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* '''Deconstructed''': The protagonist slept with so many girls he stops having fun in process and catches some nasty disease. Then everyone of girls ended up hating her for cheating on them with the others.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The protagonist slept with so many girls he stops having fun in process and catches some nasty disease. Then everyone every one of the girls ended end up hating her him for cheating on them with the others.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' has some explicit sex scenes, but they are so few and far between, among dozens of hours of gameplay, that almost nobody plays it for the sex.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' has some explicit and well-written sex scenes, but they are so few and far between, among dozens of hours of gameplay, that almost nobody plays it for the sex.
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** 'Kishi Monogatari'' has some explicit sex scenes, but they are so few and far between, among dozens of hours of gameplay, that almost nobody plays it for the sex.
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** 'Kishi ''Kishi Monogatari'' has some explicit sex scenes, but they are so few and far between, among dozens of hours of gameplay, that almost nobody plays it for the sex.
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** 'Kishi Monogatari'' has some explicit sex scenes, but they are so few and far between, among dozens of hours of gameplay, that almost nobody plays it for the sex.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' is either [[PornWithoutPlot an ordinary fantasy-themed porn]], [[BleachedUnderpants or has a plot without any explicit content.]]
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' is either [[PornWithoutPlot an ordinary fantasy-themed porn]], [[BleachedUnderpants or has a plot without any explicit content.]]
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else that it geta very, ''very'' hard to get them, making it seem like they were done just as a cheap way to make the game's runtime longer.
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else that makes it geta very, ''very'' hard to get them, making it seem like they were done just as a cheap way to make the game's runtime longer.
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else it seems like they were done just as a cheap way to make the game's runtime longer.
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else that it seems geta very, ''very'' hard to get them, making it seem like they were done just as a cheap way to make the game's runtime longer.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' is either an ordinary fantasy-themed porn, or has a plot without any explicit content.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' is either [[PornWithoutPlot an ordinary fantasy-themed porn, porn]], [[BleachedUnderpants or has a plot without any explicit content.]]
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else it seems like they were done just to make the game' runtime longer.
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else it seems like they were done just as a cheap way to make the game' game's runtime longer.
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** The sex scenes are so sparsely placed between everything else it seems like they were done just to make the game' runtime longer.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The protagonist slept with so many girls he stops having fun in process and catches some nasty disease. Then the girls ended up hating her for cheating on them with each other.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The protagonist slept with so many girls he stops having fun in process and catches some nasty disease. Then the everyone of girls ended up hating her for cheating on them with each other.the others.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The protagonist slept with so many girls he stops having fun in process and catches some nasty disease. Then he is stalked by one girl who found out she is not the only one lover of him. [[IfICantHaveYou She then kills the protagonist]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': The protagonist slept with so many girls he stops having fun in process and catches some nasty disease. Then he is stalked by one girl who found out she is not the only one lover of him. [[IfICantHaveYou She then kills the protagonist]].girls ended up hating her for cheating on them with each other.
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** The sex scenes are considered [[FetishRetardant absolutely terrible even to those who hold rather niche interests]] but the plot and characterization is considered better than any professional non-pornographic work in the genre - even factoring in the AudienceAlienatingPremise and sex scenes which would be panned in a community of talentless erotic fanfic writers.
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** The sex scenes are considered [[FetishRetardant absolutely terrible even to those who hold rather niche interests]] but the plot and characterization is considered at same level if not better than any professional non-pornographic work in the genre - even factoring in the AudienceAlienatingPremise and sex scenes which would be panned in a community of talentless erotic fanfic writers.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' has a few scenes which are borderline pornographic content, but is not an explicit porn -- more like on the erotica side.
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** ''Kishi Monogatari'' has a few scenes which are borderline pornographic content, but is not an explicit porn -- more like on the erotica ecchi side.
