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* '''Discussed''': "It's a wonder the Emperor is still alive, considering all the people with dead loved ones who want to gruesomely kill him."
* '''Conversed''': "Ruby, what are you doing?" "They deserve to die! They all deserve to die!"
* '''Conversed''': "Ruby, what are you doing?" "They deserve to die! They all deserve to die!"
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* '''Discussed''': '''Discussed''':
** "It's a wonder the Emperor is still alive, considering all the people with dead loved ones who want to gruesomely kill him."
* '''Conversed''': ** "Ruby, what are you doing?" "They deserve to die! They all deserve to die!"die!"
* '''Conversed''': "Man, Ruby's committed so many crimes in the name of revenge... But she looks cool while doing so, so I'm going to let it slide."
** "It's a wonder the Emperor is still alive, considering all the people with dead loved ones who want to gruesomely kill him."
* '''Conversed''': "Man, Ruby's committed so many crimes in the name of revenge... But she looks cool while doing so, so I'm going to let it slide."
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* '''Played For Horror''': After seeing what Ruby had done to her enemies, her friends and family alienate her due to her violent tendencies, thus further harming Ruby's psyche, until she eventually becomes so AxCrazy that she will become the next Emperor Jasper.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Horror''':
** After seeing what Ruby had done to her enemies, her friends and family alienate her due to her violent tendencies, thus further harming Ruby's psyche, until she eventually becomes so AxCrazy that she will become the next Emperor Jasper.
** After seeing what Ruby had done to her enemies, her friends and family alienate her due to her violent tendencies, thus further harming Ruby's psyche, until she eventually becomes so AxCrazy that she will become the next Emperor Jasper.
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** Ruby becomes so obsessed with killing everything and everyone related to Emperor Jasper that she becomes TheDreaded. Her new nickname, the [[RedBaron Red Ruby]], becomes a terrifying moniker to hear, and nobody lives without serious harm. The worst part is somewhere along the way it stopped being about [[PayEvilUntoEvil killing everyone responsible]], and became [[HeWhoFightsMonsters all about torturing]] ''everyone'' related to Emperor Jasper's name..
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** Ruby becomes so obsessed with killing everything and everyone related to Emperor Jasper that she becomes TheDreaded. Her new nickname, the [[RedBaron Red Ruby]], becomes a terrifying moniker to hear, and nobody lives without serious harm. The worst part is somewhere along the way it stopped being about [[PayEvilUntoEvil killing everyone responsible]], and became [[HeWhoFightsMonsters all about torturing]] ''everyone'' related to Emperor Jasper's name..name. Good luck convincing her she's stepping towards the MoralEventHorizon or becoming a CompleteMonster, because [[ObliviouslyEvil she completely disagrees]], and if you're not [[WithUsOrAgainstUs on her side...]]
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** Ruby becomes so obsessed with killing everything and everyone related to Emperor Jasper that she becomes TheDreaded. Her new nickname, the [[RedBaron Red Ruby]], becomes a terrifying moniker to hear, and nobody lives without serious harm. The worst part is somewhere along the way it stopped being about [[PayEvilUntoEvil killing everyone responsible]], and became [[HeWhoFightsMonsters all about torturing]] ''everyone'' related to Emperor Jasper's name..
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* '''Double Subverted''': But in her last moments, Ruby delivers the finishing blow on Jasper.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** But in her last moments, Ruby delivers the finishing blow onJasper.Jasper.
** Ruby [[UnfinishedBusiness becomes a vengeful ghost]] who goes on sprees of [[PeoplePuppets possessing people close to Jasper]] and killing as many as she can before the body is slain, hoping one day she will get Jasper himself.
** Ruby finds out that Jasper was slain by [[HeroOfAnotherStory Conan the Raging]], who had his own family massacred by Jasper [[BestServedCold fifty years ago]]. Ruby is [[VengeanceDenied not happy about not getting her pound of flesh]], but accepts that Jasper still got karma from wronging someone else.
** Ruby accepts that she needs to refine her methods if John Q. Regularsoldier and/or Jasper are such big obstacles. A few extra months of healing, training, gathering intel and [[NukeEm getting a more destructive weapon]] do plenty [[BestServedCold to compensate]].
** But in her last moments, Ruby delivers the finishing blow on
** Ruby [[UnfinishedBusiness becomes a vengeful ghost]] who goes on sprees of [[PeoplePuppets possessing people close to Jasper]] and killing as many as she can before the body is slain, hoping one day she will get Jasper himself.
** Ruby finds out that Jasper was slain by [[HeroOfAnotherStory Conan the Raging]], who had his own family massacred by Jasper [[BestServedCold fifty years ago]]. Ruby is [[VengeanceDenied not happy about not getting her pound of flesh]], but accepts that Jasper still got karma from wronging someone else.
** Ruby accepts that she needs to refine her methods if John Q. Regularsoldier and/or Jasper are such big obstacles. A few extra months of healing, training, gathering intel and [[NukeEm getting a more destructive weapon]] do plenty [[BestServedCold to compensate]].
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** AnAttackOnOneIsAnAttackOnAll
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** AnAttackOnOneIsAnAttackOnAllAttackOnOneIsAnAttackOnAll
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* '''Inverted''': Emperor Jasper calls for Ruby's blood by his troops after she doesn't pay her dues to him.
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* '''Inverted''': Emperor '''Inverted''':
**Emperor Jasper calls for Ruby's blood by his troops after she doesn't pay her dues tohim.him.
** AnAttackOnOneIsAnAttackOnAll
**Emperor Jasper calls for Ruby's blood by his troops after she doesn't pay her dues to
** AnAttackOnOneIsAnAttackOnAll
