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!!Game
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** "Sara: "G...Gin...Hey..." Gin: "......." Sara: "No..no..."
** In Fly Swatter, Sara will plead her life as the bug monsters beat her and the participant several times (Kanna, Nao, Gin) until their bodies lie motionless. This death is even more disturbing when you have Kanna as both of their eyes are '''wide open.'''
** In Fly Swatter, Sara will plead her life as the bug monsters beat her and the participant several times (Kanna, Nao, Gin) until their bodies lie motionless. This death is even more disturbing when you have Kanna as both of their eyes are '''wide open.'''
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'''Gin''': ".......
'''Sara''': "No..no..."
** In Fly Swatter, Sara will plead her life as the bug monsters beat her and the participant several times (Kanna, Nao, Gin) until their bodies lie motionless. This death is even more disturbing when you have Kanna as both of their eyes are
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** In Shutter Spirits, Sara and her partner (Keiji, Reko, Nao) are suffocated by a mass of ghostly hands. If you have Keiji as your partner, his last words are "At least start with me!"
** If the participant (Sou, Reko, Alice) loses at Stay on the Target, both of them get eaten alive by the monster. The last crunch results in a blood splatter covering the lips and the eyes of the monster.
** If the participant (Sou, Reko, Alice) loses at Stay on the Target, both of them get eaten alive by the monster. The last crunch results in a blood splatter covering the lips and the eyes of the monster.
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** In Shutter Spirits, Sara and her partner (Keiji, Reko, Nao) are suffocated by a mass of ghostly hands. If you have Keiji as your partner, his last words are "At "[[TakeMeInstead At least start with me!"
me!]]"
** If the participant (Sou, Reko, Alice) loses at Stay on the Target, both of them get eaten alive by the monster. The last crunch results in a blood splatter covering the lips and the eyes of the monster. \n \n \n
** If the participant (Sou, Reko, Alice) loses at Stay on the Target, both of them get eaten alive by the monster. The last crunch results in a blood splatter covering the lips and the eyes of the monster.
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!!Manga
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* Hallucination Joe's appearance looks even worse than the game, as aside from his twisted grin, he's now covered in blood, said blood is oozing out of both his eyes and nostrils, and he possesses GlowingEyelightsOfUndeath.
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** Possibly the worst part is the look on Gashu's face; just before the gun goes off he flashes a very happy and ''very very cruel'' smile, because he knows ''exactly'' what his actions are about to do to the main cast.
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Dewicked trope
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''Your Turn To Die'' at a first glance appears to be just another DeadlyGame suspense VisualNovel like ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'' or ''VisualNovel/ZeroEscape'', but that very much does Nankidai's work a disservice... and vastly, ''vastly'' undercuts the sheer plethora of AdultFear, [[CruelAndUnusualDeath brutally horrific deaths]], and [[PsychologicalHorror sanity-blasting horror]] to be found underneath it all.
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''Your Turn To Die'' at a first glance appears to be just another DeadlyGame suspense VisualNovel like ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'' or ''VisualNovel/ZeroEscape'', but that very much does Nankidai's work a disservice... and vastly, ''vastly'' undercuts the sheer plethora of AdultFear, horrors, [[CruelAndUnusualDeath brutally horrific deaths]], and [[PsychologicalHorror sanity-blasting horror]] to be found underneath it all.
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** In Shutter Spirits, Sara and her partner (Keiji, Reko, Nao) are suffocated by a mass of ghostly hands. If you have Keiji as your partner, his last words are "At least start with me!"
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* Mishima's death is taken up to eleven in chapter seven of the manga. As the collar activates and begins to burn his neck, we see a gruesomely detailed shot of Mishima bleeding from every orifice. The reactions of the other participants surely don't help, especially Kanna as the next page shows her sitting in her own urine as a lifeless corpse of a bloody man that she barely knew, lies next to her.
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed the player likely would be worried about what will happen to Sara in that scene.]]
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed the player likely would be worried about what will happen to Sara in that scene.]]
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed its a scary ColdOpen]]
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed its a scary ColdOpen]]the player likely would be worried about what will happen to Sara in that scene.]]
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed its a scary CallForward]]
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed its a scary CallForward]]ColdOpen]]
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* The start of the game shows a pair of hands slowly approaching Sara ... with that same scene happening in chapter 3-1B.... [[spoiler: [[BaitAndSwitch thankfully]] it's just Keiji but before that's revealed its a scary CallForward]]
