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* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil faction into a minor evil, [[OutsideContextProblem because they're an unexpected opponent]] [[EvilerThanThou and ''far'' more evil, intelligent, and cruel]].

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* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil faction into a minor evil, [[OutsideContextProblem because they're an unexpected opponent]] and ''[[EvilerThanThou far]]'' [[EvilerThanThou and ''far'' more evil, intelligent, and cruel]].
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* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil faction into a minor evil, because they're an unexpected opponent and ''far'' more evil, intelligent, and cruel.

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* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil faction into a minor evil, [[OutsideContextProblem because they're an unexpected opponent opponent]] [[EvilerThanThou and ''far'' more evil, intelligent, and cruel.cruel]].
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** They also capture team SSSN and torture them for answers. Team SSSN were just in the wrong place at the wrong time, having been hunting demons that wandered into the areas nearby the facility. Nobody, neither human, Faunus, young, or old, is safe from them.

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** They also capture team SSSN and torture them for answers. Team SSSN were was just in the wrong place at the wrong time, having been hunting demons that wandered into the areas nearby the facility. Nobody, neither human, Faunus, young, or old, is safe from them.
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** They also capture team SSSN and torture them for answers. Team SSSN were just in the wrong place at the wrong time, having been hunting demons that wandered into the areas nearby the facility. Nobody, neither human, Faunus, young, or old, is safe from them.
** The state that Sun is found in is really disturbing. The Slayer finds him completely naked and beaten. When he approaches the cell door, Sun backs away and admits that they did "things" to him. Just what the Hell did they do to him?

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* Deag Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning them into living batteries for Hell, merged Argent D'Nur with Hell, and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, is the main threat to all Remnant. He has no problem with dirty tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox). He also doesn't give any chances to his enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denying his ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.

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* Deag Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning them into living batteries for Hell, merged Argent D'Nur with Hell, and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, is the main threat to all Remnant. He has no problem with dirty tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox). He also doesn't give any chances to his enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denying his ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian Argenta ruin.


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* The SDC slave labor of Faunas is outright horrific in how brutal it is. They don't just enslave them and force them to work in mines or anything like that. They use them as ''target practice'' just to test their newly developed weapons.
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** Scarier still is how demons can easily deal with Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with ''rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles'' to grab the Slayer! BodyHorror doesn't begin to describe it.

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** Scarier still is how what the demons can easily deal with do to the Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with ''rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles'' to grab the Slayer! BodyHorror doesn't begin to describe it.
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* Things already start off horrific in the opening with a gruesome White Fang assault on an Atlas facility. The thoughts of the faunas show that they started out as kind and peaceful, but once Adam came along and brought about more radical changes, they became just as bloodthirsty as him. The dog faunas (Aiden Hansen), in particular, feels no remorse for anything he did.
* Once the Slayer wakes up, shit hits the fan for the White Fang, as he slams one's head into his pod hard enough to jam his nose into his brain, outright ''punches the jaw clean off'' of another, and blowing the head off the last one. The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, she survived long enough to attempt to crawl to the exit, only to get her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.

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* Things already start off horrific in the opening with a gruesome White Fang assault on an Atlas facility. The thoughts of the faunas show that they started out as kind and peaceful, but once Adam came along and brought about more radical changes, they became just as bloodthirsty as him. The dog faunas (Aiden Hansen), in particular, feels no remorse for anything he did.
* Once the Slayer wakes up, shit hits the fan for the White Fang, as he slams one's head into his pod hard enough to jam his nose into his brain, outright ''punches the jaw clean off'' of another, and blowing the head off the last one. The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, The only thing she survived long enough to attempt to could do was desperately crawl to away as the exit, only to get Slayer splattered her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all over the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.floor.



** Not only that, but the cults are really charismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, like the human woman that allowed herself to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corrupted Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.

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** Not only that, but the cults are really charismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, like the human woman that allowed herself to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corrupted Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.Hell.



** And, in the hours that it takes for Team RWBY to escape from him on the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still caught up and they are saved by sheer luck, because they were teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remnant (even if he wasn't sent to the same place).

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** And, in the hours that it takes for Team RWBY to escape from him on the road Even more horrifying? He's out of Hell and the initiation of the teleportation, he still caught up and they are saved by sheer luck, because they were teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remnant (even if he wasn't sent to the same place).on Remnant! God have mercy on whoever runs into him...



** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they become, but they're nothing near the demons, because with the exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than normal Grimm, and while all huntsman in Remnant train for their entire lives to fight the Grimm, almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in-universe.
** In fact, demons can easily deal with Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles to grab the Slayer. Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened are all easily killed and possessed, one of them even tried to run away before being dragged back into the cave.
*** That deserves special mention. The Grimm, soulless monsters that feed on fear, are absolutely ''terrified'' of the demons!
** The demons that attacked the academies were "just testing their strengths" according to Ozpin, even with only the Imps, Possessed and some Hell-knights and other few stronger demons (like the Prowler and the Harvester in Beacon), they killed most of the students, and were only beaten because the portals were closed. With Shade Academy, they could keep up a siege for an entire week because Vacuo has no military, the result is that somehow the demons took the Relic of Destruction.
* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a known assassin that abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the canon story started. In this story, he's alive, and is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got his hands on the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64), which can slice through buildings and turn into a laser sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut to pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being defeated, he took advantage of the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked in.
** He's so dangerous that Ironwood had to make Roman use his contacts in the criminal underworld to try and find him. At that point he is a far greater threat than even Cinder, and only Deag Grav itself is a greater threat to Remnant.

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** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they become, but they're nothing near the demons, because with the exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than normal Grimm, and while all huntsman in Remnant train for their entire lives to fight the Grimm, [[OutsideContextProblem almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in-universe.
in-universe]].
** In fact, Scarier still is how demons can easily deal with Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows ''rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles tentacles'' to grab the Slayer. Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried Slayer! BodyHorror doesn't begin to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened are all easily killed and possessed, one of them even tried describe it.
** We later see a Beowolf try
to run away before being dragged back into the cave.
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from Deag Grav, but fail. That deserves special mention. The Grimm, soulless monsters that feed on fear, are absolutely ''terrified'' of the demons!
** The demons that attacked the academies were "just testing their strengths" according to Ozpin, even with only the Imps, Possessed and some Hell-knights and other few stronger demons (like the Prowler and the Harvester in Beacon), they killed most of the students, and were only beaten because the portals were closed. With Shade Academy, they could keep up a siege for an entire week because Vacuo has no military, the result is that somehow the demons took the Relic of Destruction.
* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a known assassin that abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the canon story started. In this story, he's alive, and is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got his hands on the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64), which can slice through buildings and turn into a laser sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut to pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being defeated, he took advantage of the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked in.
** He's so dangerous that Ironwood had to make Roman use his contacts in the criminal underworld to try and find him. At that point he is a far greater threat than even Cinder, and only Deag Grav itself is a greater threat to Remnant.
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* The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demons, they make their presence known in the church of the two brothers. Even the Grimm in the town don't dare to enter the once holy place out of fear. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lie in the seats, all having committed suicide in a ritual, including the children. And then a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are resurrected as Possessed. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark and confined space of the catacombs.

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* The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demons, they make Picture a ritualistic mass suicide where men, women, and children slit their presence known in the throats, leaving an entire church of the two brothers. Even the Grimm corpses rotting in the town don't dare to enter the once holy place out of fear. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lie in the seats, all having committed suicide in a ritual, including the children. And then a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are resurrected as Possessed. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark death and confined space of the catacombs.decay.

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** In fact, demons can easily deal with Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles to grab the Slayer. Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened are all easily killed and possessed, one of them even tried to run away before being dragged back to the cave.

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** In fact, demons can easily deal with Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles to grab the Slayer. Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened are all easily killed and possessed, one of them even tried to run away before being dragged back to into the cave.



* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a known assassin that abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the canon story started. In this story, he's alive, and is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got his hands on the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64), which can slice through buildings and turn into a laser sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut to pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being defeated, he took advantage in the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked in.

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* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a known assassin that abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the canon story started. In this story, he's alive, and is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got his hands on the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64), which can slice through buildings and turn into a laser sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut to pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being defeated, he took advantage in of the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked in.



* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning them into living batteries for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, is the main threat to all Remnant. He has no problem with dirty tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox). He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denying his ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.
** Had the rest of his kind actually listened to him, ''they would have won!'' Had they killed the Slayer while sealed away like he suggested, there would be no one to stop Hell.
* The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demons, they make their presence known in the church of the two brothers. Even the Grimm in the town don't dare to enter the once holy place out of fear. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lie in the seats, all having committed suicide in a ritual, including the children. And then a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are resurrected as Possessed. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark and confined space of the catacombs.

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* Dead Deag Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning them into living batteries for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell Hell, and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, is the main threat to all Remnant. He has no problem with dirty tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox). He also doesn't give any chance chances to his enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denying his ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.
** Had the rest of his it’s kind actually listened to him, Deag Grav, ''they would have won!'' Had they killed the Slayer while he was sealed away like he it suggested, there would be no one to stop Hell.
* The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demons, they make their presence known in the church of the two brothers. Even the Grimm in the town don't dare to enter the once holy place out of fear. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lie in the seats, all having committed suicide in a ritual, including the children. And then a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are resurrected as Possessed. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark and confined space of the catacombs.catacombs.
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** If that wasn't bad enough, she then tries to drown her daughter in blood and rot, all while her daughter begs for help.
** In Blake's nightmare, the Slayer, in his ''DOOM: Eternal'' suit, kill everyone in the White Fang, including her father and Ilia in front of her. After that, undead White Fang members catch her and just before being killed, she sees Adam's reflection in the Slayer's visor instead of her own.
** Weiss dream is that she was defeated by the Arma Gigas and had to submit to her father's will. After that her father, flanked by Classic Doom's Imps, reveals that he sold the world to the demons. Just before being killed she had to watch Atlas be destroyed by Hell.

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** *** If that wasn't bad enough, she then tries to drown her daughter in blood and rot, all while her daughter begs for help.
** In Blake's nightmare, the Slayer, in his ''DOOM: Eternal'' ''VideoGame/DoomEternal'' suit, kill everyone in the White Fang, including her father and Ilia in front of her. After that, undead White Fang members catch her and just before being killed, she sees Adam's reflection in the Slayer's visor instead of her own.
** Weiss dream is that she was defeated by the Arma Gigas and had to submit to her father's will. After that her father, flanked by Classic Doom's Imps, reveals that he sold the world to the demons. Just before being killed she had to watch Atlas be being destroyed by Hell.



** Yang's nightmare is tamer, but having her stepmother killed in front of her by an Imp's arm that come from nowhere is very disturbing.

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** Yang's nightmare is tamer, but having her stepmother killed in front of her by an Imp's arm that come from comes out of nowhere is very disturbing.



* The fact that a wrong word in the satanic rituals can kill the cultists is also terrifying. The cultists in the cathedral misread a syllable, and it alone was enough to kill everyone in the room with exception of Fiola.
** That being, it was a good thing, because if he didn't misread the texts, a real gore nest and a portal would be created. In other words, Remnant just survived this one through sheer dumb luck.

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* The fact that a wrong word in the satanic rituals can kill the cultists is also terrifying. The cultists in the cathedral misread a syllable, and it alone was enough to kill everyone in the room with the exception of Fiola.
** That being, being said, it was a good thing, because if he didn't hadn’t misread the texts, a real gore nest and a portal would be created. In other words, Remnant just survived this one through sheer dumb luck.



** And, in the hours that it takes for Team RWBY to escape from him in the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still caught up and they are saved by sheer luck, because they were teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remnant (even if he wasn't send to the same place).
* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil faction into a minor evil, because they're an unexpected opponent and '''far'' more evil, intelligent, and cruel.
** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they turn, but they're nothing near the demons, because with exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than normal Grimm, and while all huntsman in Remnant trains for the entire live to fight the Grimm, almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in universe.
** In fact, demons can easily deal with Grim. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles to grab the Slayer. Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened are all easily killed and possessed, one of they even tried to run away before being dragged back to the cave.

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** And, in the hours that it takes for Team RWBY to escape from him in on the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still caught up and they are saved by sheer luck, because they were teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remnant (even if he wasn't send sent to the same place).
* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil faction into a minor evil, because they're an unexpected opponent and '''far'' ''far'' more evil, intelligent, and cruel.
** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they turn, become, but they're nothing near the demons, because with the exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than normal Grimm, and while all huntsman in Remnant trains train for the their entire live lives to fight the Grimm, almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in universe.
in-universe.
** In fact, demons can easily deal with Grim.Grimm. They have no souls and can be possessed easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of teeth from his chest and tentacles to grab the Slayer. Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened are all easily killed and possessed, one of they them even tried to run away before being dragged back to the cave.



* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a known assassin that abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the canon story started. In this story, he's alive, and is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got is hands in the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64), which can slice through buildings and turn into a laser sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut in pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being defeated, he took advantage in the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked in.

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* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a known assassin that abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the canon story started. In this story, he's alive, and is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got is his hands in on the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64), which can slice through buildings and turn into a laser sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut in to pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being defeated, he took advantage in the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked in.



* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning them into a living battery for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, is the main threat to all Remnant. He has no problem with dirty tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox). He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denying his ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.

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* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning them into a living battery batteries for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, is the main threat to all Remnant. He has no problem with dirty tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox). He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denying his ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.

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** In Blake's nightmare, the Slayer, in his Doom Eternal's suit, kill everyone in the White Fang, including her father and Ilia in front of her, after that undead White Fang members catch her and just before being killed, she see Adam's reflection in the Slayer's visor instead of her's.
** Weiss dreams that she was defeated by the Arma Gigas, and after that her father, flanked by Classic Doom's Imps, reveals that he sold the world to the demons, just before being killed she had to watch Atlas being destroyed by Hell.
** She latter was also mind raped by an Pain Elemmental, that made she relember every bad thing she think about ther family.
** Yang's nightmare is tamer, but still, having her stepmother killed in front of her by an Imp's arm that come from nowhere isn't a good thing.

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** In Blake's nightmare, the Slayer, in his Doom Eternal's ''DOOM: Eternal'' suit, kill everyone in the White Fang, including her father and Ilia in front of her, after that her. After that, undead White Fang members catch her and just before being killed, she see sees Adam's reflection in the Slayer's visor instead of her's.
her own.
** Weiss dreams dream is that she was defeated by the Arma Gigas, Gigas and after had to submit to her father's will. After that her father, flanked by Classic Doom's Imps, reveals that he sold the world to the demons, just demons. Just before being killed she had to watch Atlas being be destroyed by Hell.
** *** She latter was also later suffers from mind raped by an rape via a Pain Elemmental, that made she relember Elemental, forcing her to remember every bad thing she think about ther her family.
** Yang's nightmare is tamer, but still, having her stepmother killed in front of her by an Imp's arm that come from nowhere isn't a good thing.is very disturbing.



** The cults are really carismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, just like the human woman that allowed her to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corrupted Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.
* The fact that a wrong word in the satanic rituals can kill the cultits is also terrifying, the cultists in the cathedral misread a syllable, and it alone was enough to kill everyone in the room with exception of Fiola.
** That being, it was a good thing, because wasn't he misread, a real gore nest and a portal would be created.

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** The Not only that, but the cults are really carismatic, charismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, just like the human woman that allowed her herself to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corrupted Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.
* The fact that a wrong word in the satanic rituals can kill the cultits cultists is also terrifying, the terrifying. The cultists in the cathedral misread a syllable, and it alone was enough to kill everyone in the room with exception of Fiola.
** That being, it was a good thing, because wasn't if he misread, didn't misread the texts, a real gore nest and a portal would be created.created. In other words, Remnant just survived this one through sheer dumb luck.



** Seconds after having his neck back into place he was ran over by an combat APC, but hours latter he was together with a group of possed Atlas soldiers in Bullheads, Yang even says that he is stronger than the Slayer.
** And, in the hours that take between Team RWBY escape from him in the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still got into they and they are saved by sheer luck, because they teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remmant (even if he wasn't send to the same place).
* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil factions a minor evil, because they're a unexpected opponent and way more evil, smarter and cruel.
** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they turn, but they're nothing near the demons, because with exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than nornal Grimms, and while all huntsman in Remmant trains for the entire live to fight the Grimm, almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in universe.
** In fact, demons can easily deal with grimm, that have no soul and can be possessed and their bodies can be manipuled like clay; in chapter 15 a Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being, that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it, the "idol" was possessed and had to be blow with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of theet from his chest and created tentacles to grab the Slayer. Latter a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened by the fact are all easily killed and possessed, one of they even tried to run away before being dragged back to the cave.
** The demons that attacked the accademies were "just testing their strengths" according to Ozpin, even with only the Imps, Possessed and some Hellknights and other few stronger demons (like the Prowler and the Harverster in Beacon) they killed most of the students, and were only beaten because the portals were clossed, but in Shade, they could keep a siege of an entire week, because Vacuo have no military, the result is that somehow the demons took the Relic of Destruction.
* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a know assassin that beated his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the cannon story started. In Remmant Inferis he is alive, and it's the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and latter fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and the Slayer. He somehow got is hands in the Unmaker, the laser weapon from Doom 64, that can slice through buildings and can turn into a laser sword, that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut in pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being beated, he took advantage in the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked into Hell.
** He is so dangerous that Ironwood had to make Roman use his contacts in the underword to try finding him, in that point he is a far greater threat than even Cinder, and only Deag Grav itself is a greater threat in Remmant.
* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning they into a living battery for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, it's the main threat to all Remmant, he have no problems with dirty tatics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attack,doing this 2 times, one in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox. He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies, in fact, he was the only that objectived the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denie his ascention to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.
* The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demon, they make their presence. The Slayer and Ruby found an dying faunus that was attacked by cultists and after a small fight with Blake and the man's possessed wife, they gone to the Cathedral, even the grimm in the town doesn't dared to enter the once holy place. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lied in the seats, all commited suicide in a ritual, including children. And then, a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are ressurected as undead. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark and confined space of the catacombs.

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** Seconds after having his neck twisted back into place place, he was ran over by an combat APC, but hours latter he was together with a group of possed possessed Atlas soldiers in Bullheads, Bullheads. Yang even says that he is stronger than the Slayer.
Slayer. We'd like to repeat that. There is a demon ''stronger'' than the '''''Doom Slayer'''''!
** And, in the hours that take between that it takes for Team RWBY to escape from him in the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still got into they caught up and they are saved by sheer luck, because they were teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remmant Remnant (even if he wasn't send to the same place).
* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil factions faction into a minor evil, because they're a an unexpected opponent and way '''far'' more evil, smarter intelligent, and cruel.
** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they turn, but they're nothing near the demons, because with exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than nornal Grimms, normal Grimm, and while all huntsman in Remmant Remnant trains for the entire live to fight the Grimm, almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in universe.
** In fact, demons can easily deal with grimm, that Grim. They have no soul souls and can be possessed and their easier than any human. Their bodies can be manipuled manipulated like clay; in chapter 15 a an Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being, being that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it, the it. The "idol" was possessed and had to be blow blown apart with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of theet teeth from his chest and created tentacles to grab the Slayer. Latter Later a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened by the fact are all easily killed and possessed, one of they even tried to run away before being dragged back to the cave.
*** That deserves special mention. The Grimm, soulless monsters that feed on fear, are absolutely ''terrified'' of the demons!
** The demons that attacked the accademies academies were "just testing their strengths" according to Ozpin, even with only the Imps, Possessed and some Hellknights Hell-knights and other few stronger demons (like the Prowler and the Harverster Harvester in Beacon) Beacon), they killed most of the students, and were only beaten because the portals were clossed, but in Shade, closed. With Shade Academy, they could keep up a siege of for an entire week, week because Vacuo have has no military, the result is that somehow the demons took the Relic of Destruction.
* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a know known assassin that beated abused his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the cannon canon story started. In Remmant Inferis he is this story, he's alive, and it's is the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and latter later fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and the Slayer. ''the Slayer'' combined! He somehow got is hands in the Unmaker, the Unmaker (the laser weapon from Doom 64, that 64), which can slice through buildings and can turn into a laser sword, sword that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut in pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being beated, defeated, he took advantage in the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the grimm's Grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked into Hell.
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** He is He's so dangerous that Ironwood had to make Roman use his contacts in the underword criminal underworld to try finding him, in and find him. At that point he is a far greater threat than even Cinder, and only Deag Grav itself is a greater threat in Remmant.
to Remnant.
* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning they them into a living battery for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, it's is the main threat to all Remmant, he have Remnant. He has no problems problem with dirty tatics, tactics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attack,doing this 2 times, one attacking (once in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox. Fox). He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies, in enemies. In fact, he was the only one that objectived objected to the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denie denying his ascention ascension to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.
** Had the rest of his kind actually listened to him, ''they would have won!'' Had they killed the Slayer while sealed away like he suggested, there would be no one to stop Hell.
* The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demon, demons, they make their presence. The Slayer and Ruby found an dying faunus that was attacked by cultists and after a small fight with Blake and presence known in the man's possessed wife, they gone to church of the Cathedral, even two brothers. Even the grimm Grimm in the town doesn't dared don't dare to enter the once holy place. place out of fear. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lied lie in the seats, all commited having committed suicide in a ritual, including the children. And then, then a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are ressurected resurrected as undead.Possessed. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark and confined space of the catacombs.
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* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning they into a living battery for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, it's the main threat to all Remmant, he have no problems with dirty tatics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attack,doing this 2 times, one in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox. He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies, in fact, he was the only that objectived the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denie his ascention to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.

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* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning they into a living battery for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, it's the main threat to all Remmant, he have no problems with dirty tatics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attack,doing this 2 times, one in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox. He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies, in fact, he was the only that objectived the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denie his ascention to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.ruin.
*The Marysville Cathedral. After 3 chapters without any demon, they make their presence. The Slayer and Ruby found an dying faunus that was attacked by cultists and after a small fight with Blake and the man's possessed wife, they gone to the Cathedral, even the grimm in the town doesn't dared to enter the once holy place. In the cathedral, the bodies of half of the town lied in the seats, all commited suicide in a ritual, including children. And then, a Lazarus Wave drops the Slayer in the underground while the townsfolk are ressurected as undead. In the catacombs, they found the half-breed girl they came to save, but were attacked by Deag Grav itself, with more zombies coming in the dark and confined space of the catacombs.

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** The cults are really carismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, just like the human woman that allowed her to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corruped Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.

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** The cults are really carismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, just like the human woman that allowed her to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corruped corrupted Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.



** And, in the hours that take between Team RWBY escape from him in the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still got into they and they are saved by sheer luck, because they teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remmant (even if he wasn't send to the same place).

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** And, in the hours that take between Team RWBY escape from him in the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still got into they and they are saved by sheer luck, because they teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remmant (even if he wasn't send to the same place).place).
* The demons and the cultists turned every other evil factions a minor evil, because they're a unexpected opponent and way more evil, smarter and cruel.
** The Grimm are dangerous in great numbers and the older they are, the more intelligent they turn, but they're nothing near the demons, because with exception of the normal possessed all demons are more intelligent than nornal Grimms, and while all huntsman in Remmant trains for the entire live to fight the Grimm, almost no one knew about the demons until some weeks in universe.
** In fact, demons can easily deal with grimm, that have no soul and can be possessed and their bodies can be manipuled like clay; in chapter 15 a Alpha Beowolf was turned into a goat-like being, that was inert until a possessed body was kicked into it, the "idol" was possessed and had to be blow with a super shotgun shot to be killed, even creating a maw with rows of theet from his chest and created tentacles to grab the Slayer. Latter a group of 6 Beowolfs that tried to attack Deag Grav while he was weakened by the fact are all easily killed and possessed, one of they even tried to run away before being dragged back to the cave.
** The demons that attacked the accademies were "just testing their strengths" according to Ozpin, even with only the Imps, Possessed and some Hellknights and other few stronger demons (like the Prowler and the Harverster in Beacon) they killed most of the students, and were only beaten because the portals were clossed, but in Shade, they could keep a siege of an entire week, because Vacuo have no military, the result is that somehow the demons took the Relic of Destruction.
* Marcus Black, father of Mercury, was a know assassin that beated his son everyday and stole his semblance, but was killed before the cannon story started. In Remmant Inferis he is alive, and it's the leader of the cultists. He is dangerous, able to fight against Qrow and latter fought for some time against Qrow, Ozpin, Hazel and the Slayer. He somehow got is hands in the Unmaker, the laser weapon from Doom 64, that can slice through buildings and can turn into a laser sword, that even Qrow tried to avoid, because it could cut in pieces even his own weapon. In fact, even after being beated, he took advantage in the arrival of a Sea Feilong and turned the grimm's body into a portal to hell, throwing the Slayer and Team RWBY into it before an entire Atlesian airship was sucked into Hell.
** He is so dangerous that Ironwood had to make Roman use his contacts in the underword to try finding him, in that point he is a far greater threat than even Cinder, and only Deag Grav itself is a greater threat in Remmant.
* Dead Grav itself, the hell priest that tainted the Wraiths, turning they into a living battery for Hell, and merged Argent D'Nur with Hell and planned the trap that captured the Slayer, it's the main threat to all Remmant, he have no problems with dirty tatics, including using dead bodies to hide himself before attack,doing this 2 times, one in the cathedral and the second in the old ruins, killing Fox. He also doesn't give any chance to his enemies, in fact, he was the only that objectived the idea of keeping the Slayer alive in the sarcophagus and despises the Dark Lord of the Fourth Age for punishing him for the Slayer's rampage and denie his ascention to a Baalgar, to the point of calling him ungrateful when the Lord called him in the D'Nurian ruin.

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--->'''Summer''': Please, Ruby. Come ''rot'' in Hell with me.



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--->'''Summer''': Please, Ruby. Come ''rot'' ** In Blake's nightmare, the Slayer, in Hell with me.his Doom Eternal's suit, kill everyone in the White Fang, including her father and Ilia in front of her, after that undead White Fang members catch her and just before being killed, she see Adam's reflection in the Slayer's visor instead of her's.
** Weiss dreams that she was defeated by the Arma Gigas, and after that her father, flanked by Classic Doom's Imps, reveals that he sold the world to the demons, just before being killed she had to watch Atlas being destroyed by Hell.
** She latter was also mind raped by an Pain Elemmental, that made she relember every bad thing she think about ther family.
** Yang's nightmare is tamer, but still, having her stepmother killed in front of her by an Imp's arm that come from nowhere isn't a good thing.



** The cults are really carismatic, convincing an entire city to just allow everyone to be sacrificed to Hell, including parents, just like the human woman that allowed her to be sacrificed and her two daughters to be taken to the cathedral. They also corruped Team GRVE with only words and showing two humans being sacrificed to the demons.
* The fact that a wrong word in the satanic rituals can kill the cultits is also terrifying, the cultists in the cathedral misread a syllable, and it alone was enough to kill everyone in the room with exception of Fiola.
** That being, it was a good thing, because wasn't he misread, a real gore nest and a portal would be created.



** It took the Slayer everything he had just to snap his neck! What happens next? The Marauder just gets back up and ''twists his neck back into place!''

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** It took the Slayer everything he had just to snap his neck! What happens next? The Marauder just gets back up and ''twists his neck back into place!''place!''
** Seconds after having his neck back into place he was ran over by an combat APC, but hours latter he was together with a group of possed Atlas soldiers in Bullheads, Yang even says that he is stronger than the Slayer.
** And, in the hours that take between Team RWBY escape from him in the road and the initiation of the teleportation, he still got into they and they are saved by sheer luck, because they teleported seconds from being hit. And, it's likely that now the Marauder is in Remmant (even if he wasn't send to the same place).
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* The cults are horrific enough on there own with sacrificing anyone to bring demons to Remnant, but the fact that almost ''anyone'' can be a member of these cults is ParanoiaFuel at it's most disturbing. The person right next to you could be a cultist just waiting to sacrifice you for a ritual, and you don't even know it.

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* The cults are horrific enough on there own with sacrificing anyone to bring demons to Remnant, but the fact that almost ''anyone'' can be a member of these cults is ParanoiaFuel at it's most disturbing. The person right next to you could be a cultist just waiting to sacrifice you for a ritual, and you don't even know it.it.
* '''The Marauder'''. A terrifying, demonic version of the Slayer, bearing the appearance of a demon/human hybrid. Imagine the ferocity and power of the Slayer in the hands of a demon. That's the Marauder.
** It took the Slayer everything he had just to snap his neck! What happens next? The Marauder just gets back up and ''twists his neck back into place!''
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--->'''Summer''': Please, Ruby. Come ''rot'' in Hell with me.me.
* The cults are horrific enough on there own with sacrificing anyone to bring demons to Remnant, but the fact that almost ''anyone'' can be a member of these cults is ParanoiaFuel at it's most disturbing. The person right next to you could be a cultist just waiting to sacrifice you for a ritual, and you don't even know it.
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* Thinks already start off horrific in the opening with a gruesome White Fang assault on an Atlas facility. The thoughts of the faunas show that they started out as kind and peaceful, but once Adam came along and brought about more radical changes, they became just as bloodthirsty as him. The dog faunas (Aiden Hansen) in particular, feels no remorse for anything he did.
* Once the Slayer wakes up, shit hits the fan for the White Fang, as he slams one's head into his pod hard enough to jam his nose into his brain, outright ''punches the jaw clean off'' of another, and blowing the head off the last one.
** The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, she survived long enough to attempt to crawl to the exit, only to get her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.

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* Thinks Things already start off horrific in the opening with a gruesome White Fang assault on an Atlas facility. The thoughts of the faunas show that they started out as kind and peaceful, but once Adam came along and brought about more radical changes, they became just as bloodthirsty as him. The dog faunas (Aiden Hansen) Hansen), in particular, feels no remorse for anything he did.
* Once the Slayer wakes up, shit hits the fan for the White Fang, as he slams one's head into his pod hard enough to jam his nose into his brain, outright ''punches the jaw clean off'' of another, and blowing the head off the last one.
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one. The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, she survived long enough to attempt to crawl to the exit, only to get her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.



*** If that wasn't bad enough, she then tries to drown her daughter in blood and rot, all while her daughter begs for help.

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** The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, she survived long enough to attempt to crawl to the exit, only to get her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.

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** The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, she survived long enough to attempt to crawl to the exit, only to get her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.come.
* The nightmares that team RWBY goes through get incredibly morbid.
** Ruby's is probably the worst of them. She wakes up naked, surrounded by blood, flesh and guts. She then hears a voice behind her, which turns out to be her mother. Before she can run up to hug her, it's revealed that ''this'' Summer had her eyes bored out of her sockets and has a giant, bloody hole in her stomach, indicating that her womb was '''torn out of her body'''.
*** If that wasn't bad enough, she then tries to drown her daughter in blood and rot, all while her daughter begs for help.
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* Once the Slayer wakes up, shit hits the fan for the White Fang, as he slams one's head into his pod hard enough to jam his nose into his brain, outright ''punches the jaw clean off'' of another, and blowing the head off the last one.
** The kicker with the one who got her jaw punched off? ''She was still alive!'' Even after something like that, she survived long enough to attempt to crawl to the exit, only to get her brains blown out. Aiden survived his initial attack and lived just long enough to witness all the above. All any of them can do is beg for mercy that will never come.
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