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** [[SociopathicHero Alice]] is outright sociopathic, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the villains find her disgusting.]]
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** [[SociopathicHero Alice]] Alice is an outright sociopathic, SociopathicHero, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the villains find her disgusting.]]
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** Alice has no seemingly positive traits at all whatsoever and is a completely unsympathetic person despite being on the side of good.
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** Alice [[DesignatedHero Alice]] has no seemingly positive traits at all whatsoever and is a completely unsympathetic person despite being on the side of good.
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** [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Alice]] is a NiceGirl who has a few {{jerk|ass}}ish qualities.
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** [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold [[{{Tsundere}} Alice]] is a NiceGirl who has a few {{jerk|ass}}ish qualities.
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** VillainProtagonist.
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** All [[VillainProtagonist Alice]] does is just murder people for [[DisproportionateRetribution petty]] [[FelonyMisdemeanor reasons,]] cross the {{moral event horizon}}, Dress up in [[EvilWearsBlack black]] [[SpikesOfVillainy spiky]] [[TinTyrant armor]] only [[EvilOverlord evil overlords]] would wear, [[CardCarryingVillain proudly declare she’s evil,]] and yet [[UnreliableNarrator the story]] ''[[InformedKindness still]]'' [[DesignatedHero treats her like the hero.]] In other words, she is no hero.
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** All [[VillainProtagonist Alice]] does Alice is just murder people for [[DisproportionateRetribution petty]] [[FelonyMisdemeanor reasons,]] cross the {{moral event horizon}}, Dress up in [[EvilWearsBlack black]] [[SpikesOfVillainy spiky]] [[TinTyrant armor]] only [[EvilOverlord evil overlords]] would wear, [[CardCarryingVillain proudly declare she’s evil,]] a “hero” who is a [[HeroicComedicSociopath mean]], [[SirSwearsALot foul-mouthed]], [[LovableSexManiac sex-driven]], {{h|air trigger temper}}ot-tempered, and yet [[UnreliableNarrator the story]] ''[[InformedKindness still]]'' [[DesignatedHero treats her like the hero.]] In other words, she is no hero.[[PoliticallyIncorrectHero racist]] [[TheAlcoholic alcoholic]]
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** Alice is a HeelFaceRevolvingDoor and switches between being an AntiHero or an AntiVillain depending on wether or not she is working with the heroes at the moment.
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** Alice is a HeelFaceRevolvingDoor and switches between being an AntiHero or an AntiVillain depending on wether whether or not she is working with the heroes at the moment.
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** Alice becomes a HeroWithBadPublicity because of her {{anti hero}}ism.
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** Alice is a NiceGirl who has a few {{jerk|ass}}ish qualities.
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** Alice [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Alice]] is a NiceGirl who has a few {{jerk|ass}}ish qualities.
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** Alice is even worse than the villains she fights.
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** {{Well Intentioned|Extremist}} VillainProtagonist
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** {{Well Intentioned|Extremist}} VillainProtagonistVillainProtagonist.
** Alice has no seemingly positive traits at all whatsoever and is a completely unsympathetic person despite being on the side of good.
** Alice has no seemingly positive traits at all whatsoever and is a completely unsympathetic person despite being on the side of good.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "TheChosenOne seems a tad unheroic."
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
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** "TheChosenOne seems a tad unheroic.
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** Alice gets [[WhatTheHellHero called out for being untraditionally heroic]] by one of her teammates and gets kicked off of her team.
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** Alice has a [[TheFettered line she will not cross]]; the [[BlackAndGrayMorality villains are much worse than she is]] and she really is making the world a better place through her actions.
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** Alice has a [[TheFettered line she will not cross]]; the [[BlackAndGrayMorality villains are much worse than she is]] and she [[TheExtremistWasRight really is making the world a better place through her actions.actions]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], [[GoodIsNotNice abrasive]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], [[GoodIsNotNice abrasive]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] as the three]] {{Big Bad}}s in the BigBadEnsemble such as EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], [[GoodIsNotNice abrasive]],{{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], [[GoodIsNotNice abrasive]],{{sociopathic|Hero}}, abrasive]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, [[GoodIsNotNice abrasive]],{{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** Alice is a [[PragmaticHero Pragmatic Heroine]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=], [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=,=], EvilOverlord[=,=] [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=/=], [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=/=], EvilOverlord[=,=], [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Alice]] [[NominalHero is]] {{only in it for the money}}, {{blood|Knight}}thirsty, {{prag|matic hero}}[[ShootTheDog matic]], [[PayEvilUntoEvil brutal]], [[KnightInSourArmor cynical]], [[TerrorHero shady]], {{sociopathic|Hero}}, and overall [[DesignatedHero seems nowhere like a hero at all]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack yet she’s nowhere as bad as]] EvilOverlord[=/=], [[StupidEvil Emperor]] {{Ev|il is petty}}ulz, an outright CardCarryingVillain who [[KickTheDog kicks dogs]] [[{{Sadist}} and commits other]] [[MoralEventHorizon reprehensibly evil crimes]] ForTheEvulz, the SerialKiller and OmnicidalManiac [[HateSink Charlie]], and CompleteMonster [[ANaziByAnyOtherName General]] [[NukeEm Bob]].
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** Alice is a NiceGirl who has a few {{jerk|ass}}ish qualities.
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** Alice is a KnightTemplar.
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** [[FreudianExcuse Alice’s former]] {{all loving hero}}ism [[StupidGood lead to]] [[HeroBall the villains]] [[TheFarmerAndTheViper backstabbing her]] and [[KarmaHoudini getting away with their crimes despite being unrepentant about it]]. This lead Alice to resort to [[GrayingMorality drastic measures]] to ensure that the villains will get their [[LaserGuidedKarma well-deserved punishments]] even if it meant [[PayEvilUntoEvil killing them]].
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** Alice is rapidly becoming just as brutal as, [[HeWhoFightsMonsters if not WORSE than]][[EvilVersusEvil her villains]], and when she's killed all of the real threats to society, she's still a dangerously unstable and violent individual.
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** Alice is rapidly becoming just as brutal as, [[HeWhoFightsMonsters if not WORSE than]][[EvilVersusEvil than]] [[EvilVersusEvil her villains]], and when she's killed all of the real threats to society, she's still a dangerously unstable and violent individual.
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** Alice kills criminals to make a world a better place, sounds good, right? Not when you realize the criminals she killed are no worse than a 2 bit {{con man}}, AND the fact that none of her victims killed anyone at all, [[DesignatedHero unlike her]]. Even worse, she both [[KarmaHoudini gets away scot-free]] and [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality gets portrayed in a sympathetic light despite her actions]]. This proves Alice is no better than the criminals she kills.
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** Alice kills criminals to make a world a better place, sounds good, right? Not when you realize the criminals she killed are no worse than a 2 bit {{con man}}, AND the fact that none gets [[WhatTheHellHero called out for being untraditionally heroic]] by one of her victims killed anyone at all, [[DesignatedHero unlike her]]. Even worse, she both [[KarmaHoudini teammates and gets away scot-free]] and [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality gets portrayed in a sympathetic light despite kicked off of her actions]]. This proves Alice is no better than the criminals she kills.
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* '''Averted''': [[IdealHero All the heroes in the story actually act conventionally heroic.]]
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* '''Averted''': [[IdealHero All the heroes in the story actually act conventionally heroic.]]
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** Alice is rapidly becoming just as brutal as, [[HeWhoFightsMonsters if not WORSE than]], [[EvilVersusEvil than]][[EvilVersusEvil her villains]], and when she's killed all of the real threats to society, she's still a dangerously unstable and violent individual.
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** [[GrumpyBear Alice]] tries to bring about her own brand of harsh justice, but she lives in a SugarBowl society where there's hardly ever even any conflict -- Alice spends most of her time {{angst}}ing that there's nothing to {{Angst}} about.
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** [[GrumpyBear Alice]] Alice tries to bring about her own brand of harsh justice, but she lives in a SugarBowl society where there's hardly ever even any conflict -- Alice spends most of her time {{angst}}ing that there's nothing to {{Angst}} about.
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** Alice likes to think she's a heroic individual, [[DesignatedHero she's anything but]] and [[TheFriendNobodyLikes her fellow heroes and heroines aren't even convinced that she's good.]]
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** Alice likes to think she's a heroic individual, but [[DesignatedHero she's anything but]] and [[TheFriendNobodyLikes her fellow heroes and heroines aren't even convinced that she's good.]]