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typo, pothole would be good here
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** Bob's been though enough that the last straw just makes him laugh at how much the universe seems to hate him.
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** Bob's [[ButtMonkey been though enough through enough]] that the last straw just makes him laugh at how much the universe seems to hate him.
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** [[OldSoldier Bob's]] squad comes under attack and he breaks out laughing as he fights back. He was actually only slightly nervous but nerve gas resulted in laughter. [[TheDreaded It helps maintain a reputation though]] .
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** [[OldSoldier Bob's]] squad comes under attack and he breaks out laughing as he fights back. He was actually only slightly nervous but nerve gas resulted in laughter. [[TheDreaded It helps maintain a reputation though]] .though]].
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-->'''Carol:''' [[DudeNotFunny Bob, S-stop laughing Bob, i-it's not funny]]! \\
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M LAUGHING]]~! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M LAUGHING]]~! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
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-->'''Carol:''' [[DudeNotFunny Bob, S-stop laughing Bob, i-it's not funny]]! funny!]] \\
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'MLAUGHING]]~! LAUGHING~!]] AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M
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-->'''Carol:''' [[DudeNotFunny Bob, S-stop laughing Bob, i-it's not funny! ]]\\
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M LAUGHING~]]! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M LAUGHING~]]! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
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-->'''Carol:''' [[DudeNotFunny Bob, S-stop laughing Bob, i-it's not funny! ]]\\
funny]]! \\
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'MLAUGHING~]]! LAUGHING]]~! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M
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** Bob's friend enters the room at the sound of wild laughter, worried that Bob's gone off his rocker, but realises there are [[CryLaughing tears streaming down his face.]]
** [[OldSoldier Bob's]] squad comes under attack and he breaks out laughing as he fights back. He was actually only slightly nervous but nerve gas resulted in laughter. [[TheDreaded It helps maintain a reputation though.]]
** [[OldSoldier Bob's]] squad comes under attack and he breaks out laughing as he fights back. He was actually only slightly nervous but nerve gas resulted in laughter. [[TheDreaded It helps maintain a reputation though.]]
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** Bob's friend enters the room at the sound of wild laughter, worried that Bob's gone off his rocker, but realises there are [[CryLaughing tears streaming down his face.]]
face]].
** [[OldSoldier Bob's]] squad comes under attack and he breaks out laughing as he fights back. He was actually only slightly nervous but nerve gas resulted in laughter. [[TheDreaded It helps maintain a reputationthough.]] though]] .
** [[OldSoldier Bob's]] squad comes under attack and he breaks out laughing as he fights back. He was actually only slightly nervous but nerve gas resulted in laughter. [[TheDreaded It helps maintain a reputation
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob laughs, then cries, [[CryLaughing then laughs again,]] and [[TroubledFetalPosition then goes silent, and slowly curls into a ball.]]
* '''Averted''': No one laughs during tragic or crisis moments.
* '''Averted''': No one laughs during tragic or crisis moments.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob laughs, then cries, [[CryLaughing then laughs again,]] again]], and [[TroubledFetalPosition then goes silent, and slowly curls into a ball.]]
ball]].
*'''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** No one laughs during tragic or crisis moments.
** No one laughs. '''Ever'''.
** There are no tragic or crisis moments.
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** No one laughs during tragic or crisis moments.
** No one laughs. '''Ever'''.
** There are no tragic or crisis moments.
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** Bob laughs in order to [[ObfuscatingInsanity make them think he's crazy.]]
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** Bob laughs in order to [[ObfuscatingInsanity make them think he's crazy.]]crazy]].
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'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M LAUGHING~!]] AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
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'''Bob:''' [[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S]] ''[[SuddenlyShouting EXACTLY]]'' [[SuddenlyShouting WHY I'M LAUGHING~!]] LAUGHING~]]! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
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* '''Reconstructed''': This gives Bob a full-time chance to [[TakingYouWithMe destroy everything]], [[OmnicidalManiac his way.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': This gives Bob a full-time chance to [[TakingYouWithMe destroy everything]], [[OmnicidalManiac his way.]]way]].
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May not be evil.
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** Bob [[TearsOfJoy breaks down crying after Alice accepts his marriage proposal.]]
** Bob [[EvilLaugh laughs maniacally upon realizing he got out of a very dangerous situation okay.]]
** Bob [[EvilLaugh laughs maniacally upon realizing he got out of a very dangerous situation okay.]]
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** Bob [[TearsOfJoy breaks down crying after Alice accepts his marriage proposal.]]
proposal]].
** Bob[[EvilLaugh laughs maniacally upon realizing he got out of a very dangerous situation okay.]]
** Bob
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** The thing causing Bob's madness is ActuallyPrettyFunny
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** The thing causing Bob's madness is ActuallyPrettyFunnyActuallyPrettyFunny.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Bob's FreakOut disturbs the people around him - his friends leave and he loses his job. He's advised to seek psychiatric help to help him grieve properly, but he's too far gone to even take basic care of himself and ends up in an institution.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Bob's FreakOut disturbs the people around him - his friends leave and he loses his job. He's advised to seek psychiatric help to help him grieve properly, but he's too far gone to even take basic care of himself and ends up locked in an institution.a maximum security psychiatric hospital, leading to the above '''Exaggerated''' scenario of him locked in a padded cell wearing a straitjacket while still laughing uncontrollably.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob is told that Alice is dead, and he breaks down into hauntingly deranged laughter. Cut to him now locked into a padded cell wearing a straitjacket, still cackling demonically and maniacally in a completely uncontrollable manner.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob is told that Alice is dead, and he breaks down into hauntingly deranged laughter. demented cackling. Cut to him now locked into a padded cell wearing a straitjacket, still cackling demonically and maniacally in a completely uncontrollable manner.laughing uncontrollably.
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* '''Subverted''': Bob's friend enters the room at the sound of wild laughter, worried that Bob's gone off his rocker, but realises there are [[CryLaughing tears streaming down his face.]]
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Bob's friend enters the room at the sound of wild laughter, worried that Bob's gone off his rocker, but realises there are [[CryLaughing tears streaming down his face.]]
** Bob's friend enters the room at the sound of wild laughter, worried that Bob's gone off his rocker, but realises there are [[CryLaughing tears streaming down his face.]]
