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* When Virtus befriends a pregnant stray dog, as soon as the puppies are born, Boudicca [[KickTheDog forces him to kill]] and [[EatTheDog eat them and their mother]].
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* When Virtus befriends a pregnant stray dog, as soon as the puppies are born, Boudicca [[KickTheDog forces him to kill]] kill and [[EatTheDog eat them and their mother]].
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* While it's definitely far quicker than the above, the ways the some of the Careers die are pretty horrific (if [[LaserGuidedKarma well]]-[[KickTheSonOfABitch deserved]]):
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* While it's definitely far quicker than the above, the ways the some of the Careers die are pretty horrific (if [[LaserGuidedKarma well]]-[[KickTheSonOfABitch deserved]]):well-deserved]]):
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** Once you become a Victor, [[HopeSpot you get to escape the DAEYD without anyone there bothering you, right?]] ''[[YankTheDogsChain Not a chance.]]'' Luster would still try to control you (and is good at doing so), as seen with Wonder following his Hunger Games and Ermine when she's assigned Song as a mentee. As much as she likes her, Jade is uncomfortable interacting with Song due to the attention she would attract from Luster.
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** Once you become a Victor, [[HopeSpot you get to escape the DAEYD without anyone there bothering you, right?]] right]]? ''[[YankTheDogsChain Not a chance.]]'' chance]].'' Luster would still try to control you (and is good at doing so), as seen with Wonder following his Hunger Games and Ermine when she's assigned Song as a mentee. As much as she likes her, Jade is uncomfortable interacting with Song due to the attention she would attract from Luster.
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* What passes for a rebellion in District 6 is bloodthirsty gangs taking victors' relatives as hostages while trying to claim the district for themselves, the Capitol gunning down anyone who tries to find shelter with them while the Rebellion bombs at least one train trying to leave, and the district's in-fighting starting massive urban fires. [[StuffBlowingUp Then the fires hit the petrol refineries,]] [[TheTokyoFireball and half of District 6 simply]] ''[[TheTokyoFireball vanishes]]''.
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* What passes for a rebellion in District 6 is bloodthirsty gangs taking victors' relatives as hostages while trying to claim the district for themselves, the Capitol gunning down anyone who tries to find shelter with them while the Rebellion bombs at least one train trying to leave, and the district's in-fighting starting massive urban fires. [[StuffBlowingUp Then the fires hit the petrol refineries,]] refineries]], [[TheTokyoFireball and half of District 6 simply]] ''[[TheTokyoFireball vanishes]]''.
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-->Peacekeepers die. [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice They die impaled on whirling shards of steel.]] [[EyeScream They die with their eyeballs melting from their faces.]] They die half devoured or dissolved. They die screaming, and they die in silence. [[DefiantToTheEnd They die defiantly,]] [[VillainsWantMercy or they die begging for their lives.]] But they die.
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-->Peacekeepers die. [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice They die impaled on whirling shards of steel.]] steel]]. [[EyeScream They die with their eyeballs melting from their faces.]] faces]]. They die half devoured or dissolved. They die screaming, and they die in silence. [[DefiantToTheEnd They die defiantly,]] defiantly]], or [[VillainsWantMercy or they die begging for their lives.]] lives]]. But they die.
