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** Marcus and his friends make it their personal mission to bully Danny for the rest of his life. By the time they escalate to actually lethal stuff, is by pulling the cord of ninety-year-old Danny's life-support unit.
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** Marcus and his friends make it their personal mission to bully Danny for the rest of his life. By the time they escalate to actually lethal stuff, it is by pulling the cord of ninety-year-old Danny's life-support unit.
** Marcus' parents actively taught him to be a BarbaricBully, delighting in watching their son brutalize other kids.
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* '''Parodied''': The hospitals are full of the [[BullyBrutality bully brutality]] victims
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* '''Parodied''': The hospitals are full of the [[BullyBrutality bully brutality]] victims???
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* '''Lampshaded''': [[{{TheUnfettered}} Marcus]] is not a common bully, he will not dope slap you and make wedgies, he will [[{{NoHoldsBarredBeatdown}}beat you to a bloody pulp]] and maybe more.
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* '''Lampshaded''': [[{{TheUnfettered}} "[[{{TheUnfettered}} Marcus]] is not a common bully, he will not dope slap you and make wedgies, he will [[{{NoHoldsBarredBeatdown}}beat you to a bloody pulp]] and maybe more.more. If you can, avoid him at all costs."
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* '''Conversed''': "Hope Danny's OK. Marcus should rot in jail for nearly killing that poor kid!
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* '''Conversed''': "Hope Danny's OK. Marcus should rot in jail for nearly killing that poor kid!kid!"
** The school's reputation takes a nosedive once word gets out that they did nothing to stop Marcus, and many students are pulled out, while authorities investigate them for letting Marcus run rampant.
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** Usually Marcus would be stopped as a bully if there is a moment wherein all of the "weaklings" stand up as an army and demonstrate that Marcus just cannot take them all on. But Danny is such a psychotic BloodKnight that he '''will''' pummel or even kill as many members of this "army" as he can before going down, and has no problem demonstrating '''that'''. If the options are to be slaughtered alone or together, [[MortonsFork how the heck is it a good idea to stand up against him?]]
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** Usually Marcus would be stopped as a bully if there is a moment wherein all of the "weaklings" stand up as an army and demonstrate that Marcus just cannot take them all on. But Danny Marcus is such a psychotic BloodKnight that he '''will''' pummel or even kill as many members of this "army" as he can before going down, and has no problem demonstrating '''that'''. If the options are to be slaughtered alone or together, [[MortonsFork how the heck is it a good idea to stand up against him?]]
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** [[SerialEscalation Marcus rapes]] [[SerialRapist everyone in the entire school.]]
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** [[CompleteMonster Mar]][[EnfantTerrible cus]] [[SerialEscalation Marcus rapes]] [[SerialRapist everyone in the entire school.]]
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** If we use RapeAsDrama, then [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil the last example of exaggeration counts as this.]]
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** If we use RapeAsDrama, then [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil the last example two examples of exaggeration counts as this.]]
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**Marcus pushes Danny off a skyscraper and onto a massive pile of ignited tables.
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* '''Justified''': [[{{Sadist}} Marcus thrives on violence on those who can't defend themselves]].
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** [[{{Sadist}} Marcus thrives on violence on those who can't defend themselves]].
** [[{{Sadist}} Marcus thrives on violence on those who can't defend themselves]].
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** Marcus violently beats up Mr. Daniels, one of the teachers.
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** Marcus violently beats up Mr. Daniels, one of the teachers.
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** Marcus himself thinks he went too far into his bullying and gets [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone overwhelmed with guilt]].
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** [[SerialEscalation Marcus rapes]] [[SerialRapist everyone in the entire school.]]
