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*** Alternatively, ''Max himself'' is extremely dense and heavy, so he sinks like a rock.
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*** Alternatively, ''Max himself'' 'Max himself' is extremely dense and heavy, so he sinks like a rock.
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** [[HazardousWater The water is filled with things that really like to eat people.]]
** The water contains lethal poisons that instantly kill people when touched.
** Max is some sort of electronic device; hitting the water is fatal.
** Max is a sheep or another animal with really heavy fur that only gets heavier when submerged in water.
** The lake has some particularly nasty undercurrents which Max gets caught in.
** [[BizarreAlienBiology For Max's species dihidrogen monoxide really is a poison itself]]
** The water contains lethal poisons that instantly kill people when touched.
** Max is some sort of electronic device; hitting the water is fatal.
** Max is a sheep or another animal with really heavy fur that only gets heavier when submerged in water.
** The lake has some particularly nasty undercurrents which Max gets caught in.
** [[BizarreAlienBiology For Max's species dihidrogen monoxide really is a poison itself]]
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** [[HazardousWater The water is filled with things that really like to eat people.]]
people]].
** The watercontains lethal poisons that instantly kill people when touched.
was [[GrimyWater polluted]].
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** Max is a sheep or another animal with really heavy fur that only gets heavier when submerged in water.
device, getting electrocuted upon swimming.
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* '''Implied''': Max falls into the lake. He is never seen again.
* '''Played For Drama''': Max and Bob were ChildhoodFriends, so when Max drowns in the lake, Bob has a DespairEventHorizon.
* '''Played For Horror''': Max screams horrifically as he falls into the lake. When he hits the water, piranhas come over to gruesomely eat him, resulting in lots of gore.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The [[AnAesop Aesop]] is that you shouldn't go into deep water if you can't swim yet.
* '''Played For Horror''': Max screams horrifically as he falls into the lake. When he hits the water, piranhas come over to gruesomely eat him, resulting in lots of gore.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The [[AnAesop Aesop]] is that you shouldn't go into deep water if you can't swim yet.
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* '''Defied''': Max moves to the middle of the desert where the water won't bother him.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Max moves to the middle of the desert where the water won't bother him.
** Max moves to the middle of the desert where the water won't bother him.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': It's nearly impossible to predict which bodies of water Max can survive in and which he can't.
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** It's nearly impossible to predict which bodies of water Max can survive in and which he can't.
** It's nearly impossible to predict which bodies of water Max can survive in and which he can't.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character drowns the instant he hits the water.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character drowns the instant he hits they hit the water.
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** [[BizarreAlienBiology For Max's species dihidrogen monoxide really is a poison]]
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** [[BizarreAlienBiology For Max's species dihidrogen monoxide really is a poison]]poison itself]]
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** Max is some sort of electronic device; hitting the water is fatal.
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** There is [[LedgeGravity a force]] which prevents Max from entering any deep body of water.
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** There is [[LedgeGravity [[EdgeGravity a force]] which prevents Max from entering any deep body of water.
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* '''Averted''': Max can survive underwater.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Max can surviveunderwater.underwater.
** There is [[LedgeGravity a force]] which prevents Max from entering any deep body of water.
** There is no water which is exposed.
** Max can survive
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** Max decides to attend swimming lessons in order to avoid drowning.
** Max makes sure to wear a life-jacket at all times.
** Max makes sure to wear a life-jacket at all times.
