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* The opening pan shot in Boston with various people dropping dead out of nowhere due to pacemakers being affected by EMPs, some of whom were driving cars and crashing into various spots including a ''gas tanker'' turned on it's side and spilling all over the road.
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* The opening pan shot in Boston with various people dropping dead out of nowhere due to pacemakers being affected by EMPs, [=EMPs=], some of whom were driving cars and crashing into various spots including a ''gas tanker'' turned on it's side and spilling all over the road.
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* The lightning-storm that destroys Rome's monuments and even statically charges TVs and coffee machines enough to cause a shock just from touching them. Seeing such monuments like the Roman Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.
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* The lightning-storm that destroys Rome's monuments and even statically charges TVs [=TVs=] and coffee machines enough to cause a shock just from touching them. Seeing such monuments like the Roman Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.
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** Even worse is that he could've been saved had Beck flipped the override switches which is what Keyes kept telling her to do, but she didn't...
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** Even worse is that he could've been saved had Beck flipped the override switches which is what Keyes kept telling her to do, but she didn't...
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* The whole concept of being trapped in a giant cigar tube not dozens, not hundreds, but ''thousands'' of miles underground, is nightmarish all by itself. Not helped by the fact that save for one improbable location, the entirety of the core appears to be utterly inimical to human life. Step outside Virgil for even a moment, lose one bulkhead or seal, and you'll be crushed, suffocated, or incinerated within seconds. And even if you could survive... you're still thousands of miles from the surface, without food or supplies, and no rescue team coming. [[SarcasmMode Lovely.]]
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* The opening pan shot in Boston with various people dropping dead out of nowhere, nowhere due to pacemakers being affected by EMPs, some of whom were driving cars and crashing into various spots including a ''gas tanker'' turned on it's side and spilling all over the road.
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** What makes it even worse was that similar storms were about to spawn right over the city of ''Paris'' France just as the core was fixing itself. Heavily implying that had the heroes not fixed the core in time, Paris would have met the same fate as Rome, including a melted Eiffel Tower.
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** What makes it even worse was that a similar storms were storm was about to spawn right over the city of ''Paris'' France ''Paris, France'' just as the core was fixing itself. Heavily implying that had the heroes not fixed the core in time, Paris and it's monuments would have met the same fate as Rome, Rome due to the cities' close proximity, including a melted Eiffel Tower.
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* The lightning-storm that destroys Rome's monuments and even statically charges coffee machines enough to cause a shock from touching them. Seeing such monuments like the Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.
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* The lightning-storm that destroys Rome's monuments and even statically charges TVs and coffee machines enough to cause a shock just from touching them. Seeing such monuments like the Roman Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.creepy.
** What makes it even worse was that similar storms were about to spawn right over the city of ''Paris'' France just as the core was fixing itself. Heavily implying that had the heroes not fixed the core in time, Paris would have met the same fate as Rome, including a melted Eiffel Tower.
** What makes it even worse was that similar storms were about to spawn right over the city of ''Paris'' France just as the core was fixing itself. Heavily implying that had the heroes not fixed the core in time, Paris would have met the same fate as Rome, including a melted Eiffel Tower.
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* [[spoiler:Serge]]'s death. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Being slowly crushed inside a metal compartment thousands of miles under earth AND under unrelenting amounts of pressure.]]
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* [[spoiler:Serge]]'s Serge's death. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Being slowly crushed inside a metal compartment thousands of miles under earth AND under unrelenting amounts of pressure.]]
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* [[spoiler:Iverson]]'s death, where just when it seems they are in the clear to continue with their mission a random shard [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice pierces his helmet]], leaving a trail of blood on his face as his expression becomes an empty stare, before his lifeless body falls and is consumed by magma.
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* [[spoiler:Iverson]]'s Iverson's death, where just when it seems they are in the clear to continue with their mission a random shard [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice pierces his helmet]], leaving a trail of blood on his face as his expression becomes an empty stare, before his lifeless body falls and is consumed by magma.
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* [[spoiler:Leveque]]'s death. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Being slowly crushed inside a metal compartment thousands of miles under earth AND under unrelenting amounts of pressure.]]
** ** Even worse is that he could've been saved had Beck flipped the override switches which is what Keyes kept telling her to do, but she didn't...
** ** Even worse is that he could've been saved had Beck flipped the override switches which is what Keyes kept telling her to do, but she didn't...
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* [[spoiler:Leveque]]'s [[spoiler:Serge]]'s death. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Being slowly crushed inside a metal compartment thousands of miles under earth AND under unrelenting amounts of pressure.]]
** ** Even worse is that he could've been saved had Beck flipped the override switches which is what Keyes kept telling her to do, but she didn't...
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** Just the idea that their hearts were stopped from a random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance frying their pacemakers out of nowhere.
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** Just the idea that their hearts were stopped anyone with a pacemaker suddenly dying from a random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance frying their pacemakers out of nowhere.
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The EMP stopped their pacemakers, not their brains.
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** Just the idea that their brains hearts were fried stopped from a random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance frying their pacemakers out of nowhere.
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** ** Even worse is that he could've been saved had Beck flipped the override switches which is what Keyes kept telling her to do, but she didn't...
* [[spoiler:Iverson]]'s death, where just when it seems they are in the clear to continue with their mission a random shard [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice pierces his helmet]], leaving a trail of blood on his face as his expression becomes an empty stare, before his lifeless body falls and is consumed by magma.
* [[spoiler:Iverson]]'s death, where just when it seems they are in the clear to continue with their mission a random shard [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice pierces his helmet]], leaving a trail of blood on his face as his expression becomes an empty stare, before his lifeless body falls and is consumed by magma.
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** Just the idea that their brains were fried from a random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance.
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** Just the idea that their brains were fried from a random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance.disturbance out of nowhere.
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** Just the idea that their brains were fried from an a random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance.
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* The scene where they show the cabinet members exactly how the planet is going to get cooked by cosmic rays. Yikes.
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** Just the idea that their brains were fried from an random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance.
* The scene wherethey Keyes and Zimsky show the cabinet members exactly how the planet is going to get cooked by cosmic rays. Yikes.
** Just the idea that their brains were fried from an random, invisible electromagnetic disturbance.
* The scene where
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* [[spoiler:Iverson]]'s death, where just when it seems they are in the clear to continue with their mission a random shard [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice pierces his helmet]], leaving a trail of blood on his face as his expression becomes an empty stare, before his lifeless body is consumed by magma.
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* The bird "attack" in London, which sends the city's commuters and tourists into complete panic. Some are covering their eyes as if they've been plucked out, while everyone is desperately evading the wayward traffic.
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** Worse still, those caught in the central span could not escape their cars, or they would've simply been fried instantaneously. Simply put, anyone still in the path of the effect had ''no'' means of escape.
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* Project DESTINI. The idea of someone weaponizing earthquakes is a mercifully unrealistic prospect. It is ultimately the interference of DESTINI that triggers the entire crisis.
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* The lightning-storm that destroys Rome monuments and even statically charges coffee machines enough to cause a shock from touching them. Seeing such monuments the Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.
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* The lightning-storm that destroys Rome monuments and even statically charges coffee machines enough to cause a shock from touching them. Seeing such monuments like the Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.creepy.
* [[spoiler:Leveque]]'s death. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Being slowly crushed inside a metal compartment thousands of miles under earth AND under unrelenting amounts of pressure.]]
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* [[spoiler:Leveque]]'s death. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Being slowly crushed inside a metal compartment thousands of miles under earth AND under unrelenting amounts of pressure.]]
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* The destruction of the Golden Gate Bridge, as a tiny hole in the earth's layer caused one man's arm to instantly sunburn from being outside a car window.
* The lightning-storm scene.
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* The destruction of the Golden Gate Bridge, as a tiny hole in the earth's layer caused one man's arm to instantly sunburn from being outside a car window.
window. And then the bridge collapses in a way not unlike the Tacoma Narrows Bridge.
* The lightning-stormscene.that destroys Rome monuments and even statically charges coffee machines enough to cause a shock from touching them. Seeing such monuments the Colosseum ''explode'' without crumbling is very creepy.
* The lightning-storm
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* The lightning-storm scene.
* The lightning-storm scene.
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* The destruction of the Golden Gate Bridge, as a tiny hole in the earth's layer caused one man's arm to instantly sunburn from being outside a car window.
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