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* Uncle's face when drawn in excruciating detail is not the prettiest sight. It's no wonder people of Granbahamal thought he was some subspecies of orc especially compared to the inhumane beauty standards of the people there.
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* Uncle's face when drawn in excruciating detail is not the prettiest sight. It's no wonder people the human residents of Granbahamal thought he was some subspecies of orc especially compared to the inhumane beauty standards of the people there.
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* Uncle's face when drawn in excruciating detail is not the prettiest sight. It's no wonder people of Granbahamal thought he was some subspecies of orc especially compared to the inhumane beauty standards of there.
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* Uncle's face when drawn in excruciating detail is not the prettiest sight. It's no wonder people of Granbahamal thought he was some subspecies of orc especially compared to the inhumane beauty standards of the people there.
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* Uncle's face when drawn in excruciating detail is not the prettiest sight. It's no wonder people of Granbahamal thought he was some subspecies of orc especially compared to the inhumane beauty standards of there.
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* The same goes for the ice maiden.
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* The same goes for Mabel, the ice maiden.
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* A monster appears in the forest with a haunting siren voice. [[spoiler: Turns out it’s just Mabel making an illusion with her ice magic]], but the appearance of the monster is chilling.
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* A monster appears in the forest with a haunting siren voice. [[spoiler: Turns out it’s just Mabel making an illusion with her ice magic]], magic, but the appearance of the monster is chilling.
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* Don’t make the Elf angry. You won’t like her when she’s angry.
* The same goes for the ice maiden.
* How do you like the existence of a giant man-eating hedgehog?
* There is a demon that infects people through the stomach. What it does to people is not seen, but it makes Uncle throw up, and when he gets infected Takafumi and Fujimiya refuse to see what happens to him.
* A monster appears in the forest with a haunting siren voice. [[spoiler: Turns out it’s just Mabel making an illusion with her ice magic]], but the appearance of the monster is chilling.
* Don’t make the Elf angry. You won’t like her when she’s angry.
* The same goes for the ice maiden.
* How do you like the existence of a giant man-eating hedgehog?
* There is a demon that infects people through the stomach. What it does to people is not seen, but it makes Uncle throw up, and when he gets infected Takafumi and Fujimiya refuse to see what happens to him.
* A monster appears in the forest with a haunting siren voice. [[spoiler: Turns out it’s just Mabel making an illusion with her ice magic]], but the appearance of the monster is chilling.
