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** The society Seamus lives, it's normal for at least the youngest (any remaining member) to stay with their parents until marriage.
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** The In the society Seamus lives, it's normal for at least the youngest (any remaining member) to stay with their parents until marriage.
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** Seamus O'Taku moved to an apartment of his own on his twelfth birthday, bought with money he made on the stock market in the name of a fake identity he created for himself. This was all in protest to his parents refusing to give him a raise in his pocket money. When his dad loses his job, they're forced to live in ''his'' basement. HilarityEnsues.
** Seamus lives in his own apartment despite being so young that it is abnormal.
** Seamus lives in his own apartment despite being so young that it is abnormal.
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** Seamus O'Taku [[MinorLivingAlone moved to an apartment of his own on his twelfth birthday, birthday]], bought with money he made on the stock market in the name of a fake identity he created for himself. This was all in protest to his parents refusing to give him a raise in his pocket money. When his dad loses his job, they're forced to live in ''his'' basement. HilarityEnsues.
** Seamus lives in his own apartment despite being so young that it is abnormal.HilarityEnsues.
** Seamus lives in his own apartment despite being so young that it is abnormal.
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** Seamus moves out of the house, because he is not getting along with his parents.
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** Seamus moves out of the house, house because he is not getting along with his parents.
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** Seamus moving out of the house is treated not as a right of passage, but selfish abandonment.
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** In Seamus' culture, one is expected to live in their parents house for their entire life. Seamus moving out of the house is treated not as a right of passage, but selfish abandonment.
