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* [[MagiTek "Things to do]] todaytodaytoday: [[ForWantOfANail Die..."]]
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* [[MagiTek "Things to do]] todaytodaytoday: [[ForWantOfANail Die..."]]"
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]]]
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--> "...Seven eh em... Organize Defenders at River Gate... Seven twenty-five...vHand-to-Hand Fighting in Peach Pie Street... Seven forty-eight eight eight... Rally Survivors in Sator Square... Things To Do Today: Build Build Build Barricades... bingeley... Eight oh two eh em, Death of Corporal Littlebottombottom... Eight oh three eh em... Death of Sergeant Detritus... Eight oh threethreethree eh em and seven seconds seconds... Death of Constable Visit...Eight oh three eh em and nineninenine seconds... Death of death of death of...Death of Constable Dorfl... Eight oh three eh em and fourteenteenteen seconds... Death of Captain Carrot Ironfoundersson... beep... beep... Things To Do Today: Die..."
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--> "...Seven eh em... Organize Defenders at River Gate... Seven twenty-five...vHand-to-Hand Hand-to-Hand Fighting in Peach Pie Street... Seven forty-eight eight eight... Rally Survivors in Sator Square... Things To Do Today: Build Build Build Barricades... bingeley... Eight oh two eh em, Death of Corporal Littlebottombottom... Eight oh three eh em... Death of Sergeant Detritus... Eight oh threethreethree eh em and seven seconds seconds... Death of Constable Visit...Eight oh three eh em and nineninenine seconds... Death of death of death of...Death of Constable Dorfl... Eight oh three eh em and fourteenteenteen seconds... Death of Captain Carrot Ironfoundersson... beep... beep... Things To Do Today: Die..."
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]
*** I seem to recall a line at the end of the book indicating that the curious squid consider the island theirs, so it could be an example of squid architecture.
*** I seem to recall a line at the end of the book indicating that the curious squid consider the island theirs, so it could be an example of squid architecture.
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]
*** I seem to recall a line at the end of the book indicating that the curious squid consider the island theirs, so it could be an example of squid architecture.]]
*** I seem to recall a line at the end of the book indicating that the curious squid consider the island theirs, so it could be an example of squid architecture.
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--> ''"...Seven eh em...Organize Defenders at River Gate...Seven twenty-five...Hand-to-Hand Fighting in Peach Pie Street...Seven forty-eight eight eight...Rally Survivors in Sator Square...Things To Do Today: Build Build Build Barricades...bingeley...Eight oh two eh em, Death of Corporal Littlebottombottom...Eight oh three eh em...Death of Sergeant Detritus...Eight oh threethreethree eh em and seven seconds seconds...Death of Constable Visit...Eight oh three eh em and nineninenine seconds...Death of death of death of...Death of Constable Dorfl...Eight oh three eh em and fourteenteenteen seconds...Death of Captain Carrot Ironfoundersson...beep...beep...Things To Do Today: Die..."
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--> ''"..."...Seven eh em... Organize Defenders at River Gate...Gate... Seven twenty-five...Hand-to-Hand vHand-to-Hand Fighting in Peach Pie Street...Street... Seven forty-eight eight eight...eight... Rally Survivors in Sator Square...Square... Things To Do Today: Build Build Build Barricades...bingeley...Barricades... bingeley... Eight oh two eh em, Death of Corporal Littlebottombottom...Littlebottombottom... Eight oh three eh em...em... Death of Sergeant Detritus...Detritus... Eight oh threethreethree eh em and seven seconds seconds...seconds... Death of Constable Visit...Eight oh three eh em and nineninenine seconds... Death of death of death of...Death of Constable Dorfl... Eight oh three eh em and fourteenteenteen seconds...seconds... Death of Captain Carrot Ironfoundersson...beep...beep...Ironfoundersson... beep... beep... Things To Do Today: Die..."
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]]]
*** I seem to recall a line at the end of the book indicating that the curious squid consider the island theirs, so it could be an example of squid architecture.
*** I seem to recall a line at the end of the book indicating that the curious squid consider the island theirs, so it could be an example of squid architecture.
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of [[CthulhuMythos [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]
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* And then there's [[CthulhuMythos Leshp.]] Made creepier by the fact that ''we never actually figure out what's up with it.''
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* And then there's [[CthulhuMythos Leshp.]] Leshp. Made creepier by the fact that ''we never actually figure out what's up with it.''
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of R'lyeh[[CthulhuMythos R'lyeh.]]
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** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of R'lyeh
** Although the oblique references to cephalopods combined with the "sunken city" theme seem to indicate that it is the Discworld equivalent of R'lyeh
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** What really makes that nightmare fuel for me: what could kill a troll a golem and Carrot within 14 seconds? Also no mention of Nobby, Colon, Angua or Downspout, meaning they probably died at the River Gate or in Peach Pie Street. (I was tearing up writing that)
** Note also that ''all'' Vimes' coppers die before the bastards finally get him. What do you want to bet he's watching them throw themselves between him and the sharp edge?
** Note also that ''all'' Vimes' coppers die before the bastards finally get him. What do you want to bet he's watching them throw themselves between him and the sharp edge?
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* And then there's [[CthulhuMythos Leshp.]] Made creepier by the fact that ''we never actually figure out what's up with it.''
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** Note also that ''all'' Vimes' coppers die before the bastards finally get him. What do you want to bet he's watching them throw themselves between him and the sharp edge?
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** What really makes that nightmare fuel for me: what could kill a troll a golem and Carrot within 14 seconds? Also no mention of Nobby, Colon, Angua or Downspout, meaning they probably died at the River Gate or in Peach Pie Street. (I was tearing up writing that)
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--> ''"...Seven eh em...Organize Defenders at River Gate...Seven twenty-five...Hand-to-Hand Fighting in Peach Pie Street...Seven forty-eight eight eight...Rally Survivors in Sator Square...Things To Do Today: Build Build Build Barricades...bingeley...Eight oh two eh em, Death of Corporal Littlebottombottom...Eight oh three eh em...Death of Sergeant Detritus...Eight oh threethreethree eh em and seven seconds seconds...Death of Constable Visit...Eight oh three eh em and nineninenine seconds...Death of death of death of...Death of Constable Dorfl...Eight oh three eh em and fourteenteenteen seconds...Death of Captain Carrot Ironfoundersson...beep...beep...Things To Do Today: Die..."
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** And if that wasn't bad enough, imagine what the Vimes in the other leg of the Trousers of Time would have been hearing, as everything fell to bits arounf him.
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** And if that wasn't bad enough, imagine what the Vimes in the other leg of the Trousers of Time would have been hearing, as everything fell to bits arounf around him.
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** And if that wasn't bad enough, imagine what the Vimes in the other leg of the Trousers of Time would have been hearing, as everything fell to bits arounf him.
** And if that wasn't bad enough, imagine what the Vimes in the other leg of the Trousers of Time would have been hearing, as everything fell to bits arounf him.