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** That yellow pod was bad enough in the house where it was small. It's vine was maybe about normal sized to a real vine. The vine that grabbed Carl's police car was as thick around as a tree trunk! The pod must have been MASSIVE.
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** That yellow pod was bad enough in the house where it was small. It's Its vine was maybe about normal sized to a real vine. The vine that grabbed Carl's police car was as thick around as a tree trunk! The pod must have been MASSIVE.
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** That yellow pod was bad enough in the house where it was small. It's tendril was maybe an inch thick in diameter at most. The tendril that grabbed Carl's police car was as thick around as a tree trunk! The pod must have been MASSIVE.
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** That yellow pod was bad enough in the house where it was small. It's tendril vine was maybe an inch thick in diameter at most. about normal sized to a real vine. The tendril vine that grabbed Carl's police car was as thick around as a tree trunk! The pod must have been MASSIVE.
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** That yellow pod was bad enough in the house where it was small. It's tendril was maybe an inch thick in diameter at most. The tendril that grabbed Carl's police car was as thick around as a tree trunk! The pod must have been MASSIVE.
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* The movie from Nora’s perspective. Her niece and nephew don’t go to school and she has no idea that it’s because they found a dangerous board game that insists its players keep going until one of them wins. Throughout the day, strange and frightening creatures come out of the game, wreaking havoc in Brantford. The only things she sees onscreen are the stampede, a monkey that snuck into her car, and a carnivorous plant that eats Carl’s cruiser. When she runs into Carl, he asks if she has children, which she confirms. Her reaction tells the audience that she’s imagining the worst possible things that might have happened to Judy and Peter. Her arrival back at the house doesn’t help either as she can hear the sounds of screaming from inside and she’s helpless in doing anything to help them.
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* The giant yellow plant that tries to eat Peter. It manages to sneak up on him by curling a vine around his leg and trying to pull him into its mouth. The scariest thing is that it was dangerously close to getting Peter until Alan sliced its vine. Some added fuel is the fact that Alan has encountered plants like this in the game. One can imagine how scared young Alan must have been dealing with things he normally wouldn’t have seen as dangerous before.
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* The giant yellow plant that tries to eat Peter. It manages to sneak up on him by curling a vine around his leg and trying to pull him into its mouth. This thing was strong enough to pull on a boy’s leg while his sister and two grown adults, one who spent his youth surviving in the jungle, held onto him. The scariest thing is that it was dangerously close to getting Peter until Alan sliced its vine. Some added fuel is the fact that Alan has encountered plants like this in the game. One can imagine how scared young Alan must have been dealing with things he normally wouldn’t have seen as dangerous before.
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* The giant yellow plant that tries to eat Peter.
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* The giant yellow plant that tries to eat Peter. It manages to sneak up on him by curling a vine around his leg and trying to pull him into its mouth. The scariest thing is that it was dangerously close to getting Peter until Alan sliced its vine. Some added fuel is the fact that Alan has encountered plants like this in the game. One can imagine how scared young Alan must have been dealing with things he normally wouldn’t have seen as dangerous before.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle 6 gauge weapon is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle.shotgun. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. *There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. *There’s There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. **There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. **There’s *There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous.
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** After he runs out of ammunition, Van Pelt goes to a weapons store, only to be told the ammo for his Edwardian-era rifle is no longer in production. [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney Bribing the owner with some gold coins]] (God knows where he got those), he's instead introduced to the wonders of modern firearms and is given a massive semiautomatic rifle. He doesn't miss a step and takes to it like a fish to water, making him even more dangerous. **There’s also an [[TruthInTelevision undercurrent of truth here]], since lots of real life shootings in America have been due to unscrupulous arms dealers letting dangerous people have guns with no questions asked.
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** In addition, in real life, mosquitoes are annoying at best and [[MedicalHorror deadly]] at worst, [[MadeOfPlasticine but they're still easy to kill]]. The ones in ''Jumanji'', on the other hand, have probosces that are strong enough to punch through car roofs and break glass.
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** In addition, in real life, mosquitoes are annoying at best and [[MedicalHorror deadly]] at worst, [[MadeOfPlasticine but they're still easy to kill]]. The ones in ''Jumanji'', on the other hand, have probosces that are strong enough to punch through car roofs and break glass. And the paramedics mentioned over 50 people already have suffered attacks.
