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Noooo!
'''NOOOOOOOOO!'''
'''NOOOOOOOOO!'''
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'''NOOOOOOOOO!'''
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Go back to GoodAngelBadAngel, and add some wonderful examples! '''NO! Blank it out and fill it with filthy words and pictures!''' Don't listen! Make works pages about adorable kids' cartoons! '''Make works pages about hentai and porn! DO IT!''' SugarWiki/SugarWiki! '''DarthWiki/DarthWiki!'''
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Don't listen! Make works pages about adorable kids'
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SugarWiki/SugarWiki!\\
'''DarthWiki/DarthWiki!'''\\
SugarWiki/SugarWiki!\\
'''DarthWiki/DarthWiki!'''\\
[[SugarWiki/SugarWiki SUGAR WIKI!]]\\
'''[[DarthWiki/DarthWiki DARTH WIKI!]]'''\\
ENOUGH!!! You two get out of here!
Noooo!
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** Alice's shoulder devil wins by default because [[WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy her shoulder angel got stuck in traffic and couldn't be there]] (or vice versa).
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono with gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. [[OurDemonsAreDifferent A bad devil with horns and bat wings]], dressed in [[RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver a skimpy black bikini with red heels]], appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono with gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. [[OurDemonsAreDifferent A bad devil with horns and bat wings]], dressed in [[RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver a skimpy black bikini with red heels]], appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono with subtle gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] top, fishnet stockings, and a miniskirt and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono with subtle gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. [[OurDemonsAreDifferent A demon bad devil with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] top, fishnet stockings, horns and bat wings]], dressed in [[RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver a miniskirt and stiletto heels skimpy black bikini with red heels]], appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono with subtle gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a [[EvilisSexy miniskirt]] and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono with subtle gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], top, fishnet stockings, and a [[EvilisSexy miniskirt]] miniskirt and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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** Alice lives InAWorld where little angels and devils really exist, follow people around, and try to influence their behavior.
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** Angelica and Diabolica still represent contrasting options, such as HonorBeforeReason or CombatPragmatist, to achieve the same morally good result, so Alice still has to choose between them.
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** Angelica and Diabolica still represent contrasting options, such as HonorBeforeReason HopeBringer or CombatPragmatist, GoodIsNotNice, to achieve the same morally good result, so Alice still has to choose between them.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a [[EvilisSexy miniskirt]] and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono]] kimono with subtle gold trimming]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a [[EvilisSexy miniskirt]] and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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** Both Angelica and Diabolica are morally good, Diabolica just has a sassy personality and is more of a daredevil.
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** Both Angelica and Diabolica are morally good, Diabolica just has a sassy personality and is more of a daredevil. In other words, Lawful Good and Chaotic Good.
** Angelica and Diabolica still represent contrasting options, such as HonorBeforeReason or CombatPragmatist, to achieve the same morally good result, so Alice still has to choose between them.
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** The ensuing battle sets Alice's head on fire and she runs away screaming.
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** The ensuing battle sets Alice's head on fire or douses Diabolica in holy water, and she thisone runs away screaming.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a miniskirt and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a miniskirt [[EvilisSexy miniskirt]] and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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*** Either that or the deivl's advice are slightly less moral than the angel's: "Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash."
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*** Either that or the deivl's devil's advice are slightly less moral than the angel's: "Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! buffoon! ...Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash."
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** Inversion of the above:To present Alice as an IncorruptiblePurePureness, she has two shoulder angels StupidGood Angelica and PragmaticHero Gabriella. Her former shoulder devil is out of her head due to being [[HorrifyingTheHorror horrified by the things in her head]], [[FauxHorrific like hugs, rainbows, and friendship.]]
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** Inversion of the above:To above: To present Alice as an IncorruptiblePurePureness, she has two shoulder angels StupidGood Angelica and PragmaticHero Gabriella. Her former shoulder devil is out of her head due to being [[HorrifyingTheHorror horrified by the things in her head]], [[FauxHorrific like hugs, rainbows, and friendship.]]
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*** Either that or the deivl's advice are slightly less moral than the angel's: Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash.
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*** Either that or the deivl's advice are slightly less moral than the angel's: Don't "Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash."
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*** Either that or the deivl's are slightly less moral than the angel's: Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash.
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*** Either that or the deivl's advice are slightly less moral than the angel's: Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash.
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** Inversion of the above:To present Alice as an IncorruptiblePurePureness, she has two shoulder angels AllLovingHeroine Angelica and PragmaticHero Gabriella. Her former shoulder devil is out of her head due to being [[HorrifyingTheHorror horrified by the things in her head]], [[FauxHorrific like hugs, rainbows, and friendship.]]
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** Inversion of the above:To present Alice as an IncorruptiblePurePureness, she has two shoulder angels AllLovingHeroine StupidGood Angelica and PragmaticHero Gabriella. Her former shoulder devil is out of her head due to being [[HorrifyingTheHorror horrified by the things in her head]], [[FauxHorrific like hugs, rainbows, and friendship.]]
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*** Either that or the deivl's are slightly less moral than the angel's: Don't give away all of your money, you buffoon! Just give away like 50% of it and you'll at least have some leftover cash.
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** The only character to appear is Diabolica. (Angelica is [[BoundAndGagged duct taped to a chair and gagged]].) [[note]]The alternative is also possible [[/note]]
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** Instead of a shoulder angel, Alice has a second shoulder devil.
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** The only character to appear is Diabolica. (Angelica is [[BoundAndGagged duct taped to a chair and gagged]].) [[note]]The alternative (Angelica is the only one to appear and Diabolica is bound and gagged) is also possible [[/note]]
**Instead of To present Alice as a HeroicComedicSociopath, she has two shoulder angel, Alice has a second devils in PragmaticVillain Lucy and StupidEvil Diabolica. Her former shoulder devil.angel is out of her head due to [[GoodCannotComprehendEvil things she can't comprehend in her former vessel's head]].
** Inversion of the above:To present Alice as an IncorruptiblePurePureness, she has two shoulder angels AllLovingHeroine Angelica and PragmaticHero Gabriella. Her former shoulder devil is out of her head due to being [[HorrifyingTheHorror horrified by the things in her head]], [[FauxHorrific like hugs, rainbows, and friendship.]]
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** Inversion of the above:To present Alice as an IncorruptiblePurePureness, she has two shoulder angels AllLovingHeroine Angelica and PragmaticHero Gabriella. Her former shoulder devil is out of her head due to being [[HorrifyingTheHorror horrified by the things in her head]], [[FauxHorrific like hugs, rainbows, and friendship.]]
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[AbsoluteCleavage skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a miniskirt and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheProtagonist Alice]] has a crisis of conscience. [[AngelicTropes A good angel with wings and a halo]] dressed in [[GoldAndWhiteAreDivine a modest white kimono]] appears on her right shoulder, appealing to her good or nice side. A demon with a [[AbsoluteCleavage [[NavelDeepNeckline skimpy]] [[BareYourMidriff top]], fishnet stockings, and a miniskirt and stiletto heels appears on the other, appealing to her selfish or mean side.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Other ExpositionFairy type characters (representing all aspects of her personality) appear to offer their two cents.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Other ExpositionFairy type ExpositionFairy-type characters (representing all aspects of her Alice's personality) appear to offer their two cents.
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** The angel's advice is only slightly less immoral than the devil's: "Don't kill him! ...Just wound him, and you'll be out in a few years!"
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** Both Angelica and Diabolica are morally good, Diabolica just has a sassy personality and is more of a daredevil.
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** The angel and the devil get bored and drunk, and switch places for a laugh.
