alice realizes [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she had been]]...[[IgnoredEpiphany only to shrug it off and remain ungrateful]].
** Alice decides to thank Bob for saving her...while still hating him.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob uses [[ChekhovsGun one of Alice's high tech gadgets]] to save her from the spike pit, which gets destroyed the process. Alice then demands that Bob buy her a new one, which he can easily afford.
** Carly gave Alice a good WhatTheHellHero Speech and [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calls her out and says that people like her don't deserve to be saved]], Alice realizes [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she had been]]...[[IgnoredEpiphany only to shrug it off and remain ungrateful]].
** Alice decides to thank Bob for saving her...while still hating him.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob uses [[ChekhovsGun one of Alice's high tech gadgets]] to save her from the spike pit, which gets destroyed the process. Alice then demands that Bob buy her a new one, which he can easily afford.
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** Alice's best friend Carly knew knows what had really happened and rewarded rewards Bob, albeit in secret. She also helped helps reverse the wrongdoings Alice did to Bob, if possible.
** Carly gave Alice a good WhatTheHellHero Speech and [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calls her out and says that people like her don't deserve to be saved]], Alice realizes [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what shehad been]]...has been]]... [[IgnoredEpiphany only to shrug it off and remain ungrateful]].
** Alice decides to thank Bob for saving her... while still hating him.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob uses [[ChekhovsGun one of Alice'shigh tech high-tech gadgets]] to save her from the spike pit, which gets destroyed in the process. Alice then demands that Bob buy her a new one, which he can easily afford.
** Carly gave Alice a good WhatTheHellHero Speech and [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calls her out and says that people like her don't deserve to be saved]], Alice realizes [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she
** Alice decides to thank Bob for saving her... while still hating him.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob uses [[ChekhovsGun one of Alice's
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** Bob was the one to force Alice into the perilous journey in the first place, saving her is the least he could do.
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** Bob fails to save Alice from the spike pit. Alice refuses to show gratitude for "trying your best" when Bob's best still failed to prevent serious injury.
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** Bob saves Alice from tripping into a puddle of mud [[IOweYouMyLife Alice]] [[DisproportionateReward becomes his]] {{Meido}} from that day on.
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** Bob saves Alice from tripping into a puddle of mud and [[IOweYouMyLife Alice]] [[DisproportionateReward becomes his]] {{Meido}} from that day on.