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* Star Platinum verges on UncannyValley for Stand users InUniverse, with it's [[ItCanThink moments of oddly autonomous behavior]] and NoSenseOfPersonalSpace to other people. In ''The Star, Inverted'', Polnareff catches it visibly [[OminousVisualGlitch clipping in its movement]]. In ''Demolition Man'', the Stand's [[TheStoic largely expressionless stare]] is described as ''predatory''.
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* Star Platinum verges on UncannyValley for Stand users InUniverse, with it's its [[ItCanThink moments of oddly autonomous behavior]] and NoSenseOfPersonalSpace to other people. In ''The Star, Inverted'', Polnareff catches it visibly [[OminousVisualGlitch clipping in its movement]]. In ''Demolition Man'', the Stand's [[TheStoic largely expressionless stare]] is described as ''predatory''.
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* Johnny Joestar makes an appearance- in a wheelchair. After the end of ''[[Manga/JojosBizarreAdventureSteelBallRun Steel Ball Run]]'' in the original timeline, he had learned to walk again using Spin. [[FridgeHorror What happened in between then and now that crippled him all over again?]]
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* The readers are treated to a sudden PerspectiveFlip to ''[[KnightOfCerebus Kira Yoshikage]]''. The DissonantSerenity of the lunch date with one of his "girlfriends" was already creepy enough until his thoughts suddenly turn [[MoodSwinger murderous]] at the drop of a hat, then back to calm.
*Jotaro's fight with Kira, [[CurbStompBattle if it can even be called that]]. Throughout the chapter, the stress and blood loss chip away at Jotaro's awareness, speeding up his loosening grip on reality until he finally has a PTSD-fueled breakdown, beating Kira half to death with his ''bare bloody knuckles''.
*Jotaro's fight with Kira, [[CurbStompBattle if it can even be called that]]. Throughout the chapter, the stress and blood loss chip away at Jotaro's awareness, speeding up his loosening grip on reality until he finally has a PTSD-fueled breakdown, beating Kira half to death with his ''bare bloody knuckles''.
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** From Jotaro's perspective, he wakes up at nearly three in the morning to find Tenmei staring blankly at him, completely unresponsive.
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** From Jotaro's perspective, he wakes up at nearly three in the morning to find Tenmei [[ParanoiaFuel staring blankly at him, completely unresponsive.
unresponsive]].
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*Tenmei is revealed to suffer sleep paralysis. The readers are given a [[SarcasmMode lovely]] look of what his episodes are like [[AndIMustScream from his point of view]]- disoriented, near blind, hallucinating, and paralyzed in excruciating pain, barely able to even recognize anyone as real. The one introduced to the readers also lasts for seven to ten minutes- the average sleep paralysis episode usually only lasts for two.
**From Jotaro's perspective, he wakes up at nearly three in the morning to find Tenmei staring blankly at him, completely unresponsive.
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* Jotaro and Tenmei detailing what will happen to Rohan if he doesn't take AnOfferYouCantRefuse.
-->''[[BigBrotherIsWatching We will watch you.]] Everywhere you live. Everywhere you go. Everything you do. Everyone you know. If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you. If you lash out, then we will kill you.''
-->''[[BigBrotherIsWatching We will watch you.]] Everywhere you live. Everywhere you go. Everything you do. Everyone you know. If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you. If you lash out, then we will kill you.''
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-->''[[BigBrotherIsWatching We will watch you.]] [[ParanoiaFuel Everywhere you live. Everywhere you go. Everything you do. Everyone you know.
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* Jotaro and Tenmei detailing what will happen to Rohan if he doesn't take AnOfferYouCantRefuse.
-->''[[BigBrotherIsWatching We will watch you.]] Everywhere you live. Everywhere you go. Everything you do. Everyone you know. If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you.
If you lash out, then we will kill you.''
-->''[[BigBrotherIsWatching We will watch you.]] Everywhere you live. Everywhere you go. Everything you do. Everyone you know. If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you.
If you lash out, then we will kill you.''
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-->''[[BigBrotherIsWatching We will watch you.]] Everywhere you live. Everywhere you go. Everything you do. Everyone you know. If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage
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* Jotaro and Tenmei detailing what will happen to Rohan if he doesn't take AnOfferYouCantRefuse.
-->''We will watch you.
Everywhere you live.
Everywhere you go.
Everything you do.
Everyone you know.
If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you.
-->''We will watch you.
Everywhere you live.
Everywhere you go.
Everything you do.
Everyone you know.
If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you.
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If you lash out, then we will kill you.
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If you lash out, then we will kill you.[[/quoteblock]]''
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If you lash out, then we will kill you.[[/quoteblock]]''
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!!Demolition Man
*Jotaro and Tenmei detailing what will happen to Rohan if he doesn't take AnOfferYouCantRefuse.
-->[[quoteblock]]We will watch you.
Everywhere you live.
Everywhere you go.
Everything you do.
Everyone you know.
If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you.
If you lash out, then we will kill you.[[/quoteblock]]
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*Jotaro and Tenmei detailing what will happen to Rohan if he doesn't take AnOfferYouCantRefuse.
-->[[quoteblock]]We will watch you.
Everywhere you live.
Everywhere you go.
Everything you do.
Everyone you know.
If you prove too dangerous, then we will cage you.
If you lash out, then we will kill you.[[/quoteblock]]
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** Remember how Stands and their users have {{Synchronization}} of injuries? When Avdol lost his arms to Vanilla Ice, so did Magician's Red. The remains are described as [[BodyHorror nothing left but something black, charred, bonelike, gnarled]].
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* Polnareff's chapter describes Silver Chariot's [[BodyHorror transformation]] into Silver Chariot Requiem.
-->''[[DarknessEqualsDeath ''Fear bleeding into hollow apathy as armor melted away into faceless shadow.'']]''
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** When the foundation investigated the human identity of [[AmbiguouslyHuman Mikitaka the shapeshifter]], they found records of a "Hazekura Mikitaka", [[ParanoiaFuel but no-one who could actually remember if such a person existed]].
** ''EXPANDED ADDENDUM FILE: Kujo, Jotaro'' is mostly PlayedForLaughs right up until [[MoodWhiplash the last entries]], where it warns that an unconscious Doctor Kujo should be approached with ''extreme caution'', otherwise Star Platinum could [[WakeUpFighting activate and attack nondescriminately]]. [[FridgeHorror How exactly did they find that out?]]
** When a Stand user is critically injured, but left alive and untreated, their [[MadeOfIron natural resilience]] can backfire on them in a very cruel way- by [[AnimalisticAbomination fusing the user and their Stand together]].
** ''CONTAINED PERSONS FILE: Weather Report''. When not being his [[AmnesiacsAreInnocent usual sweet self]], Weather lapses into [[TheBerserker violent and suicidal BPD]], which is already bad- but far, far worse when you remember that this is also a man who could [[WalkingWasteland theoretically destroy the atmosphere just by thinking about it]]. Additionally, due to the self-preservation behavior of his Stand, [[ICannotSelfTerminate he cannot be killed]].
** ''EXPANDED ADDENDUM FILE: Kujo, Jotaro'' is mostly PlayedForLaughs right up until [[MoodWhiplash the last entries]], where it warns that an unconscious Doctor Kujo should be approached with ''extreme caution'', otherwise Star Platinum could [[WakeUpFighting activate and attack nondescriminately]]. [[FridgeHorror How exactly did they find that out?]]
** When a Stand user is critically injured, but left alive and untreated, their [[MadeOfIron natural resilience]] can backfire on them in a very cruel way- by [[AnimalisticAbomination fusing the user and their Stand together]].
** ''CONTAINED PERSONS FILE: Weather Report''. When not being his [[AmnesiacsAreInnocent usual sweet self]], Weather lapses into [[TheBerserker violent and suicidal BPD]], which is already bad- but far, far worse when you remember that this is also a man who could [[WalkingWasteland theoretically destroy the atmosphere just by thinking about it]]. Additionally, due to the self-preservation behavior of his Stand, [[ICannotSelfTerminate he cannot be killed]].
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**Remember how Stands and their users have {{Synchronization}} of injuries? When Avdol lost his arms to Vanilla Ice, so did Magician's Red. The remains are described as [[BodyHorror nothing left but something black, charred, bonelike, gnarled]].
**Remember how Stands and their users have {{Synchronization}} of injuries? When Avdol lost his arms to Vanilla Ice, so did Magician's Red. The remains are described as [[BodyHorror nothing left but something black, charred, bonelike, gnarled]].
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** When a Stand user is critically injured, but left alive and untreated, their [[MadeOfIron natural resilience]] can backfire on them in a very cruel way- by [[AnimalisticAbomination fusing the user and their Stand together]].
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*Due to the fact that Jotaro only remembers [[RippleEffectProofMemory the original timeline]], and not the events of the new reality, he's [[MissingTime functionally missing seventeen years of his life]].
*Star Platinum verges on UncannyValley for Stand users InUniverse, with it's [[ItCanThink moments of oddly autonomous behavior]] and NoSenseOfPersonalSpace to other people. In ''The Star, Inverted'', Polnareff catches it visibly [[OminousVisualGlitch clipping in its movement]]. In ''Demolition Man'', the Stand's [[TheStoic largely expressionless stare]] is described as ''predatory''.
*In ''Welcome to the SPW Foundation'':
**When the foundation investigated the human identity of [[AmbiguouslyHuman Mikitaka the shapeshifter]], they found records of a "Hazekura Mikitaka", [[ParanoiaFuel but no-one who could actually remember if such a person existed]].
**''EXPANDED ADDENDUM FILE: Kujo, Jotaro'' is mostly PlayedForLaughs right up until [[MoodWhiplash the last entries]], where it warns that an unconscious Doctor Kujo should be approached with ''extreme caution'', otherwise Star Platinum could [[WakeUpFighting activate and attack nondescriminately]]. [[FridgeHorror How exactly did they find that out?]]
**''CONTAINED PERSONS FILE: Weather Report''. When not being his [[AmnesiacsAreInnocent usual sweet self]], Weather lapses into [[TheBerserker violent and suicidal BPD]], which is already bad- but far, far worse when you remember that this is also a man who could [[WalkingWasteland theoretically destroy the atmosphere just by thinking about it]]. Additionally, due to the self-preservation behavior of his Stand, [[ICannotSelfTerminate he cannot be killed]].
->''[[WhamLine "Subject must be considered an ongoing threat to the continued existence of civilization, humanity, and life itself."]]''
*Star Platinum verges on UncannyValley for Stand users InUniverse, with it's [[ItCanThink moments of oddly autonomous behavior]] and NoSenseOfPersonalSpace to other people. In ''The Star, Inverted'', Polnareff catches it visibly [[OminousVisualGlitch clipping in its movement]]. In ''Demolition Man'', the Stand's [[TheStoic largely expressionless stare]] is described as ''predatory''.
*In ''Welcome to the SPW Foundation'':
**When the foundation investigated the human identity of [[AmbiguouslyHuman Mikitaka the shapeshifter]], they found records of a "Hazekura Mikitaka", [[ParanoiaFuel but no-one who could actually remember if such a person existed]].
**''EXPANDED ADDENDUM FILE: Kujo, Jotaro'' is mostly PlayedForLaughs right up until [[MoodWhiplash the last entries]], where it warns that an unconscious Doctor Kujo should be approached with ''extreme caution'', otherwise Star Platinum could [[WakeUpFighting activate and attack nondescriminately]]. [[FridgeHorror How exactly did they find that out?]]
**''CONTAINED PERSONS FILE: Weather Report''. When not being his [[AmnesiacsAreInnocent usual sweet self]], Weather lapses into [[TheBerserker violent and suicidal BPD]], which is already bad- but far, far worse when you remember that this is also a man who could [[WalkingWasteland theoretically destroy the atmosphere just by thinking about it]]. Additionally, due to the self-preservation behavior of his Stand, [[ICannotSelfTerminate he cannot be killed]].
->''[[WhamLine "Subject must be considered an ongoing threat to the continued existence of civilization, humanity, and life itself."]]''