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* Izuku's entire life had been filled with trepidation due to his fear that society will shun him because he's the son of an infamous villain named Heat Viper.
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** [[GruesomeGrandparent All For One sending]] his own grandson to train with three Noumus who could kill him. All For One even tells Izuku while the latter is unique, he's not invaluable.
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* After Izuku publicly revealed himself to be the son of Heat Viper during his match with Shoto at the Sports Festival, the public was immediately wary and distrustful of him just for being related to such a high-profile villain, despite Izuku not even being born by the time his father's rampage took place.
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* After Izuku publicly revealed himself to be the son of Heat Viper during his match with Shoto at the Sports Festival, the public was immediately wary and distrustful of him just for being related to such a high-profile villain, despite Izuku not wasn't even being born by the time his father's rampage took place.
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-> '''All For One:''' "Quite honestly, I didn't think Hisashi's body was even fertile after all the experiments and how his Quirk was implanted into him. You have no idea what a happy accident you turned out to be for me, Izuku…One of my most successful experiments, producing an even greater result…It's the sort of thing that many researchers only dream of. The latent gene for All for One, which was dormant in Hisashi, was likely triggered due to its combination with your mother's Quirk- the ability to attract small objects. Whether it was by fate or chance…you are, in a way, one of my "children". You are mine."
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-> '''All For One:''' "Quite honestly, I didn't think Hisashi's body was even fertile after all the experiments and how his Quirk was implanted into him. You have no idea what a happy accident you turned out to be for me, Izuku…One of my most successful experiments, producing an even greater result…It's the sort of thing that many researchers only dream of. The latent gene for All for One, which was dormant in Hisashi, was likely triggered due to its combination with your mother's Quirk- the ability to attract small objects. Whether it was by fate or chance…you are, in a way, one of my "children". You are mine." -->--
** [[GruesomeGrandparent All For One sending]] his own grandson to train with three Noumus who could kill him. All For One even tells Izuku while the latter is unique, he's not invaluable.
** [[GruesomeGrandparent All For One sending]] his own grandson to train with three Noumus who could kill him. All For One even tells Izuku while the latter is unique, he's not invaluable.
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-> '''All For One:''' "Quite honestly, I didn't think Hisashi's body was even fertile after all the experiments and how his Quirk was implanted into him. You have no idea what a happy accident you turned out to be for me, Izuku…One of my most successful experiments, producing an even greater result…It's the sort of thing that many researchers only dream of. The latent gene for All for One, which was dormant in Hisashi, was likely triggered due to its combination with your mother's Quirk- the ability to attract small objects. Whether it was by fate or chance…you are, in a way, one of my "children". You are mine." -->--
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-> '''All For One:''' "Quite honestly, I didn't think Hisashi's body was even fertile after all the experiments and how his Quirk was implanted into him. You have no idea what a happy accident you turned out to be for me, Izuku…One of my most successful experiments, producing an even greater result…It's the sort of thing that many researchers only dream of. The latent gene for All for One, which was dormant in Hisashi, was likely triggered due to its combination with your mother's Quirk- the ability to attract small objects. Whether it was by fate or chance…you are, in a way, one of my "children". You are mine."
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-> '''All For One:''' "Quite honestly, I didn't think Hisashi's body was even fertile after all the experiments and how his Quirk was implanted into him. You have no idea what a happy accident you turned out to be for me, Izuku…One of my most successful experiments, producing an even greater result…It's the sort of thing that many researchers only dream of. The latent gene for All for One, which was dormant in Hisashi, was likely triggered due to its combination with your mother's Quirk- the ability to attract small objects. Whether it was by fate or chance…you are, in a way, one of my "children". You are mine." -->--
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-> '''All For One:''' "Quite honestly, I didn't think Hisashi's body was even fertile after all the experiments and how his Quirk was implanted into him. You have no idea what a happy accident you turned out to be for me, Izuku…One of my most successful experiments, producing an even greater result…It's the sort of thing that many researchers only dream of. The latent gene for All for One, which was dormant in Hisashi, was likely triggered due to its combination with your mother's Quirk- the ability to attract small objects. Whether it was by fate or chance…you are, in a way, one of my "children". You are mine."
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* In Chapter 26, Izuku meets All For One for the first time with the latter reveals their relations.
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** Even worse, Tomura decides to [[FateWorseThanDeath turn Overhaul into a Nomu,]] stripping him of his [[IdentityAmnesia memories,]] individual thoughts, and [[AndIMustScream free will.]]
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** Even worse, Tomura decides to [[FateWorseThanDeath turn Overhaul into a Noumu,]] Nomu,]] stripping him of his [[IdentityAmnesia memories,]] individual thoughts, and [[AndIMustScream free will.]]
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** When Hisashi enters the bar, his arrival caused a would-be fight between the League of Villains to stop. The fact that villains like ''Muscular'' and ''Moonfish'' immediately standing down shows just how respected and feared he is among them.
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** When Hisashi enters the bar, his arrival caused a would-be fight between the League of Villains to stop. The fact that villains like ''Muscular'' ''[[TheBrute Muscular]]'' and ''Moonfish'' ''[[ImAHumanitarian Moonfish]]'' immediately standing down shows just how respected and feared he is among them.
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* In Chapter 36, Himiko's blood withdrawl reaches a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''{{Film/Insidious.}}'' When she finally drinks his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
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* In Chapter 36, Himiko's blood withdrawl reaches a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''{{Film/Insidious.}}'' ''{{Film/Insidious}}.'' When she finally drinks his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
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** Izuku reveal to All Might that when his Quirk manifested, it was when he was in the second grade and his teacher back then had an ''actaul'' heart attack from seeing his fire. Izuku even revealed that her husband was one of the many victims of his father.
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** Izuku reveal to All Might that when his Quirk manifested, it was when he was in the second grade and his teacher back then had an ''actaul'' heart attack a ''heart attack'' from seeing his fire. Izuku even revealed that her husband was one of the many victims of his father.
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* In Chapter 36, Himiko's blood withdrawl reaches a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''Film/Insidious.'' ''{{Film/Insidious.}}'' When she finally drinks his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
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* In Chapter 36, Himiko's blood withdrawl reaches a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''Film/{{Insidious.}}'' ''Film/Insidious.'' When she finally drinks his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
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* In Chapter 39, Izuku and All For One talk. He explains Kai Chisaki, aka Overhaul, the Eight Percepts of Death, and the creation of the Quirk-Destroying bullets. Izuku [[BurningWithAnger combusts,]] because his legal grandfather just explained the torture Eri had been through before he met her.
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*** [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone When Viper realizes this,]] [[VillainousBSOD his anger and desire to fight vanishes]] as [[OffingTheOffspring his greatest fear,]] along with [[AdultFear his former wife's,]] may just come true because of him.
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*** [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone When Viper realizes this,]] [[VillainousBSOD his anger and desire to fight vanishes]] as [[OffingTheOffspring his greatest fear,]] along with [[AdultFear his former wife's,]] lover's,]] may just come true because of him.
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* In Chapter 24, which is one of many [[WhamEpisode WhamEpisodes]] for this story, there are many scary moments.
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* In Chapter 24, which is basically the WhamEpisode for this story, there are many scary moments.
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* After Izuku and Hisashi meet for the first time, the former punches the latter at 100%. However, it's this that made Hisashi realize that All Might give One For All to his son, causing Heat Viper to scream at All Might furiously.
** The man was so angry that he generated an explosion which devoured many of the trees in the forest there. Hisashi came out of the destruction with a scowl on his face and his eyes blazing, which set both the heroes and villains in the area on-edge.
** Heat Viper ordering Izuku to come to him immediately in a dangerous tone. The entire scene is disturbingly familiar to an abusive parent telling their child to come to them before hurting them.
** The man was so angry that he generated an explosion which devoured many of the trees in the forest there. Hisashi came out of the destruction with a scowl on his face and his eyes blazing, which set both the heroes and villains in the area on-edge.
** Heat Viper ordering Izuku to come to him immediately in a dangerous tone. The entire scene is disturbingly familiar to an abusive parent telling their child to come to them before hurting them.
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** Izuku and Hisashi meet for the first time, and it's clear Izuku is theformer punches the latter target.
** [[WouldHurtAChild Hisashi casually takes aim]] at100%. Ochako and Kota, forcing Izuku to use One For All at 100%.
*** However, it's this that made Hisashi realize that All Might give One For All to his son, causing Heat Viper toscream at [[SayMyName roar All Might furiously.
**Might's name]] [[SkywardScream to the heavens in fury.]] The man was so angry that he generated an explosion which devoured many of the trees in the forest there. Hisashi came out of the destruction with a scowl on his face and his eyes blazing, which set both the heroes and villains in the area on-edge.
** Heat Viper ordering Izuku to come to him immediately in a dangerous tone. The entire scene is disturbingly familiar to an abusive parent telling their child to come to them before hurtingthem. them.
** In the end, Heat Viper [[CurbStompBattle incapacitates The Pussycats, Katsuki, and Izuku]] with horrifying ease and takes his son away.
** Izuku and Hisashi meet for the first time, and it's clear Izuku is the
** [[WouldHurtAChild Hisashi casually takes aim]] at
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** Heat Viper ordering Izuku to come to him immediately in a dangerous tone. The entire scene is disturbingly familiar to an abusive parent telling their child to come to them before hurting
** In the end, Heat Viper [[CurbStompBattle incapacitates The Pussycats, Katsuki, and Izuku]] with horrifying ease and takes his son away.
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** Later on, Izuku fights Heat Viper after naming All Might his father figure. Heat Viper's so angry that when he sends Izuku flying with one of his attacks...Izuku ends up getting [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaled]] in the same area of [[IronicEcho All Might's critical injury.]]
*** When Viper realizes what he just did, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone his anger and desire to fight vanishes]] as [[OffingTheOffspring his greatest fear,]] along with [[AdultFear Inko's,]] may just come true because of him.
* In Chapter 36, Himiko's blood withdrawls reach a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''Film/{{Insidious}}'' and he finally coaxes her to drink his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
* In Chapter 47, Eri meets Chisaki again for the first time in months. She's terrified, not only at the idea of going back to him, but losing [[HappilyAdopted her family.]]
*** When Viper realizes what he just did, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone his anger and desire to fight vanishes]] as [[OffingTheOffspring his greatest fear,]] along with [[AdultFear Inko's,]] may just come true because of him.
* In Chapter 36, Himiko's blood withdrawls reach a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''Film/{{Insidious}}'' and he finally coaxes her to drink his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
* In Chapter 47, Eri meets Chisaki again for the first time in months. She's terrified, not only at the idea of going back to him, but losing [[HappilyAdopted her family.]]
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** Later on, Izuku fights Heat Viper after naming All Might his father figure. Heat Viper's so angry that when he sends Izuku flying with one of his attacks...Izuku ends up getting [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaled]] in the same area of a bit more like]] [[IronicEcho All Might's critical injury.Might than desired.]]
***When Viper realizes what he just did, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone When Viper realizes this,]] [[VillainousBSOD his anger and desire to fight vanishes]] as [[OffingTheOffspring his greatest fear,]] along with [[AdultFear Inko's,]] his former wife's,]] may just come true because of him.
* In Chapter 36, Himiko's bloodwithdrawls reach withdrawl reaches a terrifying high. She escapes her room and the entire sequence plays out like a scene from a horror movie. When Izuku finds her, she's [[RightBehindMe looking at him in a mirror,]] much like the red demon from ''Film/{{Insidious}}'' and he ''Film/{{Insidious.}}'' When she finally coaxes her to drink drinks his blood, she takes so much that he falls unconscious.
* In Chapter 47, Eri meets Chisaki again for the first time in months.She's As expected, she's terrified, not only at the idea of going back to him, but losing [[HappilyAdopted the very first people to show her family.love.]]
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* In Chapter 1, when Izuku use his Quirk for the first time in seven years on the Slug Villain to saved Katsuki, the [[HorrifyingTheHorror first latter]] realize that the former is the child of Heat Viper after seeing the Quirk up close. The Slug Villain even out right calls Izuku a monster.
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->''"Now then...let me kill some time until [[ArchEnemy All Might]] gets here...and [[HoistByHisOwnPetard burn you to death, O fiery hero.]]"''
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* Izuku, while on a Trigger-induced rampage, reducing Overhaul to a smoking carcass even as his own body is ''incinerated to the bone'' by his own uncontrollable power.
* Overhaul waking up, alive, only to find himself at the nonexistent mercy of Tomura and [[MadScientist Doctor Ujiko]].
** Even worse, Tomura gives Overhaul a fate worse than death: to be turned into a Noumu and be stripped of his memories, individual thoughts, and free will.
* Overhaul waking up, alive, only to find himself at the nonexistent mercy of Tomura and [[MadScientist Doctor Ujiko]].
** Even worse, Tomura gives Overhaul a fate worse than death: to be turned into a Noumu and be stripped of his memories, individual thoughts, and free will.
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* In Chapter 55, Overhaulwaking wakes up, alive, only to find himself at the nonexistent mercy of Tomura [[EvenEvilHasStandards Tomura]] and [[MadScientist Doctor Ujiko]].
** Even worse, Tomuragives decides to [[FateWorseThanDeath turn Overhaul a fate worse than death: to be turned into a Noumu and be stripped a Noumu,]] stripping him of his memories, [[IdentityAmnesia memories,]] individual thoughts, and [[AndIMustScream free will.
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* In Chapter 55, Overhaul
** Even worse, Tomura
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* Hisashi escaping the prison transfer, along with Muscular and Moonfish. Hearing the grave news of his villain father managing to escape sent Izuku into a heavy panic attack that caused him to pass out.
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* In Chapter 20, Hisashi escaping escapes his incarceration during the prison transfer, along with Muscular and Moonfish. Hearing Faced with the grave news of knowledge that his villain father managing to escape sent is free, Izuku into suffers a heavy panic attack that caused him to pass and passes out.
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* In Chapter 29, Heat Viper effortlessly crushes Endeavor, the Number 2 hero.
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hero.]] [[note]] It's not really the fact that [[JerkAss Endeavor]] is getting beaten up, [[OhCrap it's what it would mean for society if Hisashi isn't stopped.]] [[/note]]
** Later on, Izuku fights Heat Viper after naming All Might his father figure. Heat Viper's so angry that when he sends Izuku flying with one of his attacks...Izuku ends up gettingimpaled [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaled]] in the same area of [[IronicEcho All Might's critical injury.]]
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* In Chapter 29, Heat Viper effortlessly crushing Endeavor, the Number 2 hero, and ''enjoying'' it.
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*** When Viper realizes what he just did, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all the his anger and desire to fight is gone]] vanishes]] as [[OffingTheOffspring his greatest fear,]] along with [[AdultFear Inko's,]] may just come true because of him.